REVIEW 4 major objections 6 minor 21 references
Regularized Multi-LLMs Collaboration for Enhanced Score-based Causal Discovery
T0 review · 4 major / 6 minor · reviewed 2026-08-12 · deepseek-v4-flash
Pith's one-line read The paper's central claim: a BIC-weighted penalty from several LLM-proposed causal graphs improves score-based causal discovery on benchmark datasets.
desk verdict A modest multi-LLM penalty idea whose own experiments undercut the 'improvements across all datasets' claim. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The load-bearing mechanism is the penalty term itself. Each LLM is prompted with a three-stage protocol—variable understanding, causal statement, self-revision—to produce an adjacency matrix $\hat{M}_m$. A quality weight $\mu_m$ is computed by evaluating the BIC score of $\hat{M}_m$ on the same dataset and normalizing the scores so they sum to one. The penalty $\lambda\sum_m \mu_m\|\hat{M}-\hat{M}_m\|_p$ is then added to the base score, with $\lambda$ expressing confidence in the LLM advice; decomposability of the $l_1$ form and differentiability of the $l_2$ form are what let existing search and optimization routines run unchanged.
What would settle it
On a dataset with known ground truth, compute each LLM's BIC-derived weight $\mu_m$ and its edge-level accuracy; if the most accurate LLM is not the highest-weighted one, or if re-fitting $\lambda$ by data-only validation removes the reported gains, the penalty is not carrying the causal knowledge.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
The paper's central claim is that adding a weighted penalty built from several LLM-proposed causal graphs to an existing score function improves score-based causal discovery. The augmented objective is $S(G)=S_{\mathrm{score}}(G)+\lambda\sum_m \mu_m\|\hat{M}-\hat{M}_m\|_p$, where $\hat{M}_m$ is the adjacency matrix proposed by LLM $m$, $\mu_m$ is that proposal's normalized BIC score on the observed data, and $p=1$ or $2$. The paper proves the $l_1$ penalty is node-wise decomposable and the $l_2$ penalty is differentiable, so the penalties can be dropped into GES and NOTEARS respectively, and it reports experiments with GES, NOTEARS, and KCRL on LUCAS, Asia, Earthquake, SACHS, and Child showing improved accuracy metrics, with TPR reaching 1.0 for enhanced GES on Asia and FDR reaching 0.0 for enhanced KCRL on three datasets.
Load-bearing premise
The load-bearing premise is that an LLM graph's BIC score on the observed data measures how much that LLM should be trusted, and that one penalty weight $\lambda$ can be set without tuning on the ground-truth graph.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- Any score-based causal discovery method can accept LLM advice as a plug-in penalty without retraining the underlying search, since the penalty is additive to the score.
- The node-wise decomposability proof means the $l_1$ penalty extends beyond GES to every additive score-based search, not just the three algorithms tested.
- The differentiable $l_2$ penalty lets continuous optimizers such as NOTEARS carry LLM advice through the same augmented-Lagrangian procedure used without it.
- Combining several LLMs can recover correct edges that no single LLM finds, which the paper's case study illustrates by showing distinct correct predictions from GPT-3.5, GPT-4, and Gemini.
Reading between the lines
- A testable extension is to replace BIC-derived weights with weights learned from a small labeled validation set; if accuracy gains persist, the score-proxy assumption is not load-bearing.
- The disagreement among LLM proposals could be converted into an uncertainty signal, treating edges all models agree on as near-certain priors and disputed edges as open.
- The same penalty construction could seed constraint-based discovery, using high-confidence LLM edges as conditional-independence constraints instead of score penalties.
- Because the paper's own results table shows some metrics moving against the enhancement, practical deployment would need automatic $\lambda$ selection rather than a fixed confidence weight.
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper proposes a framework that uses multiple large language models (GPT-3.5, GPT-4, Gemini) to produce candidate causal graphs, combines them with weights derived from the score function, and injects the weighted combination into score-based causal discovery as a regularization term. The augmented score is applied to GES and NOTEARS directly, and to KCRL by replacing expert priors with LLM priors. Experiments on LUCAS, Asia, Earthquake, SACHS, and Child report SHD, TPR, and FDR for GES, NOTEARS, and KCRL with and without the LLM enhancement. The central claim is that the multi-LLM penalty improves accuracy across datasets and algorithms.
Significance. If the claimed improvements were fully supported, this would be a useful practical contribution: LLM-derived priors could replace costly expert knowledge in score-based causal discovery, and the multi-LLM weighting scheme would add a simple, algorithm-agnostic way to fuse imperfect priors. The paper also ships correct but elementary observations: the l1 and l2 penalties are decomposable in the GES sense, and the l2 penalty is differentiable for NOTEARS. The idea is timely and the presentation is generally clear. However, the experimental evidence is the load-bearing part, and it is currently mixed: several Table 1 entries regress relative to the baselines, no single-LLM control is reported, and the lambda selection protocol is unspecified. The significance of the contribution therefore cannot be assessed from the manuscript as it stands.
major comments (4)
- [Abstract; §4.2, Table 1] The abstract and Section 4.2 state that 'the LLM enhancement leads to improvements across all datasets,' but Table 1 contains clear regressions: for Asia, GES SHD worsens from 3 to 4 and FDR from 0.22 to 0.33; for Child, GES SHD worsens from 23 to 26 and FDR from 0.60 to 0.62; for Asia, NOTEARS TPR drops from 0.5 to 0.375 while SHD rises from 4 to 5. The claim should either be restated as dataset-dependent improvement, or the paper should provide an aggregate, statistically grounded comparison (for example, mean or median SHD over datasets with paired significance tests).
- [§3.3, §4.2] The central novelty of the paper is the collaboration of multiple LLMs, yet no experiment compares the weighted multi-LLM penalty against a single-LLM penalty under the same framework. The case study in Section 4.2 shows that GPT-4 alone recovers all 8 Asia edges with no false positives, while the enhanced GES result in Table 1 has SHD 4 and FDR 0.33, so the multi-LLM penalty is worse than following the best single LLM on that dataset. A control using each LLM individually in the same penalty mechanism is needed to attribute any observed gains to the collaboration rather than to the prior information itself.
- [§3.3, §4.3] The hyperparameter lambda is load-bearing, but its selection is not specified. Section 4.3 admits that 'tuning this parameter remains a complex task,' and the manuscript reports no lambda values and no ground-truth-free protocol. If lambda was tuned per dataset using the true graph, the reported improvements are not a fair evaluation of the method. Please report the chosen lambda values and provide a selection protocol that does not use the test graph, or a sensitivity analysis showing that the improvements are robust to reasonable lambda choices.
- [§3.3] The weights mu_model are computed by scoring each LLM graph with the same score function Sscore on the same dataset that is later used to fit the final graph. This makes the objective function serve as both the fitting criterion and the quality measure for the prior, which can select LLM outputs that happen to fit the data rather than LLM outputs with genuine causal knowledge. This potential circularity should be addressed directly, for example by using a held-out portion of the data for weighting or by comparing against equal weights.
minor comments (6)
- [§3.3] The heading 'Muti-LLM Enhanced GES' contains a typo and should read 'Multi-LLM Enhanced GES.'
- [§3.3] The penalty definitions use the notation ||M_hat - M_hat_LLM|| and ||M_hat - M_hat_LLM||^2 without specifying the norm; please state explicitly that this is the Frobenius norm and keep the matrix notation consistent throughout.
- [§3.2] The composition K = U ∘ C ∘ R is described as a sequential operation, but the order in which the three stages are applied is ambiguous; please clarify which stage is executed first and whether R (revision) is applied last.
- [§4.2] Table 1 reports single values without standard deviations or repeated runs; if the optimization procedures are deterministic, this should be stated explicitly.
- [§4.2] The KCRL experiments are not connected to the methodological section: Section 3 derives the penalty only for GES and NOTEARS, so the manuscript should state precisely how the LLM prior is inserted into KCRL rather than only saying that LLM prior knowledge was used.
- [References] Several references are incomplete: [4] lacks full publication details and [15] lacks a venue; please complete the bibliography.
Circularity Check
No circularity: the multi-LLM penalty is an additive regularizer with heuristic weights, not a fitted prediction.
full rationale
We find no circular step. The augmented objective S(G)=Sscore(G)+lambda * sum_model mu_model ||M - M_model|| is a genuine modification of the base score; the weights mu_model are a heuristic normalized inverse-score weighting, not a parameter fitted to the evaluation metric or to the final graph. The proofs in Section 3.3 are simple algebraic decomposability/differentiability checks and do not assume the conclusion. No load-bearing self-citation or imported uniqueness theorem appears; the cited LLM-prompt work (Ban et al.) is external. The experimental comparison is empirical and falsifiable, though Table 1 contains regressions and missing single-LLM controls; those are correctness and validity concerns, not circularity.
Assumptions & free parameters
free parameters (1)
- lambda (penalty weight) =
not reported
assumptions (4)
- domain assumption LLM outputs elicited from variable names and possible values via a three-stage prompt contain causal information usable as prior knowledge.
- domain assumption The BIC score of an LLM-produced graph on the observed data is a valid proxy for the quality of that LLM's causal knowledge.
- domain assumption Weighted sum of adjacency matrices from multiple LLMs preserves complementary signal and produces a meaningful combined prior.
- standard math Adding a decomposable (for GES) and differentiable (for NOTEARS) penalty to the score does not break the optimization procedure.
Cite this review
Pith. "Pith review of Regularized Multi-LLMs Collaboration for Enhanced Score-based Causal Discovery." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/3MAXG7EN
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read the original abstract
As the significance of understanding the cause-and-effect relationships among variables increases in the development of modern systems and algorithms, learning causality from observational data has become a preferred and efficient approach over conducting randomized control trials. However, purely observational data could be insufficient to reconstruct the true causal graph. Consequently, many researchers tried to utilise some form of prior knowledge to improve causal discovery process. In this context, the impressive capabilities of large language models (LLMs) have emerged as a promising alternative to the costly acquisition of prior expert knowledge. In this work, we further explore the potential of using LLMs to enhance causal discovery approaches, particularly focusing on score-based methods, and we propose a general framework to utilise the capacity of not only one but multiple LLMs to augment the discovery process.
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