REVIEW 3 major objections 6 minor 10 references
Pinching-Antenna Systems (PASS) Meet Multiple Access: NOMA or OMA?
T0 review · 3 major / 6 minor · reviewed 2026-08-15 · deepseek-v4-flash
Pith's one-line read For two equal-rate users, TDMA with per-slot antenna placement uses less transmit power than NOMA once four or more pinching antennas are deployed.
desk verdict A useful three-way comparison in pinching-antenna systems, but the TDMA-over-NOMA headline rests on a provably optimal TDMA baseline versus a heuristic NOMA baseline, so the central quantitative claim needs a stronger NOMA benchmark before it's fully convincing. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The central mechanism is the time-switching feature of PASS: under TDMA, each time slot can use its own antenna-position vector $\mathbf{x}_{p,k}$, so the array is redeployed to serve each user in turn. For a single-user slot, the optimal placement is to cluster all $N$ pinching antennas symmetrically around the user's $x$-coordinate with equal spacing $\Delta$, a closed-form result the paper takes from prior work. For NOMA and FDMA, by contrast, one shared placement must balance the two users' channels, and the paper handles the resulting non-convex problem with a two-stage algorithm: a successive-convex-approximation stage that fixes coarse positions by minimizing large-scale path loss, followed by a fine-tuning stage that shifts antennas on a wavelength scale so their phases combine constructively at both users. The phase-alignment constraint $\phi_k^n - \phi_k^{n-1} = 2m_k\pi$ is what makes constructive beamforming possible, and the first-order Taylor approximation of the phase around neighboring antennas is what allows the fine-tuning step to be computed.
What would settle it
Run the same two-user power-minimization problem with an exact global solver for NOMA and FDMA at $N=6$ with equal target rates; if the resulting NOMA transmit power falls below the TDMA value, the reported ordering is an artifact of the heuristic. Alternatively, measure the energy and switching time required to move the pinching antennas between the two TDMA slot positions and add them to the power budget; a large enough overhead invalidates the practical ranking.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
For a single-waveguide PASS with N pinching antennas serving two users, the paper argues that the best multiple-access choice is not fixed: it depends on how symmetric the users' rate demands are. When the rate targets are equal or close, time-division multiple access with per-slot pinching-antenna placement is more power-efficient than NOMA for N≥4, because each TDMA slot can position the full antenna array to maximize the channel gain of exactly one user. When rate targets are asymmetric, NOMA regains the advantage, since its shared resource block exploits the disparity in channel conditions. The paper also establishes that NOMA consistently requires less transmit power than FDMA under the same PASS setup, and that PASS itself yields large power savings relative to a conventional single antenna or a fixed-position array.
Load-bearing premise
The comparison's conclusion depends on treating the TDMA solution as optimal while the NOMA and FDMA solutions come from a heuristic without a proven gap, and on assuming that reconfiguring the antennas between time slots costs no power or time; if the heuristic is far from optimal or reconfiguration overhead is material, the TDMA-over-NOMA result could reverse.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- For symmetric user rate requirements in a two-user PASS downlink, orthogonal access via TDMA can be more power-efficient than NOMA once $N \ge 4$, so NOMA is not automatically the best multiple-access scheme for pinching-antenna systems.
- NOMA still beats FDMA in this setting, so among the two orthogonal schemes the choice matters: time-splitting exploits PASS's reconfigurability, while frequency-splitting does not.
- PASS-based beamforming can sharply reduce required transmit power relative to a conventional single antenna or a fixed-position array with the same number of elements.
- When user rate targets are asymmetric, NOMA's spectrum-efficiency advantage over orthogonal access reappears, so the multiple-access choice should adapt to traffic symmetry.
- The optimal TDMA deployment guideline is simple: in each slot, place the pinching antennas symmetrically around the served user with equal spacing, then refine the phases.
Reading between the lines
- A fair reader might infer that the NOMA and FDMA power curves are upper bounds, since the two-stage algorithm is heuristic; a better NOMA solver could narrow or close the reported gap at $N \ge 4$.
- Because the TDMA analysis ignores the cost of moving pinching antennas between slots, an energy-aware comparison with switching overhead included could favor NOMA for short time slots or slow reconfiguration.
- The results suggest a practical hybrid: use TDMA with per-slot antenna clustering for symmetric traffic and switch to NOMA with a shared asymmetric placement when user rates diverge.
- A testable extension would be to derive an optimality gap or a global-search benchmark for the NOMA phase-alignment problem, turning the numerical ordering into a provable one.
Signed reviews
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper considers a fundamental two-user pinching-antenna system (PASS) under three multiple-access schemes: NOMA, FDMA, and TDMA. For each scheme, a transmit-power minimization problem is formulated subject to user rate requirements. For NOMA and FDMA, the paper develops a two-stage algorithm that first solves a large-scale path-loss surrogate via successive convex approximation and then fine-tunes PA positions for phase coherence. For TDMA, it invokes a globally optimal PA placement from prior work that deploys PAs symmetrically around each user with equal spacing. Numerical results show that PASS significantly outperforms conventional antenna systems, NOMA consistently outperforms FDMA, and TDMA outperforms NOMA for symmetric user rate requirements when the number of PAs N≥4.
Significance. If the conclusions are substantiated, the finding that time-switched per-slot PA reconfiguration (TDMA) can beat power-domain NOMA in a two-user PASS under symmetric rate targets is non-obvious and useful for system design; it would also add a new data point to the ongoing discussion of NOMA versus OMA in flexible-antenna systems. The problem formulation is clean, the power expressions are derived carefully, and the SCA subproblem is convex and solvable. The paper provides reproducible numerical experiments and a clear deployment guideline from Fig. 4. However, the central comparison is currently undermined by an asymmetry in solution quality between the proven-optimal TDMA baseline and the heuristic NOMA/FDMA baseline.
major comments (3)
- [Sec. IV, Figs. 2-3] The central conclusion that TDMA requires less transmit power than NOMA for N≥4 (Fig. 2) and at equal rate targets (Fig. 3) is obtained by comparing the globally optimal TDMA solution of Lemma 1 (from [10]) with NOMA and FDMA solutions from the heuristic two-stage algorithm of Sec. III-A, for which no optimality gap or convergence certificate is given. Because the NOMA solver may be substantially suboptimal, the reported crossover could be an artifact of the solver rather than a fundamental property of PASS with NOMA. The authors should either quantify the performance of the NOMA/FDMA algorithm (e.g., by comparing against an exhaustive grid search or a global optimization method in the small-N regime) or explicitly frame the conclusion as "TDMA outperforms the proposed NOMA algorithm" in the abstract and in Sec. IV.
- [Sec. III-A2, Eqs. (15)-(24)] The fine-tuning stage does not enforce the exact phase-alignment constraint (15) for both users; as the paper itself states, a single uniform PA spacing cannot maximize channel gains for both users simultaneously. The algorithm searches a restricted segment to minimize the surrogate objective (20), but it does not verify whether the refined positions satisfy (15) for either user or whether the actual objective (10) is improved. Consequently, the transmit powers reported for NOMA and FDMA in Figs. 2 and 3 are not certified to correspond to achievable channel gains |v_k|^2 used in the objective, so the comparison with TDMA is not an apples-to-apples comparison of achievable performance.
- [Sec. II-A, Eq. (10)] The NOMA problem (10) is solved for a fixed SIC order (λ1=0, λ2=1) without including the corresponding ordering condition |v1|^2 ≥ |v2|^2. Since the PA placement is part of the optimization, the solution may violate this condition, in which case the power expressions in (9) do not represent a valid NOMA transmission. The exhaustive search over the two SIC orders mentioned in the text does not resolve this unless each subproblem enforces the channel-gain inequality. Please add the ordering constraint or explicitly verify the ordering for the reported optimized solutions.
minor comments (6)
- [Abstract and Sec. III-A] The word "fine-tuning" is misspelled as "fine-turning" in the abstract, in the header of Sec. III-A, and several times in the body text.
- [Sec. IV] The symbol δ is used both for the minimum PA spacing (λ/2) and for the relative offset x_p^n - x_p^c in the fine-tuning procedure; this dual use is confusing and should be resolved with distinct symbols.
- [Eq. (17)] In problem (17), the constraint list "(8b),(8c)" appears to be a typo; the rate constraint (8b) is no longer present after the transformation, so it should be "(8c),(8d)" as in (20d).
- [Fig. 4 caption] The labels T1 and T2 are not defined in the caption; please define them as the two TDMA time slots.
- [Sec. II-A and Eqs. (23)-(24)] The sentence "both of them yield similar characteristics" is vague; please clarify what is similar between the two SIC orders and why an exhaustive search over the two orders is sufficient. Also, the hat notation in bΔx and bΔx′ (Eqs. (23)-(24)) is not defined.
- [Sec. IV] The parameter "n_neff" should be typeset as n_eff for consistency with the notation introduced in Sec. II.
Circularity Check
No circularity: TDMA-vs-NOMA comparison comes from direct simulation of independently formulated optimization problems; only a minor non-load-bearing self-citation appears.
full rationale
No step in the paper reduces by construction to its own inputs. The central claim that TDMA requires less power than NOMA for symmetric rates is obtained by simulating the formulated power-minimization problems (8), (12), and (14), with no parameter fitted to a subset of the reported results and then renamed as a prediction. The TDMA optimality is imported from Lemma 1 with proof cited to [10, Appendix B], a reference whose author list (Xu, Ding, Karagiannidis) is disjoint from the present authors, so this is not a self-citation chain. The only self-citations are [8] (Zhu/Mu/Liu) for the Euclidean-distance expression and the first-order phase Taylor expansion used in fine-tuning, and [4] (Liu/Mu) for PASS background. These support the phase-coherent fine-tuning stage, but the approximation is written out explicitly in Eqs. (21)-(22) and is not the source of the TDMA-over-NOMA conclusion. The NOMA/FDMA two-stage SCA-plus-fine-tuning algorithm does lack an optimality certificate, so the comparison is an algorithmic benchmark rather than a proof of a fundamental ordering; that is a correctness or optimality-gap concern, not circularity. No fitted input is called a prediction, no self-citation is load-bearing, no uniqueness theorem is imported from the authors' own prior work, and no known result is merely renamed. The derivation is therefore not circular, and the minor self-citation does not affect the independence of the central numerical comparison.
Assumptions & free parameters
free parameters (2)
- fine-tuning segment thresholds =
3 Delta, 4 Delta from central PA
- phase-alignment integer choices m_k =
unspecified
assumptions (5)
- standard math SCA convergence and Taylor linearization in (19) yield a convex subproblem (20) solvable by CVX.
- domain assumption PASS channel model (1)-(2): in-waveguide amplitudes 1/sqrt(N) independent of position, no waveguide loss, free-space path loss eta/d, and continuous PA activation with minimum spacing Delta.
- domain assumption The time-switching feature of PASS: each TDMA time slot can use a different PA configuration without inter-slot overhead.
- domain assumption Lemma 1 from [10]: for each user, the optimal PA placement is symmetric around the user with equal spacing Delta, valid only when D_k >> Delta.
- ad hoc to paper The fine-tuning 'balance' procedure does not satisfy the exact phase alignment (15) for both users simultaneously; instead it searches a restricted interval to minimize the SCA objective.
Cite this review
Pith. "Pith review of Pinching-Antenna Systems (PASS) Meet Multiple Access: NOMA or OMA?." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/KILUO6NG
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read the original abstract
A fundamental two-user PASS-based communication system is considered under three MA schemes, namely non-orthogonal multiple access (NOMA), frequency division multiple access (FDMA), and time division multiple access (TDMA). For each MA scheme, a pinching beamforming optimization problem is formulated to minimize the required transmit power for satisfying users' rate requirements. For NOMA and FDMA, a two-stage algorithm is proposed, where the locations of PAs are derived sequentially by using the successive convex approximation (SCA) method and fine-turning phase adjustment. For TDMA, by leveraging the time-switching feature of PASS, the optimal pinching beamforming of each time slot is derived to maximize the served user channel gain. Numerical results are provided to show that: 1) PASS can achieve a significant performance gain over conventional antenna systems, and 2) NOMA consistently outperforms FDMA, while TDMA provides superior performance than NOMA for symmetric user rate requirements.
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