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Controlled Stark shifts in Er$^{3+}$-doped crystalline and amorphous waveguides for quantum state storage

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Pith's one-line read Measured Stark coefficients of 25 ± 1 and 15 ± 1 kHz/Vcm^-1 in two erbium-doped waveguides confirm the waveguides can support quantum-state storage through controlled reversible inhomogeneous broadening.

desk verdict First Stark coefficients in Er:LiNbO3 waveguides are a solid, direct result; the fiber number is model-dependent and the abstract should say so, but the paper deserves a serious referee. read the letter →

arxiv quant-ph/0603194 v2 pith:EMZOCDTS submitted 2006-03-22 quant-ph

Sara R. Hastings-Simon , Matthias U. Staudt , Mikael Afzelius , Pascal Baldi , Didier Jaccard , Wolfgang Tittel , Nicolas Gisin This is my paper · ORCID
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The reading

The paper asks whether erbium-doped waveguides can serve as the active medium for a solid-state quantum memory based on controlled reversible inhomogeneous broadening (CRIB). The central requirement is that an applied electric field can shift or broaden a narrow spectral absorption line in a controlled and reversible way. By burning spectral holes at cryogenic temperatures, the authors measure the linear DC Stark effect in a crystalline LiNbO3 waveguide and in a silicate optical fiber, obtaining effective Stark coefficients of $(\Delta\mu_e\chi)/h = 25 \pm 1\ \mathrm{kHz/V\,cm^{-1}}$ and $(\Delta\mu_e\chi)/h = 15 \pm 1\ \mathrm{kHz/V\,cm^{-1}}$. Because erbium's 1.5 $\mu$m transition matches telecom fiber and waveguides offer long interaction lengths, the results point toward a practical interface between quantum memories and fiber networks.

What carries the argument

The central object is the linear DC Stark shift formula $\Delta\omega = (\Delta\mu_e \chi E / \hbar)\cos\theta$, where $\Delta\mu_e$ is the difference in permanent dipole moments between the two states, $\chi = (\epsilon + 2)/3$ is the Lorentz local-field correction, and $\theta$ is the angle between the dipole-moment difference and the applied field. Spectral hole burning isolates a narrow ensemble of ions so that the field-induced frequency change can be read directly. In the crystal, the LiNbO3 lattice fixes a single dipole direction, so the hole shifts; in the fiber, random orientations and a Maxwell distribution of dipole-difference magnitudes lead to the hole-shape function fitted to the data, from which the effective coefficient is extracted.

What would settle it

Measure the spectral hole in the same silicate fiber at applied fields well beyond 400 V/mm and check whether the broadening parameter extracted from the fitted hole shape scales linearly with field through the origin and whether the hole width returns exactly to its zero-field value after each field cycle; any systematic departure would falsify the $15 \pm 1\ \mathrm{kHz/V\,cm^{-1}}$ coefficient as extracted.

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Extended reading notes

Core claim

The discovery is that both a crystalline and an amorphous erbium-doped waveguide exhibit a usable, reversible linear Stark effect on the $^{4}I_{15/2} \to {}^{4}I_{13/2}$ transition. In the LiNbO3 waveguide, an applied field along the C3 axis shifts the spectral hole as a whole; the slope of shift versus field gives $(\Delta\mu_e\chi)/h = 25 \pm 1\ \mathrm{kHz/V\,cm^{-1}}$, and the hole returns to its original position when the field is off. In the silicate fiber, where dipole orientations are random, the applied field broadens the hole according to the Maxwell-distribution and hole-shape model of Ref. [20]; fitting that model yields $(\Delta\mu_e\chi)/h = 15 \pm 1\ \mathrm{kHz/V\,cm^{-1}}$, and the hole width returns to its zero-field value when the field is removed. The paper concludes that these coefficients are sufficient to generate the roughly 100 MHz bandwidth needed for storing 10 ns pulses: a position-dependent field of about $\pm 2\ \mathrm{kV/cm}$ across the crystal, or a homogeneous field of about $3.5\ \mathrm{kV/cm}$ in the fiber, would produce the required controlled reversible inhomogeneous broadening.

Load-bearing premise

The fiber value stands on the assumption that the erbium ions' dipole-moment differences are randomly oriented and follow the Maxwell magnitude distribution used to fit the hole shapes; if that distributional model is wrong for this particular silicate glass, the quoted $15 \pm 1\ \mathrm{kHz/V\,cm^{-1}}$ would be systematically biased.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • A CRIB quantum memory using a 6 mm LiNbO3 waveguide would require an applied field profile of roughly ±2 kV/cm across the crystal to encode the ~100 MHz bandwidth of 10 ns optical pulses.
  • In the silicate fiber, a homogeneous field of about 3.5 kV/cm would produce the same controlled broadening, and the measured reversibility shows the broadening can be undone.
  • Because the relevant erbium transition sits at 1.5 μm, a working memory of this type could connect directly to standard telecom fiber without wavelength conversion.
  • The measured coefficients imply field strengths of a few kV/cm are sufficient, which is within the range achievable in compact electrode geometries.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • If the Maxwell-distribution model holds in this fiber, the same hole-shape fitting procedure should transfer to other rare-earth-doped amorphous waveguides, making it a general probe of Stark coefficients in glasses.
  • The crystal's single dipole direction, a consequence of the non-centrosymmetric LiNbO3 structure, means a CRIB memory in this material can use a pure line shift rather than the pseudo-Stark splitting seen in centrosymmetric hosts, simplifying the required field geometry.
  • One could test the model dependence of the fiber coefficient by measuring the hole broadening at much higher fields or at different angles between the field and the fiber axis; a systematic shape deviation would indicate a different dipole-moment distribution and a possibly corrected coefficient.
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Referee Report

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Summary. The paper reports low-temperature spectral hole burning measurements of the linear DC Stark effect on the Er$^{3+}$ $^4$I$_{15/2}\to{}^4$I$_{13/2}$ transition in two waveguide geometries: a proton-exchanged LiNbO$_3$ crystalline waveguide and a silicate optical fiber. In the crystal, the applied field shifts the spectral hole as a whole, and a linear fit gives an effective Stark coefficient $(\Delta\mu_e\chi)/h = 25\pm1$ kHz/Vcm$^{-1}$. In the fiber, the randomly oriented dipole moments are expected to broaden the hole; the field-dependent hole shapes are fitted to the model of Bogner et al. and Kador et al., Eqs. (2)--(3), and the extracted Stark coefficient is $(\bar{\Delta\mu_e}\chi)/h = 15\pm1$ kHz/Vcm$^{-1}$. Reversibility checks are reported for both samples. The authors argue that the measured coefficients and demonstrated reversibility establish the suitability of Er$^{3+}$-doped waveguides for quantum state storage via controlled reversible inhomogeneous broadening, and they estimate the fields needed for a 100 MHz broadening in each system.

Significance. If the results hold, this is one of the first demonstrations of controlled Stark shifts in rare-earth-doped waveguides and provides quantitative input for CRIB-based quantum memory proposals. The crystalline waveguide result is robust: the hole shift is directly observed, the dependence on electric field is linear, the fit passes through the origin, and positive and negative voltages give opposite shifts that return when the field is switched off. The fiber result is a valuable qualitative demonstration that Stark broadening in an amorphous waveguide is reversible, but its quantitative value is less direct. The paper also benefits from explicit reversibility measurements, linear fits with reported uncertainties, and the use of a previously published functional form for the hole shape. The main weakness is that the fiber coefficient is extracted under distributional assumptions from Refs. [19,20] that are not independently validated for Er$^{3+}$ in this specific silicate host, so the quoted $15\pm1$ kHz/Vcm$^{-1}$ should be understood as model-dependent unless further evidence is supplied.

major comments (2)
  1. [Fiber sample, Eq. (3) and Fig. 2] The fiber Stark coefficient is obtained by fitting the field-broadened hole shapes to Eq. (3), which incorporates three untested assumptions from Refs. [19,20]: random orientation of the dipole moments, a Maxwell distribution of $|\Delta\mu_e|$ given by Eq. (2), and a Lorentzian zero-field hole of width $\gamma$. Because the fit parameter $f$ in Eq. (4) scales linearly with the assumed dipole-moment magnitude, other plausible distributions (for example, fixed $|\Delta\mu_e|$ with random orientation, or a Gaussian magnitude distribution) can produce smooth, qualitatively similar broadened holes while yielding a different conversion from applied field to frequency shift. The stated $\pm1$ kHz/Vcm$^{-1}$ therefore reflects only within-model fit scatter, not model uncertainty. Since the paper uses this coefficient to estimate the 3.5 kV/cm field needed for CRIB, the quantitative fiber claim needs either independent validation of the distribution in this host, a residual or alternative-model comparison, or an explicit statement that the fiber coefficient is model-dependent.
  2. [Eq. (4) and Fig. 2(b)] The quantity plotted as $f$ in Fig. 2(b) is labeled in arbitrary units, whereas Eq. (4) defines $f = \Delta\mu_e\chi E/(\hbar\gamma)$ with physical units. The manuscript should state precisely how the fitted dimensionless parameter is normalized by $\gamma$ and how the slope in Fig. 2(b) is converted to $(\bar{\Delta\mu_e}\chi)/h = 15\pm1$ kHz/Vcm$^{-1}$. Without this conversion, the reported fiber coefficient is not independently checkable from the data shown.
minor comments (5)
  1. [Abstract and Eq. (2)] The abstract uses $(\bar{\Delta\mu_e}\chi)/h$ for the fiber value, while the text and Fig. 2 use $\Delta\mu_e$; the averaging should be defined consistently or the overbar notation should be used throughout the fiber analysis.
  2. [Fig. 2(a)] The statement that the fits to Eq. (3) show 'close agreement' would be substantiated by showing residuals or reporting a goodness-of-fit metric; the current figure shows only the overplotted fits and data.
  3. [Fiber reversibility inset, Fig. 2(b)] The inset reports that the hole width returns to its initial value after the field is switched off, but no error bars or repetition counts are given; providing them would strengthen the reversibility claim.
  4. [Eq. (2) typography] Equation (2) as typeset appears to have the Maxwell distribution written incorrectly: the prefactor should be proportional to $(\Delta\mu_e)^2/(\bar{\Delta\mu_e})^3$, not $(\bar{\Delta\mu_e})^3(\Delta\mu_e)^2$; please correct the formula.
  5. [References and grammar] Ref. [22] is listed but does not appear to be cited in the text, and there are small grammatical errors such as 'A original proposal' and 'an monochromatic laser'; these should be corrected.

Circularity Check

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No significant circularity: the Stark coefficients are measured from field-dependent hole shifts, with model assumptions from external prior work that do not predetermine the fitted values.

full rationale

The paper's central results are two measured effective Stark coefficients. In the crystalline waveguide, the coefficient is obtained directly from the slope of the measured spectral-hole frequency shift versus applied electric field, using Eq. (1) as a definition of the linear Stark shift. In the fiber, the coefficient is obtained by fitting the field-broadened hole shapes to Eq. (3), whose functional form comes from prior work by Bogner et al. [19] and Kador et al. [20]. Those assumptions—random dipole orientation and a Maxwell distribution of dipole-moment magnitudes—are external to this paper and do not contain the fitted values of (Delta mu_e chi)/h. The fitted parameter f is then plotted against field, and its slope yields the coefficient; this is a standard parameter extraction, not a prediction of a quantity already built into the model. The wording 'predicted and observed hole shapes' is loose because the lines in Fig. 2(a) are fits, but this does not make the derived coefficient circular. No load-bearing self-citation is present: refs. [5-7] provide context and coherence-time claims, but the measured Stark coefficients do not reduce to those citations. The fiber result is model-dependent and could be biased if the assumed dipole-moment distribution is wrong for this host, but that is a correctness-risk concern, not a circularity concern. The paper is self-contained against external benchmarks for the claim it actually makes: the observation of reversible Stark shifts and extraction of effective coefficients.

Assumptions & free parameters 2 free parameters · 4 assumptions · 0 invented entities

The central claims are measured values obtained by linear fits to spectral hole shifts. The model functions and distributional assumptions come from prior literature ([19], [20]) and are not derived in this paper; they are the main external input. No new physical entities are proposed.

free parameters (2)
  • Effective Stark coefficient (Δμ_eχ)/h in LiNbO3 waveguide = 25 ± 1 kHz/Vcm^-1
    Linear slope of spectral hole shift vs applied electric field (Fig. 1); this is the central reported result.
  • Effective Stark coefficient (Δμ_eχ)/h in silicate fiber = 15 ± 1 kHz/Vcm^-1
    Linear slope of fitted f values vs applied electric field (Fig. 2b); central reported result.
assumptions (4)
  • domain assumption Lorentz local field correction χ=(ε+2)/3 applies to the rare-earth sites in both hosts.
    Equation (1) includes this factor; the paper does not derive it for these materials, and any deviation would change the extracted dipole moment values.
  • domain assumption In the amorphous fiber, dipole moments are randomly oriented and their magnitudes follow a Maxwell distribution.
    Adopted from Bogner et al. [19], stated in the text before Eq. (2); used to fit the field-dependent hole shapes in Fig. 2a.
  • domain assumption In the LiNbO3 waveguide, all erbium ions have a single dipole moment direction aligned with the C3 axis.
    Based on lack of inversion symmetry in the crystal; if there are multiple inequivalent sites, the single-shift fit could average over them.
  • domain assumption The applied electric field across the samples is uniform and equal to the applied voltage divided by the electrode spacing.
    Used to convert electrode voltage to electric field; in the coiled fiber, the field distribution may not be perfectly uniform, which would introduce a systematic error.

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abstract

We present measurements of the linear Stark effect on the $^{4}$I$_{15/2} \to$ $^{4}$I$_{13/2}$ transition in an Er$^{3+}$-doped proton-exchanged LiNbO$_{3}$ crystalline waveguide and an Er$^{3+}$-doped silicate fiber. The measurements were made using spectral hole burning techniques at temperatures below 4 K. We measured an effective Stark coefficient $(\Delta\mu_{e}\chi)/(h)=25\pm1$kHz/Vcm$^{-1}$ in the crystalline waveguide and $(\bar{\Delta\mu_{e}}\chi)/(h)=15\pm1$kHz/Vcm$^{-1}$ in the silicate fiber. These results confirm the potential of Erbium doped waveguides for quantum state storage based on controlled reversible inhomogeneous broadening.

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