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The paper shows that adding up to 10% of the low-global-warming gas HFO-1234ze to a CYGNO-style detector's He:CF4 mixture introduces hydrogen targets for low-mass dark matter, but only a 1% admixture retains a limited spin-dependent sensiti

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Adding HFO-1234ze to CYGNO's He:CF4 gas quenches scintillation light and raises the energy threshold, so only ~1% admixtures retain a limited low-mass spin-dependent advantage.

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load-bearing objection Useful empirical study: HFO kills the optical performance of CYGNO, and the authors say so plainly; the projected DM limits are on shakier ground because the threshold scaling is asserted, not derived. the 2 major comments →

arxiv 2607.20370 v2 pith:A332IAUK submitted 2026-07-22 physics.ins-det

Dark Matter Sensitivity of the CYGNO Detector with HFO-1234ze Enhanced Gas Mixtures

F.D. Amaro , R. Antonietti , E. Baracchini , L. Benussi , F.M. Brunbauer , C. Capoccia , M. Caponero , L.G.M. de Carvalho
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G. Cavoto I.A. Costa A. Croce M. D'Astolfo G. D'Imperio E. Dane' G. Dho E. Di Marco J.M.F. dos Santos D. Fiorina F. Iacoangeli Z. Islam E. Kemp H.P. Lima Jr G. Maccarrone R.D.P. Mano D.J.G. Marques G. Mazzitelli P. Meloni A. Messina C.M.B. Monteiro R.A. Nobrega E. Olivieri I.F. Pains E. Paoletti F. Petrucci S. Piacentini D. Pierluigi D. Pinci F. Renga A. Russo G. Saviano P.A.O.C. Silva N.J. Spooner R. Tesauro S. Tomassini D. Tozzi
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keywords dark matter direct detectiondirectional detectiongas time projection chamberGEM detectorsoptical readoutscintillation quenchingHFO-1234zelow-global-warming gas mixtures
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The reading

The paper tries to establish whether HFO-1234ze, an environmentally friendly refrigerant, can be added to the He:CF4 gas of the CYGNO optical time projection chamber to add hydrogen nuclei—lighter targets that improve sensitivity to low-mass dark matter. Measurements on the MANGO prototype show that the additive does add hydrogen and preserves charge gain, but it suppresses the secondary scintillation light that the detector uses for tracking and energy measurement. The suppression grows so fast that only a 1% admixture keeps a limited low-mass advantage for spin-dependent dark matter, and it sacrifices sensitivity at higher masses; mixtures above a few percent are unusable for optical readout. If the detector instead used pure charge readout, where the energy threshold stays low, hydrogen-bearing low-GWP additives would be genuinely attractive.

Core claim

The central discovery is a quantitative trade-off: adding HFO-1234ze to He:CF4 (60:40) introduces hydrogen recoil targets and reduces the mixture's global warming potential, but it quenches secondary scintillation light far more than it helps. The effective light yield measured with the qCMOS camera falls steeply with HFO fraction and cannot be recovered by raising GEM voltages within safe limits; spectroscopy shows suppression across both UV and visible bands, and the hoped-for CF3* radiative emission does not appear. Because the energy threshold is taken to scale inversely with the maximum light yield, thresholds rise from 0.5 keVee (0% HFO) to 13 keVee at 5% HFO, excluding hydrogen recoil

What carries the argument

The load-bearing mechanism is the relationship between the maximum effective light yield and the energy threshold. The paper measures effective light yield (mean cluster integral from 55Fe events) and effective electron gain (anode current per keV) for HFO fractions 0–10%, then assumes the detection threshold rises in inverse proportion to the maximum light yield. This scaling converts light quenching into a threshold penalty that dominates the projected dark-matter limits, which are computed by a Bayesian likelihood fit to simulated directional-event samples including gas composition, threshold, angular resolution, and nuclear quenching factors.

Load-bearing premise

The central numerical conclusion rests on an unstated scaling relation: the energy threshold is assumed to rise in inverse proportion to the maximum measured light yield, with no derivation and no propagated light-yield uncertainty; if the true threshold of a full-size detector scales differently, the size of the 1% HFO advantage and the exclusion of >5% mixtures would change.

What would settle it

Measure the actual energy threshold of a full-scale or near-full-scale CYGNO-like detector as a function of HFO concentration—for example by calibrating with low-energy x-ray lines or neutron recoils and comparing the reconstructed-energy spectra—and check whether threshold follows the assumed inverse proportionality to the MANGO light yield. A discrepancy would rescale the projected limits; a threshold at 5% HFO below about 13 keVee could revive intermediate-HFO mixtures.

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If this is right

  • A 1% HFO admixture gives a limited improvement in spin-dependent low-mass sensitivity (down to about 0.5 GeV/c^2) but degrades spin-independent sensitivity across the whole mass range and reduces sensitivity at intermediate and higher masses.
  • HFO fractions above 5% push the energy threshold above the energy of any hydrogen recoil, making those mixtures useless for optical-readout dark-matter searches.
  • Because charge gain is preserved, a detector with pure charge readout—keeping the energy threshold at 0.5 keVee—would exploit the added hydrogen and reach dark-matter masses near 0.3 GeV/c^2 with 10% HFO.
  • Adding HFO lowers the mixture's 100-year global warming potential by up to about 25% at 10% concentration, making eco-friendly gas mixtures viable if the readout is adapted.
  • The expected light-yield enhancement from CF3* radiative de-excitation is not observed, confirming that quenching, not emission, dominates the optical response.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

These are editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • Beyond the paper: the inverse-proportional threshold scaling is an assumption, not a measured relation; if the real threshold of a full-scale detector scales sub-linearly or depends on signal-to-noise rather than raw light yield, the 1% advantage could shrink or grow, and the exclusion of >5% mixtures might need revision.
  • Beyond the paper: a hybrid readout—charge-based energy and timing plus optical tracking only where light is sufficient—could separate the threshold penalty from the tracking capability and recover some of the hydrogen benefit at higher HFO fractions.
  • Beyond the paper: the quenching mechanism likely involves electron attachment or vibrational losses in HFO; testing alternative low-GWP hydrogenated additives with weaker UV absorption could provide hydrogen targets without the optical penalty.
  • Beyond the paper: because these are prototype measurements, the absolute projected limits are illustrative; a full-scale detector with different backgrounds, drift lengths, or optical acceptance could shift the crossover point where HFO helps or hurts.
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Referee Report

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Summary. The paper reports the characterization of He:CF4 (60:40) gas mixtures with added HFO-1234ze (1–10%) for the CYGNO optical TPC. Measurements of effective charge gain and effective light yield are performed with the MANGO prototype, and secondary scintillation spectra are obtained with a dedicated setup. The principal empirical finding is that while the charge gain can be preserved by increasing the GEM voltage, the light yield is strongly quenched by HFO, and the hypothesized CF3* radiative enhancement is not observed. The paper then projects spin-independent and spin-dependent dark-matter limits using a Bayesian framework and concludes that only a 1% HFO admixture retains a limited low-mass spin-dependent advantage, while pure charge readout would be the preferred route to exploit the added hydrogen.

Significance. If the direct measurements are the main contribution, this is a valuable, controlled test of a low-GWP additive for a directional dark-matter detector. It provides quantitative guidance to the CYGNO collaboration and the wider gaseous-detector community, and it supplies a clean null result against a specific enhancement hypothesis. The projected limits, however, rest on a threshold-to-light-yield scaling relation that is asserted without derivation. Once that relation is justified or replaced by measured efficiency curves, the paper's conclusions would be robust. The work is likely to be of interest to both instrumentation and dark-matter communities, and the authors are to be credited for performing the spectral measurements and using an established statistical framework.

major comments (2)
  1. [§6 / Table 1] The energy thresholds in Table 1 are obtained by comparing the maximum effective light yields with the baseline and assuming that the threshold scales inversely with light yield: the text states 'the energy threshold of the detection is increasing with an inverse proportional relation'. No derivation or simulation is given. In an optical TPC, the threshold is set by the convolution of light yield per keV, photodetection efficiency, electronic noise, reconstruction efficiency, and analysis cuts; the reciprocal of the mean cluster integral is not self-evidently the correct scaling. This relation is load-bearing: the projected limits for each HFO concentration and the exclusion of HFO>5% from the analysis are entirely driven by these threshold values. If the actual threshold scales differently (e.g., with a power law, or saturates at low light levels due to noise), the size of the 1% HFO ad
  2. [§3–§4 / Figs. 3–5] The effective gain and effective light yield measurements are presented without point-to-point uncertainties or error bars. Figures 3–5 show no statistical or systematic error bars, and the text does not quote uncertainties on the individual data points. The distinction between mixtures (e.g., 1% vs. 2.5% HFO) is central to the threshold estimates and the final conclusions. Without an uncertainty model, it is difficult to judge whether the observed differences are significant, and the 2% uncertainty quoted in Table 1 appears to be a global estimate with no derivation. The authors should provide uncertainties on the measured quantities, particularly on the maximum light yields used to compute the thresholds, and demonstrate that the relative ordering of the mixtures is robust.
minor comments (5)
  1. [§6] The phrase 'the energy threshold of the detection is increasing with an inverse proportional relation' should be reworded to 'the energy threshold is inversely proportional to the light yield' for clarity.
  2. [§5] The statement 'this is the reason why other HFO-richer gas mixtures were not investigated any further' is ambiguous: gain and light yield measurements for 5–10% HFO are presented in Sections 3–4. The sentence should specify that the spectroscopic measurements were not extended to those concentrations.
  3. [§2.2] The calibration procedure for the spectrometer and optical system is described briefly. A reference to the full calibration study (e.g., Ref. [16]) would be helpful, and the correction near the sensitivity edges should be described quantitatively.
  4. [Table 1] The 2% uncertainty on the energy thresholds is asserted without explanation. Please state how this value is derived from the light-yield analysis or from the threshold estimation procedure.
  5. [Figure 7] The caption says 'for the three tested gas mixtures' but the 2.5% HFO point is excluded from the ratio plot. Please modify the caption to reflect the two mixtures shown.

Circularity Check

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No circularity: measurements are independent; limit projections use an assumed (not fitted) threshold scaling.

full rationale

The paper's central empirical claims are direct measurements: charge gain is obtained from anode current and 55Fe rate (Sect. 3), effective light yield from qCMOS cluster integrals (Sect. 4), and spectral quenching from a calibrated spectrometer (Sect. 5). The CF3* enhancement hypothesis is explicitly tested and rejected. The limit calculation in Sect. 6 is a projection: measured maximum light yields are converted into energy thresholds under an asserted inverse-proportional relation, and these thresholds are inputs to the collaboration's Bayesian limit framework [20]. This is an unproven modeling assumption, not a circular reduction—the thresholds are not fitted to reproduce the final limit curves, nor are the limits defined in terms of the thresholds. Self-citations [17-20] document reconstruction, analysis, and limit-setting methods from prior CYGNO work; they do not smuggle in the conclusion that HFO quenches light, which is established by measurements reported here. The final conclusions follow from those measurements rather than from any equation that assumes the conclusions. No specific circular step can be exhibited under the stated hard rules.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

0 free parameters · 5 axioms · 0 invented entities

The central conclusions rest on standard detector assumptions plus a paper-specific scaling that thresholds grow inversely with measured light yield; the latter is stated without derivation. No free parameters are fit to a target result; the energy thresholds are measured inputs. No invented entities are introduced.

axioms (5)
  • domain assumption A CYGNO-like detector has irreducible background of 10^4 events/year in the whole energy range.
    Used in Sect. 6 for the Bayesian limit projection; changing the background level would shift the quoted limits.
  • domain assumption Angular resolution is fixed at 30x30 deg^2 for each energy, and its degradation due to lower light yield is considered negligible.
    Stated in Sect. 6 with ref [21] as support; if angular resolution degrades significantly with HFO, the directional limit projections would weaken.
  • ad hoc to paper Energy threshold scales inversely with the maximum effective light yield measured in MANGO.
    Asserted in Sect. 6 without derivation or uncertainty propagation; it is the main bridge from the light-yield measurement to Table 1 and the exclusion of >5% HFO mixtures.
  • domain assumption Baseline He:CF4 energy threshold is 0.5 keVee as described in ref [20].
    Taken as input for the no-HFO and hypothetical charge-readout limit curves in Sect. 6.
  • domain assumption Hydrogen recoil energies from dark matter are kinematically below a few keV, so mixtures with thresholds >=13 keVee cannot detect H recoils.
    Used in Sect. 6 to exclude 5%, 7.5%, and 10% HFO datasets from the limit analysis; this is standard two-body scattering kinematics but is not explicitly derived.

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abstract

The CYGNO collaboration introduces an innovative approach to direct dark matter detection, proposing a high-resolution optical Time Projection Chamber. It operates at atmospheric pressure with a He:CF$_{4}$ (60:40) gas mixture and uses a triple Gas Electron Multiplier stage for signal amplification. A key feature is its optical readout system, which captures the scintillation light produced during the electron avalanche. This setup allows 3D event reconstruction by combining the time profile of the light detected by photomultiplier tubes with high-granularity, pixelated X-Y tracking recorded by a scientific camera. The CYGNO experiment's projected sensitivity to both spin-independent and spin-dependent interactions is competitive in the framework of directional dark matter detectors. However, incorporating a hydrogen-based gas would introduce an even lighter target, further improving the detection potential at low dark matter masses. In this work, we present the performance characterization of one of the CYGNO experiment prototypes, MANGO, operated with the standard gas mixture enriched with varying concentrations of HFO-1234ze, a gas with a promising low global warming potential. The study includes measurements of the detector charge gain and scintillation yield for each configuration. In addition, to evaluate the impact of HFO-1234ze on scintillation light quenching, the secondary scintillation spectrum was collected for each gas mixture tested.

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