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Arithmetic Degrees are Cohomological Lyapunov Multipliers
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Pith's one-line read For a surjective endomorphism of a normal projective variety over a finitely generated field of characteristic zero, if the orbit of a point is Zariski dense, then the arithmetic degree of the point must be one of the cohomological…
desk verdict Real strengthening of Kawaguchi–Silverman with a repairable gap in the canonical-height step; worth refereeing seriously. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The carrying object is the cohomological Lyapunov multiplier $\mu_i(f)=\lambda_i(f)/\lambda_{i-1}(f)$, the ratio of consecutive dynamical degrees of $f$, which are real eigenvalues of the numerical pull-back $f^*:N^1(X)_{\mathbb{R}}\to N^1(X)_{\mathbb{R}}$. The key steps are a lifting lemma that lifts the generalized eigenspaces for multipliers above the spectral radius of $f^*$ on $\mathrm{Pic}^0(X)$ to $\mathrm{Pic}(X)_{\mathbb{R}}$ in an $f^*$-equivariant way, and a big-cone property from a companion paper ensuring that a big divisor class lies in the span of the eigenspaces of the multipliers. Heights along the orbit are then controlled by canonical heights built from Jordan blocks, while the part belonging to smaller multipliers grows too slowly to match $\alpha$.
What would settle it
Compute, for a concrete surjective endomorphism of a normal projective variety over a number field, both the arithmetic degree of a Zariski dense orbit, for instance via heights of iterates, and the list $\{\mu_1,\dots,\mu_d\}$; find an orbit whose $\alpha$ is a real eigenvalue of $f^*$ on $N^1(X)_{\mathbb{R}}$ but is not among the $\mu_i$. Alternatively, exhibit an endomorphism for which the claimed identity $\{\mu_i\}=\{\alpha:\mathrm{Im}(f^*-\alpha)\cap\mathrm{Big}(X)=\emptyset\}$ fails, since the proof imports that identity.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
The central claim is Theorem 1.2: under the Zariski-density assumption, $\alpha_f(x)\in\{\mu_1(f),\dots,\mu_d(f)\}\cap\mathbb{R}_{\geq 1}$. The proof assumes for contradiction that $\alpha$ lies strictly between $\mu_\ell$ and $\mu_{\ell+1}$, splits a big divisor class coming from the intersection of the big cone with the sum of generalized eigenspaces of $f^*$ corresponding to multipliers above $\alpha$, and shows that one part of the height grows at rate $\alpha$ while the other part grows too fast or too slow, forcing a contradiction. The corollary is that if $\lambda_1(f)>\lambda_2(f)$, then $\alpha_f(x)=\lambda_1(f)$ for every Zariski dense orbit, exactly as the Kawaguchi–Silverman conjecture predicts.
Load-bearing premise
The proof rests on two cited structural theorems about cohomological Lyapunov multipliers: that they are exactly the real eigenvalues $\alpha$ of the numerical pull-back whose image misses the big cone, and that the sum of the corresponding generalized eigenspaces meets the big cone; if either statement fails under the stated hypotheses, the conclusion no longer follows.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- The arithmetic degree of every Zariski dense orbit is forced into a finite list of dynamical invariants, so existence of the limit is paired with a strong membership statement.
- When $\lambda_1(f)>\lambda_2(f)$, the Kawaguchi–Silverman conjecture holds: every Zariski dense orbit has arithmetic degree $\lambda_1(f)$.
- If the multiplier lists of two endomorphisms are disjoint, no positive-dimensional subvariety of the product can contain a dense intersection of the product orbit, because the two coordinates grow at incompatible rates (Corollary 1.5).
- The result strengthens the earlier description of $\alpha_f(x)$ as an eigenvalue of $f^*$ on $N^1(X)_{\mathbb{R}}$ by selecting the specific eigenvalues that are Lyapunov multipliers.
- Since the arguments run over finitely generated fields via Moriwaki heights, the theorem applies over arbitrary characteristic-zero fields, including $\mathbb{C}$.
Reading between the lines
- The same height-splitting strategy might be adapted to dominant rational maps, where Zariski dense orbits are harder to control but the multiplier list is still defined.
- A testable computational extension is to compute the multiplier list and the arithmetic degree for concrete low-dimensional examples, such as endomorphisms of abelian surfaces or cyclic covers, and check the equality $\alpha=\mu_i$.
- For the dynamical Mordell–Lang application, the disjointness hypothesis is stronger than needed: since the proof only uses $\alpha_f(x)\neq\alpha_g(y)$, any condition implying different arithmetic degrees would give the same conclusion, and Theorem 1.2 suggests checking the multiplier lists is the natural route.
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Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. This paper studies surjective endomorphisms f:X→X of normal projective varieties over finitely generated fields of characteristic zero. It proves (Theorem 1.2) that for any point x whose f-orbit is Zariski dense, the arithmetic degree α_f(x) is one of the cohomological Lyapunov multipliers μ_i(f)=λ_i(f)/λ_{i-1}(f), and in particular α_f(x)≥1. Corollary 1.3 deduces the Kawaguchi–Silverman conjecture when λ_1(f)>λ_2(f). Corollary 1.5 applies Theorem 1.2 to a dynamical Mordell–Lang type statement for product endomorphisms. The proof uses Moriwaki heights, a lift of the generalized eigenspaces of f^* on N^1(X)_R to Pic(X)_R, and the big-cone characterization of Lyapunov multipliers imported from [Xieb], then runs a height-growth comparison on a big divisor along a subsequence.
Significance. If the proof is repaired, this is a significant strengthening of the known result of Kawaguchi–Silverman that α_f(x) is the modulus of an eigenvalue of f^* on N^1(X)_R; it pins the arithmetic degree to the specific cohomological Lyapunov multipliers. The corollaries are concrete and testable, and the DML application is a nice demonstration of the height method. The paper is generally well structured and the central arithmetic-degree conclusion is not assumed; it is derived from external results, the most important being the big-cone characterization in [Xieb]. The main reservation is that the proof as written has a local but load-bearing gap in the canonical-height step when the Albanese variety is trivial; this is repairable by restricting the relevant eigenspace sum to multipliers exceeding α_f(x).
major comments (2)
- [Section 3, proof of Theorem 1.2, definition of E and application of [KS16a, Theorem 5]] The definition E:=⊕_{μ_i(f)>√λ1(g)}E_{μ_i(f)} includes every positive μ_i(f) when Alb(X) is trivial, because then λ1(g)=0. This can include multipliers <1; e.g. a surface automorphism with λ1(f)>1 has μ2(f)=λ2(f)/λ1(f)=1/λ1(f)<1. The proof then applies [KS16a, Theorem 5] to the full Jordan matrix Λ and states that h_L∘f^n Λ^{-n} converges pointwise to a canonical height satisfying ĥ_L∘f=ĥ_LΛ and ĥ_L=h_L+O(1). For a coordinate with eigenvalue 0<μ<1, the recurrence a_{n+1}=μa_n+b_n with b_n bounded forces a_n=h_D(f^n x) to be bounded along every orbit, so a_n μ^{-n} does not converge and typically diverges. Hence the canonical-height construction, and the formula ĥ_{M1}(f^n(x))=Σ c_{i,k}n^kμ_i^n on which the lower bound h_{eB}(f^{n_j})≥C μ_{i0}^{n_j} depends, is not justified in the trivial-Albanese case. The gap is local: because the contradiction branch has α_f(x)>λ1(g), one can replace E by ⊕_{μ_i(f)>α_f(x)}E_{μ_i(f)}; Lemma 3.1 still applies, and all remaining eigenvalues in Λ are >1, where the canonical-height step is standard. As written, however, the main theorem is not proved.
- [Section 2, Theorems 2.2 and 2.3] The two key structural facts about cohomological Lyapunov multipliers—the big-cone characterization and the existence of a big class in the sum of the corresponding generalized eigenspaces—are quoted from the unpublished preprint [Xieb] (Theorems 1.3 and 1.4). Every step of the proof of Theorem 1.2 and Corollary 1.5 depends on these facts, so the main result is conditional on a source that is not yet publicly refereed. The authors should state this dependence explicitly and, if possible, include or append proofs, or at least confirm that [Xieb] is available in a citable final form. This does not by itself invalidate the argument, but it is a load-bearing incompleteness for a journal submission.
minor comments (4)
- [Section 1] There is a typo in the sentence "under the weaker assumption that the the orbit is Zariski dense": "the" is repeated.
- [Section 3, Lemma 3.1] The convergence estimate "the norm of (f^*)^{n-1}M Λ^{-n} is O(n^{r+2g}(ρ0/μ)^n)" is asserted from the linear-recurrence property without further detail; since this estimate is a key input to the lifting result, a short justification would improve readability.
- [Section 4, proof of Corollary 1.5] The sentence "Since p1^*L1 is always big, we may choose L1 appropriately such that p1^*L1=A+E" is slightly confusing: one chooses L1 ample, then p1^*L1 is big and the decomposition into an ample part A and effective part E exists. Rephrasing would avoid the impression that L1 is being chosen after the decomposition.
- [Acknowledgements and references] In the sentence about [XY25], "the second-named and third-named authors" should be "the second- and third-named authors".
Circularity Check
No circular derivation: Theorem 1.2 is proved from independent external results; the same-group preprint [Xieb] supplies cone characterizations but not the arithmetic-degree conclusion.
full rationale
The paper's derivation chain is not circular. Theorem 1.2 asserts alpha_f(x) lies among the cohomological Lyapunov multipliers mu_i(f). The proof uses: (i) existence and basic bounds for arithmetic degrees from [KS16a, Sil17, Ohn22]; (ii) the characterization of mu_i(f) via the big cone from [Xieb, Theorems 1.3 and 1.4]; (iii) a lifting lemma from N^1 to Pic using the spectral radius on Pic^0; (iv) canonical-height-growth estimates from [KS16a, Theorem 5]; and (v) a contradiction using a big divisor supplied by Theorem 2.3. At no point is alpha_f(x) defined to be a mu_i(f), nor is any parameter fitted to the arithmetic degree data; Lemma 2.8 uses the independent definition of alpha_f(x) via ample heights. The main external inputs [Xieb] and [XY25] are by the same research group, and they are load-bearing preprints, but they are separate statements whose assumptions do not include the conclusion of Theorem 1.2, so the self-citation footprint is a verification/reproducibility concern rather than a circular reduction. The skeptical concern about applying [KS16a, Theorem 5] to Jordan blocks with eigenvalues mu_i(f) < 1 (e.g. in the trivial Albanese case) is a possible correctness gap, not circularity: even if the canonical-height step fails there, that would not make the theorem an input to its own proof. Overall, the central claim retains independent mathematical content and is not assumed as a premise.
Assumptions & free parameters
assumptions (4)
- domain assumption Theorem 2.2 from Xieb: the set of cohomological Lyapunov multipliers equals the set of real eigenvalues alpha of f^* on N^1(X)_R for which Im(f^* - alpha) does not intersect Big(X).
- domain assumption Theorem 2.3 from Xieb: the sum of generalized eigenspaces for the multipliers mu_i(f) has nonempty intersection with Big(X).
- standard math Moriwaki height machinery over finitely generated fields, including Northcott and projection formula.
- domain assumption Canonical height convergence for Jordan-block pullbacks, cited as KS16a Theorem 5.
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read the original abstract
For endomorphisms of projective varieties, we prove that the arithmetic degree of a point with Zariski dense orbit must be a cohomological Lyapunov multiplier of the dynamical system. We will apply our result to deduce a corollary towards the dynamical Mordell--Lang conjecture.
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