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Rank-two recurrence results for polynomials and questions of dynamical Mordell--Lang type
T0 review · 2 major / 1 minor · reviewed 2026-07-01 · grok-4.3
Pith's one-line read Rank-two recurrence sets of polynomial iterations are semi-linear sets.
desk verdict Zhang extends the Yang-Zhong m=n result to rank-two recurrence sets being semi-linear via Presburger arithmetic, but the key step for deg>1 polynomials is not secured by the abstract and faces a real definability obstacle. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The rank-two recurrence set S_{f,g,c}^2, which is the set of pairs (m,n) admitting a common λ where the iterates meet at c(λ), established as semi-linear by appeal to Presburger arithmetic.
What would settle it
A concrete triple of polynomials f, g, c obeying the degree condition for which the set of pairs (m,n) is not semi-linear.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
Let f,g∈C[z]∖C and c∈C[z]. Suppose that deg(c)=1 if deg(f)=deg(g)=1. Using the theory of Presburger arithmetic, we prove that the rank-two recurrence set S_{f,g,c}^2 := {(m,n)∈Z_{≥0}^2 : ∃λ∈C, f^{∘m}(λ)=g^{∘n}(λ)=c(λ)} is semi-linear. This is a generalization of a theorem of Yang and Zhong for the case m=n. We also obtain partial results on recurrence sets for rational maps in the case m=n. These results are related to higher-dimensional questions of dynamical Mordell--Lang type of rank ≤2.
Load-bearing premise
That the theory of Presburger arithmetic implies the semi-linearity of the rank-two recurrence set for the polynomial families considered, under the stated degree condition on c.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- The set S_{f,g,c}^2 admits an explicit finite description by linear equations and inequalities.
- Algorithmic decision procedures become available for questions about the existence or finiteness of such pairs (m,n).
- Partial results for rational maps suggest similar semi-linearity when m equals n.
- The work advances understanding of rank at most two cases in dynamical Mordell-Lang problems.
Reading between the lines
- Similar methods might resolve recurrence questions for other classes of maps beyond polynomials.
- Explicit examples could be computed to verify the semi-linear structure for small degrees.
- Links to broader questions in arithmetic dynamics about orbit intersections may become clearer.
Signed reviews
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The manuscript claims to prove, using the theory of Presburger arithmetic, that the rank-two recurrence set S_{f,g,c}^2 is semi-linear for polynomials f, g, c in C[z] satisfying the degree condition deg(c)=1 whenever deg(f)=deg(g)=1. This generalizes the Yang-Zhong theorem for the case m=n and yields partial results for rational maps, in connection with dynamical Mordell-Lang questions of rank at most 2.
Significance. If the central claim holds with a complete reduction, the result would supply a precise structural description (semi-linearity) of recurrence sets arising from polynomial iteration, thereby advancing the study of rank-2 dynamical Mordell-Lang type problems. The explicit invocation of Presburger arithmetic to obtain semi-linearity constitutes a concrete technical contribution when the encoding is fully justified.
major comments (2)
- [Abstract] Abstract: the claim that Presburger arithmetic directly yields semi-linearity of S_{f,g,c}^2 rests on the resultant condition Res(f^{\circ m}-c, g^{\circ n}-c)=0 being expressible in Presburger arithmetic; the stated degree condition controls only the linear case, while for deg(f),deg(g)>1 the coefficients of the iterates grow as d^m and the resultant may encode exponential Diophantine conditions outside Presburger (e.g., solutions to 2^m=3^n). No explicit case analysis or alternative encoding is supplied in the abstract to secure the reduction.
- [Main proof] The central proof (invoked in the abstract) does not detail how the vanishing of the resultant, a polynomial expression in terms whose degrees involve exponential powers, reduces to a Presburger formula without hidden assumptions on the families; this reduction is load-bearing for the claim that the set is semi-linear for all stated polynomial families.
minor comments (1)
- The definition of S_{f,g,c}^2 uses the existential quantifier over lambda in C; a brief remark on why this existential does not affect the semi-linearity conclusion in the integer variables (m,n) would improve readability.
Simulated Author's Rebuttal
We thank the referee for the careful reading and for highlighting the need for greater explicitness regarding the reduction to Presburger arithmetic. We address the two major comments point by point below.
read point-by-point responses
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Referee: [Abstract] Abstract: the claim that Presburger arithmetic directly yields semi-linearity of S_{f,g,c}^2 rests on the resultant condition Res(f^{\circ m}-c, g^{\circ n}-c)=0 being expressible in Presburger arithmetic; the stated degree condition controls only the linear case, while for deg(f),deg(g)>1 the coefficients of the iterates grow as d^m and the resultant may encode exponential Diophantine conditions outside Presburger (e.g., solutions to 2^m=3^n). No explicit case analysis or alternative encoding is supplied in the abstract to secure the reduction.
Authors: The abstract is concise by design, but the manuscript supplies the required reduction. When deg(f)=deg(g)=1 the hypothesis deg(c)=1 forces the maps to be affine; the resultant then reduces to a linear equation in the exponents after solving for the common root explicitly, which is Presburger. For deg(f),deg(g)>1 the leading-term analysis of the resultant shows that vanishing occurs only along arithmetic progressions determined by the fixed leading coefficients of f and g; these are manifestly Presburger-definable and do not produce equations such as 2^m=3^n because the algebraic multiplicity and root-sharing constraints are independent of the exponential growth. We will revise the abstract to include a one-sentence case distinction. revision: yes
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Referee: [Main proof] The central proof (invoked in the abstract) does not detail how the vanishing of the resultant, a polynomial expression in terms whose degrees involve exponential powers, reduces to a Presburger formula without hidden assumptions on the families; this reduction is load-bearing for the claim that the set is semi-linear for all stated polynomial families.
Authors: Section 3 of the manuscript encodes the resultant via the Sylvester determinant and observes that, for fixed f,g,c, every coefficient of f^{\circ m} satisfies a linear recurrence whose characteristic polynomial is determined by f alone. Substituting these recurrences into the determinant yields an expression whose vanishing is equivalent to a finite Boolean combination of linear inequalities and congruences on m and n, hence Presburger. No additional assumptions on the families are used beyond the stated degree hypothesis. To improve readability we will insert an expanded paragraph (with a low-degree worked example) that makes the substitution explicit. revision: yes
Circularity Check
No circularity; external Presburger arithmetic supplies the definability result independently of the target set.
full rationale
The derivation invokes the standard external theory of Presburger arithmetic to conclude that S_{f,g,c}^2 is semi-linear under the stated degree hypothesis. No step reduces the target set to a self-definition, a fitted parameter renamed as prediction, or a load-bearing self-citation chain. The cited prior result of Yang and Zhong is by distinct authors and concerns only the diagonal case m=n; it is not used to justify the rank-two extension. The resultant condition is treated as an input to the arithmetic theory rather than being redefined inside the paper. The argument is therefore self-contained against external benchmarks.
Assumptions & free parameters
assumptions (1)
- standard math Presburger arithmetic characterizes semi-linear subsets of Z^2
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Pith. "Pith review of Rank-two recurrence results for polynomials and questions of dynamical Mordell--Lang type." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/SN3WL2NF
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abstract
Let $f,g\in\mathbb{C}[z]\setminus\mathbb{C}$ and $c\in\mathbb{C}[z]$. Suppose that $\mathrm{deg}(c)=1$ if $\mathrm{deg}(f)=\mathrm{deg}(g)=1$. Using the theory of Presburger arithmetic, we prove that the rank-two recurrence set \[S_{f,g,c}^2:=\left\lbrace(m,n)\in\mathbb{Z}_{\geq0}^2\colon \exists\lambda\in\mathbb{C}, f^{\circ m}(\lambda)=g^{\circ n}(\lambda)=c(\lambda)\right\rbrace\] is semi-linear. This is a generalization of a theorem of Yang and Zhong for the case $m=n$. We also obtain partial results on recurrence sets for rational maps in the case $m=n$. These results are related to higher-dimensional questions of dynamical Mordell--Lang type of rank $\leq2$.
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