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arxiv: 2606.26999 · v1 · pith:Y4CO65XLnew · submitted 2026-06-25 · 🌌 astro-ph.GA

HI Galaxy Science with the SKA

Jing Wang , D.J. Pisano , Sarah Blyth , Neeraj Gupta , Barbara Catinella , Lister Staveley-Smith , Paolo Serra , Elizabeth A. K. Adams
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W.J.G. de Blok Martin Meyer Lourdes Verdes-Montenegro Tom Oosterloo
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The pith

The SKA will enable complete censuses of HI morphologies at sub-kpc resolution and track cosmic HI mass density evolution to z~1.

A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.

This review chapter lays out the main science goals for neutral hydrogen observations with the Square Kilometre Array. It focuses on high-resolution maps of gas shapes and motions in nearby galaxies, measurements of how the total HI content of the universe changes with time out to redshift one, and better knowledge of atomic versus molecular gas at still higher redshifts. These data are expected to reveal how gas is added to galaxies, turned into stars, or removed by feedback processes across much of cosmic history. The chapter keeps the earlier three-tiered survey plan but revises its depth and area targets to match the latest expected performance of the array.

Core claim

The key science enabled by the SKA consists of a complete census of HI morphologies and kinematics at sub-kpc and 1 km/s resolution within and around galaxies in the nearby universe, a measurement of the cosmic HI mass density and HI mass function evolution at least up to z~1, and an improved understanding of the universe at z>1 particularly the balance between cold molecular and cool atomic gas, all achieved through an updated three-tiered survey strategy.

What carries the argument

The three-tiered survey strategy with parameters adjusted for AA* and AA4 sensitivity and resolution levels, which structures the observations to deliver the listed science goals while exploiting synergies with southern-hemisphere multi-wavelength surveys from 2028 onward.

If this is right

  • A clearer picture of gas accretion, consumption, and removal across a large fraction of cosmic time.
  • Quantitative constraints on the effects of AGN and star-formation feedback on the gas reservoir.
  • Direct comparison of atomic and molecular gas phases at z>1 to test models of the baryon cycle.
  • Joint analysis with optical, infrared, and X-ray data sets available in the southern sky after 2028.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

These are editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • The resulting HI maps could be stacked with molecular-line data to test whether star-formation efficiency depends on the atomic-to-molecular ratio at fixed stellar mass.
  • Detection of a previously unseen population of gas-rich but optically faint galaxies at intermediate redshifts would alter current estimates of the total baryonic mass density.
  • The kinematic data at 1 km/s resolution would allow direct measurement of the frequency of galactic fountains and inflows in a volume-limited sample.

Load-bearing premise

The SKA will be built and operated at the sensitivity and resolution levels assumed when the survey parameters and predictions were adjusted.

What would settle it

Actual on-sky performance of the SKA falling short of the AA* and AA4 models used for the survey design, so that sub-kpc resolution or the reach to z~1 cannot be achieved.

Figures

Figures reproduced from arXiv: 2606.26999 by Barbara Catinella, D.J. Pisano, Elizabeth A. K. Adams, Jing Wang, Lister Staveley-Smith, Lourdes Verdes-Montenegro, Martin Meyer, Neeraj Gupta, Paolo Serra, Sarah Blyth, Tom Oosterloo, W.J.G. de Blok.

Figure 1
Figure 1. Figure 1: The H i mass limit (𝑀HI,lim) as a function of redshift and RFI contaminating rate ( 𝑓RFI) as a function of frequency. As labeled in panel a, the different colors represent the two sets (1,000 and 10,000 ℎ) of three-tiered surveys with increasing depth and decreasing sky areas ( [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p008_1.png] view at source ↗
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This chapter introduces the contributions of the HI galaxy science in this volume reviewing the latest developments and urgent questions in HI galaxy science, providing guiding principles for a layered set of future key science projects. The key science will include: a complete censuses of HI morphologies and kinematics at sub-kpc and 1 km/s resolution within and around galaxies in the nearby Universe; a measurement of the cosmic HI mass density and HI mass function evolution at least up to z~1; an improved understanding of the Universe at z>1, particularly the balance between cold molecular and cool atomic gas. We also provide a view of the synergistic multi-wavelength surveys available in 2028+ in the southern hemisphere. This effort will improve our understanding of the baryon cycle across a significant fraction of the cosmic history, including the processes of gas accretion, consumption and removal as well as AGN and star formation feedback. Based on these science goals, the earlier proposed three-tiered survey strategy remains, but survey parameters and predictions are adjusted according to AA* and AA4 developments. This chapter is an update of the earlier "Advancing Astrophysics with the Square Kilometre Array" chapter 'HI Science with the SKA' by Staveley-Smith & Oosterloo.

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Referee Report

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Summary. This manuscript updates the earlier 'HI Science with the SKA' chapter, reviewing recent developments in HI galaxy science and outlining guiding principles for a layered set of future key science projects with the SKA. The key science cases highlighted are a complete census of HI morphologies and kinematics at sub-kpc and 1 km/s resolution in the nearby Universe, measurement of the cosmic HI mass density and HI mass function evolution to at least z~1, and improved understanding of the gas balance between cold molecular and cool atomic phases at z>1. The three-tiered survey strategy is retained but with parameters and predictions adjusted according to AA* and AA4 developments; synergies with multi-wavelength surveys in the southern hemisphere from 2028+ are discussed to advance understanding of the baryon cycle including accretion, consumption, removal, and feedback processes.

Significance. If the described program is executed, the roadmap would help coordinate SKA observations to substantially improve constraints on gas processes across a significant fraction of cosmic history. The document's value lies in its explicit update of survey parameters to current SKA planning stages and its linkage of HI goals to contemporaneous multi-wavelength efforts; these elements provide concrete guidance for community prioritization even in the absence of new quantitative derivations.

major comments (1)
  1. [survey strategy section] The survey strategy section (and abstract): the adjustments to the three-tiered survey parameters and predictions 'according to AA* and AA4 developments' are imported as fixed inputs from which the reach of the key science cases (sub-kpc/1 km/s census, HI mass function to z~1, gas balance at z>1) is derived. No sensitivity analysis, error budget, or alternative scenarios are provided for deviations in delivered system temperature, baseline coverage, or survey speed. This assumption is load-bearing for the claimed completeness and redshift reach of the outlined science program.
minor comments (2)
  1. The manuscript could add a brief explicit definition or reference for the AA* and AA4 sensitivity/resolution levels on first use to aid readers unfamiliar with the SKA planning nomenclature.
  2. A short table or bullet list comparing the original three-tiered parameters with the AA*-adjusted values would improve clarity of the updates relative to the Staveley-Smith & Oosterloo chapter.

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We thank the referee for their constructive review and recommendation of major revision. We respond to the single major comment below.

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  1. Referee: [survey strategy section] The survey strategy section (and abstract): the adjustments to the three-tiered survey parameters and predictions 'according to AA* and AA4 developments' are imported as fixed inputs from which the reach of the key science cases (sub-kpc/1 km/s census, HI mass function to z~1, gas balance at z>1) is derived. No sensitivity analysis, error budget, or alternative scenarios are provided for deviations in delivered system temperature, baseline coverage, or survey speed. This assumption is load-bearing for the claimed completeness and redshift reach of the outlined science program.

    Authors: We agree that the three-tiered survey parameters are adopted directly from the AA* and AA4 specifications without an accompanying sensitivity analysis or error budget in this chapter. This manuscript is an update to the earlier science case chapter and is intended to outline guiding principles and adjusted science reach based on current SKA planning documents rather than to perform a technical risk assessment. Detailed performance budgets and alternative scenarios reside in the SKA project technical reports. To address the concern that the assumption is load-bearing, we will add a concise clarifying paragraph in the survey strategy section (and a corresponding sentence in the abstract) that explicitly states the science cases are predicated on AA4 performance being achieved and refers readers to the relevant SKA technical documentation for discussions of uncertainties in system temperature, baseline coverage, and survey speed. revision: partial

Circularity Check

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No circularity: review document contains no derivations or fitted predictions.

full rationale

The paper is a review and planning summary that states key science goals and notes that survey parameters are adjusted according to external AA* and AA4 specifications. No equations, derivations, or predictions are presented that reduce to prior fitted values or self-referential definitions. The update reference to an earlier chapter by overlapping authors is a normal citation for continuity and does not bear any load-bearing derivation. The document is self-contained as a forward-looking summary without any internal chain that collapses by construction.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

0 free parameters · 0 axioms · 0 invented entities

This is a review and planning document with no new scientific derivation; it draws on established radio astronomy knowledge and SKA project documentation without introducing free parameters, axioms, or invented entities.

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