Astro2020 APC White Paper: Collaboration with Integrity: Indigenous Knowledge in 21st Century Astronomy

Adam Burgasser; Aparna Venkatesan; David Begay; Doug Simons; Gregory Rudnick; Isabel Hawkins; Ka'iu Kimura; Laura Peticolas; Nancy Maryboy; Sarah Tuttle

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Astro2020 APC White Paper: Collaboration with Integrity: Indigenous Knowledge in 21st Century Astronomy

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Pith's one-line read This white paper argues that astronomy funding agencies should support Indigenous knowledge as a full partner in research, education, and space policy.

desk verdict A clear, well-written advocacy white paper whose six recommendations are sensible but whose 'highly successful initiatives' claim is supported by anecdote, not evidence. read the letter →

arxiv 1908.02822 v1 pith:NXN2IEHF submitted 2019-08-07 astro-ph.IM

Aparna Venkatesan , David Begay , Adam Burgasser , Isabel Hawkins , Ka'iu Kimura , Nancy Maryboy , Laura Peticolas , Gregory Rudnick

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Doug Simons Sarah Tuttle

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keywords IndigenousknowledgeastronomyeducationcollaborationwithintegritysciencefundingpolicyoraltraditionspacegovernancediversityinSTEMdarkskies

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The pith

A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.

The reading

The paper's central claim is that astronomy has a unique connection to Indigenous knowledge (IK), both because sky observation is the oldest science common to all cultures and because modern observatories often sit on sacred Indigenous lands. It asserts that a model called 'collaboration with integrity' has already been demonstrated by several successful initiatives and therefore deserves serious consideration for sustained institutional funding. The paper translates this into six concrete recommendations for funding agencies, from recognizing oral traditions as scientific references to creating culturally supported career pathways for Indigenous youth. A sympathetic reader would care because, if the claim holds, astronomy would model how scientific institutions can partner with Indigenous communities rather than appropriate or assimilate their knowledge.

What carries the argument

The load-bearing object is the named model 'collaboration with integrity,' defined as a co-created relationship between Indigenous knowledge holders and academic astronomers in which Indigenous languages, naming, and worldviews remain central, and outcomes carry Indigenous cultural meaning (for example, the names given to an interstellar object and a black hole). The paper uses successful instances of this model as both evidence and template: the instances demonstrate that the model works, and the recommendations generalize it into funding structures such as longer grant timelines, oral-tradition citation, and culturally supported career pathways.

What would settle it

An independent external evaluation comparing participants in two of the cited programs with a matched control group: if it found no difference in Indigenous youth persistence in STEM or no difference in community trust toward observatories, the paper's assertion that these partnerships 'have already had very positive results' would not be established.

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Extended reading notes

Core claim

Astronomy is inseparable from the people who practice it, and modern astronomy has a particular obligation to Indigenous lands and Indigenous scientific practices. The paper claims that 'collaboration with integrity' is a demonstrated model of partnership in which Indigenous and non-Indigenous scholars co-create research, naming, and education without appropriation or assimilation. Evidence for the model is drawn from a set of current initiatives that the authors describe as highly successful, and on that basis they recommend sustained funding at local and institutional levels. The six recommendations are: fund naming and renaming collaborations on telescope sites; fund partnership models that juxtapose Indigenous and Western science; provide 5–10 year grants for Indigenous-led observation-based research; recognize oral traditions as scientific references; include Indigenous perspectives in space governance; and create culturally supported paths for Indigenous youth in science careers.

Load-bearing premise

The load-bearing premise is that the cited programs are genuinely successful and that their outcomes transfer to other institutions and agencies; the paper asserts this success without presenting outcome metrics, external evaluations, or comparison baselines.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

Agencies would create dedicated 5–10 year grants for Indigenous-led, observation-based research, because trust and relationship-building cannot happen on a typical three-year cycle.
Oral traditions would be accepted as scientific references in proposals and reviews, on par with peer-reviewed articles.
Observatories on Indigenous lands would fund naming and renaming collaborations with local communities, giving Indigenous languages a living presence in modern science.
Space policy would treat dark skies as a shared resource and include Indigenous perspectives as satellite constellations reshape the night sky.
A culturally supported pathway, including conferences, tribal college partnerships, and place-based education, would become a standard agency expectation for Indigenous youth.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

If the model is adopted widely, peer review itself may need to change: Indigenous knowledge holders would sit on review panels, and proposals citing oral traditions would need protocols for community consent and attribution, a governance question the paper raises only implicitly.
The argument implies a testable longitudinal claim: sustained 'collaboration with integrity' programs should measurably increase Indigenous student retention and persistence in astronomy; the paper does not present such data, so it could be gathered.
The dark-sky framing suggests that satellite constellation regulation could be debated as an environmental and cultural-heritage issue, not merely an astronomical one.

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Editorial analysis

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Desk Editor's Note

read the letter

You should know this is an advocacy white paper written for the Astro2020 decadal survey, not a research preprint. It argues that astronomy should fund and institutionalize partnerships between western science and indigenous knowledge, and it offers six concrete recommendations. If you're looking for a new empirical result or a novel theoretical framework, this isn't that. But if you're looking for a thoughtful, actionable statement about how the field could change its practices, this is a good one.

What it does well: it names specific programs (IEI, 'Imiloa, I-WISE), gives examples like the naming of 'Oumuamua and Pōwehi, and grounds the argument in literature on place naming and knowledge systems. The recommendations are specific and actually different from each other: naming opportunities, longer grant timescales, recognition of oral traditions, space policy, and youth pathways. The inclusion of indigenous authors and knowledge holders is real, not just performative. It also acknowledges some of the tensions around the Thirty Meter Telescope, even if briefly.

The soft spots are real but proportionately sized. The phrase 'highly successful' appears early and is never operationalized. No outcome data, external evaluations, or comparison baselines are provided. The paper leans on self-authored publications (Maryboy, Begay & Peticolas 2012; Venkatesan & Burgasser 2017) as evidence. And the claim that 'two-thirds of Hawaiians currently support scientific efforts on Mauna Kea' has no citation. These are legitimate concerns if you treat the paper as a research contribution. But this is an advocacy document; it is trying to persuade a decadal committee, not demonstrate a causal claim. The recommendation to fund programs would be stronger with metrics, but its absence is not disqualifying.

I think the central argument holds up: there is a history of ignoring indigenous knowledge, and these programs appear to be genuine attempts to do better. The lack of evaluation is a gap, not a fatal flaw. The paper is honest about some challenges (grant timescales, funding competition) and does not overclaim beyond what advocacy requires.

For whom: the decadal survey committee, funding agency staff, astronomy department leaders, and anyone working on diversity and inclusion in the field. It is not a technical paper, but it is worth a serious read.

My recommendation: let it go to review. Desk rejection would be wrong for a white paper of this quality. The review should push for one thing: ask the authors to either provide evidence for the 'highly successful' claim or soften the language. That would make it a better document.

Referee Report

3 major / 5 minor

Summary. This white paper argues that astronomy has a unique connection to indigenous knowledge (IK) and that current initiatives demonstrate a successful model of "collaboration with integrity" between Western and indigenous scholars. It presents six recommendations to funding agencies: (1) support collaborative naming and research on telescope sites; (2) fund collaborative models and roadmaps; (3) support long-term, observation-based astronomy by indigenous knowledge holders on 5–10 year timescales; (4) recognize oral traditions as scientific references; (5) include indigenous perspectives in space policy; and (6) create culturally supported pathways for indigenous youth in science careers. The paper's central empirical premise is that the cited initiatives (IEI, 'Imiloa, I-WISE, and their products) are "highly successful" and have already had "very positive results," thereby deserving sustained funding.

Significance. If the central claim is adequately supported, the paper would provide a concrete, actionable agenda for integrating IK into astronomy funding, education, and policy, with the potential to influence the Astro2020 decadal survey and beyond. The paper's strengths are its clear normative stance, the diversity of its authorial voices including indigenous scholars and practitioners, the specificity of the six recommendations, and the concrete examples of ongoing collaborations. These features make it a useful community statement. However, the paper's evidentiary basis for the key empirical claim of program success is thin: it relies on self-authored publications and anecdotal descriptions, without outcome metrics, external evaluations, or independent verification. This gap is load-bearing because the funding recommendation rests on the asserted demonstrated success of these programs.

major comments (3)

[Executive Summary and Recommendation 2] The central claim that the cited initiatives are "highly successful" and have "already had very positive results" is asserted without any operational definition of success, outcome metrics, external evaluations, or comparison baselines. This is the load-bearing premise for the sustained-funding recommendation. I request that the authors either provide independent evidence of effectiveness (e.g., evaluation reports, external assessments, or measurable outcomes such as participation numbers, retention, or learning gains) or visibly soften the claim to "promising" or "emerging" models.
[Recommendation 2, second paragraph] The factual claim that "two-thirds of Hawaiians currently support scientific efforts on Mauna Kea" is presented without citation and is used to bolster the recommendation. This is an empirical assertion that needs an independent, checkable source. If no such source exists, the sentence should be removed or rephrased to avoid making an unsupported quantitative claim.
[References and Introduction] Much of the positive characterization of the programs is supported by the authors' own prior work (Venkatesan & Burgasser 2017; Maryboy, Begay & Peticolas 2012), which creates a circular evidentiary loop: these works are cited both as the source of the "collaboration with integrity" model and as evidence of its success. Independent evaluations or third-party documentation of the programs' outcomes would materially strengthen the paper's recommendation.

minor comments (5)

[Throughout] The spelling of "Hawai'i" and "Hawai'ian" is inconsistent; please standardize to the Hawaiian orthography used in the title.
[References] The reference to "Philips 2014" should read "Phillips 2014," and the URL for the PNAS article is missing a colon ("www.pnas.orgcgidoi10.1073pnas.0403723101").
[Recommendation 1] The phrase "renormalization of IK" appears to be a typographical or conceptual error; if "revitalization" or "reaffirmation" is intended, please correct it.
[Footnotes 4–8] The footnote URLs are not included in the reference list and several are bare links; for reproducibility, they should be formatted as complete citations with access dates.
[Recommendation 2, examples list] The list of initiatives (Cosmic Serpent, A Hua He Inoa, Envision MaunaKea, Native Universe, MaunaKea Scholars) would benefit from one sentence describing what each initiative actually does, so that a reader unfamiliar with them can assess the relevance of the examples.

Circularity Check

1 steps flagged · score 2.0 of 10

No quantitative derivation; the only circularity concern is minor self-citation in the program-success evidence.

other [Introduction and Recommendation 2]
"developing “Collaboration with Integrity” (Maryboy, Begay & Peticolas 2012) ... Such partnerships, many of which are relatively new, have already had very positive results for everyone involved."

The paper's central evidence for a 'successful model' of collaboration is a prior book by three of this paper's co-authors (Maryboy, Begay, Peticolas) and an I-WISE conference paper by two co-authors (Venkatesan, Burgasser). No external evaluations, outcome metrics, or independent benchmarks are supplied, so the funding recommendation's empirical premise rests on the authors' own prior assertions. This is a self-citation loop rather than a fitted-input or equation-level reduction: the six policy recommendations do not reduce by construction to these cited results, so the circularity is minor and not fully load-bearing.

full rationale

This is a policy white paper with no equations, fitted parameters, or derived quantities, so the quantitative circularity patterns (self-definitional, fitted input called prediction, ansatz smuggled via citation, renaming known result) are not applicable. The only identifiable circular element is the self-referential evidence for program success: the 'highly successful initiatives' (IEI, 'Imiloa, I-WISE) are supported by citations to Venkatesan & Burgasser (2017) and Maryboy, Begay & Peticolas (2012), whose authors overlap with the present paper, and by program websites. This is a legitimate concern about evidence quality and warrants a score of 2, but it is not a case where the derivation is equivalent to its inputs by construction. The recommendations (funding for naming, recognition of oral traditions, 5-10 year grants, space governance, indigenous youth pathways) are normative policy proposals that stand independently of the self-cited success claims. The unsupported factual assertion about two-thirds of Hawaiians supporting Mauna Kea science is a correctness/evidence concern, not a circularity concern, and is therefore not scored here.

Assumptions & free parameters 0 free parameters · 5 assumptions · 0 invented entities

The paper contains no free parameters, no quantitative derivation, and no invented entities. It rests on normative and interpretive assumptions about knowledge systems, such as the value and equivalence of indigenous knowledge, which are asserted rather than demonstrated.

assumptions (5)

domain assumption Science is inseparable from the people conducting it.
Opening claim of the Introduction; a normative premise rather than an empirical finding.
domain assumption Indigenous knowledge is a multigenerational, experiential scientific practice with depth and breadth.
Invoked in the Introduction and Conclusion to justify treating indigenous knowledge as a scientific partner.
domain assumption Diverse teams produce higher-quality scientific research.
Cited from Phillips 2014 and Hong and Page 2004; used to justify inclusion as a scientific goal.
domain assumption Oral traditions are scientific references on par with peer-reviewed results.
Recommendation 4 asserts epistemic equivalence; no argument or case study is used to establish it.
domain assumption Dark skies are a human right and space should be held in community trust.
Recommendation 5; a value premise about sky and space governance treated as self-evident.

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Pith. "Pith review of Astro2020 APC White Paper: Collaboration with Integrity: Indigenous Knowledge in 21st Century Astronomy." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/NXN2IEHF

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read the original abstract

As the oldest science common to all human cultures, astronomy has a unique connection to indigenous knowledge (IK) and the long history of indigenous scientific contributions. Many STEM disciplines, agencies and institutions have begun to do the work of recruiting and retaining underrepresented minorities, including indigenous, Native American and Native Hawaiian professionals. However, with the expansion of telescope facilities on sacred tribal or indigenous lands in recent decades, and the current urgency of global crises related to climate, food/water sovereignty and the future of humanity, science and astronomy have the opportunity more than ever to partner with indigenous communities and respect the wealth of sustainable practices and solutions inherently present in IK. We share a number of highly successful current initiatives that point the way to a successful model of "collaboration with integrity" between western and indigenous scholars. Such models deserve serious consideration for sustained funding at local and institutional levels. We also share six key recommendations for funding agencies that we believe will be important first steps for nonindigenous institutions to fully dialog and partner with indigenous communities and IK to build together towards a more inclusive, sustainable and empowering scientific enterprise.

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Works this paper leans on

7 extracted references · 7 canonical work pages

[1]

Creating sufficient resources and funding to promote collaboration, research, and naming/renaming opportunities on telescope sites on indigenous lands, including those funded by NSF, NASA, and the DOE. The power in a name, and in naming, is a belief common to nearly all indigenous peoples worldwide (see, e.g., Thornton 1997), as IK is deeply rooted in the...

work page 1997
[2]

Collaboration with Integrity

Greater funding should be allocated towards collaborative efforts that serve as successful models and roadmaps for how to coherently juxtapose indigenous and nonindigenous science. Such partnerships, many of which are relatively new, have already had very positive results for everyone involved, moving beyond previous sterile isolating approaches and helpi...

work page
[3]

IK embodies the principle that science is inseparable from the people doing it

Indigenous people have always been scientists, and have their own welldeveloped cosmologies integrated into worldviews based on generations of sky observations that have been used to serve their communities and foster wellbeing. IK embodies the principle that science is inseparable from the people doing it. Owing to several factors the necessarily mul...

work page
[4]

Funding agencies can lay the groundwork to recognize oral traditions as scientific references, on par with journal articles or other venues of peerreviewed peerconfirmed scientific results. Oral traditions, like nonindigenous scientific research, are integral systems of knowledge curation which are collaborative, build on previous knowledge and past res...

work page
[5]

Dark skies are a human right, and especially important to the astronomy and cultural practices of indigenous peoples, navigators and wayfinding

Funding agencies can incentivize public and private organizations and institutions, including professional societies, to include the perspectives of indigenous astronomers and scientists in the rapid acceleration of human activity and presence in space. Dark skies are a human right, and especially important to the astronomy and cultural practices of indig...

work page
[6]

We ask the agencies to create a culturallysupported path for full participation of indigenous youth in science careers. This could take a number of forms, including: contributing to the revitalization and inclusion of IK systems in mainstream science through collaboration with integrity (rather than assimilation or appropriation); funding conferences tha...

work page arXiv 2019
[2012]

pioneered by the Indigenous Education Institute, the 'Imiloa Astronomy Center in Hawai'i, and IWISE (Indigenous Worldviews in Informal Science Education) include: Cosmic Serpent (Maryboy, Begay & Peticolas 2012), A Hua He Inoa, Envision 5 MaunaKea, Native Universe, and MaunaKea Scholars. These partnerships serve as 6 7 8 4 https://www.nytimes.com/2019/04...

work page 2012

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Creating sufficient resources and funding to promote collaboration, research, and naming/renaming opportunities on telescope sites on indigenous lands, including those funded by NSF, NASA, and the DOE. The power in a name, and in naming, is a belief common to nearly all indigenous peoples worldwide (see, e.g., Thornton 1997), as IK is deeply rooted in the...

work page 1997

[2] [2]

Collaboration with Integrity

Greater funding should be allocated towards collaborative efforts that serve as successful models and roadmaps for how to coherently juxtapose indigenous and nonindigenous science. Such partnerships, many of which are relatively new, have already had very positive results for everyone involved, moving beyond previous sterile isolating approaches and helpi...

work page

[3] [3]

IK embodies the principle that science is inseparable from the people doing it

Indigenous people have always been scientists, and have their own welldeveloped cosmologies integrated into worldviews based on generations of sky observations that have been used to serve their communities and foster wellbeing. IK embodies the principle that science is inseparable from the people doing it. Owing to several factors the necessarily mul...

work page

[4] [4]

Funding agencies can lay the groundwork to recognize oral traditions as scientific references, on par with journal articles or other venues of peerreviewed peerconfirmed scientific results. Oral traditions, like nonindigenous scientific research, are integral systems of knowledge curation which are collaborative, build on previous knowledge and past res...

work page

[5] [5]

Dark skies are a human right, and especially important to the astronomy and cultural practices of indigenous peoples, navigators and wayfinding

Funding agencies can incentivize public and private organizations and institutions, including professional societies, to include the perspectives of indigenous astronomers and scientists in the rapid acceleration of human activity and presence in space. Dark skies are a human right, and especially important to the astronomy and cultural practices of indig...

work page

[6] [6]

We ask the agencies to create a culturallysupported path for full participation of indigenous youth in science careers. This could take a number of forms, including: contributing to the revitalization and inclusion of IK systems in mainstream science through collaboration with integrity (rather than assimilation or appropriation); funding conferences tha...

work page arXiv 2019

[7] [2012]

pioneered by the Indigenous Education Institute, the 'Imiloa Astronomy Center in Hawai'i, and IWISE (Indigenous Worldviews in Informal Science Education) include: Cosmic Serpent (Maryboy, Begay & Peticolas 2012), A Hua He Inoa, Envision 5 MaunaKea, Native Universe, and MaunaKea Scholars. These partnerships serve as 6 7 8 4 https://www.nytimes.com/2019/04...

work page 2012