REVIEW 5 major objections 6 minor 14 references
Investigating the Impact of Various Loss Functions and Learnable Wiener Filter for Laparoscopic Image Desmoking
T0 review · 5 major / 6 minor · reviewed 2026-08-04 · deepseek-v4-flash
Pith's one-line read This ablation study of the ULW laparoscopic desmoking framework finds that each component—the learnable Wiener filter, SSIM loss, and perceptual loss—contributes, with SSIM loss being the most critical for preserving anatomical structure.
desk verdict Ablation of the authors' own ULW desmoking pipeline, but Table 1 undercuts the central claim that every component is necessary. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The central mechanism is the compound loss plus a differentiable learnable Wiener filter layer. The Wiener filter estimates the clean image as x̂ = s ⊙ p/(p+σ²+ε), where s is a Gaussian-initialized convolution output, p = s² is local signal power, and σ² is a learnable noise variance; this acts as a spatial soft gate that attenuates low-SNR smoke regions. The loss combines MSE, SSIM loss (1 − SSIM), and VGG-based perceptual loss, each targeting pixel accuracy, structural similarity, and high-level perceptual fidelity respectively. The ablation removes each to isolate its contribution.
What would settle it
Rerun the four variants on the same paired laparoscopic dataset with the exact same loss weights, training budget, and seed; if removing SSIM loss (leaving MSE and perceptual loss with fixed weights) does not drop SSIM to roughly 0.9675 and PSNR by about 4 dB relative to the full model, the central claim that SSIM loss is critical would be overturned.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
The paper claims, based on four ablation variants evaluated on a paired laparoscopic dataset, that the ULW framework's components are complementary and individually justified. Removing the SSIM loss causes the largest performance drop (SSIM falls from 0.9907 to 0.9675, PSNR by more than 4 dB, CIEDE-2000 nearly doubles), identifying it as the structural backbone. Removing the learnable Wiener filter leaves SSIM and PSNR slightly higher but worsens MSE and visual quality in smoke-heavy, low-contrast regions, supporting its role as a physics-inspired denoising prior. Removing perceptual loss improves some numbers but produces over-smoothed textures, so perceptual loss is credited with visual re
Load-bearing premise
The paper's ablation results assume the compound loss is a fixed, explicitly weighted sum of MSE, SSIM, and perceptual terms, but the manuscript never states the total loss formula or the weights, so removing one term may not cleanly isolate that component's contribution.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- Future laparoscopic desmoking models should include an SSIM-style loss as a primary component, since its removal produces the steepest decline in both structural and color fidelity.
- A learnable Wiener filter can serve as a trainable physics prior that improves pixel-wise accuracy and low-contrast detail at a small cost in global metrics, making it a useful plug-in for restoration networks.
- Perceptual loss is valuable when clinical interpretability matters more than a marginal gain in PSNR or SSIM, because it prevents over-smoothed outputs.
- The full ULW combination demonstrates that accuracy and perceptual quality are not mutually exclusive when loss terms are combined with a denoising prior.
- The ablation methodology itself provides a template for evaluating components in image restoration frameworks beyond desmoking.
Reading between the lines
- Because the manuscript never states the total loss formula or the weights assigned to MSE, SSIM, and perceptual terms, the ablation's clean isolation of each component is not fully verifiable; a re-tuned single-loss variant might behave differently from simply zeroing one term.
- The learnable Wiener filter's soft-gating behavior is conceptually similar to attention mechanisms; an untested extension would be to replace it with a standard attention module and compare, which could reveal whether the physics-inspired form offers a unique advantage.
- For video desmoking, the Wiener filter's noise suppression may reduce temporal flicker, but this paper does not test video; a temporal-consistency extension would be a natural next step and could amplify the filter's benefits.
- The perceptual loss's reliance on an ImageNet-pretrained VGG network may transfer imperfectly to medical image domains; a testable extension is to use a pretrained medical imaging encoder and see whether texture fidelity improves further.
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. This manuscript presents an ablation study of the ULW framework for laparoscopic image desmoking. The framework, proposed by the same authors in [3], couples a U-Net backbone with a compound loss of MSE, SSIM, and perceptual terms, plus a differentiable learnable Wiener filter. The paper removes each component in turn and evaluates the variants on a 'publicly available paired laparoscopic images dataset' using SSIM, PSNR, MSE, and CIEDE-2000, with qualitative visual comparisons. The conclusion claims that each component is necessary, and that the full framework achieves a strong balance between quantitative accuracy and perceptual quality.
Significance. A careful, reproducible ablation of a published desmoking method would be a useful contribution, and the paper has a sensible experimental skeleton: paired public data, standard metrics, and explicit removal of the Wiener filter and each loss term. The SSIM-loss ablation is informative, since removal causes a clear drop on all metrics. However, the manuscript lacks the experimental detail needed to make the numerical comparisons meaningful, and the main conclusion about perceptual loss is contradicted by the paper's own Table 1. With additional experiments and an honest reframing, the study could be salvageable; in its current form, the evidence is not strong enough to support the central claims.
major comments (5)
- [§4, Table 1; §4.3] The claim that perceptual loss is necessary is directly contradicted by Table 1. Removing perceptual loss improves SSIM (0.9907 → 0.9933), PSNR (33.7061 → 35.8490), MSE (0.0006 → 0.0005), and CIEDE-2000 (1.8159 → 1.3511). Section 4.3 responds by asserting that outputs are 'over-smoothed' and lack texture, but no quantified perceptual measure, blinded visual assessment, or statistical test is presented. Without such evidence, the 'necessity' of perceptual loss is unsupported; at best it is a hypothesis to be tested.
- [§3 and §4] The total objective is never written. Equations (3) and (4) define L_SSIM and L_perceptual, but the paper never gives L = λ_MSE L_MSE + λ_SSIM L_SSIM + λ_perc L_perc, nor the weights λ. Consequently, 'w/o SSIM loss' is ambiguous: did the authors simply set that term to zero, or re-tune the remaining weights? Without the full loss formulation and fixed weights, the ablation does not isolate the component's contribution. This is a load-bearing reproducibility gap.
- [§4.1, Table 1] The Wiener-filter ablation is described as improving pixel-level reconstruction and visual clarity 'despite slightly lower SSIM and PSNR.' Table 1 shows differences that are tiny and inconsistent: MSE 0.0007 → 0.0006, PSNR 33.9055 → 33.7061, CIEDE-2000 1.8136 → 1.8159. There are no error bars or paired significance tests, so these differences cannot be distinguished from noise. The qualitative claim about low-contrast regions is not quantified.
- [§4 (experimental setup)] The manuscript omits essential experimental details: the name and split of the dataset, preprocessing, U-Net configuration, optimizer, learning rate, batch size, epochs, and number of independent runs. All metrics are point estimates. Since the differences in Table 1 are often small (e.g., SSIM 0.9907 vs 0.9909), the absence of reproducibility information is a serious limitation and prevents the reader from verifying the ablation.
- [§6] The conclusion that 'the full ULW framework achieves a strong balance... confirming the necessity and effectiveness of each component' overstates the evidence. Only SSIM loss removal causes a decisive drop on all metrics (0.9675 SSIM, 29.1446 PSNR, 0.0016 MSE, 3.1500 CIEDE-2000). For the Wiener filter and perceptual loss, the numerical results are mixed or contrary. The conclusion needs to be limited to what the data can support, or supplemented with additional perceptual or clinical evaluation.
minor comments (6)
- [§4, Table 1] The header 'CIEDI-2000' should be 'CIEDE-2000'.
- [§3.1] The phrase 'mean squared error MSE)' is missing an opening parenthesis. Also, the definitions of s and p in Eq. (1) could be clarified; p = s^2 makes the filtering operation unusual (the output is a cubic function of s).
- [§3.3] Specify which VGG variant and which layer l is used in Eq. (4). Currently the perceptual loss is not reproducible without this information.
- [§4] The sentence 'PSNR is the peak signal-to-noise ration' contains a typo; it should read 'ratio'.
- [Fig. 2] Provide zoomed-in crops or overlays to support qualitative claims about texture, edge sharpness, and low-contrast regions. The current visual comparison is too small to be assessed by the reader.
- [§4 (general)] Please state whether the code and trained models will be released. This is especially important because the paper evaluates the authors' own prior framework and gives no training details.
Circularity Check
No equation-level circularity; the only self-citation is to the authors' own ULW paper and is not load-bearing.
full rationale
This paper is an empirical ablation study rather than a derivation, so there is no chain in which a prediction is definitionally equal to its inputs. The ULW framework is attributed to the authors' prior work [3], but the present manuscript re-specifies the component equations (Wiener filter Eq. 1, SSIM loss Eq. 3, perceptual loss Eq. 4) and reports its own measurements on a public dataset, making the self-citation a matter of provenance rather than load-bearing evidence. The closest potential circularity—training with SSIM loss and then observing that the SSIM metric drops when that loss is removed—is an expected empirical sanity check, not a reduction of the conclusion to the input by construction. The perceptual-loss conclusion is quantitatively weak: Table 1 shows that removing perceptual loss improves every reported metric, and the paper's rebuttal relies on unquantified visual inspection. That is an evidentiary and correctness problem, not a circularity under the enumerated patterns. Similarly, the missing composite-loss formula and the internal PSNR/MSE inconsistency in the Wiener-filter row are reporting weaknesses, not circular reductions. No step was found in which a claimed result is forced by definition, by fitted inputs, or by a self-citation chain.
Assumptions & free parameters
free parameters (2)
- Relative weights of MSE, SSIM, and perceptual losses in the compound loss
- Wiener filter learnable noise variance sigma^2
assumptions (3)
- domain assumption Surgical smoke can be represented as additive signal-independent noise suitable for a Wiener filter.
- domain assumption VGG features trained on ImageNet are a valid perceptual fidelity signal for laparoscopic tissue images.
- domain assumption A paired dataset of smoke and smoke-free laparoscopic images is available with correct alignment.
Cite this review
Pith. "Pith review of Investigating the Impact of Various Loss Functions and Learnable Wiener Filter for Laparoscopic Image Desmoking." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/O3PK5YPI
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read the original abstract
To rigorously assess the effectiveness and necessity of individual components within the recently proposed ULW framework for laparoscopic image desmoking, this paper presents a comprehensive ablation study. The ULW approach combines a U-Net based backbone with a compound loss function that comprises mean squared error (MSE), structural similarity index (SSIM) loss, and perceptual loss. The framework also incorporates a differentiable, learnable Wiener filter module. In this study, each component is systematically ablated to evaluate its specific contribution to the overall performance of the whole framework. The analysis includes: (1) removal of the learnable Wiener filter, (2) selective use of individual loss terms from the composite loss function. All variants are benchmarked on a publicly available paired laparoscopic images dataset using quantitative metrics (SSIM, PSNR, MSE and CIEDE-2000) alongside qualitative visual comparisons.
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