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In massive star clusters, the mass of an intermediate-mass black hole made by runaway stellar collisions is set almost entirely by the cluster's half-mass surface density and metallicity, through a simple fitting formula; the channel turns
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load-bearing objection A genuinely wide simulation grid mapping IMBH masses against cluster density and metallicity, but the headline masses and cosmic rates are anchored to an extrapolated wind law that the authors themselves show could change by a factor of four. the 3 major comments →
FROST-CLUSTERS -- III. Metallicity-dependent intermediate mass black hole formation by runaway collisions in dense star clusters
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
Core claim
The paper establishes that in massive star clusters (M_cl ≳ 10^4 Msun) the maximum mass of an intermediate-mass black hole produced by runaway collisions is a function of only the cluster's half-mass surface density Sigma_h and its metallicity Z, stated as M_bullet = M_bullet(Sigma_h, Z) with a Heaviside threshold and piecewise metallicity-dependent coefficients. IMBHs with masses of roughly 300–6000 Msun form when Z is below about 0.2–0.3 Zsun and Sigma_h above about 3e4 Msun/pc^2; above that metallicity, strong stellar winds quench the runaway growth, and below that density collisions are too rare. The paper additionally gives a hierarchical-assembly extension showing that extremely dense
What carries the argument
The load-bearing machinery is the competition between collisional mass gain and stellar wind mass loss for stars grown beyond about 600 solar masses. The paper uses an extrapolated wind-loss law with no cap, plus a mass-loss term in each collision (f_loss = C q/(q+1)^2, C=0.3), and metallicity-dependent radii, to produce the plateau in stellar mass that sets the IMBH mass. The central object that carries the argument is the fitting formula M_bullet = theta_H(Sigma_h - Sigma_crit(Z)) [A(Z) log10 Sigma_h + B(Z) (log10 Sigma_h)^2 + C(Z)], with coefficients tabulated in three metallicity ranges; a second linear formula handles extrapolation to higher Sigma_h. This converts a two-dimensional simu
Load-bearing premise
The entire result rests on the adopted wind mass-loss law for stars above about 600 solar masses—an extrapolation without an upper cap—because replacing it with a standard cap changes the final black-hole masses by a factor of about four and shifts the channel into the supermassive-star regime.
What would settle it
Run one of the paper's dense, low-metallicity cluster setups (e.g., M_cl ~1.5e5 Msun, Z~0.1 Zsun, Sigma_h~1e5 Msun/pc2) with a wind-loss rate capped at 1.5e-4 Msun/yr: the paper itself reports that this produces monotonic growth past 20,000 Msun. If a single such run with a different but physically standard wind model reproduces the plateau near 7,000 Msun, the reported IMBH masses are robust; if it grows into the supermassive-star regime, the headline masses are an artifact of the extrapolated wind law. Observationally, detecting a >300 Msun black hole in a solar-metallicity massive cluster w
If this is right
- The fitted M_bullet(Sigma_h,Z) can seed black holes in semi-analytic galaxy-formation models and high-resolution cosmological simulations without running star-by-star collision calculations.
- The IMBH formation efficiency is strongly peaked below Z~0.1-0.2 Zsun; local young massive clusters with solar-like metallicity and low density should rarely produce IMBHs, explaining their absence.
- The cosmic IMBH formation rate density peaks at z~2-4 with values up to ~1e-7 per year per cMpc^3; roughly half of IMBHs form below z~1.5-3, so a local IMBH need not be a leftover high-z SMBH seed.
- The densest hierarchical models reach sustained tidal-disruption rates above 1e-5 per year per cluster, providing a growth channel that can push IMBHs beyond 1e4 Msun.
- The sensitivity study shows that if a maximum wind-loss rate (a luminous-blue-variable-like cap) is used instead, collisionally grown stars pass 20,000-25,000 Msun, making the channel a viable supermassive-star seed route.
- If the paper's picture holds, targeted searches for IMBHs should prioritize dense, low-metallicity old clusters rather than solar-metallicity clusters, where the suppression boundary predicts near-zero occupation.
- If the formula is read as a predictive map, the same dense clusters that form IMBHs also produce 5-10% of their mass in wind and collisional ejecta, connecting IMBH formation to the chemical peculiarities seen in globular cluster multiple populations.
- The wind-rate sensitivity suggests the dominant uncertainty is the physics of extremely massive stellar winds at low metallicity; if the cap is real, the channel may produce supermassive stars and heavier seeds than the paper's headline masses.
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper presents a large suite of more than 1,440 direct N-body simulations of young massive star clusters with the BIFROST code, varying cluster mass, half-mass surface density, and metallicity, to study the formation of intermediate-mass black holes (IMBHs) via runaway stellar collisions. The central quantitative claim is that the maximum IMBH mass is determined almost entirely by cluster half-mass surface density and metallicity through a fitting formula M_bullet(Sigma_h, Z) (Eq. 9, with Eq. 10 for extrapolation), with IMBHs of roughly 300–6000 Msun forming at Z ≲ 0.2–0.3 Zsun and formation suppressed at higher metallicity and below Sigma_h ≲ 3e4 Msun/pc^2. The paper also presents 30 hierarchical cluster assembly simulations, estimates wind and collisional ejecta budgets, and constructs a cosmic IMBH formation rate model that peaks at z~2–4, with ~50% of IMBHs forming below z~1.5–3, thereby challenging the picture that all local IMBHs are failed high-redshift SMBH seeds. The authors explicitly test the sensitivity of their results to the adopted massive-star wind prescription in Section 4.2 and Appendices B and C.
Significance. If the central scaling holds, the fitting formulas provide a practical seeding prescription for galaxy-formation simulations and semi-analytic models, and the derived redshift-dependent IMBH formation rates would be an important constraint on black-hole seeding scenarios. The paper's main strengths are the exceptionally large and systematic simulation sample, the inclusion of hierarchical assembly alongside isolated clusters, and the unusually transparent treatment of the dominant stellar-wind uncertainty: the authors show in their own post-processing and dedicated test runs that an alternative widely used wind prescription (Vink 2001 with an LBV-like cap of 1.5e-4 Msun/yr) changes the maximum IMBH mass by a factor of about four and pushes collisionally grown stars into the supermassive-star regime. This honesty is commendable, but it also directly exposes the fragility of the headline numerical predictions and of the metallicity threshold that drives the cosmic rate model.
major comments (3)
- [§2.2.3, Eq. (5); §4.2, Fig. 11; Appendix C] The load-bearing premise of the paper is the Vink (2018) wind prescription, Eq. (5), extrapolated beyond its stated 900 Msun calibration range with no upper rate limit. The paper's own analysis shows that imposing the commonly used LBV-like ceiling of 1.5e-4 Msun/yr, as in NBODY6++GPU/MOCCA, changes the mass growth from a plateau near ~7000 Msun to monotonic growth beyond 25000 Msun (Fig. 11 and Fig. C1), a factor of ~4 in the final IMBH mass, and removes much of the metallicity dependence that produces the Z~0.2 Zsun threshold. Since Eq. (9), the threshold quoted in the abstract, and the cosmic rate model in Section 6 all inherit this choice, the central quantitative claims are conditional on an extrapolated and uncapped wind law. The authors should either justify this extrapolation quantitatively or present the main fitting formulas and cosmic rates for both wind prescriptions, with a
- [§3.4, Eq. (9); §6.1–6.6] The fitting formula Eq. (9) is a LOESS-plus-piecewise fit to the authors' own simulation data, and it is then used as input to the cosmic rate model in Section 6. The 'consistency' with JWST little-red-dot number densities reported in Section 6.6 is therefore a self-consistency check of the model chain, not an independent test of the fitting formula or of the IMBH channel. This is especially important because the rate model also depends on the cluster formation efficiency and the normalization of the cluster mass–radius relation (f_h), which are varied but not constrained by the N-body results. The text should be revised to state explicitly that the JWST comparison validates the assumed seeding efficiency only under the combined model assumptions, and should avoid presenting it as independent support for M_bullet(Sigma_h, Z).
- [§2.2.1, Eq. (2); Appendix A] The collisional mass-loss model, Eq. (2) with C=0.3 and mass loss taken from both the primary and secondary, is another ad-hoc choice with a strong cumulative effect: Appendix A shows that for a star doubling its mass the cumulative fractional loss is ~0.214, about 2.85 times the single-collision maximum and 1–2 orders of magnitude larger than secondary-only loss prescriptions. Recent hydrodynamical work on extended, marginally bound extremely massive stars suggests that mass loss can be even more catastrophic in some collisions. Although the authors acknowledge this uncertainty, it is not varied in the main sample, so the error bars on the final IMBH masses and on the metallicity threshold reflect only a subset of plausible prescriptions. At minimum, the paper should state how Eq. (2) affects the peak IMBH masses relative to the wind uncertainty, and ideally provide a small number of te
minor comments (5)
- [§3.2.1] Typo in the heading: 'The faction of clusters' should read 'The fraction of clusters'.
- [Fig. 2 caption] In the caption, 'IMBHs cannot from at Z=1.0 Zsun' should read 'cannot form'.
- [§4.6] The sentence 'The maximum collision and TDE rates by IMBHs in models HD9Z2 is are' has a grammatical error; 'is are' should be 'are'.
- [§3.4, Tables 4–5] The piecewise definitions of A(Z), B(Z), C(Z), D(Z), E(Z) are terse; an explicit worked example of how to assemble, say, A(Z) and Sigma_crit(Z) from Table 4 would help users implement Eq. (9) without error.
- [§6.1] The cluster formation efficiency Gamma is set to 0.3 and treated as constant; the text notes the linear scaling, but a brief discussion of the observed environmental variation of Gamma and its likely redshift evolution would improve the robustness of the rate estimates.
Circularity Check
No significant circularity: the fitting formula summarizes the simulations; the cosmic-rate model is a transparent application, not a validation loop.
full rationale
The derivation chain is: adopted stellar-physics inputs (Vink 2018 winds, Eq. 5; collisional mass loss, Eq. 2; EMS radii, Eq. 3) -> direct N-body simulations -> empirical fitting formulae M_bullet(Sigma_h,Z), Eqs. 9-10, fitted to the LOESS-smoothed simulation data of Fig. 7 -> cosmic formation rate model (Section 6) using external SFRD(Z) models and assumed cluster mass-size relations. No step reduces to its own output by construction. The fitting formulae are explicitly fits to the authors' own simulation results, and the paper labels them as fitting/empirical models rather than as independent predictions. The use of Eqs. 9-10 in Section 6 to populate clusters with IMBHs and to estimate R_IMBH is an application of the fitted relation, not a test of it; the JWST little-red-dot consistency check is explicitly framed as an upper-limit estimate relying on several simplified assumptions, not as evidence for the fitting formula itself. The strong sensitivity to the extrapolated Vink (2018) wind law beyond 900 Msun with no cap is a physical-modeling uncertainty, openly acknowledged in the abstract, Section 2.2.3, Section 4.2, and Appendices B and C; it is a robustness concern, not circularity. The self-citations (e.g., f_h=1/8 from earlier FROST papers, IMBH-IMBH merger rates) are used for initial-condition choices and context, not to justify the target result, and no uniqueness theorem or ansatz is imported from the authors' prior work. The paper is self-contained against external comparisons (Vergara et al. 2025a; Mapelli 2016; Gieles et al. 2018) and conducts additional direct simulations (Appendix C) to test the wind-rate-cap scenario. Thus no circular step can be substantiated with the paper's own equations.
Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger
free parameters (6)
- Collisional mass-loss constant C =
0.3
- ZAMS radius power-law coefficients a(Z), delta(Z) =
Table 1, e.g. a=9.588, delta=0.562 at Z=0.01 Zsun
- Massive-star wind normalization and power-law coefficients =
log(dm/dt) = -9.13 + 2.1 log(m*/Msun) + 0.74 log(Z/Zsun), no upper cap
- Parametrized IMBH-mass fit coefficients =
Tables 4-5: A1,A2,B1,B2,C1,C2,Sigma1,Sigma2,D1,D2,E1,E2
- Cluster mass-radius normalization f_h =
Isolated: 0.125-0.580; cosmic model: 1, 1/2, 1/4, 1/8 plus evolving variants
- TDE accretion fraction =
0.5
axioms (6)
- standard math Newtonian gravity with PN corrections up to 3.5PN for BH-BH interactions
- domain assumption PARSEC/SEVN stellar tracks with overshooting lambda=0.4; binary stars evolve as single stars in this code branch
- domain assumption Young clusters are initially gas-free Plummer spheres with Kroupa IMF, coeval ZAMS stars, and primordial binaries; no gas accretion onto collision products
- ad hoc to paper Collisional mass loss follows Eq. (2) with C=0.3 and removes mass from both primary and secondary stars
- ad hoc to paper Vink (2018) wind-loss rates are extrapolated above 900 Msun with no upper limit
- domain assumption Cosmic rate model assumes Chruslinska et al. (2025) SFRD(Z), cluster formation efficiency Gamma=0.3, -2 power-law cluster mass function, and f_h-based birth mass-size relation
read the original abstract
We explore the formation of intermediate mass black holes (IMBHs), potential seeds for supermassive black holes (SMBHs), via runaway stellar collisions for a wide range of star cluster (surface) densities ($4\times10^3 M_\odot$ pc$^{-2} \lesssim \Sigma_\mathrm{h} \lesssim 4\times10^6 M_\odot$ pc$^{-2}$) and metallicities $(0.01 Z_\odot \lesssim Z \lesssim 1.0 Z_\odot)$. Our sample of isolated (>1400) and hierarchical (30) simulations of young, massive star clusters with up to $N=1.8\times10^6$ stars includes collisional stellar dynamics, stellar evolution, and post-Newtonian equations of motion for black holes using the BIFROST code. High stellar wind rates suppress IMBH formation at high metallicities ($Z\gtrsim0.2 Z_\odot$) and low collision rates prevent their formation at low densities ($\Sigma_\mathrm{h}\lesssim 3\times10^4 M_\odot$ pc$^{-2}$). The assumptions about stellar wind loss rates strongly affect the maximum final IMBH masses ($M_\bullet\sim 6000 M_\odot$ vs. $25000 M_\odot$). The total stellar mass loss from collisions and collisionally boosted winds before $t=3$ Myr can together reach up to $5$--$10\%$ of the final cluster mass. We present fitting formulae for IMBH masses as a function of host star cluster $\Sigma_\mathrm{h}$ and $Z$ which can be used to seed SMBHs in high resolution cosmological hydrodynamical simulations and in semi-analytic models for galaxy formation. Our results favour IMBH formation in dense low metallicity environments similar to $z\sim10$ James Webb Space Telescope (\textit{JWST}) proto globular clusters. IMBH formation is suppressed in the high metallicity and low density conditions of the local Universe.
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