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Squarefree discriminants of polynomials with prime coefficients
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Pith's one-line read For every degree n≥2, the paper derives Euler-product asymptotic formulas for the number of prime-coefficient polynomials whose discriminant is squarefree or whose quotient ring is the maximal order.
desk verdict The non-monic maximal-order half of Theorem 1.1 is false; the squarefree-discriminant and monic-maximality results are the real contributions and deserve a serious referee after the maximality claims are fixed. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The load-bearing object is the directed graph G_u whose vertices are F_p[x]/(u) and whose edges are α→αx+c with c∈F_p^×; a length-n path from 0 to β counts the coefficient tuples (a_1,...,a_n)∈(F_p^×)^n with $a_1x^{{n-1}}$+...+a_n≡β mod u. Its normalized adjacency matrix is doubly stochastic, so powers of the deviation from the uniform matrix can be bounded by matrix-norm arguments; these bounds define the discrepancy δ_{n,p}(d), which controls how far the residue classes of nonzero-coefficient polynomials are from uniform. Inserting those bounds into inclusion-exclusion sums over u yields the local densities, with exact generating-function identities such as ∑_{u monic, x∤u} μ(u)/$p^{{2 deg u}}$=p/(p+1) supplying the main terms. At p=2 the same inclusion-exclusion reduces to a product over irreducible factors of x^t-1, evaluated by cyclotomic factorization into irreducibles of degree od(2).
What would settle it
Enumerate all $2^{16}$ polynomials of degree 16 over F_3 with coefficients in {1,2}, and for every monic u∈F_3[x] of degree 1≤d≤8 not divisible by x and every residue class α, compute the discrepancy |#A_n(u;α)/$2^{16}$ - 1/3^d|. If any value exceeds the bound of Theorem 4.1, namely (1/3^d)((3/2)^d-1)^{⌊16/(2d)⌋}, the equidistribution engine behind the local densities is false; a single violation would invalidate the discrepancy estimates on which Theorems 3.1 and 3.2 rely.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
The paper claims that, for each n≥2, the number N_n^sqf(X) of degree-n polynomials with all coefficients prime and squarefree discriminant equals C_n^sqf times the product of Li(X) over the n+1 coefficients, plus an error of size $X^{{n+1}}$/(log X)^A, where C_n^sqf is a convergent Euler product of local densities; the monic count has the same shape with a product of Li(X^i), i=1,...,n. The maximal-order counts N_n^max(X) and $N_n^{{m,max}}$(X) obey analogous asymptotics with constants C_n^max and $C_n^{{max,2}}$. For odd primes and n≥16 the local densities have explicit expansions, such as P_{n,p}^{sqf}=1-(3p-1)/(p(p+1)^2)+O(min{(p/(p-1)^2)^{5/2},(p/(p-1)^2)^{⌊$\sqrt$(log n/log p)⌋/2}}), while at p=2 the paper gives exact values depending on the parity of n and on the order of 2 modulo divisors of n+1. A separate theorem gives the analogous asymptotic for pairs of primes (a,b) with a<$X^{3}$, b<$X^{4}$ and $a^{4}$+$b^{3}$ squarefree, with constant C=∏_p(1-1/($p^{2}$-p))≈37.40%.
Load-bearing premise
A single load-bearing premise runs through the argument: the imported uniformity estimate (1) applies to the maximal-order bad sets and, in the non-monic family, a prime leading coefficient q may be treated as a p-adic unit at every p including p=q.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- For every fixed degree n≥2, prime-coefficient polynomials with squarefree discriminant have a positive limiting density within the prime-coefficient family, governed by a convergent Euler product of local densities.
- In the n→∞ limit excluding p=2, the squarefree local density tends to ∏_{p>2}(1-(3p-1)/(p(p+1)^2))≈67.69%, and the maximal-order local density tends to ∏_{p>2}(1-1/(p^2+p+1))≈85.26%.
- The same sieve formalism proves that pairs of primes (a,b) with a<X^3, b<X^4 and a^4+b^3 squarefree are asymptotically C Li(X^3)Li(X^4) with C≈37.40%.
- The equidistribution bounds imply that the nonzero-coefficient residue classes modulo any polynomial u are nearly uniform; in particular, for n≥16 and odd primes the discrepancy is small enough to yield the claimed local-density expansions.
Reading between the lines
- If the non-monic leading-coefficient issue at p=q cannot be repaired, the non-monic maximal-order statement in Theorem 1.1 is likely false as stated, while the squarefree count may survive because the discriminant of the mod-q reduction can still be treated directly.
- The directed-graph equidistribution method is not tied to coefficients being prime; it should extend to any coefficient set formed by a union of nonzero residue classes, such as coefficients restricted to quadratic residues.
- The exact p=2 formulas are checkable by brute force for small n and would provide a fast way to locate any arithmetic error in the cyclotomic factor count.
- The limiting constants suggest that the 'no zero coefficient' restriction, rather than primality itself, is what moves the densities away from the integer-coefficient values; a natural test is to run the same sieve with coefficients restricted to nonzero residues modulo each p.
Formalized claims in Lean
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Claim #1: The paper claims that, for each n≥2, the number N_n^sqf(X) of degree-n polynomials with all coefficients prime and squarefree discriminant equals C_n^sqf times the product of Li(X) over the n+1 coefficients, plus an error of size $X^{{n+1}}$/(log X)^A, where C_n^sqf is a convergent Euler product of local densities; the monic count has the same shape with a product of Li(X^i), i=1,...,n. The maxima
/-- @claim 1 The paper claims that, for each n≥2, the number N_n^sqf(X) of degree-n polynomials with all coefficients prime and squarefree discriminant equals C_n^sqf times the product of Li(X) over the n+1 coefficients, plus an error of size $X^{{n+1}}$/(log X)^A, where C_n^sqf is a convergent Euler product of local densities; the monic count has the same shape with a product of Li(X^i), i=1,...,n. The maxima -/ def central_claim : Prop :=
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper studies two families of integer polynomials with all coefficients prime: monic polynomials of degree n and all polynomials of degree n (including non-monic ones). For each family it claims asymptotic formulas for the number of polynomials with squarefree discriminant and for the number whose quotient Z[x]/(f) is the maximal order in Q[x]/(f). The main engine is a sieve theorem (Theorem 1.3) that converts p-adic bad sets into counts of prime-coefficient tuples, relying on uniformity estimates imported from [6,7,12] and on local density calculations based on equidistribution of polynomials with nonzero coefficients over finite fields, estimated using doubly stochastic matrices.
Significance. If the monic statements are correct, the paper gives a worthwhile application of the uniformity estimates of Bhargava--Shankar--Wang and Sanjaya--Wang to prime-constrained coefficient families, and the finite-field discrepancy estimates in Theorems 4.1 and 4.2 are elegant and potentially reusable. However, the non-monic maximal-order assertions in Theorem 1.1 are not merely unproved but false, so the advertised central result as stated cannot stand.
major comments (3)
- [Theorem 1.1, definitions of N_max_n and N_max_{n,2}] For every f in V_n(X), the leading coefficient is a prime q > 1, so f is not monic. The quotient ring Z[x]/(f) is then not finitely generated as a Z-module, because the leading coefficient q is not a unit of Z, and hence Z[x]/(f) is not an order in Q[x]/(f). Therefore Z[x]/(f) is never a maximal order: N_max_n(X) = 0 for all X, and N_max_{n,2}(X) is at most the number of f with a0 = 2, which is O(X^n/(log X)^n). This directly contradicts the asserted main terms of size X^{n+1}/(log X)^{n+1} with positive constants C_max_n and C_max_{n,2}.
- [Section 3, opening paragraph and Lemma 3.7 / equation (11)] The transfer statement on p.3, 'a non-monic polynomial with leading coefficient not divisible by p behaves just like a monic polynomial over Z_p', holds only for primes p not dividing the leading coefficient. In the family V_n(X), every f has a prime p = a0 dividing its leading coefficient, and at that prime the local maximality condition fails for every such f. This failure is not captured by the computations in Un(Zp) in Lemma 3.7 and equation (11), which apply only where all coefficients are units. The true bad set at p must include the case v_p(a0) > 0, and on that set the maximality density is zero, so the hypothesis lambda_p(B_p) << p^{-c} with c > 1 of Theorem 1.3 is not satisfied for the non-monic maximality problem.
- [Theorem 1.3 and Sections 4.3-4.4] The application of Theorem 1.3 to the sets used in Theorem 1.1 requires the Uniformity Estimate (1) for the specific bad sets B_p, including the maximality bad sets. The paper only says that the results follow from the tail estimates in [6,7] (and [12] for Theorem 1.2); it does not state which theorem in those papers supplies (1) for the maximality sets, nor does it verify that the maximality bad sets satisfy the hypotheses. Since the maximality condition is not simply of the form p^2 | F(a) for a fixed polynomial F, a precise verification or citation is needed; as written, the monic maximal-order proof rests on an unstated uniformity assumption.
minor comments (4)
- [Abstract and Section 1] The abstract says 'monic polynomials with prime coefficients', but the leading coefficient of a monic polynomial is 1; this should read 'with prime non-leading coefficients'.
- [Theorem 1.1, formula for P_max_{n,2}] The displayed formula contains '2pt if n+1 is congruent to 2 mod 4', which appears to be a typographical error for '2 p_t'; please correct the typesetting.
- [Section 1, definitions of N_max_{n,2}] The phrase 'maximal order except possibly at 2' is used without a formal definition; it should be stated precisely as 'Z_p[x]/(f) is the maximal order for every prime p different from 2'.
- [Theorem 1.1] The constants C_sqf_n and C_max_n are used for both the monic and non-monic rows of the theorem; the paper should explicitly state that the constants in the two families are the same.
Circularity Check
No significant circularity: the asymptotic constants are computed from self-contained local-density and equidistribution arguments, and the cited uniformity estimates are external theorems.
full rationale
The paper's derivation chain is not circular. Theorem 1.1 is obtained by applying the sieve statement Theorem 1.3, whose main constant is an Euler product of local densities. Those local densities are computed directly in Sections 3 and 4: P_sqf_n,p and P_max_n,p are expressed in terms of counts of lifts of polynomials in U_n(F_p), with the discrepancy delta_{n,p}(d) bounded by the doubly stochastic matrix arguments in Theorems 4.1 and 4.2. No parameter is fitted to the counts N(X) being predicted, and no displayed equation defines a local density in terms of the target asymptotic constant. The Uniformity Estimate (1) is imported from [6,7,12] as a stated external hypothesis; although those papers share authors with the present one, the cited results have independent published proofs and their assumptions do not include the target count, so they are real evidence rather than a self-citation loop. The passage asserting that a non-monic polynomial with leading coefficient not divisible by p behaves like a monic polynomial over Z_p is questionable for p dividing the leading coefficient and may invalidate the non-monic maximal-order statements, but that is a mathematical correctness concern, not a circular reduction: the paper does not define the maximal-order condition in terms of the counts it derives. Thus no circular step is established, and the score is 0.
Assumptions & free parameters
assumptions (4)
- domain assumption Uniformity Estimate (1) holds for the discriminant and maximality bad sets B_p with some alpha, beta > 0 (cited from [6,7,12]).
- ad hoc to paper A non-monic polynomial with leading coefficient a prime q behaves, for the global maximal-order question, like a polynomial whose leading coefficient is a p-adic unit at every prime p.
- standard math Dedekind's criterion (Lemma 3.5, from [1]) characterizes maximality of Z_p[x]/(f).
- standard math Siegel-Walfisz theorem for primes in arithmetic progressions uniformly for moduli up to a fixed power of log X.
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Pith. "Pith review of Squarefree discriminants of polynomials with prime coefficients." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/Q3GJS6GL
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abstract
In this paper, we consider the family of monic polynomials with prime coefficients and the family of all polynomials with prime coefficients. We determine the number of $f(x)$ in each of these families having: squarefree discriminant; $\mathbb{Z}[x]/(f(x))$ as the maximal order in $\mathbb{Q}[x]/(f(x))$.
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