REVIEW 3 major objections 5 minor 50 references
Luminosity Function of Galaxies in Voids: A Modification Inspired by Excursion Set Theory
T0 review · 3 major / 5 minor · reviewed 2026-08-06 · deepseek-v4-flash
Pith's one-line read The Schechter parameters of void galaxy luminosity functions follow power laws in the excursion-set two-barrier ratio, and this parameterization fits 2dFGRS data better than the previous density-based model.
desk verdict A modest but real empirical improvement to void luminosity function modeling, undermined by an unresolved linear/nonlinear density-coordinate ambiguity in the D parameter. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The load-bearing object is the ratio $D\equiv|\delta_v|/(\delta_c+|\delta_v|)$, which measures how close the void-formation barrier $\delta_v\approx -2.81$ is to the halo-collapse barrier $\delta_c\approx 1.686$; in excursion set theory this ratio controls which voids survive being swallowed by collapsing halos. The paper makes $D$ the environmental variable in the Schechter function, so the three Schechter parameters become power laws in $(1+D)$. The second mechanism is the linear growth function $D(z)$, imported through the halo mass function, which turns the redshift dependence of the luminosity function into $\Phi(M,z)\propto\exp(-\eta/D(z)^2)/D(z)$ and pushes all of that dependence into $\phi_*$.
What would settle it
Use Eq. (2) to convert the nonlinear contrasts $\delta_v=-0.90,-0.75,-0.43$ to linear values, recompute $D$, refit Eq. (14) to the same 2dFGRS data, and compare $\chi^2$, AIC, and BIC; if the advantage over the density-based model disappears, the central environmental claim is not supported.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
On the paper's own terms, the discovery is that the environment dependence of the void galaxy luminosity function is not an arbitrary empirical trend but follows from the distance between the two formation barriers in excursion set theory. The claimed result is $\phi_* = \zeta_1(1+D)^{\zeta_2}$, $M_* = \zeta_3(1+D)^{\zeta_4}$, $\alpha = \zeta_5(1+D)$, where $D\equiv|\delta_v|/(\delta_c+|\delta_v|)$ and the $\zeta_i$ are fitted to 2dFGRS; this form outperforms the earlier density-based Schechter model by $\chi^2$, AIC, and BIC. For redshift, the claim is that the halo mass function conveys the evolution through the growth factor, giving $\Phi(M,z)\propto \exp(-\eta/D(z)^2)/D(z)$ and concentrating the redshift dependence in $\phi_*$, with $\eta = 0.068^{+0.017}_{-0.018}$ from GAMA void luminosity functions.
Load-bearing premise
The load-bearing premise is that the observed nonlinear void density contrasts in Table 2 can be identified directly with the linear barrier $\delta_v$ when forming $D=|\delta_v|/(\delta_c+|\delta_v|)$; if the linear-to-nonlinear mapping must be applied first, the fitted D values and the claimed model superiority lose their stated physical meaning.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- Void luminosity functions in sparse, populous, and underdense regions can be described by one shared parameterization in the two-barrier ratio rather than fitted separately.
- The redshift dependence of the void luminosity function is concentrated in $\phi_*$, so measuring $\phi_*$ in redshift bins is a direct route to the growth function and hence to the cosmological model.
- The reported AIC/BIC improvement implies that in underdense regions the two-barrier ratio is a more informative environmental coordinate than the Eulerian density contrast.
- Neglecting satellite galaxies is a safe simplification for voids, so the model connects cleanly to the halo mass function there.
Reading between the lines
- The same $D$-parameterization could be tested in larger void samples from current spectroscopic surveys to see whether the fitted exponents $\zeta_2$ and $\zeta_4$ are universal or survey-dependent; this is an extension, not a paper claim.
- Because the paper never applies its own linear-to-nonlinear mapping to the Table 2 density contrasts, the numerical value of $D$ feeding the fit is ambiguous; a recalibrated fit might shift the exponents even if the qualitative ranking of models survives.
- If the redshift formula holds, the luminosity function of voids could be used as a growth-rate probe, complementing clustering-based growth measurements; this direction is implicit in the paper rather than demonstrated there.
Signed reviews
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper proposes an excursion-set-inspired parameterization of the Schechter luminosity function for galaxies in voids, with the Schechter parameters written as functions of the two-barrier ratio D = |δv|/(δc+|δv|) and, separately, a redshift dependence of the form Φ(M,z) ∝ exp(−η/D(z)^2)/D(z), where D(z) is the linear growth function. The environmental model is fitted to 2dFGRS luminosity functions in three underdense environments and compared against the McNaught-Roberts et al. (2014a) model and a modified version of it, reporting lower χ², AIC, and BIC. The redshift model is fitted to GAMA void luminosity functions in three redshift bins. The central claim is that EST-motivated environmental and redshift dependencies provide a better description of the void galaxy luminosity function than previous empirical parameterizations.
Significance. If the environmental model holds, it offers a compact, EST-inspired description of void galaxy luminosity functions and a modest improvement over an existing empirical model using the same data and the same number of free parameters; the AIC/BIC comparison in Fig. 2 is therefore a fair model-selection exercise. The redshift part is more exploratory: the GAMA data provide only one void density interval, as the paper acknowledges, and the single fitted parameter η makes Fig. 4 a demonstration of a functional form rather than an out-of-sample prediction. The paper ships no code or machine-checked derivations; its value rests on the clarity and correctness of the physical mapping between the fitted density contrasts and the EST barrier ratio, which is currently unresolved.
major comments (3)
- [§3.1, Eq. (14), Table 2, Eq. (2)] The parameter D = |δv|/(δc+|δv|) is introduced in §2.1 as an EST two-barrier ratio built from the linear thresholds δv ≈ −2.81 and δc ≈ 1.686, but Table 2 and Fig. 1 label the fitted environments by nonlinear (Eulerian) density contrasts δv = −0.90, −0.75, −0.43. The manuscript never applies the Lagrangian-to-Eulerian mapping of Eq. (2) to these values before forming D. If the nonlinear values are inserted directly, D is not the EST barrier ratio and the fitted exponents ζ2, ζ4, ζ5 in Table 3 lose their stated theoretical meaning; if one instead uses the constant linear threshold δv = −2.81, D becomes environment-independent and Eq. (14) has no environmental dependence at all. Please report the D values actually used, state explicitly whether δv is linear or nonlinear, and if the values in Table 2 are nonlinear, convert each one with Eq. (2) and refit; the χ², AIC, and BIC results in Fig. 2 must be rechecked under the corrected D.
- [§3.2, Eq. (15), Fig. 4] The redshift model is presented as a test of Eq. (15), but η is a free parameter fitted to the same GAMA void luminosity functions shown in Fig. 4; the agreement is therefore a fitting result, not an independent validation. The derivation of Eq. (15) from Eq. (5) also relies on unstated assumptions, namely that δc(z) − δv(z) scales as 1/D(z) and that the relevant variance combination is redshift-independent. The paper itself acknowledges a deviation at the faint end. Please provide a quantitative comparison of Eq. (15) against, for example, a no-evolution model or the redshift-dependent parameterization used by Loveday et al. (2012), and state explicitly whether the model is intended as a description or as a predictive test until independent data are used.
- [§2.2–§2.3, Eqs. (5), (7), (9), (14)] The halo-in-void mass function in Eq. (5) is introduced as the theoretical basis, but it is not used in the fits: Eq. (9) employs the global Sheth-Tormen mass function n(M), and the environmental dependence in Eq. (14) enters only through the ad hoc replacement of the density contrast by D. The mapping from Eq. (5) to the specific functional forms in Eq. (14) is not derived. Either derive Eq. (14) from the halo-in-void mass function under stated approximations, or clearly present Eq. (14) as an empirical fitting function whose parameters are merely inspired by EST; the current text claims an EST grounding that the equations do not actually provide.
minor comments (5)
- [§3.1–§3.2, Eqs. (14) and (15)] The symbol D denotes two different quantities: the barrier ratio D ≡ |δv|/(δc+|δv|) in Eq. (14) and the linear growth function D(z) in Eq. (15). This is confusing in §3.2, where both appear nearby; please rename one of them, for example using B for the barrier ratio.
- [§2.1, Eq. (1)] Eq. (1) defines n(M,z) as the cumulative number density of halos with mass greater than M, but Eqs. (7) and (9) treat n(M) as a differential mass function. Please clarify the notation and use dn/dM where appropriate.
- [§3.1, Fig. 2] The table and figure block around Fig. 2 repeats the AIC/BIC values and contains a stray “Model 2” label; please fix the typesetting so the reader can unambiguously identify which row corresponds to the new model, the McNaught-modified model, and the original McNaught-Roberts model.
- [§3.2, Fig. 4] The caption of Fig. 4 states the void selection as −1 ≤ δv ≤ −0.75, but Table 2 lists discrete values −0.90, −0.75, and −0.43; please clarify how the redshift-binned GAMA sample maps onto the environment definitions used in the 2dFGRS analysis.
- [References] The references to McNaught-Roberts et al. (2014a) and (2014b) appear to cite the same MNRAS volume and page; please verify that the two citations are indeed distinct works and cite them correctly.
Circularity Check
No significant circularity: the models are explicit fits to the data, and the model-comparison statistics are genuine same-data comparisons.
full rationale
The paper does not claim an independent prediction that reduces by construction to a fitted input. The environmental model of Eq. 14 uses five free parameters zeta1 through zeta5, all explicitly fitted to the 2dFGRS data, and Figure 1 is described as 'the result of fitting our model (equation 14) to this data.' The AIC, BIC, and chi-squared comparisons against the McNaught-Roberts and McNaught-modified models are legitimate same-data model-selection exercises with equal numbers of free parameters; they test functional forms, not circularly enforced outcomes. The redshift model of Eq. 15 contains a free parameter eta that is fitted to the GAMA data, and the paper honestly describes Figure 4 as 'our model of redshift-dependence (equation 15) to GAMA data points,' so the agreement is a fit, not a claimed prediction. The EST background in Eqs. 1-5 provides motivation for the functional form D = |delta_v|/(delta_c + |delta_v|), but the coefficients are not derived from EST, so the theory is not used to force the final parameter values. Self-citations such as Kameli and Baghram (2022, 2025) and Parkavousi et al. (2023) are background references and are not load-bearing for the central fitting claims. The main caveat is a physical-interpretation inconsistency: Table 2 labels delta_v as the nonlinear density contrast while D is motivated from linear EST barriers, and Eq. 2 is not applied before forming D. That ambiguity affects the physical meaning of the fitted exponents but is not a circularity, because the model would still be the same empirical fit under either interpretation. No step reduces by definition or by self-citation to its own input.
Assumptions & free parameters
free parameters (3)
- zeta1 through zeta5 =
-0.661 +/- 0.032, -19.547 +/- 0.074, -0.081 +/- 0.010, 0.0149 +/- 0.0012, -3.61 +/- 0.24
- beta =
0.000406, 0.000561, 0.001361, 0.004450 for the four environments in Table 2
- eta =
0.068 +0.017 -0.018
assumptions (5)
- standard math The Sheth-Tormen mass function gives the number density of dark matter halos.
- domain assumption Spherical collapse threshold delta_c = 1.686 and void shell-crossing threshold delta_v = -2.81 are the correct linear density contrasts.
- domain assumption All galaxies in voids can be treated as central galaxies with a delta-function conditional luminosity function.
- domain assumption Halo abundance matching gives a monotonic, scatter-free luminosity-mass relation (Eq. 11 with Vale and Ostriker parameters).
- ad hoc to paper Redshift dependence of the halo-in-void mass function enters only through the linear growth function D(z), giving Phi(M,z) proportional to exp(-eta/D(z)^2)/D(z).
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Pith. "Pith review of Luminosity Function of Galaxies in Voids: A Modification Inspired by Excursion Set Theory." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/RC6TMRXO
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abstract
In the standard picture of cosmology, the galaxies reside in dark matter (DM) halos. DM halos are distributed in the cosmic web in different environments. The luminosity of the galaxies in different environments can be used as a probe to assess a cosmological model. This study focuses on the properties of galaxies in void regions, where halos typically do not experience extreme conditions. By examining the galaxy luminosity function, we aim to understand the dependence of galaxy properties on their environment and redshift so that later, we can use this as a tool to evaluate cosmological models. We employ the excursion set theory to incorporate parameters related to the number density of DM halos into the luminosity function. Using the Galaxy and Mass Assembly (GAMA) survey and 2dFGRS datasets, we fit our theoretical models to observational data, examining the environmental and redshift dependence of the galaxy luminosity function. Our results indicate that we model the galaxy luminosity function in voids effectively by considering the linear density contrast of the environment and the growth function $D(z)$ for redshift dependence. This study provides a model for the environmental dependence of galaxy luminosity function that offers an improvement in the $\chi ^2$ parameter compared to the previously proposed model in \cite{mcnaught2014galaxy}. Both Bayesian information criterion (BIC) and Akaike information criterion (AIC) tests support the superiority of this model for the void region.
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