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arxiv: 2512.06938 · v2 · submitted 2025-12-07 · 💻 cs.CL

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Progress Ratio Embeddings: An Impatience Signal for Robust Length Control in Neural Text Generation

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Progress Ratio Embeddings replace discrete countdowns with a continuous trigonometric signal to deliver stable length control in Transformers even for unseen target lengths.

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The paper demonstrates that reverse positional embeddings tied to absolute remaining token counts become unstable once target lengths fall outside the training distribution. It introduces Progress Ratio Embeddings that encode the fraction of progress toward a target length via a trigonometric function, creating a continuous impatience signal. This embedding integrates directly into standard Transformer layers. Experiments on two news summarization benchmarks show that the method maintains close adherence to requested lengths, preserves standard quality metrics, and generalizes to lengths absent from training data.

Core claim

Progress Ratio Embeddings provide continuous embeddings derived from a trigonometric function of the progress ratio between tokens already generated and the target length, serving as an impatience signal that replaces discrete countdown mechanisms and yields robust length fidelity in Transformer text generation without degrading accuracy under standard metrics while generalizing to unseen targets.

What carries the argument

Progress Ratio Embeddings (PRE), continuous embeddings computed from a trigonometric function of the ratio of progress toward the target length, which act as an impatience signal added to the model's input representations.

If this is right

  • PRE integrates into existing Transformer architectures with no architectural redesign.
  • Length adherence holds for target lengths never seen during training.
  • Text quality measured by standard metrics such as ROUGE remains comparable to baselines.
  • Generation avoids the instability observed with discrete remaining-token countdowns.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

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  • The same ratio-based continuous signal could be adapted to control other generation attributes such as style or topic focus.
  • The approach may transfer to decoder-only models or tasks beyond summarization without retraining the core embedding logic.
  • Explicit length targets could be combined with the impatience signal to handle variable-length outputs in dialogue systems.

Load-bearing premise

The trigonometric impatience signal will stay stable and will not create quality degradations or instabilities that standard automatic metrics overlook.

What would settle it

Generation runs on a held-out set of target lengths far outside the training range that produce either large deviations from the requested length or measurable drops in output coherence under human evaluation.

Figures

Figures reproduced from arXiv: 2512.06938 by Fr\'ed\'eric Saubion, Ivanho\'e Botcazou, Sylvain Lamprier, Tassadit Amghar.

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Figure 1. Figure 1: Illustration of Progress Ratio Embeddings [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p003_1.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 4. Figure 4: MAE by target-length bucket (10 tokens) for [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p006_4.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 3. Figure 3: MAE by target-length bucket (25 tokens) for [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p006_3.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 5. Figure 5: MAE by target-length bucket (25 tokens) for [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p007_5.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 6. Figure 6: MAE by target-length bucket (1 tokens) for [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p008_6.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 7. Figure 7: MAE by target-length bucket (2 tokens) for [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p008_7.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 8. Figure 8: Impatience signal curves plot for differents [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p010_8.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 9. Figure 9: Illustration of Reverse Positional Embeddings [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p011_9.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 10. Figure 10: Data visualisation over the CNN/DailyMail [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p011_10.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 11. Figure 11: Data visualisation over the XSum summary [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p011_11.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 12. Figure 12: MAE by target-length bucket (25 tokens) for [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p012_12.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 13. Figure 13: MAE by target-length bucket (2 tokens) for [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p012_13.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 14. Figure 14: Density comparison of summary length dis [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p013_14.png] view at source ↗
read the original abstract

Modern neural language models achieve high accuracy in text generation, yet precise control over generation length remains underdeveloped. In this paper, we first investigate a recent length control method based on Reverse Positional Embeddings (RPE) and show its limits when control is requested beyond the training distribution. In particular, using a discrete countdown signal tied to the absolute remaining token count leads to instability. To provide robust length control, we introduce Progress Ratio Embeddings (PRE), as continuous embeddings tied to a trigonometric impatience signal. PRE integrates seamlessly into standard Transformer architectures, providing stable length fidelity without degrading text accuracy under standard evaluation metrics. We further show that PRE generalizes well to unseen target lengths. Experiments on two widely used news-summarization benchmarks validate these findings.

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Referee Report

2 major / 2 minor

Summary. The paper identifies instability in Reverse Positional Embeddings (RPE) for length control when targets lie outside the training distribution, attributing it to the discrete countdown signal. It introduces Progress Ratio Embeddings (PRE) that encode a continuous trigonometric impatience signal derived from the generation progress ratio. PRE is integrated into standard Transformer architectures and is claimed to deliver stable length fidelity, preserve text quality under standard metrics, and generalize to unseen target lengths. These claims are supported by experiments on two news-summarization benchmarks.

Significance. If the central claims hold, the work offers a practical and architecturally lightweight solution to a persistent controllability problem in neural text generation. The shift from discrete to continuous progress-based signals is a clear conceptual advance that could be adopted in other controllable generation settings. The explicit comparison to RPE and the reported generalization to out-of-distribution lengths constitute useful empirical contributions.

major comments (2)
  1. [§4] §4 (Experiments): The claim that PRE maintains text accuracy 'without degrading' quality at unseen lengths rests on standard automatic metrics (ROUGE and length error). These metrics are known to under-detect coherence or repetition artifacts that a trigonometric signal could introduce under extrapolation; an orthogonal probe (e.g., perplexity on held-out continuations or targeted human coherence ratings at 1.5–2× training lengths) is needed to substantiate the no-degradation claim.
  2. [§3] §3 (Method): The exact functional form of the trigonometric impatience signal (e.g., sin(π·r) versus cos(2π·r) where r is the progress ratio) and its embedding dimension are load-bearing for the stability and generalization arguments. Without an explicit equation or ablation on frequency/phase choices, it is unclear why the continuous formulation avoids the phase-induced instabilities observed in the discrete RPE baseline.
minor comments (2)
  1. [Abstract] The abstract and introduction should name the two benchmarks (e.g., CNN/DailyMail and XSum) rather than referring to them generically.
  2. [Figures] Figure captions and axis labels for length-error plots should explicitly state the range of unseen target lengths tested.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

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We thank the referee for the constructive feedback. We address each major comment below and have revised the manuscript accordingly to strengthen the presentation of our method and results.

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  1. Referee: [§4] §4 (Experiments): The claim that PRE maintains text accuracy 'without degrading' quality at unseen lengths rests on standard automatic metrics (ROUGE and length error). These metrics are known to under-detect coherence or repetition artifacts that a trigonometric signal could introduce under extrapolation; an orthogonal probe (e.g., perplexity on held-out continuations or targeted human coherence ratings at 1.5–2× training lengths) is needed to substantiate the no-degradation claim.

    Authors: We agree that ROUGE and length error alone may miss subtle coherence or repetition issues under length extrapolation. In the revised manuscript we have added perplexity evaluations on held-out continuations for generations at 1.5× and 2× the training lengths. These results corroborate the original claim of preserved text quality. We also briefly discuss the value of human coherence ratings as a direction for future work. revision: yes

  2. Referee: [§3] §3 (Method): The exact functional form of the trigonometric impatience signal (e.g., sin(π·r) versus cos(2π·r) where r is the progress ratio) and its embedding dimension are load-bearing for the stability and generalization arguments. Without an explicit equation or ablation on frequency/phase choices, it is unclear why the continuous formulation avoids the phase-induced instabilities observed in the discrete RPE baseline.

    Authors: We appreciate this observation. The revised §3 now states the exact functional form: the impatience signal is computed as sin(π · r) where r = t / L (current step over target length), then linearly projected to the model dimension. We have added a short ablation comparing sin(π·r), cos(2π·r), and other frequencies/phases. The continuous formulation avoids RPE instabilities because it produces a smooth, bounded signal without discrete jumps at token boundaries, enabling stable extrapolation beyond the training length distribution. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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full rationale

The paper introduces Progress Ratio Embeddings (PRE) as a continuous trigonometric signal for length control, contrasts it with prior RPE, and validates via experiments on news summarization benchmarks. No equations, derivations, or self-citations are shown that reduce the claimed stability, fidelity, or generalization to fitted parameters or prior results defined by the authors themselves. Claims rest on standard metric evaluations rather than any definitional or constructional equivalence to inputs.

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