REVIEW 4 major objections 4 minor 2 references
A Fiber Optic Based High Voltage System for Stellar Intensity Interferometry Observations
T0 review · 4 major / 4 minor · reviewed 2026-08-14 · deepseek-v4-flash
Pith's one-line read A battery-powered, fiber-optically controlled high-voltage supply for photomultiplier tubes kept its output stable to 0.015% over four hours, implying PMT gain stability better than 0.01%.
desk verdict Useful engineering note on a battery-powered, fiber-isolated PMT HV supply, but the headline gain-stability numbers are off by a factor of ten because the paper multiplies 0.015% by 7 and calls the result 0.01%. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The load-bearing chain is the receiver at the telescope focal plane: an optical PWM signal is converted by an inverting buffer and a low-pass filter made of an 8.2 kΩ resistor and 22 µF capacitor into a 0–5 V DC set-point, which drives a DC-to-DC converter module supplying the PMT bleeder chain. The transmitter side uses a microcontroller-generated PWM signal fed through a fiber-optic transceiver, and the whole receiver is powered by a floating Li-Ion battery, so there is no conductive path between the HV output and any ground. The identity that carries the stability argument is $G \propto V^7$ for the eight-dynode PMT: a fractional voltage change $\mathrm{d}V/V$ is multiplied by 7 to obtain the fractional gain change, translating the measured 0.015% voltage stability into the claimed 0.01% gain stability.
What would settle it
Log the HV output with a voltmeter of 0.001 V or better alongside the battery voltage for four hours: if the output shows a drift above 0.015% ($\mathrm{d}V/V$) correlated with the battery drain, the stability claim falls. Separately, measure the PMT's single-photoelectron peak position versus applied voltage; an exponent measurably different from 7 would rescale the claimed 0.01% gain stability proportionally.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
On its own terms, the paper establishes that a custom, remotely programmable high-voltage supply can power a PMT in an intensity-interferometry camera without introducing measurable drift or conducted noise. In a four-hour laboratory run, the output voltage varied by less than 0.015% even as the 15 V Li-Ion battery drained at roughly 25 mV/hour; the voltage was also reproducible to within one volt for a fixed PWM duty cycle. Using the eight-dynode PMT's gain law $G \propto V^7$, the authors convert this into a gain stability of better than 0.01% over four hours and less than 0.03% over a full night. The design isolates the PMT from the control electronics by sending the PWM set-point and on/off commands over plastic optical fiber, leaving the battery-powered HV receiver as the only conductive connection to the tube. The paper further reports that four such systems are operating in regular on-sky stellar intensity interferometry observations, with stable gain over nightly timescales.
Load-bearing premise
The gain-stability estimate rests on the assumption that the photomultiplier's gain scales exactly as the seventh power of the applied voltage; if the true exponent differs, the estimated gain drift changes in proportion.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- Four copies of the HV system are already used in regular on-sky stellar intensity interferometry observations, so the claimed stability has field operation behind it.
- Over a 12-hour night, PMT gain drift from battery drain stays below 0.03%, smaller than the reported few-tenths-of-a-percent gain effects from sky-brightness or temperature changes.
- Because the control path is optical and the supply is battery powered, ground loops are broken, reducing the radio-frequency pickup that would create spurious cross-correlations between telescopes.
- The design is low-cost and general enough to be reused for other PMT-based, low-noise detectors that need isolated remote high-voltage control.
Reading between the lines
- The quoted stability bound is set by the measurement resolution (<0.1 V), so the true HV drift may be even smaller; a higher-resolution voltmeter would tighten the 0.015% and 0.01% numbers rather than loosen them.
- The $V^7$ gain law is assumed from the dynode count; a direct single-photoelectron calibration of gain versus voltage for the actual tube would turn the estimated gain stability into a measured quantity and would show whether the exponent has any voltage dependence.
- If the HV drift is as small as reported, gain calibration for stellar intensity interferometry observations could be performed rarely, making systematic errors from gain drift subdominant to atmospheric and background fluctuations.
- The same fiber-isolated, battery-floating architecture could be applied to other high-speed photon-counting instruments, where common-mode noise through ground loops is a limiting noise source.
Signed reviews
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. This conference proceedings paper describes the design, construction, and laboratory testing of a battery-powered, fiber-optically isolated high-voltage (HV) supply for the photomultiplier tubes (PMTs) used in the VERITAS stellar intensity interferometry (SII) system. The HV level is programmed remotely via a PWM signal transmitted over a plastic optical fiber, with a separate fiber link for on/off control. The authors report that the HV output is stable with respect to battery voltage variations, with a measured variation of less than 0.015% (dV/V) over a four-hour interval, and they use an assumed V^7 PMT gain scaling to estimate a gain stability of better than 0.01% over four hours and less than 0.03% over a 12-hour night. The system is stated to be in regular use for SII observations at VERITAS.
Significance. The engineering contribution is practical: the design is low-cost, electrically isolated, and deployed at the VERITAS telescopes, which is a useful step for SII instrumentation. The laboratory data are direct measurements rather than fits to a model, but the central quantitative claim is undermined by an arithmetic error in converting HV stability to gain stability, and the measurement is resolution-limited without reported uncertainties. If corrected, the paper would still provide a useful description of the system, but the present version's headline numbers do not follow from its own data.
major comments (4)
- [Section 3, Figure 4] The text states that a fractional HV change of 0.015% leads, via the V^7 gain law, to a PMT gain variation of less than ~0.01% over 4 hours. This is arithmetically inconsistent: 7 x 0.015% = 0.105%, and 7 x (0.0038% per hour) x 12 hours = 0.32%. The gain-stability values in Section 3 and the Conclusion are therefore off by roughly an order of magnitude. This is an internal error in applying the stated scaling, and it directly affects the comparison with other gain-drift sources, which are said to be 'on the order of a fraction of a percent.' Please correct the arithmetic and adjust the claims accordingly.
- [Section 3, Figure 4 caption] The caption states that the output HV 'did not fluctuate at a level that was observable by the resolution of the measurement apparatus (<0.1 V).' The quoted stability of '<0.015%' is therefore an upper limit set by the measurement resolution, and no error bars or absolute HV set point are reported. A gain-stability claim based on this null result should be presented as an upper bound, with the resolution propagated through the V^7 conversion.
- [Abstract] The abstract states that the HV level 'is reproducible to within one volt for a given duty cycle of the PWM signal,' but no data, figure, or test procedure supporting this reproducibility claim appears in the body of the paper. Please either include the measurement or remove/qualify the claim.
- [Section 3] The assumed V^7 dependence of PMT gain is asserted without a citation to the Hamamatsu R10560 data sheet or a measurement for the specific tube. Because the claimed gain stability scales linearly with the exponent, a deviation in the exponent would proportionally change the result. Please provide a reference or discuss the expected range of the exponent.
minor comments (4)
- [Section 2] The text says the block diagram is 'presented in Figure 3,' but the block diagram is labeled Figure 1; please correct the cross-reference.
- [Section 4] The sentence beginning 'His corresponds to a relative gain stability...' contains a typo; 'His' should be 'This.'
- [Section 3] The statement that sky brightness and temperature effects are 'on the order of a fraction of a percent' is vague; please give quantitative values or a reference so the comparison is meaningful.
- [Figure 4] The linear fit to the battery voltage data is shown as a dotted line, but the fit parameters and residuals are not provided; reporting them would allow the reader to assess the drift rate.
Circularity Check
No circularity: the HV stability claim is a direct measurement and the PMT gain scaling is an externally supplied relation, not a fitted or self-cited input.
full rationale
The paper's central claim is an instrumental stability measurement: the high-voltage output was observed directly over four hours and varied by less than 0.015% in dV/V (Section 3, Figure 4). This is a laboratory observation, not a prediction derived from a fitted parameter or from the claim itself. The conversion from HV stability to PMT gain stability uses the stated relation that gain varies as V^7 for an eight-dynode Hamamatsu R10560 PMT, attributed to reference [2] (the VERITAS PMT upgrade paper). That scaling law is an external input, not something constructed within this paper, and it is not fitted to the same data used to assert stability. The paper also cites its own prior work [3,4] for the on-sky SII system, but that citation is contextual and not load-bearing for the quantitative stability claim. The skeptical observation that 7 x 0.015% = 0.105%, not ~0.01%, is a potential arithmetic inconsistency in the paper's own numbers, but it is a correctness concern, not circularity: the measurement and scaling law are independent of the conclusion, and the error does not arise from defining the output in terms of the input. Therefore the paper exhibits no significant circularity.
Assumptions & free parameters
assumptions (4)
- domain assumption PMT gain varies as V^7 with eight dynode stages
- domain assumption Fiber optic transmission and battery power eliminate ground-loop RF pickup
- domain assumption The PWM-to-DC low-pass filter produces a stable control voltage linear with duty cycle
- domain assumption The EMCO CA-12N DC-to-DC converter outputs an HV proportional to the control voltage
Cite this review
Pith. "Pith review of A Fiber Optic Based High Voltage System for Stellar Intensity Interferometry Observations." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/FHHJGFLB
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year = {2026},
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read the original abstract
Beginning in Fall 2018, the VERITAS high energy gamma-ray observatory (Amado, AZ) was upgraded to enable Stellar Intensity Interferometry (SII) observations during bright moon conditions. The system potentially allows VERITAS to spatially characterize stellar objects at visible wavelengths with sub-milliarcsecond angular resolution. This research project was on the construction of a high voltage power supply for the photomultiplier tubes (PMTs) used in the SII camera. The high voltage supply was designed to be electrically isolated from all other electronics (except for the PMT) to reduce noise pickup. The HV supply operates on a Li-Ion battery, and the high voltage level is remotely programmed using a pulse width modulation (PWM) signal that is generated by an Arduino Yun microcontroller and distributed through a fiber optic cable. The electrical isolation of the fiber optic control system suppresses the pickup of radio frequency interference through ground loops. A separate fiber optic transceiver pair is used for the on-off control of the high voltage power supply. Tests were performed that show the high voltage level is reproducible to within one volt for a given duty cycle of the PWM signal. Furthermore, the high voltage output level was shown to be stable with respect to variations in the input battery voltage used to power the high voltage supply. The high voltage system is currently being used in regular SII observations at VERITAS. This poster will describe the detailed design and performance of the system.
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PoS(ICRC2019)643 ã Copyright owned by the author(s) under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivatives 4.0 International License (CC BY-NC-ND 4.0). http://pos.sissa.it/ A Fiber Optic Based High Voltage System for Stellar Intensity Interferometry Observations Rylee Cardon, Nolan Matthews*, A. Udara Abeysekara and David Kieda De...
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[2]
Holder et al., The first VERITAS telescope, Astroparticle Physics, 25, (6), 391-401, 2006
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