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An Improved Grey Wolf Optimizer Inspired by Advanced Cooperative Predation for UAV Shortest Path Planning

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Pith's one-line read An Improved Grey Wolf Optimizer that adds cooperative predation and lens-based opposition learning plans UAV paths that are, on average, 1.70–2.00 m shorter than GWO, PSO, and WOA across four tested maps.

desk verdict The GWO variant is plausible, but the UAV path planning claim collapses on the paper's own objective: with P=10 and feasible paths at ~27-31m, any path hitting one obstacle scores 10 and beats every feasible path. read the letter →

arxiv 2506.03663 v1 pith:D2ZZ4WHE submitted 2025-06-04 cs.RO

Zuhao Teng , Qian Dong , Ze Zhang , Shuangyao Huang , Wenzhang Zhang , Jingchen Wang , Ji Li , Xi Chen This is my paper
classification cs.RO
keywords greywolfoptimizerUAVpathplanningshortestopposition-basedlearningcooperativepredationmetaheuristicoptimization
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The reading

This paper tries to establish that an Improved Grey Wolf Optimizer, IGWO, finds shorter obstacle-avoiding paths for a UAV than three baseline metaheuristics. The modification inserts an Advanced Cooperative Predation step that steers search agents with the population centroid and the top three wolves, and a Lens Opposition-based Learning step that replaces agents with a mirrored counterpart after the exploitation phase. On the thirteen benchmark functions tested, IGWO reports the best average value on ten of them, and on four randomly generated 20 m × 20 m maps the paths it produces are on average 1.70 m, 1.68 m, and 2.00 m shorter than those of GWO, PSO, and WOA respectively. If the result holds, it matters because UAV path planning in cluttered environments would gain a simple, training-free improvement of a few meters over existing heuristics.

What carries the argument

The mechanism is a two-stage modification of the Grey Wolf Optimizer. Advanced Cooperative Predation (ACP) runs before the original exploitation phase: it computes the population centroid $\vec{X}_{\text{mean}}(t)=\frac{1}{n}\sum_{i=1}^{n}\vec{X}_i(t)$ and, with a random switch $r_3$, moves each agent toward either the centroid combined with the $\alpha$ wolf or the centroid combined with the average of the $\beta$ and delta wolves, using a spiral factor $\gamma=\frac{2e^{r(T-t+1)/T}}{4}\sin(2\pi r_4)$ to shape the step. Lens Opposition-based Learning (LOBL) runs after exploitation and replaces each agent with its convex-lens mirror image $\vec{X}(t+1)=\frac{a_j+b_j}{2}+\frac{1}{k}\left(\frac{a_j+b_j}{2k}-\vec{X}(t)\right)$, where $k$ is the lens magnification factor. ACP intensifies local search near the leading wolves; LOBL diversifies the swarm so it can leave unpromising regions.

What would settle it

Rerun each method for 30 independent trials on each of the four maps with identical settings and compare the resulting path-length distributions. The claim would be falsified if IGWO's mean path length is not statistically lower than GWO's, or if the direction of the per-map difference flips across trials.

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Core claim

The central claim is that IGWO—GWO augmented with ACP before the exploitation phase and LOBL after it—consistently outperforms GWO, PSO, and WOA on the tested benchmark functions and in UAV path planning. On F1–F5, F7, and F9–F12, IGWO reports the best mean objective values, reaching exactly zero mean and standard deviation on F9 and F11. In the path-planning experiments, IGWO yields the shortest path on all four maps, with average reductions of 1.70 m over GWO, 1.68 m over PSO, and 2.00 m over WOA. The authors see these results as evidence that the two added strategies sharpen fine search around the leading wolf while preserving the ability to escape local optima.

Load-bearing premise

The central claim assumes that the four randomly generated 20 m × 20 m maps and the single reported path length per method per map are representative of how GWO, PSO, and WOA would perform in general; any unrepresentative baseline run would make the 1.70–2.00 m average advantage an artifact rather than a genuine property of IGWO.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • IGWO ranks first on ten of the thirteen benchmark functions (F1–F5, F7, F9–F12), and on F9 and F11 its reported mean and standard deviation are both exactly zero.
  • Across all four maps, IGWO's path length is smaller than every baseline's, so the advantage is consistent in sign even though the size varies from 0.55 m to 3.52 m per comparison.
  • Because IGWO is a training-free metaheuristic with the same swarm size and iteration budget, it can be substituted into existing GWO-based UAV path planners without additional data or tuning.
  • On F9 and F11 the zero standard deviation means every one of the 30 runs lands on the same optimum, not just a good average.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • A decisive follow-up would be repeated runs: running each algorithm 30 times per map and reporting variance would show whether the 1.70–2.00 m average gap is larger than run-to-run noise.
  • An ablation that disables ACP or LOBL separately would attribute the gains: if removing LOBL eliminates the benchmark wins, the reflection operator is the main driver; if removing ACP eliminates the path-length edge, the centroid-based predation term is what matters.
  • Since LOBL is a general operator, applying the same two-stage scheme to PSO and WOA could produce similar improvements, which would indicate the gain is not specific to the grey wolf framework.
  • The ACP update depends on the population centroid, whose behavior in larger maps or higher-dimensional decision spaces is untested; stress-testing on 100 m × 100 m maps or with more waypoints would define where the improvement persists.
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Editorial analysis

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Referee Report

5 major / 5 minor

Summary. The paper proposes an Improved Grey Wolf Optimizer (IGWO) that augments the standard GWO with an Advanced Cooperative Predation (ACP) mechanism and a Lens Opposition-based Learning (LOBL) strategy, and applies it to UAV shortest path planning. The authors report that IGWO ranks first on benchmark functions F1-F5, F7, and F9-F12, and that paths produced by IGWO are on average 1.70 m, 1.68 m, and 2.00 m shorter than those of GWO, PSO, and WOA, respectively, across four randomly generated 20 m x 20 m maps.

Significance. If the reported results held, the paper would describe a modest but potentially useful incremental contribution: the combination of ACP and LOBL is clearly described and testable, and the application to UAV path planning follows a standard penalty-based formulation. The manuscript's central claims, however, are currently not supported by the evidence as presented. The path-planning objective in Eq. (11) is internally inconsistent with the reported path-length scale, Table III contains no repeated-run statistics, Table II is missing from the manuscript, and several algorithm parameters are unspecified. These issues affect the interpretability of both the benchmark and the path-planning claims, so the paper requires a substantive revision before the proposed method can be fairly evaluated.

major comments (5)
  1. [Section II-B, Eq. (11); Section III-B, Table III] The penalty term in Eq. (11) is internally inconsistent with the path lengths reported in Table III. With P=10 and a 20 m x 20 m grid, any path that intersects a single obstacle cell receives an objective value of 10, whereas every feasible path in Table III has length between 27.46 m and 31.39 m, and the geometric lower bound for cell-center endpoints is about 26.9 m. An optimizer minimizing Eq. (11) therefore prefers an infeasible path crossing one obstacle over every feasible path, so the paths in Table III are not guaranteed to be collision-free and the reported 1.70-2.00 m average advantage is not interpretable as a comparison of obstacle-avoiding paths. The sentence in Section II-B that calls P*nO a 'large penalty' is also contradicted by these numbers. The objective must be repaired (e.g., P larger than any possible feasible path length, or an explicit constraint/repair mechanism) and the experiments repeated before the path-planning claim can be assessed.
  2. [Section III-B, Table III] Table III reports a single path length for each method on each map, with no number of independent runs, no standard deviation, and no statistical test. The central claim that IGWO paths are on average 1.70 m, 1.68 m, and 2.00 m shorter than GWO, PSO, and WOA is therefore based on four point estimates, and the differences (e.g., 0.55 m on Map 1 versus 2.54 m on Map 2) may be within run-to-run variation. The authors should report means and standard deviations over at least 30 runs per map and a paired significance test (or equivalent) before claiming a consistent advantage. In addition, the parameter settings of PSO and WOA are not reported, so it is unclear whether the baselines were fairly configured.
  3. [Section III-A, Table II] Table II, which is supposed to define benchmark functions F1-F13 and their known optimal values, is missing from the manuscript. Since Table I and the benchmark-performance claim depend entirely on the identities of these functions, the reader cannot verify the results or reproduce the experiments. The table must be included and the source of the functions stated.
  4. [Section III-A, Table I] Table I contains precision and summary statistics that need explanation. For example, IGWO on F2 reports avg 2.45E-20 with std 1.23E-39; this is not plausible without a very detailed explanation, because it implies that all 30 independent runs agree to about 40 significant digits. Similarly, zero avg and zero std for F9 and F11 need a note on floating-point precision and convergence criteria. Please state the effective precision, the number of significant digits, and whether the zeros are exact or rounded.
  5. [Section II-A, Eq. (10); Section III] The LOBL parameters are underspecified: the lens magnification factor k and the interval endpoints a_j, b_j in Eq. (10) are not given for either the benchmark or the path-planning experiments, and no guidance is provided for choosing them in a 20 m x 20 m grid. Because LOBL is one of the two proposed mechanisms, the missing parameter values make the algorithm non-reproducible and prevent assessing whether IGWO's advantage is due to tuning. Please report the values used for all experiments.
minor comments (5)
  1. [Section III-B] The text refers to 'the objective function, with m=20, P=10, is formulated as shown in Eq. (13)', but the objective function appears in Eq. (11); Eq. (13) does not exist in the manuscript.
  2. [Section II-B] The termination condition is incompletely specified: the text says 'when a convergence threshold is satisfied', but the threshold is never defined, so it is unclear when the algorithm stops.
  3. [Section III-B, Fig. 2] The four maps are described as randomly generated, but no random seed or obstacle-cell coordinates are provided, so the path-planning experiments cannot be reproduced from the text alone.
  4. [Section III-A, Fig. 3] Figure 3 is mentioned as a visualization of Table I, but the convergence curves are not discussed or interpreted in the text.
  5. [Section II-A, Eq. (8)] The distributions of r3 and r4 are not stated immediately after Eq. (8); the text should explicitly say they are uniformly distributed on (0,1), matching the earlier definitions for r1 and r2.

Circularity Check

0 steps flagged · score 0.0 of 10

No significant circularity: the IGWO derivation and evaluations are self-contained against external benchmarks and standard baselines.

full rationale

I found no load-bearing circular step in the paper. The IGWO modifications (ACP and LOBL) are defined through Eqs. (7)-(10) independently of the benchmark results and of the path-length outcomes; the hyperparameters (population size 40, 200 iterations, P=10, m=20) are fixed before the experiments and are not fitted to any target output. The benchmark functions in Table II are external CEC-style functions with known optima, and the comparisons in Table I and Table III are against standard baseline algorithms (GWO, PSO, WOA) using reported objective values; no output of IGWO is fed back into the definition of IGWO or into the evaluation metric. The only self-citation (reference [1] includes co-author W. Zhang) appears in the introduction as application motivation and is not load-bearing. The P=10 penalty issue raised in the review is a correctness or validity concern about whether infeasible paths may be preferred, but it is not circularity: the objective in Eq. (11) is stated a priori and is not derived from the results. Therefore the circularity score is 0.

Assumptions & free parameters 7 free parameters · 5 assumptions · 0 invented entities

The central claims rest on standard benchmark functions, standard baseline implementations, and several hand-set hyperparameters. No code or data is provided, and one table (Table II) defining the benchmarks is missing, so the reader cannot audit the simulations independently.

free parameters (7)
  • Population size n = 40
    Set to 40 search agents for all experiments (Section II-B, III-A); the result may depend on this choice.
  • Maximum iterations T = 200
    Iterated over 200 cycles for benchmarks (Section III-A); path planning likely uses the same setting.
  • Number of path waypoints m = 20
    Path is represented by 20 points including start and end (Section III-B).
  • Obstacle penalty coefficient P = 10
    Set 'typically to 10' in Eq. (11); determines how strongly infeasible paths are rejected.
  • Spiral factor exponent denominator = 4
    Appears in Eq. (9) for the ACP spiral factor; hand-chosen and not justified.
  • Lens magnification factor k
    Defined as h/h* in Eq. (10) but no numerical value is given in the paper; the algorithm behavior depends on it.
  • LOBL interval bounds [aj, bj]
    The interval endpoints constraining agent movement in Eq. (10) are not specified.
assumptions (5)
  • domain assumption The standard GWO update equations (Eqs. 1-6) are correct and implemented as described.
    The paper builds IGWO on top of GWO [17] without re-deriving or modifying the base equations.
  • domain assumption Benchmark functions F1-F13 and their known global optima are as stated in the omitted Table II.
    Section III-A refers to Table II for the benchmark set, but the table body is absent from the paper, so this is an unverified external standard.
  • ad hoc to paper The penalty-based objective in Eq. (11) with P=10 correctly captures the UAV shortest-path requirement.
    This is the paper's own formulation; obstacles are handled only through a penalty term and paths are unconstrained polylines, with no validation against an optimal planner.
  • domain assumption The LOBL transformation in Eq. (10) from Tizhoosh [19] is valid and is applied after the GWO exploitation phase.
    LOBL is taken from prior work; the paper does not analyze its interaction with the ACP step.
  • domain assumption PSO and WOA baselines are implemented with their standard recommended settings.
    The paper does not report the parameter settings for PSO and WOA, so the comparison presumes fair default implementations.

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With the widespread application of Unmanned Aerial Vehicles (UAVs) in domains like military reconnaissance, emergency rescue, and logistics delivery, efficiently planning the shortest flight path has become a critical challenge. Traditional heuristic-based methods often suffer from the inability to escape from local optima, which limits their effectiveness in finding the shortest path. To address these issues, a novel Improved Grey Wolf Optimizer (IGWO) is presented in this study. The proposed IGWO incorporates an Advanced Cooperative Predation (ACP) and a Lens Opposition-based Learning Strategy (LOBL) in order to improve the optimization capability of the method. Simulation results show that IGWO ranks first in optimization performance on benchmark functions F1-F5, F7, and F9-F12, outperforming all other compared algorithms. Subsequently, IGWO is applied to UAV shortest path planning in various obstacle-laden environments. Simulation results show that the paths planned by IGWO are, on average, shorter than those planned by GWO, PSO, and WOA by 1.70m, 1.68m, and 2.00m, respectively, across four different maps.

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Figures reproduced from arXiv: 2506.03663 by the authors.

Figure 1
Figure 1. Flowchart of IGWO Where factor k = h h∗ quantifies the magnification induced by the convex lens effect, describing how the agent’s mirrored position is scaled relative to its original offset from the focal axis. X⃗ (t + 1) and X⃗ (t) denote the positions of the search agent at the next and current iterations, respectively. aj and bj indicate the interval endpoints that constrain the agent’s movement. 4) Improved Gre… view at source ↗
Figure 2
Figure 2. The results of UAV path planning across four different map environments. [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p004_2.png] view at source ↗
Figure 3
Figure 3. Comparative convergence curves of IGWO, GWO, PSO and WOA on benchmark functions [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p005_3.png] view at source ↗

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