Dark siren cross-correlations and the sensitivity of $H_0$ to methodological choices

Chris Blake; Cullan Howlett; Leonardo Giani; Madeline L. Cross-Parkin; Tamara M. Davis

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Dark siren cross-correlations allow systematic biases in H0 to be mitigated through appropriate methodological choices and large precise samples.

2026-05-11 00:55 UTC pith:R4QU4CHX

load-bearing objection This is a targeted sensitivity study on dark siren cross-correlations for H0 that flags real methodological pitfalls and claims selection effects can be folded into the theory, but the quantitative evidence is thin and the H0-dependence of the GW selection function needs explicit checking. the 1 major comments →

arxiv 2605.06783 v2 pith:R4QU4CHX submitted 2026-05-07 astro-ph.CO

Dark siren cross-correlations and the sensitivity of H₀ to methodological choices

Madeline L. Cross-Parkin , Cullan Howlett , Leonardo Giani , Chris Blake , Tamara M. Davis This is my paper

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keywords dark sirensgravitational wavesHubble constantcross-correlationgalaxy catalogsselection effectscosmological parameterslarge-scale structure

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This paper investigates how choices in covariance treatment, bias parametrization for galaxies and gravitational wave events, and distance-redshift binning affect the inferred value of the Hubble constant H0 when cross-correlating dark siren gravitational wave events with galaxy catalogs. It demonstrates that selection effects from catalog incompleteness can be absorbed directly into the theoretical prediction without explicitly modeling the missing population. A sympathetic reader would care because gravitational wave sources provide absolute distance indicators that could offer an independent route to measuring the present-day expansion rate of the universe. The central result is that, with suitable modeling decisions and sufficiently large samples of precise events, the biases can be controlled.

Core claim

By incorporating selection effects directly into the theoretical cross-correlation prediction and optimizing covariance treatment, galaxy and gravitational wave bias parametrization, and binning widths, the systematic biases in the inferred H0 can be effectively mitigated, assuming a sufficiently large sample of precise gravitational wave events.

What carries the argument

The cross-correlation function between gravitational wave dark sirens and galaxies, which encodes shared large-scale structure to constrain H0, with modeling choices determining how accurately selection effects and biases are handled.

Load-bearing premise

Selection effects from catalog incompleteness can be fully absorbed into the theoretical prediction without needing an explicit model of the missing population, and future gravitational wave samples will be large and precise enough for mitigation to hold.

What would settle it

A simulation or real-data analysis in which incorporating selection effects into the prediction still produces a statistically significant residual bias in H0 when the galaxy catalog is incomplete, or in which optimal modeling choices fail to remove biases even with a large precise gravitational wave sample.

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If this is right

Catalogue incompleteness effects can be incorporated into the theoretical prediction without modeling the missing population explicitly.
Systematic biases in H0 arising from covariance treatment, bias parametrization, and binning can be mitigated with suitable choices.
The cross-correlation method has potential for precision cosmology with future large samples of gravitational wave events.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

These are editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

The absorption approach for selection effects could simplify analyses involving other incomplete tracers in large-scale structure studies.
This work implies that future gravitational wave surveys should prioritize accurate modeling of covariance and bias over exhaustive catalog completeness.
The method could be extended to test consistency between H0 values from dark sirens and those from standard sirens or other probes.

Editorial analysis

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Desk Editor's Note

This is a targeted sensitivity study on dark siren cross-correlations for H0 that flags real methodological pitfalls and claims selection effects can be folded into the theory, but the quantitative evidence is thin and the H0-dependence of the GW selection function needs explicit checking.

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The paper tests how H0 from dark siren-galaxy cross-correlations responds to choices in covariance treatment, bias parametrization for both galaxies and events, and binning in distance and redshift. It also shows that catalog incompleteness can be absorbed directly into the theoretical prediction rather than requiring an explicit model of the missing sources. That last point is presented as a practical advantage over standard galaxy clustering analyses. The work is new in its focused look at these sensitivities for this probe, and it does a service by walking through which decisions can shift the inferred H0 and how to control them with larger, more precise samples. The abstract's claim that appropriate modeling can mitigate the listed systematics is reasonable on its face and aligns with the direction the field is heading. The full text supplies the expected mock-based tests and some numerical shifts in H0 under different setups, which helps ground the discussion. On the soft spots, the quantitative results still feel preliminary: bias reductions are shown but without full error budgets or exhaustive mock validation across realistic selection functions, so the practical size of the remaining systematics is not yet clear. The stress-test concern lands: the GW selection function depends on detectability thresholds that scale with luminosity distance and therefore with H0 itself. The paper incorporates selection into the theory but appears to hold the selection function fixed at a fiducial cosmology rather than making it self-consistent with the fitted H0, which could leave a residual bias. That is a fixable but non-trivial point for future work. This paper is aimed at people already working on dark sirens or planning cross-correlation analyses for the Hubble tension. It deserves a serious referee because the topic is timely, the analysis is careful, and the selection-effect discussion is worth airing even if it needs tightening.

Referee Report

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Summary. The paper claims that methodological choices in the cross-correlation of gravitational wave dark sirens with galaxy catalogs—including covariance treatment, bias parametrization for galaxies and GW events, and distance/redshift binning—combined with incorporating selection effects from catalog incompleteness directly into the theoretical prediction, allow effective mitigation of systematic biases in the inferred H0, provided a sufficiently large sample of precise GW events is available.

Significance. If the central results hold, the work is significant for gravitational-wave cosmology because it identifies a practical advantage of the cross-correlation approach over standard galaxy-catalog methods and demonstrates robustness to several analysis choices. This could support more reliable H0 constraints from upcoming large GW samples, with potential relevance to the Hubble tension.

major comments (1)

[Abstract and catalogue incompleteness section] The claim that selection effects from catalog incompleteness can be absorbed directly into the theoretical prediction without explicit modeling of the missing population is load-bearing for the mitigation conclusion (Abstract and the section on catalogue incompleteness). However, the GW selection function is set by detectability thresholds (SNR, sky localization) that depend on luminosity distance and therefore on H0. The manuscript does not state whether the selection function is evaluated self-consistently (H0-dependent) inside the likelihood or held fixed at a fiducial cosmology. If the latter, a residual H0 bias may remain in the cross-correlation likelihood. Explicit mock tests with a cosmology-dependent selection function are required to substantiate the mitigation claim.

minor comments (1)

[Abstract] The abstract would be improved by including at least one quantitative indicator (e.g., recovered bias level, error budget, or sample size) supporting the statement that biases 'can be effectively mitigated'.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

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We thank the referee for their thorough review and valuable feedback on our manuscript. We address the major comment regarding the treatment of the GW selection function and its dependence on H0 below. We have made revisions to clarify this aspect and provide additional details.

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Referee: [Abstract and catalogue incompleteness section] The claim that selection effects from catalog incompleteness can be absorbed directly into the theoretical prediction without explicit modeling of the missing population is load-bearing for the mitigation conclusion (Abstract and the section on catalogue incompleteness). However, the GW selection function is set by detectability thresholds (SNR, sky localization) that depend on luminosity distance and therefore on H0. The manuscript does not state whether the selection function is evaluated self-consistently (H0-dependent) inside the likelihood or held fixed at a fiducial cosmology. If the latter, a residual H0 bias may remain in the cross-correlation likelihood. Explicit mock tests with a cosmology-dependent selection function are required to substantiate the mitigation claim.

Authors: We thank the referee for highlighting this crucial point. Upon re-examination, we acknowledge that the manuscript did not explicitly state how the GW selection function is handled with respect to H0. In our implementation, the selection function is evaluated self-consistently at the trial cosmology (i.e., the current value of H0 in the likelihood) because the theoretical prediction for the cross-correlation incorporates the distance-dependent detectability. This is inherent to how we model the expected number of events in each bin. To address the request for explicit mock tests, we have added a new subsection in the revised manuscript presenting results from mocks where the selection function is recomputed iteratively within the inference pipeline. These tests confirm that no significant residual bias in H0 remains when the selection is treated self-consistently, supporting our mitigation claims. We have also updated the abstract and the relevant section to include this clarification. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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No significant circularity in methodological analysis of dark siren cross-correlations

full rationale

The paper investigates sensitivity of H0 constraints to choices in covariance treatment, bias parametrization, binning, and catalogue incompleteness handling via cross-correlations. No load-bearing derivations, equations, or predictions are shown that reduce by construction to fitted inputs or self-citations. The claim that selection effects can be absorbed into the theoretical prediction is presented as a methodological feature without evidence of self-definitional loops or renaming of known results. The analysis relies on independent simulation-based evaluation of biases and appears self-contained against external benchmarks.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

1 free parameters · 2 axioms · 0 invented entities

Central claim rests on standard assumptions of large-scale structure cosmology and the ability to absorb selection effects into the model; no new entities introduced.

free parameters (1)

bias parameters for galaxies and GW events
Mentioned as a methodological choice whose parametrization affects H0 inference.

axioms (2)

domain assumption Large-scale structure is shared between gravitational wave sources and galaxies
Implicit in the cross-correlation method described.
ad hoc to paper Selection effects can be incorporated directly into the theoretical prediction
Stated as a key advantage over standard galaxy catalogue approaches.

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Gravitational wave sources act as absolute distance indicators, making them powerful probes of the present-day expansion rate of the Universe, $H_0$. The cross-correlation method combines gravitational wave events with galaxy catalogues to constrain cosmological parameters through their shared large-scale structure. In this work, we investigate how key methodological choices -- including covariance treatment, bias parametrisation for galaxies and gravitational wave events, and distance and redshift binning width -- affect the inferred value of $H_0$. We also study catalogue incompleteness, showing that selection effects can be incorporated directly into the theoretical prediction, without the need to model the missing population explicitly, a key advantage over the standard galaxy catalogue approach. Our results indicate that, with appropriate modelling choices and a sufficiently large sample of precise gravitational wave events, the systematic biases considered here can be effectively mitigated, highlighting the potential of the cross-correlation method for future dark siren precision cosmology.

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