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arxiv: 2508.16464 · v2 · submitted 2025-08-22 · 💻 cs.CL

What makes an entity salient in discourse?

Amir Zeldes , Jessica Lin This is my paper

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classification 💻 cs.CL
keywords discourse salienceentity prominencesummary worthinessmultifactorial modelsgenre variationdiscourse relationsreferential structurespoken and written genres
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Utterance-level predictors correlate with discourse salience but are modulated by entity frequency and dispersion, with discourse-structural and semantic features proving more robust than morphosyntactic ones across genres.

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The paper seeks to determine which features make some entities more salient than others over the course of an entire discourse rather than just in individual utterances. It uses the tendency of an entity to appear in multiple human summaries as a way to measure this global salience. By looking at many different types of spoken and written English, the analysis reveals that local cues like grammatical role interact with broader patterns such as how often and widely an entity is mentioned. This matters because it helps explain how people keep track of important participants and topics in conversations and stories without explicit reminders. Multifactorial approaches show that discourse relations and semantic properties hold up better as predictors than purely grammatical ones.

Core claim

Using a graded measure of discourse salience based on how often entities are included in multiple summaries, the authors find that utterance-level predictors such as grammatical function, definiteness, linear order, discourse relations and referential structure significantly correlate with discourse-level salience. These correlations are modulated by entity-level factors including frequency and dispersion across the document. Multifactorial models demonstrate that no single factor determines salience and that discourse-structural and semantic features are more robust than morphosyntactic ones, with substantial differences according to genre and communicative intent.

What carries the argument

Multifactorial models that combine utterance-level predictors with entity-level frequency and dispersion to predict summary inclusion rates.

If this is right

  • Utterance-level predictors like grammatical function correlate with but do not solely determine discourse salience.
  • Entity frequency and dispersion across the document adjust the effects of local prominence features.
  • Discourse-structural and semantic features provide more consistent predictions than morphosyntactic features.
  • Salience patterns vary substantially by genre and the intent of the communication.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

These are editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • Automatic systems for summarization or coreference resolution might improve by incorporating both local syntactic cues and global frequency statistics.
  • Similar multifactorial analyses could be applied to test whether these patterns generalize beyond English to other languages.
  • The variation by genre suggests that domain-specific models may be necessary for accurate salience prediction in different text types.

Load-bearing premise

Summary inclusion rates across multiple independent summaries serve as a reliable graded proxy for an entity's discourse-level salience.

What would settle it

If a new set of summaries produced under different instructions yields substantially different salience rankings for the same entities, or if salience rankings fail to predict which entities readers mention in free recall after reading the text, the measure would be called into question.

read the original abstract

Entities in discourse vary in salience: main participants, objects and locations stay prominent, while others are quickly forgotten, raising questions about how humans signal and infer discourse-level salience. Using a graded operationalization of discourse-level salience based on summary-worthiness in multiple summaries, this paper investigates whether predictors of utterance-level prominence extend to the discourse level, and how they interact across 24 spoken and written genres of English. We examine features including grammatical function, definiteness, entity type, linear order, discourse relations and hierarchy, and referential structure, as well as the impact of genre. Our results show that utterance-level predictors significantly correlate with discourse-level salience, but interact with and are modulated by entity-level factors such as frequency and dispersion across the document. Multifactorial models reveal that no single factor determines salience; rather, discourse-structural and semantic features prove more robust than morphosyntactic ones, with substantial variation by genre and communicative intent.

Editorial analysis

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Referee Report

2 major / 2 minor

Summary. The manuscript investigates discourse-level entity salience using a graded proxy based on inclusion frequency across multiple summaries of texts from 24 English genres. It reports that utterance-level features (grammatical function, discourse relations, linear order, referential structure) significantly correlate with this salience measure, but are modulated by entity-level factors such as frequency and dispersion; multifactorial models indicate discourse-structural and semantic features are more robust predictors than morphosyntactic ones, with substantial genre and communicative-intent variation.

Significance. If the summary-worthiness operationalization is shown to track mental-model prominence rather than summarizer-specific biases, the work would provide a valuable large-scale, cross-genre empirical demonstration that salience is multifactorial and that no single cue dominates. The scale (24 genres) and emphasis on interactions between local and global factors could inform both theoretical models of discourse processing and practical applications in summarization or coreference resolution.

major comments (2)
  1. [Abstract] Abstract (first paragraph): The central claim that utterance-level predictors correlate with discourse-level salience rests on treating summary inclusion frequency as a valid graded proxy. No cross-validation against independent operationalizations (human prominence ratings, referential continuity counts, or eye-tracking measures) is described, leaving open the possibility that reported correlations reflect recency or narrative-closure biases instead of the targeted prominence.
  2. [Abstract] Abstract (results paragraph): Correlations and robustness rankings are reported without error bars, exact model specifications (e.g., mixed-effects vs. logistic regression), or data-exclusion criteria. These omissions are load-bearing because the multifactorial claim that 'no single factor determines salience' and the genre-interaction results cannot be evaluated for statistical reliability or robustness.
minor comments (2)
  1. [Abstract] The abstract mentions '24 spoken and written genres' but does not list them or indicate how genre boundaries were defined; a table or appendix listing the genres and document counts per genre would improve reproducibility.
  2. [Methods (assumed)] Consider adding a brief methods subsection clarifying how entity mentions were aligned across summaries and how frequency was normalized (raw count vs. proportion of summaries).

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

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We thank the referee for their constructive comments. We address each major point below and note planned changes to strengthen the manuscript.

read point-by-point responses

  1. Referee: [Abstract] Abstract (first paragraph): The central claim that utterance-level predictors correlate with discourse-level salience rests on treating summary inclusion frequency as a valid graded proxy. No cross-validation against independent operationalizations (human prominence ratings, referential continuity counts, or eye-tracking measures) is described, leaving open the possibility that reported correlations reflect recency or narrative-closure biases instead of the targeted prominence.

    Authors: We agree that summary inclusion frequency is an indirect proxy for discourse-level salience rather than a direct measure of mental-model prominence. The manuscript motivates this operationalization through the availability of multiple independent summaries per text across 24 genres, yielding a graded, corpus-derived signal of consistent inclusion. We acknowledge the lack of cross-validation against human ratings, referential continuity, or eye-tracking data and the attendant risk of biases such as recency or closure effects. We will revise the abstract and add an explicit limitations paragraph discussing these assumptions and calling for future validation work. revision: partial

  2. Referee: [Abstract] Abstract (results paragraph): Correlations and robustness rankings are reported without error bars, exact model specifications (e.g., mixed-effects vs. logistic regression), or data-exclusion criteria. These omissions are load-bearing because the multifactorial claim that 'no single factor determines salience' and the genre-interaction results cannot be evaluated for statistical reliability or robustness.

    Authors: The referee correctly notes that the abstract omits these statistical details. The full paper employs mixed-effects logistic regression with random intercepts for genre and entity, reports 95% confidence intervals on coefficient estimates, and applies exclusion criteria requiring entities to appear in at least three summaries. We will expand the abstract's results paragraph to include concise references to the model class, confidence intervals, and exclusion thresholds so that the multifactorial and genre-interaction claims can be more readily assessed. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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Empirical corpus study with data-driven correlations; no circular derivation

full rationale

The paper is a corpus-based empirical analysis that operationalizes discourse-level salience via summary-worthiness across multiple summaries and then tests correlations with utterance-level features (grammatical function, discourse relations, etc.) using multifactorial models. No equations, first-principles derivations, or predictions are presented that reduce to fitted inputs by construction. The central results concern statistical interactions and genre variation, which are reported as observed patterns rather than definitional or self-referential outcomes. The operationalization is a methodological proxy choice, not a self-definition that forces the reported findings.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

0 free parameters · 1 axioms · 0 invented entities

The central claim depends on the validity of summary-worthiness as a salience proxy and on standard assumptions of multifactorial regression; no new entities or free parameters are introduced in the abstract.

axioms (1)
  • domain assumption Summary-worthiness in multiple summaries operationalizes discourse-level salience
    Explicitly stated as the graded measure used to investigate predictors.

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