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On Energy-Efficient Passive Beamforming Design of RIS-Assisted CoMP-NOMA Networks
T0 review · 3 major / 6 minor · reviewed 2026-08-15 · deepseek-v4-flash
Pith's one-line read This paper claims that a reconfigurable surface can raise the energy efficiency of coordinated NOMA networks, and that an enhance-and-cancel phase rule beats enhancement alone except when all base stations cooperate.
desk verdict A competent but incremental simulation study of known RIS phase-shift heuristics, whose headline energy-efficiency metric is mis-specified and likely creates the reported J-dependence as an artifact. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The argument is carried by a linear phase-tuning identity. For a cooperative base station's RIS, each element's phase is set to $\theta_j^k = \arg(h^e_{j,f}) - \arg(h^{(k)}_{R_j,f} h^{(k)}_{j,R_j})$ (Eq. (13)), which aligns the reflected cascade with the direct channel and maximizes $|H^e_{j,f}|^2$. For a non-cooperating base station's RIS, Eq. (14) sets $\theta_m^k = \bmod[\phi_m^k+\pi, 2\pi]-\pi$, flipping the reflected component by 180° to cancel interference. These two rules are inserted into the energy-efficiency objective $\eta_{\text{EE}}$ (Eq. (11)), the ratio of outage-weighted sum rate to total consumed power including per-element RIS power $KP_{\text{ele}}$, and their effects are evaluated by Monte Carlo simulation.
What would settle it
One concrete falsifier is to rerun the simulation with RIS contributions included in cell-center user signals and compare EO versus EC energy efficiency; a ranking change, or a live test where cell-center signal quality varies as the RIS phases toggle, would contradict the paper's central premise.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
The paper claims that in a downlink multi-cell CoMP-NOMA network, a set of passive RISs can improve energy efficiency if each surface's phase shifts are chosen deliberately rather than randomly, and that the best choice depends on how many base stations cooperate and how many reflecting elements are available. Specifically, the enhancement-and-cancellation (EC) design—cooperative-base-station RISs aligned to strengthen the edge user's signal, non-cooperative-base-station RISs phase-flipped to suppress their interference—consistently gives higher energy efficiency than enhancement-only (EO) or random phase shifts in the simulated scenarios, with one exception: when all base stations cooperate, interference cancellation is unnecessary and EC equals EO. The paper also reports that energy efficiency peaks at an intermediate level of cooperation ($J=4$) and an intermediate number of RIS elements ($K=90$), after which the power drawn by extra elements outweighs the rate gains.
Load-bearing premise
The paper assumes that because the RISs sit at the cell edge, their phase settings do not meaningfully affect the signals received by cell-center users, so cell-center performance is computed without the RIS. If the surface does reach those users, the decoding order and the energy-efficiency ranking between designs would need to be recalculated.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- With EC phase shifts, simulated energy efficiency rises as cooperation grows to $J=4$ base stations and then declines, so partial cooperation beats full cooperation.
- Energy efficiency peaks around $K=90$ RIS elements; beyond that, the outage-rate gain of extra elements does not pay for their power consumption.
- When all base stations cooperate, every interferer becomes a desired signal, so the cancellation branch of EC is redundant and EC matches EO.
- With only one cooperating base station, dedicating all RIS elements to cancellation gives the highest outage sum rate, showing that interference suppression carries the benefit when cooperation is thin.
- At the tested transmit powers, RIS-assisted CoMP-NOMA with EC phase shifts yields a higher outage sum rate than CoMP-OMA and than CoMP-NOMA without a RIS.
Reading between the lines
- Because the energy-efficiency metric charges $P_{\text{ele}}$ per element, the reported optimum at $K=90$ is tied to the assumed hardware power model; cheaper or more efficient elements would push the optimum toward larger arrays.
- The phase rules assume perfect channel knowledge; under phase quantization or estimation error, the 180° cancellation rule in Eq. (14) may degrade faster than the enhancement rule, which could narrow EC's advantage in practice.
- If the cell-edge RISs turn out to affect cell-center users, the EC design would face a trade-off between boosting edge users and disturbing the interference-cancellation order at cell-center users, suggesting a joint optimization across both user classes.
- The CO/EO split-ratio result implies a resource-allocation subproblem: with a fixed RIS budget and partial cooperation, the fraction of elements assigned to cancellation versus enhancement can itself be optimized.
Signed reviews
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The manuscript studies a downlink RIS-assisted CoMP-NOMA network with I cells, one cell-center user per cell, one shared edge user, and J cooperating base stations. It proposes two RIS phase-shift policies: enhancement-only PBF (EO), which aligns RIS reflections to maximize the effective channels from cooperative BSs to the edge user, and enhancement-and-cancellation PBF (EC), which additionally steers non-cooperative BS reflections to suppress inter-cell interference. The authors define an outage-aware energy-efficiency metric and use Monte Carlo simulations to report that EC outperforms EO except when all BSs cooperate, that energy efficiency peaks at J=4 and K=90, and that RIS-assisted CoMP-NOMA outperforms no-RIS and OMA baselines. The abstract and Section III-C frame the phase-shift rules as the solution of an energy-efficiency maximization problem.
Significance. If the claimed results were fully supported, the paper would offer a useful design guideline for configuring RIS phases in multi-cell CoMP-NOMA systems and would quantify energy-efficiency/outage trade-offs. The system model is clearly described and the parameter sweeps are reasonably extensive. However, the two central claims—the optimality of the proposed PBF design and the quantitative energy-efficiency comparisons—rest on an energy-efficiency metric that is not the one stated in the text and on phase-shift rules adopted from prior work without a proof of optimality for this objective. No analytical outage expressions, proofs, or reproducible code are included; the contribution is essentially a numerical study. With the metric corrected and the optimality claims softened, the paper could become a useful simulation-based design study, but in its current form the quantitative conclusions are not supported.
major comments (3)
- [Section III-B, Eq. (11)] The energy-efficiency metric in Eq. (11) is not the ratio of the achievable outage sum rate to the total power expended, as stated in the text. It is instead a sum of per-link rates divided by per-BS power terms. Because the edge-user outage rate is summed over all cooperative BSs, the same edge rate is counted J times. Moreover, the power of a cooperative BS appears both in a cell-center denominator and in an edge-user denominator, so the metric implicitly makes total power consumption increase with J, even though the system model has every BS transmitting at the same power P_t and every RIS active regardless of J. Consequently, the peak at J=4 in Fig. 2 and the J-dependence of the energy-efficiency curves in Figs. 2, 3, and 5 are artifacts of the metric rather than properties of the system. A corrected global energy efficiency with a single total-power denominator would behave differently, and the reported quantitative comparisons and the claimed optimal number of cooperating BSs would need to be re-established.
- [Section III-C, Eqs. (12)-(14)] The optimization problem in Eq. (12) is stated to maximize the energy efficiency η_EE, but the proposed phase-shift rules in Eqs. (13) and (14) only maximize or minimize the individual effective channel gains |H_{j,f}^e|^2 and |H_{m,f}^e|^2. No argument is given that these rules optimize the energy-efficiency objective, which is a non-convex function of SINRs, outage probabilities, and power allocations. The rules are standard single-link phase-alignment and phase-cancellation designs taken from reference [21], and applying them to the sum-EE objective is a heuristic. Therefore the abstract's claim that the 'optimal PBF design' is contingent on system parameters is not supported by the analysis. The authors should either replace the optimality language with 'proposed heuristic phase-shift designs' or provide a rigorous derivation, such as an alternating-optimization or upper-bound argument, linking the phase rules to the energy-efficiency objective.
- [Section III-A, after Eq. (7)] The assumption that 'the impact of RIS on the channels experienced by U_c^i is negligible' is load-bearing but unsupported. The cell-center SINR expressions in Eqs. (6)-(7) exclude all RIS contributions, and those SINRs affect the outage probabilities and hence the energy-efficiency metric in Eq. (11). Since the RISs are placed at the cell edge and reflect signals from all base stations, there is no physical justification in the manuscript for assuming their phase settings do not affect cell-center users, particularly the inter-cell interference terms. A change in cell-center SINRs could alter the SIC decoding order and the outage rates, which could in turn change the relative ordering of the EO and EC designs. The authors should justify this assumption with a quantitative argument, such as a path-loss and angle-of-arrival analysis showing that the reflected power at U_c^i is below the noise floor, or they should include the RIS contributions in the cell-center SINR model and check the sensitivity of their conclusions.
minor comments (6)
- [Section III-A] The section title promises 'Rate and Outage Probability Analysis', but Eqs. (8)-(10) only define rates and outage events; no closed-form outage probability expressions, approximations, or asymptotic results are provided. All numerical results are Monte Carlo estimates with N_mc=10^4. The authors should state explicitly that the contribution is simulation-based rather than analytical.
- [Eq. (3)] In the definition of the effective channel for a non-cooperative BS after Eq. (3), the indices are inconsistent: the expression uses h_{R_i,f}^T Θ_i h_{m,R_i} with i instead of m. It should be h_{R_m,f}^T Θ_m h_{m,R_m}.
- [Eq. (11) and surrounding text] The notation P_R is used in Eq. (11) before it is defined; the definition P_R = K P_ele appears only after the equation. In addition, the notation Y_f in Eq. (4) and Y_i in Eqs. (6)-(7) should be defined consistently and with matching subscripts.
- [Section IV-B, Fig. 2] The text says EC 'consistently outperforms other scenarios ∀J, except when J=I', which is internally contradictory. It should read 'for all J < I' or otherwise quantify the exception.
- [Reference [13]] Reference [13] already proposes a simultaneous signal enhancement and cancellation (SSECB) design for STAR-RIS-enhanced NOMA-CoMP networks, and the EC design in this manuscript is conceptually similar. The authors should explicitly discuss the differences between their EC scheme and the SSECB design, and position the novelty accordingly.
- [Fig. 3] The x-axis label in Fig. 3 appears as 'NumberofRISelementsK' without spaces; please fix the typographical error.
Circularity Check
No circularity: phase-shift rules are externally cited constructions, EE is evaluated by simulation, and no fitted parameter is relabeled as a prediction.
full rationale
The paper's derivation chain is self-contained with respect to circularity concerns. The two proposed passive beamforming designs are taken from external prior work: Eq. (13) for enhancement is attributed to Wu and Zhang [21], and Eq. (14) for cancellation is a direct phase-inversion heuristic. Neither design is fitted to the paper's own simulation outputs, and no parameter is estimated from the reported curves to force the EE comparisons. The energy efficiency metric in Eq. (11) is a stated definition, not a prediction derived from itself; the subsequent optimization problem in Eq. (12) uses this definition as an objective, but the phase-shift solutions are asserted from the literature rather than derived by equating the objective to its own inputs. All results are Monte Carlo simulations over independently generated Rayleigh/Rician channels, so the performance ordering of EC over EO is a computed outcome, not an input. There are no self-citations among the references: no cited uniqueness theorem or prior work by the present authors is invoked to restrict alternatives. The cell-center user assumption (negligible RIS impact) is a modeling simplification, not a circular definition. Therefore, no step reduces by construction or by self-citation to its own inputs.
Assumptions & free parameters
free parameters (4)
- Power allocation factor for edge user (zeta_i) =
0.7
- Power amplifier efficiency (lambda) =
0.4
- Static power consumption per cell (P_Q) =
30 dBm
- Per-RIS-element power consumption (P_ele) =
5 dBm
assumptions (6)
- domain assumption Direct BS-user links follow Rayleigh fading; BS-RIS and RIS-user links follow Rician fading with known Rician factor kappa.
- domain assumption Perfect instantaneous CSI is available at BSs and the central processing unit.
- domain assumption Ideal RIS with unit reflection amplitude and continuous phase shifts, no phase quantization or hardware impairments.
- domain assumption Non-coherent joint transmission CoMP is used and the edge user combines signals without CSI exchange.
- ad hoc to paper RIS phase adjustments have negligible effect on cell-center user channels.
- domain assumption The phase-alignment formula (13) yields the optimal enhancement for each cooperative link, and the phase-inversion formula (14) suppresses interference.
Cite this review
Pith. "Pith review of On Energy-Efficient Passive Beamforming Design of RIS-Assisted CoMP-NOMA Networks." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/XHEI27A2
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read the original abstract
This paper investigates the synergistic potential of reconfigurable intelligent surfaces (RIS) and non-orthogonal multiple access (NOMA) to enhance the energy efficiency and performance of next-generation wireless networks. We delve into the design of energy-efficient passive beamforming (PBF) strategies within RIS-assisted coordinated multi-point (CoMP)-NOMA networks. Two distinct RIS configurations, namely, enhancement-only PBF (EO) and enhancement & cancellation PBF (EC), are proposed and analyzed. Our findings demonstrate that RIS-assisted CoMP-NOMA networks offer significant efficiency gains compared to traditional CoMP-NOMA systems. Furthermore, we formulate a PBF design problem to optimize the RIS phase shifts for maximizing energy efficiency. Our results reveal that the optimal PBF design is contingent upon several factors, including the number of cooperating base stations (BSs), the number of RIS elements deployed, and the RIS configuration. This study underscores the potential of RIS-assisted CoMP-NOMA networks as a promising solution for achieving superior energy efficiency and overall performance in future wireless networks.
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