Demonstrators for Industrial Cyber-Physical System Research: A Requirements Hierarchy Driven by Software-Intensive Design
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The pith
A five-level hierarchy of demonstration requirements reduces mismatches between targets and results in industrial cyber-physical systems projects.
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
Core claim
The authors define five hierarchical levels of demonstration within a requirements elaboration framework. These levels link demonstration coverage to work package expectations and the project's industrial use-cases, enabling evaluation of targeted demonstration feasibility and adjustments to requirements. The framework addresses uncertainties that arise when demonstration details are left vague in project organization, particularly for software-intensive systems and industrial cyber-physical systems.
What carries the argument
The five-level demonstrator hierarchy inside the requirements elaboration framework, which connects demonstration expectations to work packages and industrial use-cases.
Load-bearing premise
That applying the five-level hierarchy to project demonstrators will reduce confusion and mismatches between targeted and achievable results.
What would settle it
Track multiple projects that apply the framework from the proposal stage onward and measure whether mismatches between planned and delivered demonstrations decrease compared to projects that do not use it.
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One of the challenges apparent in the organisation of research projects is the uncertainties around the subject of demonstrators. A precise and detailed elicitation of the coverage for project demonstrators is often an afterthought and not sufficiently detailed during proposal writing. This practice leads to continuous confusion and a mismatch between targeted and achievable demonstration of results, hindering progress. The reliance on the TRL scale as a loose descriptor does not help either. We propose a demonstrator requirements elaboration framework aiming to evaluate the feasibility of targeted demonstrations, making realistic adjustments, and assist in describing requirements. In doing so, we define 5 hierarchical levels of demonstration, clearly connected to expectations, e.g., work package interaction, and also connected to the project's industrial use-cases. The considered application scope in this paper is the domain of software-intensive systems and industrial cyber-physical systems. A complete validation is not accessible, as it would require application of our framework at the start of a project and observing the results at the end, taking 4-5 years. Nonetheless, we have applied it to two research projects from our portfolio, one at the early and another at the final stages, revealing its effectiveness.
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper proposes a demonstrator requirements elaboration framework for software-intensive industrial cyber-physical systems research. It defines a 5-level hierarchy of demonstrations explicitly linked to work-package expectations and industrial use-cases, intended to evaluate feasibility of targeted demonstrations, enable realistic adjustments during proposal writing, and reduce mismatches between targeted and achievable results. The TRL scale is critiqued as insufficiently precise. The framework is applied retrospectively to two portfolio projects (one early-stage, one final-stage), with the authors stating that this application reveals its effectiveness, while acknowledging that full validation would require multi-year observation from project inception.
Significance. If the hierarchy demonstrably improves demonstrator planning, the work could offer a practical tool for reducing common coordination failures in CPS research projects. The explicit linkage to work packages and use-cases, together with the acknowledgment of validation constraints, provides a transparent basis for further testing; however, the current evidence base does not yet establish measurable gains over existing practices.
major comments (2)
- [Abstract / application to projects] Abstract and application section: the central claim that the five-level hierarchy reduces confusion and mismatch is supported only by the statement that retrospective application to two internal projects 'revealing its effectiveness.' No quantitative indicators (e.g., counts of requirement mismatches before vs. after, stakeholder agreement scores, or scope-change metrics) or comparison against non-framework projects are supplied, which directly undercuts the value proposition given that the framework's utility is defined in terms of producing such improvements.
- [Framework definition] Framework definition section: while the five levels are asserted to be 'clearly connected to expectations, e.g., work package interaction, and also connected to the project's industrial use-cases,' the manuscript provides neither the explicit level definitions nor example mappings in sufficient detail for independent assessment or replication; this absence makes it impossible to verify the claimed improvement over the TRL scale.
minor comments (1)
- [Abstract] The abstract notes that 'a complete validation is not accessible' yet still concludes effectiveness from the two applications; a brief explicit statement of the precise limitations this imposes on the reported results would improve clarity.
Simulated Author's Rebuttal
We thank the referee for the detailed and constructive report. We address each major comment below, indicating planned revisions where appropriate. Our responses focus on clarifying the manuscript's contributions while acknowledging its evidential limitations.
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Referee: [Abstract / application to projects] Abstract and application section: the central claim that the five-level hierarchy reduces confusion and mismatch is supported only by the statement that retrospective application to two internal projects 'revealing its effectiveness.' No quantitative indicators (e.g., counts of requirement mismatches before vs. after, stakeholder agreement scores, or scope-change metrics) or comparison against non-framework projects are supplied, which directly undercuts the value proposition given that the framework's utility is defined in terms of producing such improvements.
Authors: We agree that the current evidence is qualitative and retrospective, based on post-hoc application to two portfolio projects (one early-stage, one final-stage). A prospective study with quantitative metrics or controlled comparisons would require multi-year observation from project inception, which is outside the scope of this work as already noted in the manuscript. In revision we will expand the application section with concrete examples of mismatches identified and adjustments made in each project, including explicit before/after requirement descriptions. This will strengthen the illustration without claiming quantitative proof. revision: partial
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Referee: [Framework definition] Framework definition section: while the five levels are asserted to be 'clearly connected to expectations, e.g., work package interaction, and also connected to the project's industrial use-cases,' the manuscript provides neither the explicit level definitions nor example mappings in sufficient detail for independent assessment or replication; this absence makes it impossible to verify the claimed improvement over the TRL scale.
Authors: We accept this point. The manuscript introduces the five hierarchical levels and their linkage to work packages and use-cases but does not present them with the granularity needed for replication. In the revised version we will add a dedicated table or subsection with precise definitions for each level, together with concrete mapping examples drawn from the two projects, to enable independent evaluation and comparison with the TRL scale. revision: yes
Circularity Check
No circularity; 5-level hierarchy defined from project challenges, not reduced to self-application or citations
full rationale
The paper identifies a challenge (mismatch in demonstrator expectations) and proposes a 5-level requirements hierarchy as a response, with retrospective application to two portfolio projects offered only as illustrative support. No equations, fitted parameters, self-citations, or uniqueness theorems are present. The central definition of the levels is not constructed from the validation cases by definition, nor does any step reduce to prior author work that itself assumes the result. This meets the default expectation of a non-circular proposal resting on observed issues.
Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger
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