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DNA end tethering through break-induced DNA--protein condensation

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Pith's one-line read Broken DNA ends trigger a protein state change that drives condensation to tether the fragments.

desk verdict The paper models break-induced protein conversion enabling local DNA-protein condensation for end tethering, using simulations to show a kinetic competition outcome, but the conversion step is an untested modeling assumption. read the letter →

arxiv 2605.24987 v1 pith:2DEFLE5H submitted 2026-05-24 physics.bio-ph cond-mat.soft

Rakesh Das , Tarun Mascarenhas , Nagaraja Chappidi , Simon Alberti , Frank Jülicher This is my paper · ORCID
classification physics.bio-phcond-mat.soft
keywords DNArepairdouble-strandbreaksproteincondensationendtetheringBrowniandynamicskineticcompetitionfreeenergylandscape
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The reading

The paper proposes that DNA double-strand breaks cause nearby proteins to switch into a form that can condense with DNA. This switch allows condensation to form locally at the break site and capture both broken ends. Simulations reveal that tethering succeeds only if condensation outpaces the natural relaxation and separation of the DNA strands. An effective free energy landscape shows the process as a kinetic race between these dynamics. This offers a physical explanation for how cells localize repair machinery reliably despite molecular randomness.

What carries the argument

Break-induced conversion of proteins to condensate-competent state that enables DNA-protein condensation for tethering broken ends.

What would settle it

An experiment that finds no evidence of protein conversion to condensate-competent state upon DNA double-strand break, or that shows broken DNA ends always disperse without forming a tethering condensate.

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Core claim

Broken DNA ends can trigger a conversion of proteins from a soluble state to a condensate-competent state. This conversion drives local DNA-protein condensation, leading to either successful or failed tethering of the broken ends. Tethering is governed by a kinetic competition between polymer relaxation and condensation dynamics, as shown through Brownian dynamics simulations and theory.

Load-bearing premise

DNA double-strand breaks induce a conversion of proteins from a soluble state to a condensate-competent state.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • Local DNA-protein condensation achieves spatiotemporal localization at the break site.
  • Tethering is determined by a kinetic competition between polymer relaxation and condensation dynamics.
  • The process has two possible outcomes: successful tethering or failed tethering.
  • This provides a mechanism for reliable capture of both broken ends despite stochasticity.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • The conversion mechanism could be tested by measuring protein states before and after inducing DNA breaks.
  • It connects DNA repair to phase separation phenomena in cells.
  • Varying condensation rates in models might predict repair success under different conditions.
  • This physical picture may apply to other damage response pathways involving biomolecular condensates.
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Referee Report

2 major / 1 minor

Summary. The manuscript proposes that DNA double-strand breaks trigger conversion of proteins from a soluble to a condensate-competent state. This drives local DNA-protein condensation, which simulations show can produce either successful or failed tethering of broken ends. An effective free-energy landscape is constructed to identify stationary states, with tethering arising from kinetic competition between polymer relaxation and condensation dynamics. The work combines Brownian dynamics simulations with theoretical analysis to address spatiotemporal localization at break sites.

Significance. If the central premise holds, the study provides a physically grounded explanation for reliable DNA-end tethering via condensation, highlighting the role of kinetic competition. Strengths include the explicit use of Brownian dynamics to distinguish outcomes and the derivation of an effective free-energy landscape to rationalize stationary states and dynamics. These elements offer testable predictions for how condensation competes with polymer relaxation.

major comments (2)
  1. [Abstract] Abstract: The proposed conversion of proteins to a condensate-competent state at broken ends is introduced as a modeling assumption without a specified molecular trigger, kinetic rate, or supporting experimental reference. This step is load-bearing for the claimed break-specific localization and for the subsequent simulation outcomes of successful versus failed tethering.
  2. [Abstract] The effective free-energy landscape and stationary-state analysis (mentioned in the abstract) are constructed under the conversion assumption; without independent justification or sensitivity analysis for the conversion step, the identification of kinetic competition as the governing factor remains conditional on an untested premise.
minor comments (1)
  1. [Abstract] Clarify in the abstract or introduction whether the conversion is assumed to be instantaneous or rate-limited, and how this choice affects the reported competition between relaxation and condensation timescales.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

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We thank the referee for their careful review and constructive comments on the manuscript. We respond to each major comment below and have revised the abstract and main text to better frame the central modeling assumption as a hypothesis while adding sensitivity analysis on the conversion kinetics.

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  1. Referee: [Abstract] Abstract: The proposed conversion of proteins to a condensate-competent state at broken ends is introduced as a modeling assumption without a specified molecular trigger, kinetic rate, or supporting experimental reference. This step is load-bearing for the claimed break-specific localization and for the subsequent simulation outcomes of successful versus failed tethering.

    Authors: We agree that the conversion step is introduced as a modeling assumption and is central to the proposed mechanism for break-specific localization. The work is framed as a theoretical exploration of the physical consequences of this hypothesis rather than a claim of a specific molecular pathway. In the revised manuscript we have updated the abstract to explicitly describe the conversion as a proposed trigger and added a dedicated paragraph in the discussion that outlines plausible molecular candidates (e.g., post-translational modifications or recruitment of accessory factors) while noting that identifying the precise trigger lies beyond the scope of the present study. We have also included a new supplementary figure showing sensitivity of tethering success to the conversion rate constant over two orders of magnitude. revision: yes

  2. Referee: [Abstract] The effective free-energy landscape and stationary-state analysis (mentioned in the abstract) are constructed under the conversion assumption; without independent justification or sensitivity analysis for the conversion step, the identification of kinetic competition as the governing factor remains conditional on an untested premise.

    Authors: The effective free-energy landscape is derived directly from the model that incorporates the conversion step, and its purpose is to rationalize the stationary states and the observed kinetic competition between polymer relaxation and condensation that emerge in the Brownian dynamics simulations. We acknowledge that the conclusions are therefore conditional on the assumption. To strengthen the presentation we have added an explicit sensitivity analysis (new supplementary section) that varies both the conversion rate and the condensate interaction strength, confirming that the separation into successful versus failed tethering regimes persists across a broad parameter window. The revised abstract now states that the kinetic-competition picture holds within the framework of break-induced conversion. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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No circularity; mechanism proposed explicitly and explored via independent simulations

full rationale

The paper states 'Here, we propose that broken DNA ends can trigger a conversion of proteins from a soluble state to a condensate-competent state' and then combines this assumption with Brownian dynamics simulations and an effective free-energy landscape to identify outcomes. No equations or steps reduce a claimed prediction to a fitted parameter or self-citation by construction. The work is self-contained as an exploratory model under a stated premise, with no load-bearing self-citations or renamings of known results evident.

Assumptions & free parameters 0 free parameters · 1 assumptions · 1 invented entities

Ledger constructed from the abstract alone; full paper may contain additional simulation parameters or background assumptions.

assumptions (1)
  • ad hoc to paper Broken DNA ends trigger conversion of proteins from a soluble state to a condensate-competent state
    This conversion is the key postulate introduced to solve the localization and capture problem.
invented entities (1)
  • condensate-competent protein state induced by DNA break
    purpose: To produce local condensation specifically at the break site
    Postulated to achieve reliable tethering despite stochastic motion; no independent evidence supplied in abstract.

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read the original abstract

Cells deploy robust mechanisms to repair DNA damage, safeguarding genomic stability and cellular health, but the physical principles underlying these processes remain incompletely understood. Experiments show \emph{in vitro} that upon a DNA double-strand break, a DNA--protein condensate can tether the broken DNA ends before they disperse away, a critical step for subsequent repair biochemistry. However, it remains puzzling how such condensation reliably achieves spatiotemporal localization at the break site and captures both broken ends despite intrinsic stochasticity. Here, we propose that broken DNA ends can trigger a conversion of proteins from a soluble state to a condensate-competent state. Combining this idea with Brownian dynamics simulations and theory, we propose a physical mechanism for reliable DNA-end tethering. Simulations show that such break-induced conversion can drive local DNA--protein condensation with two possible outcomes: successful or failed tethering. To rationalize this, we construct an effective free energy landscape, identify the corresponding stationary states, and demonstrate that tethering is governed by a kinetic competition between polymer relaxation and condensation dynamics. Together, our study shows that DNA end-dependent conversion, coupled with DNA--protein condensation, can reliably tether broken DNA ends.

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Figure 1. FIG. 1. Reliable tethering of broken polymer ends can be achieved through break-induced [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p017_1.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 2. FIG. 2. Interplay between polymer dynamics and broken-end-dependent condensation gov [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p018_2.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 3. FIG. 3. A simple polymer–droplet model identifies distinct stationary states governing teth [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p019_3.png] view at source ↗

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