REVIEW 4 major objections 5 minor 13 references
An Investigation of the Relationship Between Crime Rate and Police Compensation
T0 review · 4 major / 5 minor · reviewed 2026-08-12 · deepseek-v4-flash
Pith's one-line read Higher police pay is associated with lower crime rates in Baltimore, the paper claims.
desk verdict A Baltimore police-pay vs. crime correlation resting on a single unquantified regression figure; the paper's own conceded limitations undercut the headline claim. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The central device is a simple linear regression fitted to two aggregated time series: a month-to-month Baltimore crime rate built from over 250,000 incident records, and an annual police salary and gross-pay series from city payroll data. The regression's negative coefficient is the entire empirical result; the paper's stated next step is to embed that coefficient in a multiple regression based on an established social-loss function, $L = L(D, C, bf, O)$, where $D$ is crime damage, $C$ is the cost of combating offenses including police pay, $bf$ is punishment cost, and $O$ is the crime rate.
What would settle it
Recompute the regression on detrended series, for example first differences or residuals after removing a year trend; if the negative coefficient vanishes or changes sign, the reported correlation is an artifact of shared trends. A second check is to refit the model with the 2015-2016 spike window excluded; if the slope disappears, that window was the main driver.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
On its own terms, the paper's finding is that Baltimore police compensation and citywide crime rate are negatively correlated over the study period, with the linear regression showing that as average salary and gross pay rise, the crime rate falls. The paper treats this correlation as a signal that higher compensation is associated with greater officer competence and better enforcement, a 'get what you pay for' effect, and it argues the finding is interesting precisely because public-sector pay is not set by a market mechanism. It stops short of claiming causation, instead describing the result as an initial finding that needs refinement before it can guide policy.
Load-bearing premise
The result assumes the negative slope between the salary curve and the crime curve is a meaningful association rather than a coincidence of two long-run trends moving in opposite directions.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- If the correlation is correct, raising police compensation is associated with lower crime, giving state leadership a quantitative argument for increasing police budgets.
- The association points to a policy trade-off between a smaller, more senior and higher-paid force and a larger force with more junior officers; the cited crime-prevention literature suggests both specialized units and extra patrols matter.
- The paper's own conclusion requires the salary series to be adjusted for inflation and for seniority mix before the result can be used in budgeting.
- The correlation can be extended into a social-loss minimization model that weighs crime damage, enforcement cost, and punishment cost together, rather than pay alone.
Reading between the lines
- The negative slope probably tracks two long-run trends, falling national crime rates and rising wages, so a detrended regression (first differences or a year term) is the natural check on whether the association survives.
- The 2015 crime spike and the 2020 compensation dip are treated as disruptions to smooth over; excluding or explicitly modeling those windows could flip the sign of the fit.
- If the association survives detrending, the mechanism is likely the seniority mix of the force rather than pay level alone, which the paper itself flags as an open question.
- Applying the same two-series regression to another city, such as the San Francisco comparison data already used as a sanity check, would show whether the pattern generalizes beyond Baltimore.
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper investigates whether police salaries/compensation and crime rates are correlated in Baltimore from 2011 to 2021 using public Open Baltimore data. The authors describe a linear regression comparison between the two time series and claim in the Abstract and Conclusion that their 'initial results show a negative correlation between salary/compensation levels and crime rates.' They then discuss policy implications, echoing Becker's economic model of crime and Sherman et al.'s review of crime prevention, and propose future work such as inflation adjustment and multiple regression.
Significance. If supported, a robust negative association between police compensation and crime rates would be policy-relevant for municipal budgeting and public safety debates. The paper has the merit of using publicly available data and addressing a timely question. However, as submitted, the central claim is not statistically substantiated: no regression coefficients, confidence intervals, p-values, or goodness-of-fit measures are reported, and the analysis does not address the obvious confounds of time trends, seasonality, inflation, or the 2015 Freddie Gray crime spike. The paper also explicitly concedes in the Conclusion that salaries were not inflation-adjusted and that the seniority mix was not examined. These gaps are load-bearing because the headline conclusion rests entirely on Figure 8, a raw scatter-style regression of two co-trending series. The scientific contribution is therefore not currently established.
major comments (4)
- [Results, Figure 8; Abstract; Conclusion] The central claim of a negative correlation relies on a 'negative correlated linear regression' shown in Figure 8, yet the paper reports no regression equation, slope, intercept, R-squared, confidence interval, p-value, or number of observations. Without these statistics, a regression of two trending series (rising nominal salaries and generally declining crime) can produce a negative slope even when no meaningful association exists. The paper neither detrends the series nor includes a time index, and it does not control for seasonality or the 2015 Freddie Gray spike. Since this figure is the only quantitative evidence for the abstract's claim, the conclusion is unsupported.
- [Step 2 and Conclusion] The manuscript admits the salary analysis is incomplete: the Conclusion states that 'the salary analysis should be adjusted for inflation using the CPI index' and that assessing 'the seniority mix that undergirds the salary data is important.' Both are acknowledged to be missing, meaning the reported negative correlation could be an artifact of nominal salary growth over time. Additionally, the sentence in Step 2 is garbled ('some additional salary / compensation analysis required to adjust for things such as the mix of seniority levels techniques to adjust for inflation') and does not clarify whether any adjustment was actually performed.
- [Step 1 and References] The 'Freddy Grey effect' adjustment is cited to Kolodrubetz, but the in-text citation number (reference 3) points to an unrelated IEEE paper on bike-sharing systems; the correct reference appears to be reference 4, the Kolodrubetz and Ashqar report. More importantly, no method for this adjustment is described anywhere, so a reader cannot verify how the crime time series was constructed, how the 2015 spike was handled, or whether different adjustment choices would change the result. This matters because the crime series is a direct input to the regression underlying the paper's main claim.
- [Data Facts] The Data Facts section states that the crime analysis covers '5 years (2016 to 2020),' while the study period is 2011-2021. This inconsistency makes it unclear which time window is used for the regression in Figure 8. The paper also never defines the crime rate metric (e.g., per capita rate vs. raw monthly counts), and Figure 8 lacks axis labels and units, making the magnitude of the alleged correlation impossible to assess.
minor comments (5)
- [Throughout] The name 'Freddy Grey' is misspelled; it should be 'Freddie Gray.'
- [Methods (Pandas, Matplotlib, Seaborn sections)] Large portions of the Methods text are generic tutorial descriptions of Pandas, Matplotlib, and Seaborn that are not specific to this research and should be removed or drastically condensed.
- [References] The reference list is misnumbered relative to the in-text citations. For example, the text cites 'Kolodrubetz3' and 'Press4,' but in the reference list reference 3 is an Ashqar et al. bike-sharing paper and reference 6 is the Press study; the correct mapping needs to be fixed.
- [Figure 8] The figure lacks axis labels, units, and any indication of what points or series are plotted, so the reader cannot interpret the regression or its range.
- [Conclusion] The paper repeatedly states 'our initial results show a negative correlation' as if it were an established finding. The language should be clearly qualified as exploratory and hypothesis-generating, not inferential, given the absence of statistical reporting.
Circularity Check
No significant circularity: the negative correlation is an empirical regression result; the Freddie Gray adjustment cites a co-authored report, but the central claim does not reduce to that citation.
full rationale
The paper's derivation chain is: (1) build a monthly crime-rate series from BPD crime data; (2) build a salary/gross-pay series from Open Baltimore employee data; (3) run a linear regression comparing the two; (4) read the negative slope in Figure 8 as evidence of a negative correlation; (5) interpret via Becker and Sherman. At no point is crime rate defined in terms of salary, nor is a fitted parameter relabeled as an independent prediction. The negative slope is the regression output itself; Figure 8 is described as 'a negative correlated linear regression' and the Abstract/Conclusion restate that fitted result. That is descriptive statistics, not a derivation from an input that already contains the conclusion. The only self-citation in the load-bearing chain is the Freddie Gray adjustment: 'Here we leveraged work done by Kolodrubetz3 to account for the ''Freddy Grey effect.''' The intended reference (reference 4, Kolodrubetz and Ashqar) is co-authored by Huthaifa Ashqar, an author of this paper; the in-text reference number is wrong, pointing to an unrelated bike-sharing paper. The adjustment method is not described, so the reader cannot audit its effect. However, the cited report is an external crime-incident analysis, and the paper does not claim the adjustment is what manufactures the negative slope; there is no exhibited equation showing the correlation reduces to the report's output. Thus this is a minor, underdescribed self-citation and a reference error, not a circular step. The Conclusion admits missing controls: 'assessing the seniority mix that undergirds the salary data is important' and 'the salary analysis should be adjusted for inflation using the CPI index.' These are validity threats (spurious correlation due to common trends), not circularity patterns. Similarly, the absence of coefficients, intervals, and detrending in Figure 8 is a correctness risk. Per the hard rules, weak or nonstandard statistics do not constitute circularity. Overall score 2 due to the minor non-load-bearing self-citation and reference error; the central claim is not forced by construction or by a self-citation chain.
Assumptions & free parameters
free parameters (3)
- Linear regression slope and intercept for crime vs compensation =
not reported
- Crime rate smoothing window =
12 months
- Freddie Gray effect adjustment =
not specified
assumptions (4)
- domain assumption The crime rate time series derived from incident data is a valid measure of crime intensity.
- domain assumption Police salary and gross pay data are comparable across years as a measure of compensation.
- domain assumption A negative slope in a simple regression of the two raw time series indicates a meaningful relationship.
- standard math Ordinary least squares assumptions are satisfied.
Cite this review
Pith. "Pith review of An Investigation of the Relationship Between Crime Rate and Police Compensation." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/KRTW46IE
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read the original abstract
The goal of this paper is to assess whether there is any correlation between police salaries and crime rates. Using public data sources that contain Baltimore Crime Rates and Baltimore Police Department (BPD) salary information from 2011 to 2021, our research uses a variety of techniques to capture and measure any correlation between the two. Based on that correlation, the paper then uses established social theories to make recommendations on how this data can potentially be used by State Leadership. Our initial results show a negative correlation between salary/compensation levels and crime rates.
Figures
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Reference graph
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