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Merger rate of initially clustered primordial black holes for the two-body channel
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The pith
Weak initial clustering of primordial black holes allows explaining LIGO events with a smaller overall PBH fraction than random distributions, but strong clustering suppresses the two-body merger rate through three-body formation.
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
Core claim
In the presence of relatively weak PBH clustering, the LIGO-Virgo-KAGRA events can be explained with a smaller value of f_PBH than in scenarios with Poisson-distributed PBHs, at least in the early two-body channel. However, for stronger clustering, the merger rate in the two-body channel is significantly suppressed due to the formation of three-body systems.
What carries the argument
The two-body merger-rate formalism extended to incorporate initial PBH clustering statistics and the transition to three-body system dominance.
Load-bearing premise
The model assumes a specific form of initial clustering whose strength cleanly separates the two-body regime from the three-body regime and that the early two-body channel dominates the mergers being considered.
What would settle it
A measurement or simulation showing that the two-body merger rate does not increase under weak clustering or does not drop under strong clustering, or an independent constraint on PBH clustering amplitude that lies outside the range where the rate reduction occurs.
read the original abstract
Primordial black holes (PBHs) may form an initially clustered population depending on their production mechanism. Motivated by binary black-hole merger events observed by gravitational-wave interferometers, we revisit the evaluation of the merger rate of PBH binaries and extend the formalism to include the effects of clustering. We show that, in the presence of relatively weak PBH clustering, the LIGO-Virgo-KAGRA events can be explained with a smaller value of $f_{\mathrm{PBH}}$ than in scenarios with Poisson-distributed PBHs, at least in the early two-body channel. However, for stronger clustering, the merger rate in the two-body channel is significantly suppressed due to the formation of three-body systems.
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The manuscript extends the standard two-body PBH binary merger-rate formalism to incorporate initial spatial clustering of PBHs. It reports that weak clustering permits the LIGO-Virgo-KAGRA observed merger rate to be reproduced with a smaller PBH fraction f_PBH than required in the Poisson-distributed case, while stronger clustering suppresses the two-body channel through the formation of three-body systems.
Significance. If the central calculation holds, the result is significant for PBH dark-matter studies: it shows that realistic clustering (expected from many formation mechanisms) can both relax the f_PBH upper bound needed to explain GW events and identify a suppression regime that may tighten constraints at high clustering amplitudes. The forward nature of the calculation, without fitted clustering parameters, is a strength.
minor comments (2)
- The precise definition of the clustering parameter (e.g., the variance or correlation length) and its mapping to the transition between two-body and three-body regimes should be stated explicitly in the main text, ideally with a plot showing the merger-rate ratio versus clustering strength.
- Clarify whether the quoted reduction in required f_PBH is obtained at fixed redshift or integrated over the relevant merger history; a brief comparison table with the unclustered case would aid readability.
Simulated Author's Rebuttal
We thank the referee for their positive summary of our manuscript and for recommending minor revision. We are pleased that the significance of extending the two-body PBH merger-rate calculation to include initial clustering is recognized. Since no specific major comments were provided in the report, we respond briefly to the referee's summary of our results.
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Referee: The manuscript extends the standard two-body PBH binary merger-rate formalism to incorporate initial spatial clustering of PBHs. It reports that weak clustering permits the LIGO-Virgo-KAGRA observed merger rate to be reproduced with a smaller PBH fraction f_PBH than required in the Poisson-distributed case, while stronger clustering suppresses the two-body channel through the formation of three-body systems.
Authors: This is a correct and concise summary of the central results. The extension of the formalism is derived in Sections 2 and 3 of the manuscript, and the dependence of the merger rate on clustering strength (including the transition to three-body suppression) is quantified in Section 4. No revision is needed, as the description accurately reflects the content and conclusions of the paper. revision: no
Circularity Check
No significant circularity in derivation chain
full rationale
The paper extends the standard two-body PBH merger-rate formalism by incorporating an initial clustering parameter as an input model. The computed merger rates, the transition to three-body suppression at strong clustering, and the resulting lower required f_PBH for weak clustering all follow directly from the extended rate integral without any fitted parameter being renamed as a prediction or any self-citation chain substituting for the central calculation. The derivation remains self-contained and forward-directed relative to the clustering ansatz and the Poisson baseline.
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