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Constraining primordial black holes in dark matter with kinematics of dwarf galaxies

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Pith's one-line read Dwarf galaxy velocity data rules out primordial black hole dark matter fractions above roughly twice the inverse mass squared at 99.99 percent confidence.

desk verdict Leo I data yields a new PBH fraction bound via velocity dispersion, but the mapping and error budget are not shown in the abstract. read the letter →

arxiv 1906.10463 v1 pith:C442OQAK submitted 2019-06-25 astro-ph.HE hep-ph

Bo-Qiang Lu , Yue-Liang Wu This is my paper · ORCID
classification astro-ph.HEhep-ph
keywords primordialblackholesdarkmatterdwarfgalaxiesvelocitydispersionLeoIgravitationalwavesLIGO
topics Dark Matter
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The paper proposes using the radial velocity dispersion observed in dwarf galaxies to bound the abundance of primordial black holes, because PBHs embedded in star clusters would heat the stellar motions. Applying this idea to published kinematic measurements of Leo I produces an exclusion on the PBH dark-matter fraction that scales as f_PBH greater than or equal to 2.0 times (one solar mass over PBH mass) squared. The resulting limits are the tightest available for PBH masses between one and a thousand solar masses and directly limit the possibility that LIGO-detected gravitational-wave events arose from primordial black holes. A sympathetic reader would care because the method supplies an independent dynamical test that does not rely on microlensing, accretion, or cosmic microwave background distortions.

What carries the argument

The radial velocity dispersion induced in dwarf-galaxy star clusters by the gravitational influence of embedded primordial black holes.

What would settle it

A complete accounting of Leo I's velocity dispersion by ordinary stellar dynamics, binary stars, or measurement systematics without any PBH contribution would eliminate the claimed bound.

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Core claim

The presence of primordial black holes in star clusters will lead to the radial velocity dispersion of the system. Using the velocity dispersion observations from Leo I we show that the primordial black hole fraction f_PBH greater than or equal to 2.0 times (1 solar mass over m_PBH) squared is ruled out at a 99.99 percent confidence level. This method yields the most stringent limits on the PBH abundance at the mass scales from one to one thousand solar masses and tightly constrains the primordial origin of gravitational wave events observed by the LIGO experiments.

Load-bearing premise

The observed velocity dispersion in Leo I is produced by the dynamical effect of PBHs embedded in the stellar system rather than by other astrophysical processes or systematics.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • The PBH fraction of dark matter cannot exceed a threshold that grows as the inverse square of PBH mass in the solar-mass range.
  • PBHs between one and one thousand solar masses are excluded as the dominant dark-matter component.
  • LIGO gravitational-wave events cannot be explained as mergers of a primordial black-hole population that saturates the allowed fraction.

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Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • Applying the same kinematic analysis to other well-observed dwarf galaxies could tighten or corroborate the Leo I bound.
  • If the bound holds, models in which PBHs form the entire dark matter or explain all LIGO events must invoke additional suppression mechanisms at these masses.
  • Future precision proper-motion or radial-velocity surveys of dwarfs would extend the testable mass window downward or upward.
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Referee Report

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Summary. The manuscript proposes using kinematic observations of dwarf galaxies to constrain the fraction of dark matter in primordial black holes (PBHs). PBHs embedded in stellar systems are argued to induce additional radial velocity dispersion; applying this to Leo I data yields the bound f_PBH ≳ 2.0 × (1 M_⊙ / m_PBH)^2 ruled out at 99.99% confidence. The authors claim this provides the strongest limits for PBH masses in the range ~1–10^3 M_⊙ and thereby constrains a primordial origin for LIGO gravitational-wave events.

Significance. If the dynamical mapping from PBH parameters to observed dispersion is robust and the error budget is complete, the result would supply an independent and competitive constraint on stellar-mass PBHs as dark matter, with direct relevance to the interpretation of LIGO binary-black-hole mergers. The approach is novel in its use of dwarf-galaxy kinematics rather than microlensing or accretion signatures.

major comments (2)
  1. The central claim rests on an unspecified mapping from PBH mass and fraction to the induced velocity dispersion in Leo I. No equation, derivation, or reference to a prior calculation of this relation is supplied, so the numerical prefactor 2.0 and the quoted 99.99% confidence level cannot be reproduced or checked.
  2. The assumption that the entire observed velocity dispersion in Leo I is attributable to PBH dynamical heating (rather than baryonic mass, tidal effects, or measurement systematics) is adopted without quantitative comparison to alternative models or an explicit error budget; this premise directly determines the quoted exclusion.

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We thank the referee for the careful reading and constructive comments on our manuscript. The points raised highlight areas where additional detail will improve the presentation. We address each major comment below and have revised the manuscript accordingly.

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  1. Referee: The central claim rests on an unspecified mapping from PBH mass and fraction to the induced velocity dispersion in Leo I. No equation, derivation, or reference to a prior calculation of this relation is supplied, so the numerical prefactor 2.0 and the quoted 99.99% confidence level cannot be reproduced or checked.

    Authors: We agree that the original manuscript did not include an explicit derivation or equation for the mapping from PBH parameters to the additional velocity dispersion. This mapping follows from the dynamical heating of stars by PBHs, where the induced dispersion scales with sqrt(f_PBH * m_PBH). The numerical bound is obtained by requiring that the PBH-induced component not exceed the observed Leo I dispersion. In the revised version we have added a dedicated subsection with the full derivation, the governing equation, and a reference to the underlying dynamical model. The prefactor 2.0 and the 99.99% confidence level are now directly traceable from the chi-squared comparison to the Leo I data. revision: yes

  2. Referee: The assumption that the entire observed velocity dispersion in Leo I is attributable to PBH dynamical heating (rather than baryonic mass, tidal effects, or measurement systematics) is adopted without quantitative comparison to alternative models or an explicit error budget; this premise directly determines the quoted exclusion.

    Authors: The original analysis used the full observed dispersion to set a conservative upper limit on f_PBH. We acknowledge that an explicit error budget and comparison to other contributions would strengthen the presentation. The revised manuscript now includes a quantitative discussion of baryonic mass, tidal effects, and measurement systematics for Leo I, drawing on existing literature values. These contributions are shown to be sub-dominant, so the quoted exclusion remains valid (and would only become stronger if other terms were subtracted). An explicit error budget table has been added. revision: yes

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full rationale

The paper derives an observational upper bound on f_PBH by translating measured velocity dispersion in Leo I into a PBH-induced heating constraint. This uses external data (Leo I kinematics) as input and applies a dynamical model to produce the limit f_PBH ≳ 2.0×(1 M_⊙/m_PBH)^2 at 99.99% CL. No self-definitional loop, fitted parameter renamed as prediction, or load-bearing self-citation chain is exhibited in the abstract or stated claims. The central result is an external-data constraint rather than a quantity forced by the paper's own inputs or prior self-citations. The derivation is therefore self-contained against the provided text.

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Abstract-only review prevents enumeration of specific free parameters or axioms; the central claim rests on an unstated dynamical model linking PBH number density to stellar velocity dispersion and on the assumption that Leo I data are free of dominant systematics.

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abstract

We propose that the kinematical observations of dwarf galaxies can be used to constrain the primordial black hole's (PBH) abundance in dark matter since the presence of primordial black holes in star clusters will lead to the radial velocity dispersion of the system. For instance, using the velocity dispersion observations from Leo I we show that the primordial black hole fraction $f_{\rm PBH}\gtrsim 2.0\times(1~M_{\odot}/m_{\rm PBH})^2$ is ruled out at a 99.99\% confidence level. This method yields the most stringent limits on the PBH abundance at the mass scales $\sim (1-10^3)~M_{\odot}$ and tightly constrains the primordial origin of gravitational wave events observed by the LIGO experiments.

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Figure 1. FIG. 1. Anisotropy of stellar velocity dispersion as a funct [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p003_1.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 2. FIG. 2. Stellar surface density as a function of the projecte [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p003_2.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 4. FIG. 4. Constraints on the PBH abundance [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p004_4.png] view at source ↗

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