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Development and Identification of a Linear Low-Speed Ship Maneuvering Model from Full-Scale Data

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Pith's one-line read A linear time-invariant continuous-time state-space model can represent low-speed ship maneuvering when its parameters are identified from full-scale data.

desk verdict They fit a linear state-space model to full-scale low-speed ship data via CMA-ES and claim good match, but the validation details needed to judge if the linearity holds are missing. read the letter →

arxiv 2607.01739 v1 pith:TINUKT76 submitted 2026-07-02 eess.SY cs.SY

Agnes N. Mwange , Taichi Kambara , Kouki Wakita , Kazuyoshi Hosogaya , Atsuo Maki This is my paper · ORCID
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keywords shipmaneuveringsystemidentificationlinearstate-spacemodellow-speeddynamicsCMA-ESfull-scaledataautonomousberthing
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The reading

The paper shows that ship dynamics at low speeds, such as during berthing, can be captured by a single linear state-space model that does not change with time. Parameters of this model are found by applying the CMA-ES optimizer directly to recorded trajectories from real ship maneuvers. When the resulting model is simulated, its predicted paths closely track the measured data in validation tests. This outcome indicates that the usual need for elaborate nonlinear models may be relaxed for practical identification and control at low speeds.

What carries the argument

Time-invariant continuous-time linear state-space model whose coefficients are fitted to full-scale data by CMA-ES optimization.

What would settle it

Run the identified model on a fresh set of full-scale maneuvering trials from the same vessel and measure whether the predicted position and heading errors remain within the same bounds as the original validation set.

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Core claim

Low-speed ship maneuvering motion can be modeled as a time-invariant continuous-time linear state-space system whose parameters are estimated from full-scale maneuvering data using the CMA-ES algorithm, producing outputs that agree closely with the observed trajectories.

Load-bearing premise

The complex nonlinear dynamics of low-speed ship maneuvering can nevertheless be captured well enough by one fixed linear state-space model.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • Controller design for automated berthing can proceed with standard linear control techniques rather than nonlinear methods.
  • Model parameters can be obtained directly from operational data without separate hydrodynamic coefficient calculations.
  • Simplified linear models may suffice for real-time prediction in low-speed regimes where nonlinear effects were previously assumed dominant.
  • The identification procedure can be repeated on new data sets to update the model as ship conditions change.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • The same linear identification pipeline could be tested on other vessel types to check transferability without re-deriving hull-specific equations.
  • If the linear approximation holds, hybrid controllers might switch between this low-speed model and existing high-speed models at a single speed threshold.
  • Embedding the model in a Kalman filter would allow online state estimation from noisy sensor readings during actual berthing operations.
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Referee Report

2 major / 2 minor

Summary. The manuscript proposes modeling low-speed ship maneuvering dynamics as a time-invariant continuous-time linear state-space system whose parameters are identified via CMA-ES from full-scale trial data; it reports that validation shows strong agreement between model predictions and measurements, suggesting simplified linear models suffice for this regime.

Significance. A well-supported linear model would reduce complexity for autonomous berthing controllers relative to nonlinear hydrodynamic models. The use of CMA-ES on real data is a positive methodological choice, but the absence of any reported quantitative fit metrics, cross-validation protocol, or baseline comparisons leaves the central claim untestable from the provided information.

major comments (2)
  1. [Abstract] Abstract: the claim of 'strong agreement between the model output and empirical data' is unsupported by any numerical metrics (RMSE, R², cross-validation error, or comparison to nonlinear baselines), preventing evaluation of whether the linear structure is dynamically adequate or merely overfit.
  2. [Validation] Validation procedure (implicit in the abstract and results description): it is not stated whether the validation trajectories are disjoint from the CMA-ES identification set. If they are the same trials, the reported agreement can be achieved by parameter adjustment without the linear time-invariant assumption capturing the quadratic drag and lift terms the abstract itself identifies as dominant at low speed.
minor comments (2)
  1. The state-space realization (choice of states, inputs, and output equations) is not detailed; explicit matrices or a diagram would clarify the model order and observability assumptions.
  2. No mention is made of the sampling rate, sensor noise characteristics, or preprocessing of the full-scale data; these details are needed to assess identifiability.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

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We thank the referee for the constructive comments. We address the major points below and indicate where revisions will be made.

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  1. Referee: [Abstract] Abstract: the claim of 'strong agreement between the model output and empirical data' is unsupported by any numerical metrics (RMSE, R², cross-validation error, or comparison to nonlinear baselines), preventing evaluation of whether the linear structure is dynamically adequate or merely overfit.

    Authors: We agree that the abstract's claim would be strengthened by quantitative metrics. The revised manuscript will report RMSE and R² values computed on the validation trajectories, along with a brief statement on cross-validation approach. A direct comparison to nonlinear hydrodynamic baselines is outside the paper's scope, which centers on the viability of the linear structure, but we will note this limitation explicitly. revision: yes

  2. Referee: [Validation] Validation procedure (implicit in the abstract and results description): it is not stated whether the validation trajectories are disjoint from the CMA-ES identification set. If they are the same trials, the reported agreement can be achieved by parameter adjustment without the linear time-invariant assumption capturing the quadratic drag and lift terms the abstract itself identifies as dominant at low speed.

    Authors: We acknowledge that the manuscript does not explicitly state whether validation trajectories are disjoint from the identification set. The revised text will clarify that validation used separate full-scale maneuvers not included in the CMA-ES optimization, thereby testing generalization rather than in-sample fit. This directly addresses the concern about whether the linear model captures the relevant dynamics beyond parameter tuning. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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No circularity: standard external-data parameter estimation

full rationale

The paper's core procedure is system identification of a linear time-invariant state-space model via CMA-ES optimization against full-scale maneuvering measurements, followed by validation against the same empirical data. No derivation chain reduces any claimed prediction or result to a quantity defined by the fitted parameters themselves; the model structure is posited as an approximation and the parameters are obtained from independent external observations. No self-citations appear in the provided text as load-bearing for uniqueness or ansatz choices, and the approach does not rename known results or smuggle assumptions via prior author work. The derivation is therefore self-contained against external benchmarks.

Assumptions & free parameters 1 free parameters · 1 assumptions · 0 invented entities

Only the abstract is available; the ledger therefore records the central modeling assumption stated there and the data-driven fitting step.

free parameters (1)
  • linear state-space parameters
    Estimated by CMA-ES from full-scale maneuvering data; exact count and values not given in abstract.
assumptions (1)
  • domain assumption Low-speed ship dynamics can be represented by a time-invariant linear continuous-time state-space system
    Explicitly proposed in the abstract as the modeling choice to simplify the acknowledged non-linear problem.

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read the original abstract

Despite significant technological progress, the realization of fully autonomous berthing and unberthing remains a significant challenge. One of the primary obstacles is the complex, non-linear nature of low-speed ship dynamics, which are difficult to model and control and often necessitate equally complex maneuvering models and control systems. This study proposes a simplified approach to bridge this gap by modeling the ship dynamics in the form of a time-invariant, continuous-time linear state-space system. The model parameters are estimated through system identification using the Covariance Adaptation Strategy Evolution Strategy (CMA-ES) applied to full-scale maneuvering data. Validation results demonstrate a strong agreement between the model output and empirical data. This outcome demonstrates the significant potential of simplified models to effectively define the maneuvering motion of a ship at low speeds.

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Figure 1. Subject ship used in the study [33] [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p003_1.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 2. Coordinate systems. ship-fixed coordinate system, O0, is set at the ship’s center of gravity. The origin of the inertial coordinate system, O, coincides with O0 when the ship is at the berth. The relationship between the two coordinate systems is governed by:   x˙0 y˙0 ψ˙   =   cosψ −sinψ 0 sinψ cosψ 0 0 0 1     us vm r   (1) where ˙x0,y˙0,ψ˙ denote the time derivative of the ship’s posi￾tion in the x-ax… view at source ↗
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Figure 4. Correlation between state variables and control in [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p006_4.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 3. Figure 3: Distribution of state variables and control inputs [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p006_3.png]
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Figure 5. Figure 5: Distribution of state variables and control inputs in [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p007_5.png]
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Figure 8. Figure 8: Port 2 - Comparison between the full-scale ship [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p009_8.png]
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Figure 10. Figure 10: Port 4 - Comparison between the full-scale ship [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p010_10.png]
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Figure 11. Figure 11: Port 5 - Comparison between the full-scale ship [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p011_11.png]
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Figure 12. Figure 12: Comparison of model-predicted trajectories under varying re-initialization intervals against actual ship trajectories [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p012_12.png]

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