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Generation of quasi-rectangle-states of the vibrational motion of an ion

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Pith's one-line read Repeated conditional measurements of a trapped ion's electronic state can sculpt its vibrational motion into a quasi-rectangle state with nearly flat position probability.

desk verdict A short, honest construction paper for flat-position motional states of a trapped ion; the central idea works and the typos are fixable, but the stress-test's off-by-one charge is itself wrong. read the letter →

arxiv 1908.05638 v1 pith:KNYE3OA3 submitted 2019-08-15 quant-ph

Irán Ramos-Prieto , Iván Rincón , Víctor Arrizon , Héctor M. Moya-Cessa This is my paper · ORCID
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keywords trappedionsqueezedstatesconditionalmeasurementquasi-rectanglestatequantumengineeringvibrationalmotionHusimiQfunctionnonclassical
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The reading

The paper claims that a sequence of laser–ion interactions followed by conditional measurements can turn the vibrational motion of a trapped ion into a state whose position probability is nearly constant across a chosen interval, a 'quasi-rectangle state.' Starting from a squeezed vacuum and making $k$ consecutive detections of the ion in its excited electronic state, the protocol produces an equally weighted superposition of squeezed states centered at the equidistant amplitudes $\pm(2j+1)\tau$. With $k=4$ and the scaled interaction time $\tau=e^{-r}/2$, the resulting position probability is a flat-topped, highly localized plateau, and the squeezing parameter $r$ tunes how sharply the plateau is defined. If the claim is right, it gives a practical-looking recipe for engineering spatially localized nonclassical motional states on standard trapped-ion platforms.

What carries the argument

The load-bearing object is the conditional-measurement operator $\cos[igt(a-a^\dagger)]$: each detection of the excited electronic state multiplies the vibrational wavefunction by this cosine of the quadrature and discards the ground-state branch through renormalization. The identity that carries the argument is that with $gt_j=2^j\tau$, the repeated product of these cosines collapses into a sum of $2^k$ displacement operators, so the squeezed vacuum becomes an equidistant, equal-weight superposition of squeezed states. The squeezing parameter $r$ then controls the width and spacing of the component Gaussians, which is what allows the flat-topped position profile to appear.

What would settle it

Prepare a squeezed vacuum with $r=2$, run the sequence with four interactions and $\tau=e^{-2}/2$, then measure the position distribution of the ion's motion after the fourth excited-state detection; if the profile shows appreciable curvature or residual interference fringes inside the predicted central plateau, the recursive product in Eq. (10) does not describe the actual state.

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Core claim

The central discovery is that the product of measurement operators $\prod_{j=0}^{k}\cos[igt_j(a-a^\dagger)]$, with interaction times chosen as $gt_j=2^j\tau$, acts on a squeezed vacuum to produce a finite sum of displaced squeezed states: $|\psi^{(k)}\rangle_v = \frac{1}{\tilde N_k}\sum_{j=0}^{2^k-1} \left[|(2j+1)\tau,r\rangle + |-(2j+1)\tau,r\rangle\right]$. Because the components sit at equidistant real amplitudes with equal weights, their position-space Gaussians interfere constructively over a central window; for $k=4$ and $\tau=e^{-r}/2$ the interference fringes wash out and the probability profile becomes a quasi-rectangle. The paper presents this as a way to generate equal-probability position states by tuning only the initial squeezing and the interaction time.

Load-bearing premise

The recipe assumes each measurement of the excited electronic state is a perfect, lossless projection that multiplies the vibrational wavefunction by $\cos[igt(a-a^\dagger)]$ and leaves the ground-state branch completely out of the subsequent dynamics.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • With four consecutive excited-state detections and $\tau=e^{-r}/2$, the motional position probability becomes nearly flat across a central window, making the scheme a concrete preparation recipe rather than an abstract construction.
  • The width of the flat region is adjustable through the squeezing parameter $r$, and the oscillatory fringes seen for larger $\tau$ can be suppressed by choosing smaller scaled times.
  • The same state displays a localized Husimi $Q$-function, so the flat position profile is accompanied by a clear signature in phase space that could be used to verify the preparation.
  • Because the protocol relies only on the standard ion-laser interaction in the Lamb-Dicke regime and projective electronic-state measurements, it is directly compatible with existing trapped-ion experimental setups.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • An immediate extension would be to detect the ground state instead of the excited state; the cosine factors would become sine factors, and the same telescoping identity should yield a related superposition with different phases and possibly a complementary shape.
  • The cosine-product identity is essentially a discrete summation over roots of unity, so the same flat-top synthesis could be applied to motion in two dimensions or to momentum-space shaping by choosing different quadrature operators.
  • Imperfect detection efficiency is the natural failure mode: the recursion assumes the unobserved ground-state branch never re-enters, so the plateau should survive only when detection is both efficient and projective; measuring how the flatness degrades with detection efficiency would test the preparation's robustness.
  • One could try to replace the squeezed vacuum by another initial state, such as a coherent state or number state, and ask which initial states make the same cosine-product summation converge to a flat position profile.
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Referee Report

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Summary. The paper proposes a scheme to generate quasi-rectangle states—motional states of a trapped ion with approximately equal position probability over a finite interval—by starting from a squeezed vacuum state and applying repeated ion-laser interactions followed by conditional measurements of the excited electronic state. The authors derive that after a sequence of such measurements the vibrational state becomes a superposition of equidistant squeezed states, and they plot the resulting position probability and Husimi Q-function for several squeezing parameters. The central claim is that tuning the squeezing parameter r and the scaled interaction time τ yields a highly localized, flat-topped position distribution.

Significance. If correct, the protocol offers a simple, constructive route to motional quantum state engineering with tailored position distributions, using only conditional measurements and standard trapped-ion tools. Notably, the two main control parameters, r and τ, are openly stated design choices rather than values fitted to a target outcome, and the derivation from Eq. (7) to Eq. (12) is analytic with an explicit normalization constant. The paper also provides Husimi Q-function plots as additional visualization. However, the significance is tempered by an indexing error in the number of measurement cycles, an operator inconsistency in the early derivation, and the absence of any quantitative measure of flatness for the claimed quasi-rectangle states.

major comments (3)
  1. [Section II, Eqs. (9)-(12) and Figs. 1-2] There is an off-by-one error in the labeling of the number of measurements. Equation (9) defines the state 'after k interactions' as a product over j=0..k of cos[igt_j(a-a†)], which contains k+1 factors. With gt_j=2^j τ, the product identity expands into 2^k terms, matching the upper limit 2^k-1 in Eq. (10). Hence the index k in Eq. (12) actually denotes k+1 measurement cycles. The captions of Figs. 1 and 2 state that the plotted states are obtained 'after k=4 consecutive measurements', but Eq. (12) with k=4 contains 16 squeezed-state components, which requires five laser-measurement cycles. A four-measurement protocol would produce only 8 components (Eq. (12) with k=3). Consequently, the plotted quasi-rectangle is twice as wide as the state that the stated four-measurement protocol would yield, and the central demonstration does not substantiate the claim. The authors should either change Eq. (9) to a product over j=0..k-1 or change Eq. (10) to an upper limit 2^{k-1}-1, and regenerate the figures for the correct number of measurements.
  2. [Section II, Eq. (5)] Equation (5) is inconsistent with Eq. (2). After setting φ=π/2, the evolution operator in Eq. (2) contains (a-a†). However, Eq. (5) writes the evolved state with (a+a†), which corresponds to φ=0. Since Eq. (7) and all subsequent conditional-measurement equations use (a-a†), the reader cannot tell whether the derivation is built on the correct operator. Please correct Eq. (5) or explain the transformation that changes the sign.
  3. [Section III and Figs. 1-2] The central claim that the generated state is a 'quasi-rectangle' is supported only by visual inspection of the plotted probability distributions. No quantitative criterion (e.g., a maximum relative deviation over a specified position interval) is given, so the reader cannot judge the quality of the rectangle approximation or compare the four values of r. Please provide a quantitative measure of flatness, or at least a table of the relevant deviations for the correct number of measurements.
minor comments (4)
  1. [Captions and Section III] There are several typos and grammatical issues: 'ploted' should be 'plotted' in the figure captions, 'squezing' should be 'squeezing' in Section III, and the sentence 'It may be seen that Although a reduction...' is grammatically broken and should be rewritten.
  2. [References] References [3] and [28] are the same citation (Wineland et al. 1992 Phys. Rev. A 46 R6797); one should be replaced or removed.
  3. [References] Reference [7] is missing page numbers; the full citation is Monroe et al., Science 272 (1996) 1131.
  4. [Section II, Eq. (14)] The normalization constant in Eq. (14) would be clearer if the double sum were explicitly written with limits, and the notation for the exponentials could be made less cramped to avoid ambiguity between (j+m+1)^2 τ^2 and (j-m)^2 τ^2.

Circularity Check

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No circularity: the quasi-rectangle states are obtained from an explicit conditional-measurement construction with openly chosen parameters.

full rationale

The paper's derivation is constructive and does not disguise any input as a prediction. It starts from a standard ion-laser interaction Hamiltonian, Eq. (1), citing prior work [8,33] for the model; this is a physical input, not the paper's claimed output, and [33] is external to the present authors, so the Hamiltonian is not purely a self-citation. The protocol state after repeated conditional measurements is built by direct multiplication of cos[igt_j(a-a^†)] factors (Eqs. 7-10); the expansion into equidistant squeezed-state components is a mathematical identity, not an ansatz fitted to the target probability. The parameters r and tau are explicitly chosen design parameters ('we will fix later', 'by tuning the squeezing parameter') whose values (tau = e^{-r}/2, etc.) are selected to shape the position probability, not inferred from the plotted output. No term in the derivation is defined in terms of the quasi-rectangle shape it is claimed to generate, and no quantity that is called a prediction is obtained by renaming a fit. There is a possible indexing/counting concern in Eqs. 9-12 regarding whether 'k' denotes k measurements or k+1 factors, but that is an internal consistency issue, not circularity. Therefore no circular step is exhibited.

Assumptions & free parameters 3 free parameters · 5 assumptions · 0 invented entities

The paper introduces no new physical entity. The central construction rests on the standard ion-laser Hamiltonian, a clean conditional-measurement model, and standard squeezed-state formulas; the only freely tuned inputs are r, τ, and k.

free parameters (3)
  • Squeezing parameter r = 0, 1, 2, 3 (figures)
    Chooses the width of the Gaussian building blocks; the claim explicitly depends on tuning r to make the position window flat.
  • Scaled interaction time τ = 4e^{-r} (Fig. 1), e^{-r}/2 (Fig. 2)
    Sets the spacing of the superposed squeezed states; the quasi-rectangle appears only when τ is small enough for adjacent Gaussians to overlap.
  • Number of measurements k = 4 in the figures
    Controls how many squeezed states are superposed and the width of the flat window; chosen as a design parameter, not derived.
assumptions (5)
  • domain assumption The ion-laser Hamiltonian (1), with two lasers detuned to the first lower and upper sidebands and equal intensities, is valid in the resolved-sideband and Lamb-Dicke regimes (RWA, η<<1).
    Invoked in Section II before Eq. (1); if this fails, the evolution operator Eq. (2) and all subsequent states change.
  • domain assumption Each conditional measurement of the excited electronic state leaves the motional state multiplied by cos[igt(a−a†)] and projects away the ground state without further motional disturbance.
    Eqs. (7)-(9) build the whole protocol on this no-back-action projection model.
  • standard math Product-to-sum identity: ∏_{j} cosh(2^j x) expands into a superposition of displacements with odd-integer weights, giving Eq. (10) from Eq. (9).
    Used to go from the repeated-cosine product to the squeezed-state superposition; elementary but load-bearing.
  • standard math Squeezed-state position wavefunction and overlap formulas (Eqs. 14 and 16) are taken as standard results from the literature.
    Needed for the normalization constant and for the plotted position probabilities.
  • domain assumption Initial motional state is a squeezed vacuum |0,r> = S(r)|0>.
    Assumed in Eq. (3); the rectangle construction depends on this starting state.

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We show how to generate quasi-rectangle-states of the vibrational motion of an ion, this is, states that have the same probability in a given position interval. We produce those states by repeated ion-laser interactions followed by conditional measurements that generate a superposition of squeezed states. The squeeze parameter of the initial state may be tuned in order to obtain such highly localized rectangle states.

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Figure 1. FIG. 1: Probability to find the centre-of-mass motion of the ion in a given position for (a) [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p002_1.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 2. FIG. 2: Probability to find the centre-of-mass motion of the ion in a given position for (a) [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p002_2.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 3. FIG. 3: Plot of the Husimi [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p003_3.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 4. Figure 4: FIG. 4: Plot of the Husimi [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p005_4.png]

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