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Carefree multiple testing with e-processes
T0 review · 3 major / 3 minor · reviewed 2026-08-09 · deepseek-v4-flash
Pith's one-line read Carefree multiple testing with e-processes should operate on running maxima, and adjusters are needed to keep e-BH's FDR control under arbitrary dependence.
desk verdict A useful carefree criterion for e-process multiple testing, with a credible but simulation-only counterexample and a clean adjuster fix that needs a proof cleanup. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The machinery has three parts. (i) The running maximum M_t^k = sup_{s≤t} E_s^k is what makes data gathering carefree: rejections based on M_t can only grow, and the researcher can always revert an over-collected e-process to its best earlier value. (ii) The e-BH procedure, which rejects the k largest e-values above the threshold K/(α k), provides FDR control for stopped e-values but not for their running maxima. (iii) An admissible adjuster—an increasing right-continuous function A: [1,∞]→[0,∞] with ∫_1^∞ A(E)/$E^{2}$ dE = 1—restores the e-process property, because A applied to a running maximum of an e-process is again an e-process. The paper proves Theorem 1 by plugging adjusted maxima into the e-BH argument and bounding each null's contribution by α/K times E[A(sup_t E_t)] ≤ 1.
What would settle it
Compute, for the Section 3.1 processes, E[E_τ] for every stopping time τ, especially τ that stops when the running maximum first reaches the rejection threshold; if any such expectation exceeds 1, the processes are not valid e-processes under the standard definition and the counterexample does not apply. Alternatively, rerun the same construction with E0=1 fixed for both processes and check whether the simulated FDR of running-maximum e-BH still exceeds α.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
The discovery is a matched pair of statements about FDR control for sequential e-values. First, the running maximum M_t^k = max_{s≤t} E_s^k is the natural input for a carefree multiple testing method, because rejecting based on M_t makes the rejection set non-decreasing over time. Second, despite the intuitive appeal of replacing each e-process by its running maximum, e-BH on these maxima does not control the FDR under arbitrary dependence: the paper's explicit two-process counterexample gives simulated FDR ≈ 1.08α instead of α. Third, the same counterexample breaks averaging-based FWER control and the improved 'closed e-BH'. The fix is an admissible adjuster A, a right-continuous increasing function with ∫_1^∞ A(E)/$E^{2}$ dE = 1; A(M_t^k) is again an e-process, and e-BH on these adjusted running maxima controls the FDR-sup at K0α/K for any dependence structure.
Load-bearing premise
The counterexample's processes start from random initial values 0 or 1/(2α) rather than from the conventional starting value 1, so the claim that they are valid e-processes rests on accepting the paper's expectation-based definition E[E_τ]≤1 for all stopping times; if the stricter E0=1 definition is required, the counterexample falls outside the class it is supposed to refute.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- Any e-based multiple testing procedure intended for sequential data collection should be evaluated by FDR-sup, the supremum over time of the FDR of the running maxima, rather than by the FDR at each individual stopping time.
- The two-hypothesis counterexample shows that raw running-maximum e-BH, averaging, and closed e-BH can all exceed their nominal guarantees under dependence, so none of these is a valid carefree procedure without further correction.
- Applying an admissible adjuster to each running maximum before e-BH controls the FDR-sup at K0α/K under arbitrary dependence, making the procedure carefree.
- The price of adjustment is real power loss; the paper notes that conditional calibration or stochastic rounding may recover some of that power, so adjustment need not be the final word on efficiency.
Reading between the lines
- If 'carefree' is adopted as a general normative standard, then any online or group-sequential FDR method should be judged by its FDR-sup; this reframes the design question from 'which data to collect' to 'which adjuster to choose'.
- The counterexample's structure—rare large initial values driving the running maximum—suggests that the violation is driven by the heaviness of the initial jump; one could test whether restricting e-processes to have bounded increments restores raw running-maximum control.
- The admissible-adjuster condition has a one-parameter family of choices; a natural next step is to search for adjusters that maximize average power under a given dependence class, rather than the two examples A1 and A2.
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper argues that multiple testing with e-processes should be 'carefree', meaning that gathering more data never makes a previously rejected hypothesis lose its rejected status, and that this requires working with running maxima of e-processes. It claims that e-BH applied to running maxima can fail to control the FDR under arbitrary dependence (Proposition 1), that closed e-BH and averaging running maxima also fail (Corollaries 1 and 2), and that applying an adjuster to the running maxima restores FDR-sup control at level K0*alpha/K under arbitrary dependence (Theorem 1). The positive result is essentially a combination of the known adjuster property and e-BH FDR control; the negative result is supported by a counterexample evaluated by Monte Carlo simulation rather than by an exact proof.
Significance. If the negative claim were rigorously established and the FDR-sup criterion accepted, the paper would provide a useful caution against naive use of e-BH on running maxima and a simple, implementable fix: adjusted running maxima behave as e-processes and therefore inherit e-BH's FDR guarantee. The paper is clearly written and provides reproducible code for the simulations and for Figure 1. However, the central negative result is not currently proved, and the appendix proof of Theorem 1 is not self-consistent as displayed; for a math.ST paper these gaps need to be repaired before the claims can be accepted.
major comments (3)
- [Section 3.1 (Proof of Proposition 1)] The counterexample is not proved. The proof states that 'the FDR is evaluated numerically' and reports a Monte Carlo estimate FDR approximately 1.08*alpha with a standard error of 0.001; a simulation, even with M = 10^6 iterations, does not establish that FDR-sup exceeds alpha for the described processes, so Proposition 1 as a mathematical claim lacks support. In addition, the constructed processes start from (X0^1, X0^2) equal to (0,0) with probability 1-2*alpha and (1/(2*alpha), 1/(2*alpha)) with probability 2*alpha, so E0^1 is not equal to 1 almost surely, contrary to the definition in the Introduction that an e-process 'starts at a value of E0 = 1'; if the looser formal definition in Section 2.2 (E[E_tau] <= 1 for all stopping times) is intended, the paper should say so and reconcile the two definitions. Finally, the text verifies only E[E_t] = 1 at fixed times, not the required E[E_tau] <= 1 for arbitrary stopping times, so even under the Section 2.2 definition the e-process validity is asserted without proof.
- [Appendix A (Proof of Theorem 1)] The displayed chain (6)-(8) is written for the unadjusted running maximum sup_{t<=s} e^j_t; the indicator in (6) and the expectation in (8) do not contain the adjuster A. The prose then says the last expectation would be bounded if an adjuster were applied, but the displayed argument is not rewritten accordingly. As printed, the appendix does not prove Theorem 1. The theorem is true by the known facts that A(M^k_t) is an e-process and e-BH controls the FDR for e-values at each fixed time; the authors should replace the display with this argument or carefully insert the adjuster throughout the proof.
- [Sections 3.2 and 3.3] Corollaries 1 and 2 inherit the gap in Proposition 1. The uniform improvement result of Goeman et al. and the averaging argument would transfer a proven violation, but since the violation is currently only a Monte Carlo simulation rather than a proof, these corollaries are not established. The authors should either provide an exact proof of the counterexample or explicitly present the negative results as numerical evidence rather than as propositions/corollaries.
minor comments (3)
- [Section 5] The conclusion that 'carefree multiple testing procedures must operate on the running maxima' is stronger than the analysis supports; the paper shows that running maxima yield a sufficient carefree property and that e-BH fails on them in the proposed counterexample, not that every carefree procedure must use running maxima.
- [Various] There are typographical slips: 'Acknowlegdgemenets' in the acknowledgements, 'counterexpample.py' in Appendix B.1, and 'The stopped e-BH procedure' in Procedure 2 should read 'running maximum e-BH procedure'.
- [Appendix A, Eq. (6)] Equation (6) contains an unexplained 1/n factor in the displayed FDR-sup formula; this appears to be a typographical artifact and should be removed or explicitly defined.
Circularity Check
No significant circularity: the central results rest on externally established theorems and a constructed counterexample, not on fitted inputs or self-referential definitions.
full rationale
The paper's main derivation chain contains no circular step. Theorem 1 controls FDR-sup by combining two externally established ingredients: the e-BH FDR guarantee of Wang and Ramdas (2022) and the Choe and Ramdas (2024) adjuster theorem that turns a running maximum of an e-process into an e-process. Neither ingredient is assumed from the paper's own conclusions, and no fitted parameter is relabeled as a prediction. Proposition 1 is a counterexample rather than a fitted claim; its possible weakness regarding the random initial value E0 and its Monte Carlo confirmation are correctness or rigor concerns, not circularity, because the negative claim is not defined in terms of its own conclusion and does not rely on the paper's own theorems. The only self-citation appears in Corollary 1, where the uniform-improvement result of Goeman et al. (2025), coauthored by de Heide, is used to extend Proposition 1 to closed e-BH. That step is secondary and does not support the central FDR-sup theorem; moreover, the cited result is presented as a theorem with its own proof, not as an unverified premise imported to force the conclusion. There is no renaming of a known result as organization, and no ansatz is smuggled in via citation. The derivation is therefore self-contained with respect to the main claims, and no significant circularity is found.
Assumptions & free parameters
free parameters (3)
- initial nonzero probability 2 alpha =
2 alpha
- increment probabilities 1/3 each =
1/3
- initial nonzero value 1/(2 alpha) =
1/(2 alpha)
assumptions (5)
- standard math e-BH controls FDR under arbitrary dependence among e-values
- domain assumption For an admissible adjuster A satisfying the integral condition, A(M_t) is an e-process when M_t is the running maximum of an e-process
- domain assumption All e-processes are adapted to a common filtration
- domain assumption The constructed processes E^1_t and E^2_t satisfy E[E_tau] <= 1 for arbitrary stopping times
- domain assumption Closed e-BH uniformly improves standard e-BH
Cite this review
Pith. "Pith review of Carefree multiple testing with e-processes." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/6L7Y24CP
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abstract
E-processes enable hypothesis testing with ongoing data collection while maintaining Type I error control. However, when testing multiple hypotheses simultaneously, current $e$-value based multiple testing methods such as e-BH are not invariant to the order in which data are gathered for the different $e$-processes. This can lead to undesirable situations, e.g., where a hypothesis rejected at time $t$ is no longer rejected at time $t+1$ after choosing to gather more data for one or more $e$-processes unrelated to that hypothesis. We argue that multiple testing methods should always work with suprema of $e$-processes. We provide an example to illustrate that e-BH does not control the FDR, at level $\alpha$ when applied to suprema of $e$-processes. From the same example we see that the FWER is not controlled with averaging, and also closed e-BH does not control the FDR. We show that adjusters can be used to ensure FDR-sup control with e-BH under arbitrary dependence.
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Anytime-valid FDR control with the stopped e-BH procedure
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