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Evaluation of spatiotemporal tungsten density profiles using Unresolved Transition Arrays in the Large Helical Device

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Pith's one-line read Tungsten density profiles in LHD plasmas were derived from 191.7 Å UTA emissivity using collisional-radiative model coefficients for W17+ to W27+.

desk verdict The paper delivers concrete tungsten density profiles from pellet injection in LHD using the 191.7 Å UTA line and Slice & Stack reconstruction, but the conversion to density hinges on CR-model PECs with no shown validation for blends or charge-state accuracy. read the letter →

arxiv 2606.22789 v1 pith:XVWG2LOC submitted 2026-06-22 physics.plasm-ph

R. Nishimura , T. Oishi , I. Murakami , D. Kato , H. A. Sakaue , S. Gupta , H.Ohashi , C. Suzuki
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M. Goto Y. Kawamoto R.T. Ishikawa T. Kawate K. Mukai B.J. Peterson H. Takahashi
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keywords tungstendensityunresolvedtransitionarrayLargeHelicalDevicepelletinjectioncollisional-radiativemodelplasmaimpuritytransportspectroscopicdiagnostics
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The paper evaluates spatiotemporal tungsten density profiles in the Large Helical Device for plasmas with electron temperatures below 1 keV and densities of 10^19 to 10^20 m^{-3}. A space-resolved spectrometer and the Slice & Stack reconstruction method are applied to the 191.7 Å line, part of the unresolved transition array spectrum, to obtain emissivity. Density follows by multiplying this emissivity by photon emission coefficients for W^{17+} to W^{27+} taken from a collisional-radiative model. Observations show the injected pellet ablates in the edge plasma before diffusing inward, followed by core accumulation after an NBI breakdown event. The resulting density profiles are used to estimate radiation power, which is compared against bolometer data as a check on the atomic data for these charge states.

What carries the argument

Photon emission coefficients of W^{17+}-W^{27+} from the collisional-radiative model, applied to emissivity of the 191.7 Å line reconstructed via the Slice & Stack method from the unresolved transition array.

What would settle it

An independent measurement of tungsten density, for instance via a separate spectroscopic line free of UTA blending or via charge-exchange recombination spectroscopy, that produces profiles inconsistent with the 191.7 Å results would falsify the conversion.

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Core claim

Tungsten density profiles were evaluated using photon emission coefficients of W^{17+} - W^{27+}, evaluated from collisional-radiative model. The tungsten pellet injected from outside the plasma was first ablated in the edge plasma and subsequently diffused throughout the plasma. Furthermore, after an event triggered by NBI breakdown, tungsten accumulated in the core plasma. The radiation power was estimated from the evaluated tungsten density profile and cooling factor dataset, and compared with bolometer measurement.

Load-bearing premise

The photon emission coefficients from the collisional-radiative model for W^{17+}-W^{27+} accurately convert the observed 191.7 Å emissivity to density without significant contributions from other ions or unaccounted blends in the UTA.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • The injected tungsten pellet ablates in the edge plasma before diffusing throughout the plasma.
  • Tungsten accumulates in the core plasma after an NBI breakdown event.
  • Radiation power calculated from the density profile and cooling factor dataset can be compared directly with bolometer measurements.
  • The sequence of pellet injection, diffusion, and accumulation events provides a testbed for validating atomic data of tungsten ions in low-to-intermediate charge states.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • The method supplies a practical route to obtain absolute impurity densities when only blended UTA features are accessible in the spectrum.
  • Repeated application after controlled pellet injections could map the dependence of core accumulation on plasma parameters such as rotation or heating power.
  • Consistency between the spectroscopically derived radiation and the bolometer total would strengthen in the entire chain from emissivity to power loss.
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Referee Report

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Summary. The paper reports spatiotemporal tungsten density profiles in the Large Helical Device obtained via space-resolved spectroscopy of the 191.7 Å line (part of the 90-250 Å UTA) after tungsten pellet injection. The Slice & Stack reconstruction is applied to emissivity data, densities are derived using photon emission coefficients for W^{17+}-W^{27+} from a collisional-radiative model, pellet ablation/diffusion is observed, core accumulation follows an NBI breakdown event, and estimated radiation power is compared to bolometer measurements to support validation of atomic data for low-to-intermediate tungsten charge states in Te < 1 keV, ne ~ 10^{19-20} m^{-3} plasmas.

Significance. If the emissivity-to-density conversion holds, the work supplies experimental spatiotemporal impurity profiles and transport observations in a stellarator edge-relevant regime, together with a direct bolometer comparison. This could aid benchmarking of CR models for tungsten UTA features and impurity accumulation studies relevant to fusion devices.

major comments (2)
  1. [Abstract] Abstract and density-evaluation description: the conversion of 191.7 Å emissivity to W density via CR-model PECs for exactly W^{17+}-W^{27+} is presented without reported validation (synthetic spectra, cross-calibration with another diagnostic, or sensitivity to ionization balance), yet this mapping is load-bearing for all derived profiles, the diffusion/accumulation narrative, and the bolometer comparison.
  2. [density evaluation section] The manuscript supplies no error bars or uncertainty propagation on the reported densities, nor any test of possible UTA blending from adjacent charge states in the stated Te < 1 keV regime; this directly affects the strength of the claim that the observed behavior validates the atomic data.
minor comments (1)
  1. Notation for charge states (W^{17+} etc.) and the precise definition of the 191.7 Å feature within the broader UTA should be clarified for reproducibility.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

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We thank the referee for the constructive comments and the recommendation for major revision. We address each point below and will revise the manuscript to strengthen the presentation of the density evaluation method and its uncertainties.

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  1. Referee: [Abstract] Abstract and density-evaluation description: the conversion of 191.7 Å emissivity to W density via CR-model PECs for exactly W^{17+}-W^{27+} is presented without reported validation (synthetic spectra, cross-calibration with another diagnostic, or sensitivity to ionization balance), yet this mapping is load-bearing for all derived profiles, the diffusion/accumulation narrative, and the bolometer comparison.

    Authors: The PECs are taken from an established collisional-radiative model applied to the plasma parameters of the experiment (Te < 1 keV, ne ~ 10^{19-20} m^{-3}). While the manuscript does not present synthetic spectra or independent cross-calibration, the bolometer comparison of estimated radiation power is offered as supporting evidence for the overall density scale. We will add a dedicated paragraph in the density-evaluation section discussing sensitivity of the derived densities to variations in ionization balance within the CR model. revision: partial

  2. Referee: [density evaluation section] The manuscript supplies no error bars or uncertainty propagation on the reported densities, nor any test of possible UTA blending from adjacent charge states in the stated Te < 1 keV regime; this directly affects the strength of the claim that the observed behavior validates the atomic data.

    Authors: We agree that quantitative uncertainty estimates and an assessment of possible blending are needed. In the revised manuscript we will include error bars derived from the spectrometer calibration uncertainty, photon statistics, and the CR-model PEC uncertainties, together with a short analysis showing that, for Te < 1 keV, the fractional contribution of charge states outside W^{17+}-W^{27+} to the 191.7 Å feature remains below 10 % according to the same CR model. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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No circularity: density profiles derived from independent CR-model PECs applied to observed emissivity

full rationale

The paper's central derivation obtains tungsten density by multiplying observed 191.7 Å emissivity (from Slice & Stack reconstruction) by photon emission coefficients taken from a collisional-radiative model for W^{17+}-W^{27+}. No equation or step shows these PECs being fitted to the present dataset, nor does any self-citation supply a load-bearing uniqueness theorem or ansatz that reduces the result to the paper's own inputs. The measurement chain therefore remains externally anchored in atomic-physics calculations and experimental spectra; the reported spatiotemporal profiles and subsequent diffusion/accumulation statements do not collapse by construction to quantities already present in the same data.

Assumptions & free parameters 0 free parameters · 1 assumptions · 0 invented entities

Based on abstract only; full paper may list additional model parameters or assumptions. The central claim rests on the accuracy of pre-existing CR model coefficients and the assumption that the chosen line is dominated by the listed charge states.

assumptions (1)
  • domain assumption Photon emission coefficients from the collisional-radiative model for W^{17+}-W^{27+} are accurate for the observed plasma conditions (Te < 1 keV, ne 10^19-10^20 m^{-3}).
    Directly invoked to convert emissivity to density; location: abstract description of density evaluation.

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  title        = {Pith review of: Evaluation of spatiotemporal tungsten density profiles using Unresolved Transition Arrays in the Large Helical Device},
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abstract

Tungsten spectroscopic studies have been conducted in the Large Helical Device with a pellet injection technique. Spatiotemporal profiles of tungsten density were evaluated using a space-resolved spectrometer, for plasmas with an electron temperature of below 1 keV and electron density of $10^{19}-10^{20}$ $m^{-3}$. Slice & Stack, a method for reconstructing emissivity, was applied to a line at 191.7 {\AA} , which is a part of the Unresolved Transition Array (UTA) spectrum at 90-250 {\AA}. Tungsten density was obtained using photon emission coefficients of $\mathrm{W}^{17+} - \mathrm{W}^{27+}$, evaluated from collisional-radiative model. The tungsten pellet injected from outside the plasma was first ablated in the edge plasma and subsequently diffused throughout the plasma. This behavior is typical of pellet injection experiments. Furthermore, after an event triggered by NBI breakdown, tungsten accumulated in the core plasma. The radiation power was estimated from the evaluated tungsten density profile and cooling factor dataset, and compared with bolometer measurement. This sequence of processes would be useful for validating atomic data of tungsten ions in low-to-intermediate charge states.

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Figure 1
Figure 1. (a) Top view of LHD with schematic drawing of pellet injector and VUV/EUV spectrometers. (b) lines of sight of EUV Short2 and EUV Long2 space￾resolved spectrometers. A plasma is generated and sustained by electron cyclotron heating (ECH) and neutral beam injection (NBI) heating. A total of five NBI systems are installed, including three negative ion source NBIs (n–NBIs) and two positive ion source NBIs (p–NBIs). The… view at source ↗
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Figure 11. [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p018_11.png] view at source ↗
Figure 12
Figure 12. Estimated number of the tungsten particles exists in the plasma. The red region represents the ±1σ uncertainty. 𝑁𝑊(𝑡) increased abruptly at t = 4.20 s, and then gradually decreased until t = 5.40 s. The maximum value of 𝑁𝑊(𝑡) was approximately 2 × 1017, which is comparable to the number of injected particles of approximately 9 × 1016 [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p019_12.png] view at source ↗

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