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On the hardness of cloning and connections to representation theory
T0 review · 4 major / 4 minor · reviewed 2026-08-12 · deepseek-v4-flash
Pith's one-line read This note shows that, assuming an unproven conjecture about cloning hidden maximally entangled states, efficient witness cloning would put NP inside BQP.
desk verdict Honest, well-scoped note: the Kronecker-based state-generation hardness is solid, but the headline cloning theorem is conditional on a believable yet unproven conjecture, and there's a likely typo in the phase-estimation formula that needs fixing. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The load-bearing object is the weak Fourier sampling projector $\Xi_\lambda^{(\rho)} = \frac{d_\lambda}{|G|}\sum_{g\in G} \chi_\lambda(g)^* \rho(g)$, which projects onto the $\lambda$-isotypic component of a representation $\rho$. For $\rho = \rho_\mu \otimes \rho_\nu$ of $S_n$, its nonzero-ness coincides with positivity of the Kronecker coefficient $a_{\mu\nu\lambda}$, and the paper adds an 'internal state testing' step that forces the accepted state to be a maximally entangled state across each block. Together these tests produce a verification circuit whose unique accepting state is the hidden maximally entangled state $|\Phi_\Pi\rangle$ whenever $a_{\mu\nu\lambda}=1$. This is the mechanism that converts NP-hardness of Kronecker coefficients into a candidate hard-to-clone family.
What would settle it
Find an efficient quantum circuit that clones the specific hidden maximally entangled states $|\Phi_\Pi\rangle$ constructed in the paper while provably failing to generate any state in $\Pi$; such a circuit would falsify Conjecture 2 and remove the main theorem's premise.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
The central discovery is a reduction from witness cloning to state generation over hidden subspaces, routed through representation theory. For the symmetric group $S_n$, the weak Fourier sampling projector $\Xi_\lambda$ associated with the representation $\rho_\mu \otimes \rho_\nu$ has dimension $a_{\mu\nu\lambda} d_\lambda$, and it is nonzero exactly when the Kronecker coefficient $a_{\mu\nu\lambda}$ is positive. Because deciding positivity is NP-hard, the subspace is hidden, and the state $|\Phi_\Pi\rangle$ defined as the maximally entangled state over $\Pi$ is the unique state accepted by the constructed $(\mu\otimes\nu,\lambda)$-verification algorithm when $a_{\mu\nu\lambda}=1$. Theorem 8 states that, assuming Conjecture 2 and BQP ⊉ NP, no efficient algorithm clones these states; otherwise an efficient cloner would yield a circuit generating a state in $\Pi$, hence a BQP algorithm for UNIQUE-NP, and by Valiant–Vazirani, BQP ⊇ NP.
Load-bearing premise
The load-bearing premise is Conjecture 2: if an efficient cloner exists for a hidden maximally entangled state uniquely accepted by a verification circuit, then an efficient circuit exists for generating a state in the support of the hidden subspace; the paper gives intuition but no rigorous derivation, and notes that no black-box proof can exist.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- If the main theorem holds, an efficient cloner for the constructed family would put NP inside BQP, so witness cloning is at least as hard as deciding NP under the stated assumptions.
- The verification circuits for $a_{\mu\nu\lambda}=1$ have completeness 1 and soundness $\le 8/9$, making them valid verifiers whose unique witnesses are hidden maximally entangled states.
- A proof of Conjecture 2 cannot be a black-box reduction; any successful proof must exploit the circuit description of the verifier.
- The result reduces the hardness of witness cloning to the hardness of generating states in hidden subspaces, narrowing the problem to a single structural conjecture.
- For the family with $a_{\mu\nu\lambda}=1$, state generation is already impossible under BQP ⊉ NP (Corollary 7), and the new result extends this to cloning.
Reading between the lines
- If Conjecture 2 holds, this construction yields the first worst-case complexity-theoretic evidence that witness cloning is hard, complementing existing average-case cryptographic and oracle results.
- The template generalizes: any family of projectors whose positivity is NP-hard and whose accepting states are maximally entangled over hidden subspaces would give the same cloning-hardness reduction.
- A natural testable extension is to compute small Kronecker coefficient instances and search for explicit cloning circuits for the associated $|\Phi_\Pi\rangle$; a successful cloner that does not reveal a state in $\Pi$ would falsify Conjecture 2.
- If average-case hardness of Kronecker coefficients were ever established, the same measurement over $|\Phi_+\rangle$ could be turned into a quantum lightning construction, as the paper notes as a possibility.
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Editorial analysis
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Referee Report
Summary. The paper studies the computational hardness of cloning witnesses for quantum verification circuits. It constructs a family of verification algorithms based on weak Fourier sampling for representations of the symmetric group, whose accepting states are maximally entangled states over hidden subspaces associated with Kronecker coefficients. The main result, Theorem 8, shows that, assuming an unproven conjecture (Conjecture 2) about cloning such hidden maximally entangled states and assuming BQP ⊉ NP, no efficient quantum algorithm can clone the witnesses of these verification circuits when the relevant Kronecker coefficient equals 1. The paper also proves conditional hardness of state generation for this family, connecting to NP-hardness of Kronecker coefficient positivity.
Significance. If the technical gaps are repaired, the paper would provide a novel complexity-theoretic reduction: hardness of witness cloning follows from a concrete conjecture about maximally entangled states over hidden subspaces, rather than from cryptographic assumptions or oracles. The connection between quantum state complexity and representation-theoretic multiplicities is interesting, and the verification construction via weak Fourier sampling is elegant. The paper is commendably transparent about the unproven Conjecture 2 and the non-relativizing barrier from [NZ24]. However, the correctness of the verification analysis currently has gaps, and the main theorem remains conditional, so the impact is contingent on both the conjecture and the repair of the technical arguments.
major comments (4)
- [§5.2, Eq. (30)] The acceptance probability for the 1-bit phase estimation circuit is stated as 1/2 + 1/2 |⟨ψ|V|ψ⟩|², but the standard formula for the circuit described (ancilla in |0⟩, Hadamard, controlled-V, Hadamard, measure) is 1/2 + 1/2 Re⟨ψ|V|ψ⟩. Since V is unitary and not necessarily Hermitian, the two formulas differ. Lemma 4's proof uses Eq. (30) to translate the acceptance probability into a bound on 1−|⟨B,E(B)⟩|²; with the correct formula the bound would be on 1−Re⟨B,E(B)⟩. Because E is an orthogonal projection under the Hilbert–Schmidt inner product, Re⟨B,E(B)⟩ = ⟨B,E(B)⟩ = ‖E(B)‖² ≥ 0, so the qualitative closeness conclusion can likely be recovered, but the proof as written is incorrect and needs to be revised.
- [§6.2, Theorem 8 proof] The proof asserts that the (μ⊗ν,λ)-verification algorithm has completeness 1 and soundness ≤ 8/9, citing Corollary 5. Corollary 5 is a closeness statement saying that states passing with probability 1−ε are close to the accepting subspace; it does not by itself yield the spectral gap required by Definition 1 for soundness 8/9. The authors need to derive an explicit upper bound on the acceptance probability of states orthogonal to the accepting subspace, accounting for the rejection in the weak Fourier sampling step and the internal state test. The constant 8/9 is used in Conjecture 2, so this is load-bearing.
- [§6.1, Theorem 6 and §5.2, Corollary 5] The claim that the accepting subspace has dimension exactly a_{μνλ} is inconsistent with the characterization in Lemma 4 and Corollary 5, where the accepting states are of the form |E⟩⊗|Φ+⟩ with |E⟩ ∈ C^{a²}, giving dimension a². For a=1 the two statements agree, so Theorem 8's uniqueness may be unaffected, but Theorem 6's dimension statement is incorrect as written. Please correct the dimension and the definition of D_λ in Eq. (12), which currently spans only the diagonal block states.
- [§6.1, Theorem 6 and Corollary 7 proof] The statement that deciding whether a_{μνλ} is 0 or 1 (promised one of the two) is UNIQUE−NP-hard is used for the Valiant–Vazirani reduction in the proofs of Corollary 7 and Theorem 8, but no proof or reference is given. The cited NP-hardness of positivity [IMW17] does not automatically yield hardness of the promise problem; a parsimonious reduction or a separate argument is needed. Please provide a reference or proof.
minor comments (4)
- [Abstract and §1] The phrase 'BQP does not equal QMA' is used in the abstract and introduction, but the paper's actual assumption is BQP ⊉ NP; these are not equivalent statements, and the wording should be aligned with the formal results.
- [§5.2, Eq. (12)] The definition of D_λ as the span of the block-wise maximally entangled states and its stated dimension a_{ρ→λ} are inconsistent with Lemma 4, which allows arbitrary superposition of blocks. Please align the notation and clarify what subspace is actually characterized.
- [Footnote 1] The footnote text appears incomplete in the manuscript ('one.sup'); please provide the full sentence.
- [Appendix B, proof of Fact 1] The circuit diagram in the proof of Fact 1 is difficult to parse; please redraw it for clarity.
Circularity Check
No circularity: the central hardness claim is a transparent conditional on an explicitly unproven conjecture, and the reductions rest on external NP-hardness results rather than on assumptions equivalent to the conclusion.
full rationale
The paper's main theorem (Theorem 8) is conditional: it assumes Conjecture 2 and BQP not superset NP and derives the absence of an efficient witness cloner. Conjecture 2 is not derived from the target conclusion, nor is it assumed in a form that already contains the conclusion; it is explicitly labeled a conjecture, and Section 7.1 describes the work as 'unfinished', stating 'we were unable to make any of them rigorous' and citing Nehoran and Zhandry [NZ24] to show that no black-box proof is possible. A conditional result with an unproven but clearly stated antecedent is a limitation or open problem, not circularity. The hardness-of-generation step (Theorem 6 and Corollary 7) uses the external NP-hardness of deciding positivity of Kronecker coefficients [IMW17] and the Valiant-Vazirani reduction [VV86]; the internal characterization (Corollary 5) is proven from Schur's lemma and Lemma 4, whose proof is given in Appendix B with no appeal to the no-cloning conclusion. No parameter is fitted, and no quantity called a prediction is fixed from the data it is said to predict. The self-citations ([BCG+24] for the #BQP containment of Kronecker coefficients and [LH24] for an implementation technique) are used as published ingredients, and the relevant weak Fourier sampling measurement is also proven in the appendix; they do not carry the weight of the conditional conclusion. A separate correctness concern is the nonstandard phase-estimation acceptance formula used around Eq. (30), but that would be a repairability issue, not circularity. Accordingly, no circular step is exhibited by the paper's own equations, and the appropriate finding is no significant circularity.
Assumptions & free parameters
assumptions (6)
- domain assumption BQP ⊉ NP
- ad hoc to paper Conjecture 2
- standard math NP-hardness of deciding positivity of Kronecker coefficients [IMW17]
- standard math Efficient quantum Fourier transform over the symmetric group [Bea97]
- standard math Valiant-Vazirani randomized reduction from NP to UNIQUE-NP [VV86]
- standard math Schur's lemma and Young-Yamanouchi representation matrices [Jam84]
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read the original abstract
The states accepted by a quantum circuit are known as the witnesses for the quantum circuit's satisfiability. The assumption BQP does not equal QMA implies that no efficient algorithm exists for constructing a witness for a quantum circuit from the circuit's classical description. However, a similar complexity-theoretic lower bound on the computational hardness of cloning a witness is not known. In this note, we derive a conjecture about cloning algorithms for maximally entangled states over hidden subspaces which would imply that no efficient algorithm exists for cloning witnesses (assuming BQP does not contain NP). The conjecture and result follow from connections between quantum computation and representation theory; specifically, the relationship between quantum state complexity and the complexity of computing Kronecker coefficients.
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