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Universal thermodynamic topological classes of black holes in perfect fluid dark matter background

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Pith's one-line read Black holes in a dark matter background keep the same thermodynamic topological classes they have without dark matter.

desk verdict Useful PFDM catalogue in the four-class topological thermodynamics scheme, but the claim that PFDM does not change the Schwarzschild and Schwarzschild-AdS classes rests on including negative-mass small horizons. read the letter →

arxiv 2501.04739 v2 pith:OBMFVWJP submitted 2025-01-08 gr-qc hep-th

Muhammad Rizwan , Mubasher Jamil , M. Z. A. Moughal This is my paper · ORCID
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The reading

The paper aims to extend the recently proposed thermodynamic classification of black holes into four universal topological classes, $W^{1-}$, $W^{0+}$, $W^{0-}$, and $W^{1+}$, to black holes surrounded by a perfect fluid dark matter (PFDM) background. It computes the generalized off-shell free energy and the associated vector field for six spacetimes—Schwarzschild, Reissner–Nordström, Kerr, Kerr–Newman, Schwarzschild–AdS, and Kerr–AdS—and reads each class off from the boundary behavior of the inverse temperature $\beta(r_h)$. The result is that the PFDM background changes none of the classes: Schwarzschild stays $W^{1-}$, the charged and rotating families stay $W^{0+}$, Schwarzschild–AdS stays $W^{0-}$, and Kerr–AdS stays $W^{1+}$. The reason to care is that it makes the coarse thermodynamic fate of a black hole—which horizon-size branches are stable at low and high temperature—independent of this particular dark matter environment.

What carries the argument

The machinery is the generalized off-shell Helmholtz free energy $\tilde{F} = M - S/\tau + 1/\sin\Theta$, whose gradient defines a vector field $\phi$ on the $(r_h,\Theta)$ half-plane. Zero points of $\phi$ correspond to black hole states; each carries a winding number $w_i$ computed with the $\phi$-mapping topological current, with positive winding indicating a stable state and negative winding indicating an unstable one. The topological number $W=\sum_i w_i$ is then extracted from the boundary limits of the inverse temperature curve $\beta(r_h)=1/T(r_h)$ at the minimal horizon radius $r_m$ and at infinity, together with the assumption that $\beta(r_h)$ is analytic with no hidden zero points in between. This boundary-limit-plus-winding recipe is what converts a thermodynamics calculation into a class label.

What would settle it

Compute the full zero-point set of $\phi_{r_h}=0$ for the Reissner–Nordström–PFDM spacetime over a range of $\tau$ crossing the generation point $\beta_c$; if a third zero point appears, or if the winding numbers of the two existing zero points change while the boundary limits $\beta(r_m)=\beta(\infty)=\infty$ stay fixed, the claimed $W^{0+}$ assignment fails. A simpler numerical check is to integrate the winding number along a large closed contour enclosing all zero points and verify that $W=0$.

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Core claim

Working within the four-class framework proposed in [28], the paper's central claim is that every black hole it studies belongs to exactly the same universal thermodynamic topological class as its dark-matter-free counterpart. The assignments are $W^{1-}$ for the Schwarzschild black hole in PFDM, $W^{0+}$ for the Reissner–Nordström, Kerr, and Kerr–Newman black holes in PFDM, $W^{0-}$ for the Schwarzschild–AdS black hole in PFDM, and $W^{1+}$ for the Kerr–AdS black hole in PFDM. These are read off from the winding numbers of the zero points of the vector field $\phi=(\partial \tilde{F}/\partial r_h,\partial \tilde{F}/\partial\Theta)$, where $\tilde{F}$ is the off-shell free energy with the $1/\sin\Theta$ term, and from the boundary limits of $\beta(r_h)$ at the minimal horizon radius and at infinity. The paper takes this agreement as evidence that PFDM does not alter the universal thermodynamic classes or the associated stability analysis.

Load-bearing premise

The whole classification rests on the premise that a black hole's thermodynamic class is fully determined by how the inverse temperature behaves at the smallest and largest horizon sizes and by the sum of the winding numbers of the black hole states in between, with no additional states hidden in the middle.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • If the assignments are right, a PFDM background is thermodynamically inert at the topological level: each black hole keeps the same stable and unstable horizon-size branches.
  • For the $W^{0+}$ family (Reissner–Nordström, Kerr, Kerr–Newman in PFDM), no black hole state exists at high temperature, so any observed high-temperature state would require physics beyond this class.
  • For the Schwarzschild–AdS case ($W^{0-}$), no on-shell black hole exists at low temperature, so low-temperature AdS physics in this background must come from another sector.
  • For Kerr–AdS ($W^{1+}$), an unstable intermediate branch separates stable small and large branches at both temperature extremes, giving a concrete three-branch structure to look for in phase diagrams.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • One implication the paper leaves implicit is that replacing the logarithmic PFDM term with a different dark matter profile is a test of the scheme: if the boundary limits of $\beta(r_h)$ stay the same, the same class should reappear, whereas a profile that changes those limits should move the class.
  • The assignments suggest that the topological class is a coarser, parameter-independent layer of black hole thermodynamics than the locations of generation and annihilation points, which in the paper's own formulas do shift with $\alpha$.
  • A further probe would be to add quantum corrections to the entropy or temperature: if the corrected $\beta(r_h)$ acquires an extra zero point between $r_m$ and infinity, the winding-number sum and hence the class would change even though the boundary limits are untouched.
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Referee Report

3 major / 6 minor

Summary. The manuscript applies the off-shell free-energy vector-field formalism of Wei, Liu, and Mann to a family of black holes in a perfect fluid dark matter (PFDM) background. For Schwarzschild, Reissner-Nordström, Kerr, Kerr-Newman, Schwarzschild-AdS, and Kerr-AdS black holes, the authors compute the vector field φ from the generalized free energy, identify zero points as black-hole states with winding numbers ±1, and assign each solution to one of the four universal thermodynamic classes W^{1-}, W^{0+}, W^{0-}, W^{1+}. The central conclusion is that the presence of PFDM does not change the universal thermodynamic topological class of these black holes relative to the corresponding solutions without PFDM.

Significance. If the result holds, the paper would demonstrate robustness of the four-universal-class scheme under the inclusion of a PFDM background, which is a useful check of the topological approach. The non-rotating cases are internally consistent: the vector-field components follow from the published mass, entropy, and temperature, the boundary limits match the cited thermodynamic quantities, and no parameter is fitted to force the result. However, the conclusion is not established for the Schwarzschild and Schwarzschild-AdS cases because the classification relies on boundary behavior in a region where the ADM mass is negative. The paper also assigns winding numbers by visual inspection of contour plots rather than by analytic computation. With those issues resolved, the paper would be a solid application of an established method, though the conceptual novelty is incremental.

major comments (3)
  1. [Section II, Eq. (9); Section V, Eq. (41)] The off-shell free energies in Eqs. (9) and (41) implicitly define the horizon mass as M = (1/2)[r_h + α ln(r_h/|α|)] (with the additional 8πP r_h^3/6 term in the AdS case). For the positive α used in all figures, this mass is negative for r_h < r_0, where r_0/α solves x + ln x = 0 (r_0 ≈ 0.567|α|). The boundary limits β(r_m)=0 in Eqs. (8) and (40) are therefore taken at r_h→0, where the corresponding spacetime has negative ADM mass and is not a physical black hole. If the physical state space is restricted to M>0, the left boundary of the horizon-radius domain is r_0, where β(r_0) is finite rather than zero. This invalidates the W^{1-} assignment for Schwarzschild-PFDM and the W^{0-} assignment for Schwarzschild-AdS-PFDM as stated, and it undermines the concluding claim that PFDM does not alter the universal classes. The manuscript should either restrict the analysis to the positive-mass domain and recompute the classes, or prove that all zero points used in Figs. 1, 3, 8, and 9 satisfy M>0.
  2. [Sections II–VI and Table III] The winding numbers assigned to the zero points (e.g., W=-1 for Schwarzschild-PFDM in Fig. 3, W=+1 and -1 for the two states in Fig. 5) are inferred by the visual rotation sense of the contours Φ_i in the (φ_{r_h}, φ_Θ) plane. No analytic expression or numerical integration of the winding number along a closed contour is provided. Since the universal class labels in Table III depend directly on these winding numbers, the authors should compute the winding numbers using the standard formula w = (1/2π)∮ d(arg φ) along each contour, or provide a reproducible numerical evaluation.
  3. [Section VII] The summary statement that 'PFDM does not alter the results' is not supported by the analysis as it stands, because the comparison with the no-PFDM cases is made only at the level of the final class labels, which are sensitive to the boundary limits discussed in the first major comment. The conclusion should be rephrased to identify the parameter regime (e.g., positive horizon mass) in which the comparison is valid, or the analysis should be redone for the physical domain.
minor comments (6)
  1. [Abstract] The phrase 'independence of black hole size thermodynamically unstable' should read 'independent of black hole size, the state is thermodynamically unstable' or an equivalent grammatical construction.
  2. [Section VII] The statement that for the Schwarzschild-AdS-PFDM black hole at high temperature there exist 'stable-small size and unstable-large size' states contradicts Section V and Table III, which assign winding numbers -1 (unstable small) and +1 (stable large); this reversal should be corrected.
  3. [Section VII] For the Kerr-AdS-PFDM case, the text says the high-temperature limit contains 'an unstable-small sized black hole', whereas Section VI and Table III identify the unstable state as intermediate-sized; the text should be corrected.
  4. [Fig. 10 caption] The caption lists Q=1/2 for a Kerr-AdS black hole, which has no charge parameter; the charge should be removed from the caption or the associated text.
  5. [References] References [11] and [19] are the same paper (Wei, Liu, and Mann, Phys. Rev. Lett. 129, 191101 (2022)); one duplicate should be removed.
  6. [Section VI] The sentence 'For τ < τa or τb < τ, there is only black hole state with winding number 1 representing large and small size black hole respectively' should be rewritten for clarity and to distinguish the small- and large-branch behavior.

Circularity Check

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No load-bearing circularity; class assignments follow from independently computed boundary limits and winding numbers under the external Wei et al. [28] scheme, with only a non-load-bearing self-citation to Ref. [20].

full rationale

The paper's derivation chain is not circular. The universal thermodynamic classes are assigned by computing the boundary limits of the inverse-temperature defect curve β(r_h) and the winding numbers of the vector-field zero points, then matching these to the four-class scheme of Wei, Liu, and Mann [28], which is an external benchmark rather than an input assumed in this paper. The vector-field components, e.g. Eqs. (11), (23), (34), (42), and (52), are computed directly from published thermodynamic quantities, and the winding numbers are verified through explicit contour plots (Figs. 3, 5, 7, 9, 11). No parameter is fitted to force the claimed consistency with the no-PFDM results. The only self-citation is to Ref. [20] (Rizwan and Jusufi), used for the Schwarzschild-PFDM topological number W = -1 and the Reissner-Nordström-PFDM generation-point formula β_c; these citations are not load-bearing because the present paper independently derives the boundary arrows and contour winding numbers that determine the classifications. The negative-mass concern about small-horizon states is a physicality or correctness issue, not circularity: the boundary limits used, such as β(r_m)=0, follow from the paper's own off-shell mass and temperature definitions, not from the conclusion that PFDM does not alter the results.

Assumptions & free parameters 0 free parameters · 4 assumptions · 0 invented entities

No free parameters are fitted; the black hole parameters α, Q, a, P are physical inputs. The central claim rests on the domain assumptions of the topological thermodynamics framework and on the correctness of the cited PFDM solutions and thermodynamic quantities. No new entities are introduced.

assumptions (4)
  • domain assumption The generalized off-shell free energy F = M - S/τ and the vector field φ = (∂F̃/∂r_h, ∂F̃/∂Θ) with F̃ = F + 1/sinΘ correctly encode black hole thermodynamic states as zero points.
    Adopted from Wei, Liu, Mann [11,28]; the paper does not re-derive or test this correspondence.
  • domain assumption A winding number w of +1 corresponds to a thermodynamically stable black hole (positive heat capacity) and -1 to an unstable one.
    Stated in Section II following [11,28].
  • domain assumption The four universal classes W^{1-}, W^{0+}, W^{0-}, and W^{1+} are complete and are determined by the boundary limits of β(r_h) plus the state counts at low and high temperature.
    Taken from Wei et al. [28] and Zhu et al. [29]; the paper does not prove exhaustiveness.
  • domain assumption The PFDM metrics and thermodynamic quantities (mass, entropy, temperature) for the six spacetimes are correct as cited from Refs [14,34,35,36,37].
    The paper uses these as inputs without independent derivation.

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abstract

In this paper, we study the universal thermodynamic topological classes of a family of black holes in a perfect fluid dark matter (PFDM) background. Recent research on black hole thermodynamics suggests that all black holes can be classified into four universal thermodynamic classes, denoted by $W^{1-}$, $W^{0+}$, $W^{0-}$, and $W^{1+}$. Our study reveals that the Schwarzschild black hole in PFDM belongs to the $W^{1-}$ class, and independence of black hole size thermodynamically unstable at both low- and high-temperature limits. The Reissner-Nordstr\"om, Kerr, and Kerr-Newman black holes in the PFDM background belong to the same universal thermodynamic class, $W^{0+}$, which represents small, stable black holes and large, unstable black holes at low-temperature limits, whereas no black hole state exists at high temperatures. The AdS black holes behave differently compared to their counterparts in PFDM. The Schwarzschild-AdS black hole belongs to the $W^{0-}$ class, indicating no black hole state at low temperatures, but small, unstable and large, stable black hole states at high temperatures. Furthermore, the Kerr-AdS black hole belongs to the $W^{1+}$ class, characterized by small, stable black holes at low temperatures, large, stable black holes at high temperatures, and unstable, intermediate-sized black holes at both low and high temperatures. These findings uncover the universal topological classifications underlying black hole thermodynamics, offering profound insights into the fundamental principles of quantum gravity.

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