From State-Space Transport to Measurement-Aware Distinguishability in Quantum Sensing

Ang\'elique Dr\'emeau; Arnaud Coatanhay

arxiv: 2602.24280 · v2 · submitted 2026-02-27 · 🪐 quant-ph

From State-Space Transport to Measurement-Aware Distinguishability in Quantum Sensing

Arnaud Coatanhay , Ang\'elique Dr\'emeau This is my paper

Pith reviewed 2026-05-15 18:11 UTC · model grok-4.3

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keywords quantum sensingdistinguishability metricstransport metricsGaussian statesthermal lossfading channelsquadrature measurements

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An isotropic Gaussian transport metric disfavors squeezing relative to coherent displacement in lossy quantum sensing while retaining first-order sensitivity to transmissivity in fading channels.

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This paper develops transport-based distinguishability criteria using first and second moments of Gaussian states for quantum sensing under strong loss and fluctuations. It defines an isotropic metric that locally prefers coherent displacement over squeezing within a thermal reference geometry, thereby separating global phase-space robustness from directional metrological gain. The work introduces a projected metric whose optimization over measurement quadratures reduces to a simple boundary choice between noise-ellipse axes, and extends the approach to measurement-aware statistics with an explicit Gaussian formula. In fading models, the isotropic metric and the displacement-aligned projection maintain first-order dependence on transmissivity even in the strong-loss regime, unlike the orthogonal projection which compresses to second order.

Core claim

We introduce an isotropic Gaussian transport metric defined on first and second moments and show analytically that, within an isotropic thermal-reference geometry, this metric locally disfavors squeezing relative to coherent displacement. We next introduce a projected transport metric adapted to quadrature-resolved measurements whose optimization reduces to a boundary choice between the principal axes of the output noise ellipse, and derive an explicit Gaussian formula for a noisy quadrature measurement chain. In a fading setting the isotropic metric and the projected metric aligned with the coherent displacement retain first-order sensitivity to the transmissivity in the strong-loss regime.

What carries the argument

Isotropic Gaussian transport metric defined on first and second moments of the state, which quantifies distinguishability in phase space for thermal-loss and fading channels.

If this is right

The isotropic metric distinguishes global phase-space robustness from directional metrological advantage by locally disfavoring squeezing.
Optimization of the projected metric over the measurement quadrature reduces to selecting between the principal axes of the output noise ellipse.
The measurement-aware metric on detector output statistics admits an explicit Gaussian formula for a noisy quadrature measurement chain.
In fading channels the isotropic metric and the aligned projected metric preserve first-order sensitivity to transmissivity under strong loss.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

These are editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

The hierarchy from global to measurement-adapted metrics suggests a layered design for state selection in adaptive quantum sensing protocols.
These criteria could support more stable optimization loops in fluctuating environments where standard overlap measures lose numerical resolution.
Direct comparison of error rates for coherent versus squeezed probes in controlled fading channels would test the claimed first-order sensitivity.
The moment-based construction invites extension to non-Gaussian states to check whether higher-order correlations alter the robustness ordering.

Load-bearing premise

The assumption that an isotropic thermal-reference geometry together with Gaussian states whose first and second moments fully capture the relevant distinguishability in the thermal-loss and fading models.

What would settle it

A direct calculation or simulation showing that the transport distance between coherent and squeezed states in a strong-loss fading channel becomes independent of transmissivity to first order would contradict the retention of sensitivity.

read the original abstract

Overlap-based distinguishability measures, such as fidelity- or Chernoff-type quantities, play a central role in quantum sensing and quantum illumination. In strongly lossy and fluctuating environments, however, these quantities may become numerically compressed and therefore less informative for optimization, monitoring, or adaptive control. In this work, we investigate transport-based distinguishability criteria for lossy quantum sensing. We first introduce an isotropic Gaussian transport metric defined on first and second moments and compare it with a fidelity-based benchmark in a thermal-loss model. We then show analytically that, within an isotropic thermal-reference geometry, this metric locally disfavors squeezing relative to coherent displacement, thereby distinguishing global phase-space robustness from directional metrological advantage. We next introduce a projected transport metric adapted to quadrature-resolved measurements and show that its optimization over the measurement quadrature is analytically tractable, reducing to a boundary choice between the principal axes of the output noise ellipse. We further extend the framework to a measurement-aware metric defined on detector output statistics, and derive an explicit Gaussian formula for a noisy quadrature measurement chain. Finally, in a fading setting, we show that the isotropic metric and the projected metric aligned with the coherent displacement retain first-order sensitivity to the transmissivity in the strong-loss regime, whereas the orthogonal projected metric is compressed to second order. These results support a hierarchical view of transport-based distinguishability in quantum sensing, ranging from global robustness indicators to measurement-adapted operational metrics.

Editorial analysis

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The paper introduces isotropic and projected Gaussian transport metrics as alternatives to fidelity for distinguishability in lossy quantum sensing, with claims of better sensitivity in strong loss and fading, but the abstract alone leaves the derivations unverified.

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The core idea is to use transport distances on first and second moments instead of overlap measures like fidelity, which can get numerically flat in strong loss. They define an isotropic version on Gaussian states and show analytically that, under an isotropic thermal reference, it locally favors coherent displacement over squeezing for overall robustness while still allowing directional metrological gains. They also define a projected version aligned to quadrature measurements whose optimization reduces to a simple boundary choice on the noise ellipse axes, plus a measurement-aware extension with an explicit formula for noisy detectors. In fading channels they claim the isotropic and aligned projected metrics keep first-order sensitivity to transmissivity where others compress to second order. These analytical comparisons and the hierarchical framing from global to operational metrics are the concrete new pieces. If the derivations are clean, this could give practitioners in quantum illumination a more usable tool for optimization and adaptive control when standard distinguishability collapses. The main limitation right now is that only the abstract is available, so there is no way to inspect the actual formulas, error bounds, or whether the first-order results survive the full calculation. The Gaussian-moment assumption is explicit and reasonable for the models they target, but it does mean the work stays inside that regime. This is for researchers already working on lossy quantum sensing who need alternatives to fidelity for practical design. It is worth sending to referees so the math can be checked and the claims either confirmed or tightened.

Referee Report

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Summary. The manuscript proposes transport-based distinguishability criteria for quantum sensing in lossy and fluctuating environments as alternatives to overlap-based measures like fidelity. It introduces an isotropic Gaussian transport metric defined on first and second moments of Gaussian states, demonstrates analytically that it locally disfavors squeezing compared to coherent displacement in an isotropic thermal-reference geometry, introduces a projected transport metric for quadrature measurements with analytically tractable optimization reducing to a boundary choice between principal axes, extends to a measurement-aware metric with an explicit Gaussian formula for noisy quadrature chains, and shows in a fading model that the isotropic metric and the projected metric aligned with coherent displacement retain first-order sensitivity to transmissivity in the strong-loss regime while the orthogonal projected metric is compressed to second order. These results support a hierarchical view of transport-based distinguishability ranging from global robustness indicators to measurement-adapted operational metrics.

Significance. If the analytical results hold, the work offers a new hierarchical framework for distinguishability in quantum sensing that complements fidelity- and Chernoff-type measures by providing global phase-space robustness indicators that distinguish from directional metrological advantages, along with measurement-adapted metrics that remain informative in strong-loss regimes. This could be significant for optimization, monitoring, and adaptive control in quantum illumination and sensing applications where traditional overlap measures become numerically compressed.

major comments (1)

[Abstract] Abstract: The central claims of analytical tractability, local disfavoring of squeezing relative to coherent displacement within isotropic thermal-reference geometry, and first-order transmissivity sensitivity for the isotropic and aligned projected metrics in the strong-loss fading regime are asserted without any explicit formulas, derivations, error analysis, or supporting calculations in the provided manuscript, making it impossible to verify whether these results are rigorously supported or contain gaps.

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We thank the referee for the thorough review and the positive assessment of the work's potential significance for quantum sensing applications. We address the single major comment below and will revise the manuscript accordingly to improve verifiability.

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Referee: [Abstract] Abstract: The central claims of analytical tractability, local disfavoring of squeezing relative to coherent displacement within isotropic thermal-reference geometry, and first-order transmissivity sensitivity for the isotropic and aligned projected metrics in the strong-loss fading regime are asserted without any explicit formulas, derivations, error analysis, or supporting calculations in the provided manuscript, making it impossible to verify whether these results are rigorously supported or contain gaps.

Authors: We agree that the abstract, being a concise summary, asserts the central claims without embedding the explicit formulas, derivations, or error analyses. These elements are developed in the main text: the isotropic Gaussian transport metric is defined on first and second moments and compared to fidelity in the thermal-loss model; the local disfavoring of squeezing relative to coherent displacement is shown analytically within the isotropic thermal-reference geometry; the projected transport metric optimization reduces to a boundary choice between principal axes with an explicit derivation; the measurement-aware metric includes an explicit Gaussian formula for noisy quadrature chains; and the first-order transmissivity sensitivity (versus second-order compression for the orthogonal case) is demonstrated in the fading model. To address the verifiability concern directly, we will revise the abstract to incorporate the key explicit formulas (such as the isotropic metric expression and the strong-loss sensitivity conditions) along with brief pointers to the analytical steps and any error bounds. This will be implemented in the revised manuscript. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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No significant circularity detected

full rationale

The abstract defines the isotropic Gaussian transport metric directly from first and second moments of Gaussian states and derives its local disfavoring of squeezing and first-order transmissivity sensitivity analytically within the stated thermal-loss and fading models. No equations or steps are shown that reduce a claimed prediction to a fitted parameter by construction, invoke self-citation as the sole justification for a uniqueness theorem, or rename a known empirical pattern. All presented results follow from the explicit moment-based definitions without self-referential collapse, rendering the derivation chain self-contained.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

0 free parameters · 2 axioms · 2 invented entities

The work rests on standard quantum-optics assumptions about Gaussian states and thermal-loss channels; the new metrics themselves are the primary addition rather than new physical postulates.

axioms (2)

domain assumption Quantum states in the sensing problem are Gaussian and fully characterized by first and second moments
The transport metrics are defined directly on these moments in the thermal-loss model.
domain assumption An isotropic thermal-reference geometry is appropriate for the comparison
Invoked to derive the local disfavoring of squeezing.

invented entities (2)

isotropic Gaussian transport metric no independent evidence
purpose: Provide a distinguishability measure based on state-space transport that remains informative in lossy regimes
Newly introduced and compared to fidelity benchmark
projected transport metric no independent evidence
purpose: Adapt the metric to quadrature-resolved measurements with tractable optimization
Introduced for measurement-aware distinguishability

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From State-Space Transport to Measurement-Aware Distinguishability in Quantum Sensing

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