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A single statistical framework models both blocking loss and inter-symbol interference in SPAD array receivers for PAM optical wireless links at any speed.
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Establishes statistical models using renewal theory and Markov chains for photon counts in SPAD arrays, accounting for dead time distortions in PAM-OWC across low, medium, and high speed regimes.
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load-bearing objection The paper supplies closed-form photon-count distributions for SPAD arrays under dead time and ISI in PAM-OWC, but the high-speed Markov model uses steady-state probabilities that likely fail for the first symbols after an idle period. the 1 major comments →
Unified Analytical Framework for SPAD Array Receivers with Dead-Time-Induced Blocking Loss and Inter-Symbol Interference in PAM-OWC Systems
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Core claim
A unified analytical framework captures both dead-time-induced blocking loss and inter-symbol interference in SPAD array receivers for PAM-OWC across all operational speed regimes by establishing comprehensive statistical models: exact closed-form photon-count distributions via renewal theory for symbol durations longer than dead time, and a Markov-chain steady-state model integrated with trigger probability for the binomial distribution when symbol duration is shorter than dead time, together with low-complexity near-optimal threshold detectors derived from these models.
What carries the argument
Renewal theory for low- and medium-speed exact distributions and Markov-chain steady-state states for high-speed binomial photon-count distributions, each incorporating blocking loss and ISI.
Load-bearing premise
The statistical models derived from renewal theory and Markov chains accurately represent the physical dead time behavior of SPAD arrays without unaccounted effects.
What would settle it
Direct comparison of the derived photon-count probability mass functions against histograms collected from a physical SPAD array transmitting PAM symbols at rates both above and below the inverse dead time.
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Referee Report
Summary. The paper proposes a unified analytical framework for modeling SPAD array receivers in PAM-based optical wireless communication systems, capturing dead-time-induced blocking loss and inter-symbol interference across all speed regimes. For symbol durations longer than dead time (low/medium speeds), it derives exact closed-form photon-count distributions via renewal theory. For shorter durations (high speeds), it introduces a Markov chain model of steady-state operational states integrated with trigger probability to yield exact binomial distributions, and proposes low-complexity threshold detectors based on these models.
Significance. If the derivations hold, the work supplies closed-form statistical models and detection schemes that directly address nonlinear distortions limiting data rates in photon-starving SPAD-OWC links. The renewal-theory expressions and Markov integration could serve as design tools for PAM systems, enabling optimization without simulation for the regimes covered.
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- [High-speed systems Markov chain model] High-speed regime (Markov chain section): The claim of an 'exact binomial photon counts distribution' relies on the steady-state distribution of the Markov chain. However, communication packets typically begin from an idle state after a long idle period; the photon-count statistics for the first several symbols therefore deviate from the steady-state distribution until mixing occurs. This directly undermines the 'exact' and 'unified' claims for the high-speed regime where ISI is strongest, and affects the proposed threshold detection performance.
Simulated Author's Rebuttal
We thank the referee for the constructive comment on the high-speed Markov chain model. We address the concern point-by-point below and outline the planned revisions.
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Referee: [High-speed systems Markov chain model] High-speed regime (Markov chain section): The claim of an 'exact binomial photon counts distribution' relies on the steady-state distribution of the Markov chain. However, communication packets typically begin from an idle state after a long idle period; the photon-count statistics for the first several symbols therefore deviate from the steady-state distribution until mixing occurs. This directly undermines the 'exact' and 'unified' claims for the high-speed regime where ISI is strongest, and affects the proposed threshold detection performance.
Authors: We appreciate this observation. The high-speed analysis explicitly employs the steady-state distribution of the Markov chain to obtain the exact binomial photon-count distribution under the assumption that the system has reached equilibrium. This is appropriate for long packets or continuous transmission, where mixing occurs rapidly in the high-speed regime due to frequent photon arrivals and dead-time events. We agree that the first few symbols after an idle period follow transient statistics, which are not captured by the steady-state model; this represents a limitation to the 'exact' claim at the very beginning of a packet. The low/medium-speed renewal-theory results remain exact and unaffected. To address the comment, we will revise the manuscript to: (i) explicitly state the steady-state assumption in the high-speed section and abstract, (ii) add a brief discussion of the mixing time and its dependence on photon rate, and (iii) note that the proposed threshold detectors are derived for steady-state operation and may require adjustment for the initial symbols of short packets. These clarifications will be incorporated without altering the core derivations. revision: partial
Circularity Check
No circularity: derivations use standard renewal theory and Markov chains as external tools
full rationale
The provided abstract and description outline derivations of photon-count distributions via renewal theory (low/medium speed) and Markov chain steady-state models (high speed) integrated with trigger probability. These are standard stochastic modeling techniques applied to the physical system; no equations or steps are shown that reduce a claimed result to a fitted parameter, self-definition, or self-citation chain. The steady-state choice is a modeling assumption open to correctness critique but does not constitute circularity by construction. No load-bearing self-citations or ansatz smuggling are referenced. The framework is self-contained against external benchmarks.
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read the original abstract
Optical wireless communication (OWC) leveraging single-photon avalanche diode (SPAD) arrays offers exceptional sensitivity for photon-starving links. However, the inherent dead time of SPADs critically limits achievable data rates by introducing non-linear photon-counting distortions: blocking loss within a symbol duration and inter-symbol interference (ISI) across durations. This paper proposes a unified analytical framework capturing both distortions across all operational speed regimes for pulse-amplitude modulation (PAM), by establishing comprehensive statistical models for SPAD array receivers. For low and medium-speed systems (symbol duration longer than dead time), we derive exact closed-form expressions for the photon counts probability distribution using renewal theory, explicitly incorporating blocking loss and ISI. For high-speed systems (symbol duration shorter than dead time), we develop a Markov chain model characterizing the steady-state operational states and integrate it with trigger probability to obtain the exact binomial photon counts distribution. Furthermore, we propose low-complexity, near-optimal threshold detection schemes based on these models. This work provides essential theoretical tools for designing and optimizing high-performance SPAD-based OWC systems employing PAM.
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