REVIEW 1 major objections 1 minor 2 cited by
Doubly weak double categories
T0 review · 1 major / 1 minor · reviewed 2026-05-25 · grok-4.3
Pith's one-line read Double categories can have weak composition of 1-cells in both directions when built from double computads with all compositions made coherent.
desk verdict Fairbanks and Shulman define doubly weak double categories as computads with coherent 1-cell compositions in both directions and give two clean characterizations via implicit structures and tidiness. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The double computad, a structure with 2-cells of all possible double-categorical shapes, which carries the argument by supporting the addition of all coherent composition operations.
What would settle it
An explicit double computad in which the required coherent horizontal and vertical compositions produce a contradiction in the associativity or unit laws would show the definition cannot be realized.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
A doubly weak double category is a double computad equipped with all possible composition operations, coherently. They are equivalently obtained from implicit double categories via a representability criterion on compositions of 1-cells, or from the double bicategories of Verity or cubical bicategories of Garner by imposing a tidiness condition.
Load-bearing premise
The coherence conditions for all possible compositions in the double computad can be satisfied without contradiction.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- Double categories become available as models when weakness is needed simultaneously in both composition directions.
- Implicit double categories become equivalent to doubly weak ones precisely when the representability criterion holds.
- Tidiness supplies a direct translation between the new definition and prior notions of double bicategories.
Reading between the lines
- The approach may generalize to triple categories or other multi-directional weak structures by extending the computad shapes.
- Comparison of the three presented definitions could identify which one is easiest to use for concrete examples such as spans or relations.
- The tidiness condition might simplify calculations in applications where existing bicategory models are already available.
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper proposes a definition of doubly weak double categories as double computads equipped with all possible coherent composition operations for 1-cells in both directions. It provides two characterizations: one via implicit double categories (double computads with all 2-cell compositions but no 1-cell compositions) using a representability criterion, and another by imposing a tidiness condition on Verity's double bicategories or Garner's cubical bicategories.
Significance. If the coherence conditions for the compositions are shown to be consistent without forcing strictness or contradictions, the work would offer a new, flexible notion of double categories with bidirectional weakness, extending existing frameworks in higher category theory. The multiple characterizations provide independent perspectives that strengthen the proposal and could facilitate comparisons or applications in related areas such as bicategorical structures.
major comments (1)
- [Characterization section] Characterization section: the claim that the representability criterion on implicit double categories produces exactly the desired weak 1-cell compositions lacks an explicit verification that the resulting coherence diagrams (pasting associators, unitors, and interchangers in both horizontal and vertical directions) commute without identifying distinct 2-cells or forcing unintended strictness; this is load-bearing for the central definition as it is presented as automatically delivering the weak structure.
minor comments (1)
- The abstract would benefit from a concrete example of a doubly weak double category or a brief motivation for why existing notions (e.g., Verity or Garner) are insufficient.
Simulated Author's Rebuttal
We thank the referee for their careful reading of the manuscript and for highlighting the importance of verifying the coherence conditions in the characterization via implicit double categories. We address the major comment below and will strengthen the exposition accordingly.
read point-by-point responses
-
Referee: [Characterization section] Characterization section: the claim that the representability criterion on implicit double categories produces exactly the desired weak 1-cell compositions lacks an explicit verification that the resulting coherence diagrams (pasting associators, unitors, and interchangers in both horizontal and vertical directions) commute without identifying distinct 2-cells or forcing unintended strictness; this is load-bearing for the central definition as it is presented as automatically delivering the weak structure.
Authors: We agree that the manuscript would benefit from an explicit verification of the coherence diagrams. The representability criterion is intended to induce the weak 1-cell compositions (and their coherences) via the universal property of the implicit double category, but a direct check that the induced associators, unitors, and interchangers in both directions satisfy all required pasting diagrams without collapse or unintended strictness is indeed load-bearing. In the revised version we will add a dedicated subsection that constructs these data explicitly from the representability functor and verifies the relevant diagrams commute, using only the double computad axioms and the implicit structure. revision: yes
Circularity Check
Minor self-citation risk; definition and representability criterion are independently grounded
full rationale
The paper proposes a definition of doubly weak double categories as double computads with coherent 1-cell compositions in both directions, plus a characterization via representability on implicit double categories (double computads with 2-cell compositions but no 1-cell compositions). This is a standard categorical construction (representability criterion) with no reduction to fitted parameters, self-definitional equations, or load-bearing self-citations that force the result. Citations to Verity and Garner provide context but the central claim does not collapse to them by construction. No steps match the enumerated circularity patterns.
Assumptions & free parameters
assumptions (1)
- standard math Standard axioms of categories and double categories for objects, 1-cells, and 2-cells.
invented entities (2)
-
doubly weak double category
-
implicit double category
Cite this review
Pith. "Pith review of Doubly weak double categories." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/4CORVKLE
@misc{pith2026250623651,
author = {Pith},
title = {Pith review of: Doubly weak double categories},
year = {2026},
howpublished = {\url{https://pith.science/paper/4CORVKLE}},
note = {Machine review of arXiv:2506.23651}
}
read the original abstract
We propose a definition of double categories whose composition of 1-cells is weak in both directions. Namely, a doubly weak double category is a double computad -- a structure with 2-cells of all possible double-categorical shapes -- equipped with all possible composition operations, coherently. We also characterize them using "implicit" double categories, which are double computads having all possible compositions of 2-cells, but no compositions of 1-cells; doubly weak double categories are then obtained by a simple representability criterion. Finally, they can also be defined by adding a "tidiness" condition to the double bicategories of Verity, or to the cubical bicategories of Garner.
Forward citations
Cited by 2 Pith papers
-
Twisted double functors and loosely discrete opfibrations
Twisted copresheaves on double categories are equivalent to cloven loosely discrete opfibrations via an elements construction, with a collage comparison to double barrels.
-
Double categories for adaptive quantum computation
The paper unifies circuit, MBQC, magic-state, and Pauli measurement models as double categories, with quantum information horizontal and classical control vertical, and recasts the contextual-fraction bound on computi...
Reviewed May 25, 2026 · model on record in the stance chip above.
Discussion (0). Sign in to comment.