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· Lean TheoremForecasting local Primordial Non-Gaussianities from UNIONS Lyman-Break Galaxies and Planck CMB lensing
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Cross-correlating Lyman-break galaxies from UNIONS with Planck CMB lensing constrains local primordial non-Gaussianity to σ(f_NL^loc)=34 for a photometric sample.
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Core claim
From the angular cross-power spectrum between LBGs and Planck CMB lensing, the paper forecasts σ(f_NL^loc)=34 for an idealized photometric sample of r<24.3 LBGs at 1,100 deg^{-2} selected with a Random Forest from UNIONS-like imaging; the same analysis on a realistic denser sample at 1,400 deg^{-2} yields σ(f_NL^loc)=20, with both cases improving to 20 after DESI-II spectroscopic follow-up, while clustering-redshift uncertainties are shown to weaken the constraints substantially.
What carries the argument
The angular cross-power spectrum between the Lyman-break galaxy density field and the Planck CMB lensing convergence map, which isolates the scale-dependent bias signature of local PNG while canceling many imaging systematics.
If this is right
- An idealized photometric LBG sample at surface density 1,100 deg^{-2} delivers σ(f_NL^loc)=34.
- DESI-II spectroscopic follow-up improves the same forecast to σ(f_NL^loc)=20.
- A denser realistic sample at 1,400 deg^{-2} from early UNIONS data reaches σ(f_NL^loc)=20 without follow-up.
- Accounting for uncertainties in the clustering-redshift distribution significantly degrades the f_NL^loc precision.
Where Pith is reading between the lines
- Applying the same cross-correlation method to future wider or deeper photometric surveys could push the precision below 20 even before spectroscopic follow-up.
- Joint analyses that combine this probe with other large-scale structure tracers may help separate the PNG signal from galaxy bias uncertainties.
- Dedicated efforts to improve redshift-distribution calibration using additional spectroscopic overlap would directly translate into tighter f_NL^loc bounds.
Load-bearing premise
The redshift distribution of the selected Lyman-break galaxies must be calibrated accurately enough that uncertainties in it do not dominate the error budget on f_NL^loc.
What would settle it
Performing the actual cross-power spectrum measurement on real UNIONS LBGs and Planck lensing data and obtaining a constraint on f_NL^loc whose uncertainty is substantially worse than the forecasted 34 due to redshift-distribution errors or unmodeled systematics.
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Local Primordial non-Gaussianities (PNGs), characterized by $f_{\rm NL}^{\rm loc}$, provide a powerful window into the physics of inflation. Cross-correlating high-redshift tracer samples with the CMB lensing potential offers a particularly robust probe of PNGs, mitigating imaging systematics that typically affect large-scale measurements from tracer auto-spectra. In this context, UNIONS enables the selection of $u$-dropout high-redshift Lyman-Break Galaxies (LBGs). We perform a MCMC-based forecast to estimate the uncertainties on $f_{\rm NL}^{\rm loc}$ and on a galaxy bias parameter, which captures our uncertainty in the tracer bias. From the angular cross-power spectrum between LBGs and Planck CMB lensing, we forecast $\sigma(f_{\rm NL}^{\rm loc})=34$ for an idealized photometric sample of $r<24.3$ LBGs selected with a Random Forest classification algorithm from UNIONS-like $ugriz$ imaging, with a resulting surface density of $1,100$ deg$^{-2}$. This precision can be improved to $\sigma(f_{\rm NL}^{\rm loc})=20$ after spectroscopic follow-up with DESI, during its next phase starting in 2029, DESI-II. We test a more realistic $u$-dropout LBG selection using early UNIONS data, which yields a denser sample of $r<24.2$ objects at $1,400$ deg$^{-2}$. From this sample, covering a larger footprint and expected to have a higher large-scale galaxy bias, we forecast $\sigma(f_{\rm NL}^{\rm loc})=20$, with similar precision achievable after DESI spectroscopic follow-up. In addition, we perform preliminary validation of the redshift distribution using the clustering-redshift method with DESI DR1 data, confirming the calibration from deep, small-area photometric fields. However, accounting for uncertainties in the clustering-redshift distribution significantly degrades the $f_{\rm NL}^{\rm loc}$ constraining power.
Editorial analysis
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Referee Report
Summary. The manuscript performs an MCMC forecast for the uncertainty on local primordial non-Gaussianity f_NL^loc using the angular cross-power spectrum between Lyman-break galaxies (LBGs) selected from UNIONS-like ugriz imaging and Planck CMB lensing. It reports σ(f_NL^loc)=34 for an idealized photometric r<24.3 sample at 1,100 deg^{-2} and σ=20 after DESI-II spectroscopic follow-up; a more realistic UNIONS-like sample at 1,400 deg^{-2} also yields σ=20. The redshift distribution is validated with clustering redshifts from DESI DR1, but the text notes that uncertainties in this distribution significantly degrade the constraints.
Significance. If the forecasts remain competitive after proper marginalization over redshift-distribution uncertainties, the work would usefully demonstrate the value of high-redshift LBG samples from wide-field surveys for PNG constraints via CMB-lensing cross-correlations, which are robust to imaging systematics. The preliminary clustering-redshift validation with existing DESI data and the explicit consideration of spectroscopic follow-up are constructive elements that help anchor the forecast to near-term observations.
major comments (2)
- [Abstract] Abstract: The headline forecasts σ(f_NL^loc)=34 (idealized sample) and =20 (realistic sample and DESI-II) are obtained while treating the redshift distribution n(z) as fixed. The manuscript states that “accounting for uncertainties in the clustering-redshift distribution significantly degrades the f_NL^loc constraining power,” yet no quantified degradation factor or marginalized result is supplied. Because the cross-spectrum amplitude depends directly on the overlap integral between n(z) and the CMB lensing kernel, this assumption is load-bearing for the central claim.
- [Forecast methodology] Forecast methodology: The MCMC varies only f_NL^loc and a single galaxy-bias parameter; limited information is given on the precise modeling of the cross-power spectrum (including any scale cuts or bias evolution), the covariance estimation procedure, and the validation of the forecast against simulated realizations. These details are required to assess whether the reported uncertainties are robust.
minor comments (1)
- The abstract would benefit from a clearer separation between the optimistic (fixed-n(z)) forecasts and the degraded constraints once redshift uncertainties are included, to avoid potential misreading of the expected precision.
Simulated Author's Rebuttal
We thank the referee for their constructive and detailed report. Their comments highlight important aspects of our forecast that merit clarification and expansion. We address each major comment below and indicate the revisions we will make to the manuscript.
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Referee: [Abstract] Abstract: The headline forecasts σ(f_NL^loc)=34 (idealized sample) and =20 (realistic sample and DESI-II) are obtained while treating the redshift distribution n(z) as fixed. The manuscript states that “accounting for uncertainties in the clustering-redshift distribution significantly degrades the f_NL^loc constraining power,” yet no quantified degradation factor or marginalized result is supplied. Because the cross-spectrum amplitude depends directly on the overlap integral between n(z) and the CMB lensing kernel, this assumption is load-bearing for the central claim.
Authors: We agree that a quantitative assessment of the impact from n(z) uncertainties would strengthen the presentation. The current manuscript notes the degradation qualitatively based on our clustering-redshift validation with DESI DR1, but does not report a specific marginalized constraint. In the revised version we will add an explicit calculation marginalizing over nuisance parameters for the mean and width of n(z), using the DESI DR1 clustering-redshift uncertainties as priors. The resulting degradation factor on σ(f_NL^loc) will be reported in the results section and referenced in the abstract. revision: yes
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Referee: [Forecast methodology] Forecast methodology: The MCMC varies only f_NL^loc and a single galaxy-bias parameter; limited information is given on the precise modeling of the cross-power spectrum (including any scale cuts or bias evolution), the covariance estimation procedure, and the validation of the forecast against simulated realizations. These details are required to assess whether the reported uncertainties are robust.
Authors: We appreciate the request for additional methodological transparency. The cross-power spectrum is modeled under the Limber approximation with a single, scale-independent galaxy bias parameter, as stated in Section 3; scale cuts are imposed at multipoles corresponding to k_max ≈ 0.1 h Mpc^{-1} to remain in the linear regime. The covariance is computed analytically under the Gaussian approximation, including cosmic variance, shot noise, and Planck lensing noise (Section 4). Validation consists of MCMC recovery tests on mock data vectors generated from the fiducial model, which recover the input parameters without bias. We will expand the text in the revised manuscript to make these elements more explicit, including a short dedicated paragraph on the forecast pipeline and validation procedure. revision: yes
Circularity Check
No circularity: standard MCMC forecast with explicit caveats on n(z)
full rationale
The paper's derivation consists of an MCMC forecast on the LBG-Planck lensing cross-power spectrum, jointly sampling f_NL^loc and a single galaxy bias parameter to produce forecasted uncertainties such as σ(f_NL^loc)=34. This procedure does not reduce any claimed prediction to its inputs by construction, nor does it rely on self-definitional relations, fitted inputs renamed as predictions, or load-bearing self-citations. The abstract explicitly flags that marginalizing over clustering-redshift n(z) uncertainties degrades the constraints, so the reported numbers are presented with that limitation rather than smuggled in as independent results. No equations or ansatzes are shown to collapse the output to the input assumptions, making the forecast self-contained against external benchmarks.
Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger
free parameters (1)
- galaxy bias parameter
axioms (1)
- domain assumption Standard assumptions for computing the angular cross-power spectrum between galaxies and CMB lensing convergence
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We perform a Markov Chain Monte Carlo forecast to estimate the uncertainties on f_loc_NL and on a galaxy bias parameter b0... From the angular cross-power spectrum between LBGs and Planck CMB lensing, we forecast σ(f_NL^loc)=34...
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is given by bCXY ℓ = 1 2ℓ+1 ℓX m=−ℓ baX,∗ ℓmbaY ℓm 2 (C.4) On full-sky, the pseudo angular power spectrum averages to CXY ℓ = 2 π Z ∞ 0 dk k2 P(k)W X ℓ (k)W Y ℓ (k),(C.5) whereP(k) is the 3D matter power spectrum, andW X ℓ (k) and W Y ℓ (k) are the radial transfer functions of the fields, given by W X ℓ (k)= Z dz dχ dz qX(χ)j ℓ(kχ).(C.6) Following the MAS...
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