REVIEW 3 major objections 5 minor 21 references
The ''Telephone Game'' Effect in Modern Gravity Research
T0 review · 3 major / 5 minor · reviewed 2026-08-05 · deepseek-v4-flash
Pith's one-line read Several published f(Q)-gravity studies choose a linear f(Q) and thereby quietly re-derive GR/STEGR results without acknowledging the equivalence.
desk verdict A short, correct reminder that linear f(Q) is just STEGR/GR, but the paper's list of offending papers is asserted, not demonstrated. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The trinity-of-gravity identities T=R+B_T and Q=R+B_Q, combined with the variational principle that boundary terms do not affect the equations of motion. These identities turn 'linear f(Q)' into a silent switch back to STEGR/GR: any study that assumes f(Q)=β0Q+β1 is testing Einstein's equations, not a modified theory. The paper uses this equivalence as a diagnostic, checking the assumed form of f(Q) in published studies.
What would settle it
Take any cited paper, such as the compact-star study [5], and write out its full field equations for f(Q)=β0Q+β1, including the connection (teleparallel) variation. If the resulting system has extra independent equations beyond Einstein's field equations, or if the reported metric is not a solution of GR, the claim that the paper silently reduced to GR fails. A direct way to test: check whether the solution in [5] is exactly the Krori-Barua metric from [6]; if it differs in any physical prediction, the equivalence claim for that case is wrong.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
In the paper's own terms, the three gravitational scalars R, T, and Q come from the three components of a generic connection — Levi-Civita, antisymmetric, and nonmetricity — and are related by T=R+B_T and Q=R+B_Q, where B_T and B_Q are topological boundary terms. Since a boundary term in the action does not change the Euler-Lagrange equations, a theory based on a linear f(Q) is dynamically indistinguishable from STEGR, which is equivalent to GR. The paper identifies a series of recent publications in f(Q)-gravity that adopt f(Q)=β0Q+β1 and therefore reproduce STEGR/GR results, including one that recovers an analytic solution found decades earlier in GR. The point is that these works are pres
Load-bearing premise
The argument depends on the assumption that every cited paper actually uses a linear f(Q) and that its field equations exactly match STEGR/GR in the spacetimes considered, not merely approximate or similar results.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- Any solution or physical prediction in the cited linear-f(Q) papers is already contained in the GR/STEGR literature, often from decades earlier.
- Readers of f(Q)-gravity papers should first inspect the assumed f(Q); a linear choice means the theory is STEGR/GR and should be labeled as such.
- Reviewers carry part of the responsibility: requiring authors to state when f(Q) is linear could end the telephone-game effect.
- The same caution applies to f(Q,B_Q) studies where a linear dependence on B_Q collapses the theory back to f(Q) gravity, and a linear dependence on both scalars collapses it to STEGR.
- Some journals have already been informed of this issue, but not all have acted on it, so community-level vigilance may be needed.
Reading between the lines
- The pattern likely extends beyond f(Q) to any modified-gravity action linear in a boundary-term-connected scalar; the author hints at T and B_T but does not enumerate examples.
- The reduction is local and classical; if boundary terms were ever shown to affect observable quantities through boundary conditions or quantum effects, the blanket equivalence would need qualification.
- A simple editorial check — flagging any paper whose f(Q) ansatz is linear and whose abstract claims modified gravity — could catch most of these cases before publication.
- The telephone-game metaphor implies the problem is self-reinforcing: later papers cite earlier linear-f(Q) works as if they were genuine modified-gravity results, further obscuring the equivalence.
Signed reviews
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. This commentary argues that a number of recent f(Q)-gravity papers, by taking f(Q) to be a linear function, are actually studying STEGR/GR rather than a modified theory of gravity. The author invokes the standard identity Q = R + B_Q, where B_Q is a boundary term, and notes that a boundary term does not affect the equations of motion. Several references are listed as examples of this 'telephone game' effect, in which the equivalence to GR is not acknowledged. The paper contains no new derivations; it is a literature-level critique aimed at authors and reviewers.
Significance. If substantiated, the paper identifies a real and important problem in the f(Q) literature: a subset of papers present results obtained from a linear model as modified-gravity predictions, when in fact they are GR/STEGR results. This has implications for the interpretation of those results and for the peer-review process. The theoretical equivalence Q = R + B_Q is standard and the author cites the relevant sources. The paper's value lies in its warning and in the specific list of references; however, the persuasiveness of the central claim depends entirely on whether each cited work indeed uses a strictly linear f(Q) and exactly reproduces GR/STEGR results, and this is not demonstrated in the manuscript.
major comments (3)
- [Main text, paragraph on refs [4]-[10]] The central claim that '[4]' and '[5]' (and by extension the other cited works) use a strictly linear f(Q) and therefore unknowingly study STEGR/GR is asserted without per-paper evidence. No field equations, f(Q) ansatz, or connection gauge from [4] or [5] is displayed, and the specific GR/STEGR result that is 'reproduced' is not identified. Since the whole argument rests on the correctness of these characterizations, please provide a table or appendix with, for each cited paper, the explicit action, the connection treatment, and the point-by-point mapping to GR/STEGR (e.g., which solution of [6] is recovered in [5]). Without this, the 'several studies' generalization is unverifiable.
- [Main text, paragraph on [5] vs [6]] The statement that [5] 'recovered the analysis presented decades ago in [6]' needs substantiation beyond the fact that both treat spherically symmetric anisotropic stars. Reference [6] is a 1975 GR paper; the manuscript must show that the equations of motion in [5] reduce exactly to the Krori-Barua system, with the same metric ansatz and boundary conditions, and not merely a similar solution. Please specify which results are identical and how the boundary-term equivalence operates in the presence of matter.
- [Main text, paragraph on [17]-[19]] For the f(Q,B_Q) papers [17]-[19], the reduction to f(Q) or STEGR is asserted but not demonstrated. In particular, a linear dependence on B_Q may remove the extra scalar degree of freedom, but this depends on the full action and the connection variation. Please show the actions of [17]-[19] and verify that the claimed reduction holds exactly in each case.
minor comments (5)
- [Abstract] The phrase 'have research investigated' is ungrammatical and should read 'have investigated'.
- [Main text, Eq. (2)] The boundary-term relations T=R+B_T and Q=R+B_Q are stated without defining B_T and B_Q. Give explicit expressions or a precise reference so the reader can see what is meant by 'topological boundary term'.
- [Main text, final paragraph] The statement that 'some of the journals publishing the aforementioned studies have been informed of this remark' is unverifiable and not relevant to the scientific argument; it should be removed or rephrased.
- [References] The list of references is explicitly not exhaustive, but the author should justify the selection criteria. Without this, the reader cannot tell whether the examples are representative or cherry-picked.
- [Main text, paragraph on refs [7]-[10]] The phrase 'only the last weeks a linear function f(Q) was introduced in various of studies' is awkward and unclear; please rephrase to specify the time window and the exact claim.
Circularity Check
No circularity: the paper is a commentary that applies the standard, externally established boundary-term equivalence Q = R + B_Q to specific cited cases; it makes no fitted predictions and its argument does not reduce to its own outputs.
full rationale
The paper's core claim is that certain f(Q)-gravity studies use a linear f(Q) = β0Q + β1 and therefore study STEGR/GR without acknowledging the equivalence. The load-bearing mathematical input is the standard identity Q = R + B_Q, cited to [2], together with the well-known variational fact that boundary terms do not affect field equations. This is an external, independently established result, not a premise defined in terms of the paper's own conclusion. The paper performs no new derivation, fits no parameters, and makes no prediction that is defined by its own inputs. Its specific assertions about cited works (e.g., that [4] uses f(Q)=β0Q+β1 and that [5] recovers [6]) are empirical claims about those papers' ansätze and results; they are not demonstrated in the present text, but that is a matter of evidentiary support or correctness risk, not circularity. The author explicitly notes the list is not exhaustive ('though this list is not exhaustive'), which acknowledges scope limitations rather than masking a circular step. There are no self-citations, so patterns 3–5 do not apply. The paper is self-contained relative to the standard equivalence it invokes, and no derivation is equivalent to its inputs by construction.
Assumptions & free parameters
assumptions (3)
- domain assumption The scalar relations T=R+BT and Q=R+BQ hold, with BT and BQ topological boundary terms.
- standard math Adding a boundary term to an action does not change the Euler-Lagrange equations.
- domain assumption The trinity actions built from R, T, and Q produce the same field equations when the action is linear in the scalar.
Cite this review
Pith. "Pith review of The ''Telephone Game'' Effect in Modern Gravity Research." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/GOBS75UI
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read the original abstract
Triggered by some recent studies within the framework of nonmetricity gravity, I discuss how the basic information regarding the equivalence of the gravitational theories forming the \textquotedblleft Trinity of Gravity\textquotedblright\ has been lost in parts of the literature. As a result, several studies with focus in modified theories of gravity have research investigated the case of STEGR/GR, often without acknowledging this fundamental equivalence or recognizing that their results can be derived in GR
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