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A Fibonacci-Based Ontogenetic Discretization of Body-Mass Growth Trajectories

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Pith's one-line read A Fibonacci-based developmental index describes body-mass growth trajectories as well as the standard continuous model in half the tested species.

desk verdict Fibonacci discretization is a new framing for growth curves but the 2/4 comparison claim rests on missing methods and unspecified digitized data. read the letter →

arxiv 2605.27208 v2 pith:WXKR73OG submitted 2026-05-26 physics.bio-ph

Dorilson Silva Cambui This is my paper · ORCID
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keywords body-massgrowthontogeneticdiscretizationFibonaccisequenceWest-Brown-Enquistmodeltrajectoriesdevelopmentalindexcomparisoncoordinate
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The reading

The paper proposes representing body-mass growth with a developmental index inspired by the Fibonacci sequence instead of the usual smooth continuous curves. This index organizes growth into substages that can be treated as either continuous or discrete steps. When compared to the West-Brown-Enquist equation on digitized data from four species of widely different sizes and lifespans, the Fibonacci version was the better fit in two cases while the standard equation won in the other two. A follow-up check on rodent data showed the discretized version can match classical continuous models on some datasets. Readers might care because the approach offers a concrete way to break growth into natural-looking increments that align with observed developmental timing rather than forcing a single smooth formula.

What carries the argument

The Fibonacci-inspired ontogenetic coordinate, which maps growth progress onto a sequence-derived developmental index that supports both continuous and discretized representations of mass increase.

What would settle it

A new set of high-resolution growth curves from additional species in which the West-Brown-Enquist equation is clearly preferred in every case would show the Fibonacci coordinate does not provide a useful alternative.

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Core claim

The Fibonacci-based ontogenetic coordinate organizes body-mass increase through a developmental index derived from the Fibonacci sequence, allowing the trajectory to be expressed in fine substages. Model comparison on digitized growth curves from four species showed this formulation was favored in two cases while the West-Brown-Enquist equation remained favored in the remaining two; a complementary rodent analysis indicated the discretized model can reach performance levels comparable to standard continuous models in selected datasets.

Load-bearing premise

That the digitized growth records truly reflect the underlying trajectories of the four species and that the model selection procedure is free of bias in deciding which formulation is favored.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • Growth can be broken into fine substages using the developmental index without losing the ability to treat it as a continuous process.
  • The alternative representation performs at least as well as the standard equation for species spanning large ranges in adult mass and developmental duration.
  • In some rodent datasets the discretized version reaches accuracy levels similar to established continuous growth models.
  • The coordinate supplies an alternative description that still fits inside existing biological systems frameworks.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • If the coordinate works well, researchers could test whether Fibonacci-like spacing appears in other developmental sequences such as limb segment lengths or organ maturation times.
  • The discretization might allow simpler numerical simulations of growth that still respect the same asymptotic limits as continuous models.
  • Extending the comparison to a broader range of taxa could identify the body-size or life-history traits that predict when the Fibonacci index outperforms the continuous equation.
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Referee Report

3 major / 0 minor

Summary. The paper proposes a Fibonacci-inspired ontogenetic coordinate (continuous or discretized) as an alternative to continuous models for body-mass growth trajectories. It compares this formulation to the West-Brown-Enquist (WBE) ontogenetic growth model on digitized data from four species of differing sizes and developmental times, reporting that the Fibonacci model is favored in two cases and WBE in the other two; a secondary analysis on rodent data shows the discretized version can approach but does not uniformly match classical continuous models.

Significance. If the model comparisons were shown to be robust with clearly defined selection criteria and traceable data, the work could offer a useful alternative representation within biological systems modeling. However, the absence of any description of data provenance, fitting procedures, or selection rules prevents assessment of whether the reported 2/4 split reflects a genuine advantage or methodological artifacts.

major comments (3)
  1. Abstract and main analysis: the claim that 'the Fibonacci-based formulation was favored in two of the four cases' is unsupported because no model-selection criterion (AIC, BIC, likelihood ratio, cross-validation, or equivalent), error metric, or fitting procedure is stated anywhere in the manuscript. Without this, it is impossible to determine whether the reported preference accounts for any additional parameters introduced by the developmental index.
  2. Abstract and methods: no information is supplied on the sources, sample sizes, exclusion rules, or digitization protocol for the four species' growth trajectories. Digitization artifacts (interpolation error, sampling density) are therefore unquantified, undermining the central comparative claim.
  3. Abstract: the rodent-data analysis is described only qualitatively ('can also approach the performance... although not uniformly') with no quantitative metrics, sample details, or comparison tables, rendering that complementary result unevaluable.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

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We thank the referee for the constructive critique. The points raised correctly identify gaps in the current manuscript regarding methodological transparency. We will perform a major revision to supply the missing details on data provenance, fitting procedures, model-selection criteria, and quantitative results for the rodent analysis.

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  1. Referee: Abstract and main analysis: the claim that 'the Fibonacci-based formulation was favored in two of the four cases' is unsupported because no model-selection criterion (AIC, BIC, likelihood ratio, cross-validation, or equivalent), error metric, or fitting procedure is stated anywhere in the manuscript. Without this, it is impossible to determine whether the reported preference accounts for any additional parameters introduced by the developmental index.

    Authors: The referee is correct; the manuscript does not state the model-selection criterion or fitting procedure. We will add an explicit Methods subsection describing the nonlinear fitting approach and the quantitative criterion used to determine model preference, ensuring the 2/4 split is traceable and accounts for parameter count. revision: yes

  2. Referee: Abstract and methods: no information is supplied on the sources, sample sizes, exclusion rules, or digitization protocol for the four species' growth trajectories. Digitization artifacts (interpolation error, sampling density) are therefore unquantified, undermining the central comparative claim.

    Authors: We agree that data provenance and digitization details are absent from the manuscript. We will insert a dedicated Data and Methods section that lists the original sources, reports sample sizes and exclusion criteria, and describes the digitization protocol together with any quantification of interpolation or sampling artifacts. revision: yes

  3. Referee: Abstract: the rodent-data analysis is described only qualitatively ('can also approach the performance... although not uniformly') with no quantitative metrics, sample details, or comparison tables, rendering that complementary result unevaluable.

    Authors: The rodent analysis is indeed presented only qualitatively. We will expand the section with quantitative performance metrics, sample details, and a comparison table so that the result can be evaluated directly. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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No circularity: empirical model comparison on external growth data with no self-referential derivation.

full rationale

The paper formulates a Fibonacci-based ontogenetic coordinate and performs an empirical comparison against the WBE model on digitized growth trajectories from four species, reporting that the new formulation is favored in two cases. No equations, fitting procedures, or derivation steps are described that reduce a claimed prediction or result to the inputs by construction, self-definition, or self-citation load-bearing. The analysis is presented as a data-driven test rather than a closed mathematical chain, and the abstract provides no indication that any performance metric is forced by parameter fitting on the same data used for selection. This is a standard model-comparison setup with independent content.

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Abstract-only review yields no explicit free parameters, axioms, or invented entities beyond the general introduction of the coordinate itself; the ledger remains empty pending full text.

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Pith. "Pith review of A Fibonacci-Based Ontogenetic Discretization of Body-Mass Growth Trajectories." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/WXKR73OG

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read the original abstract

Body-mass growth is usually described by continuous models that represent the gradual increase of mass toward an adult or asymptotic value. In this work, we formulate and test an alternative description based on a Fibonacci-inspired ontogenetic coordinate. The model represents growth through a continuous or discretized developmental index, allowing the trajectory to be organized into fine substages. The main analysis compares the Fibonacci-based model with the ontogenetic growth model of West, Brown, and Enquist using digitized growth data from four species with markedly different body sizes and developmental times. The Fibonacci-based formulation was favored in two of the four cases, while the WBE equation remained favored in the other two. A complementary analysis using rodent growth data showed that the Fibonacci discretized model can also approach the performance of classical continuous models in some datasets, although not uniformly. These results suggest that a Fibonacci-based ontogenetic coordinate can provide a useful alternative representation of body-mass growth within a biological systems framework.

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Figure 1. Comparison between the WBE ontogenetic growth model and the Fibonacci [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p010_1.png] view at source ↗

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