REVIEW 3 major objections 2 minor 16 references
A bivariate Gaussian belief propagation algorithm jointly estimates time and frequency offsets along with delay and Doppler parameters in OFDM-based distributed ISAC systems.
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Joint TO/CFO and delay/Doppler estimation via bivariate GaBP in OFDM DISAC systems approaches CRLB in simulations.
T0 review reviewed 2026-06-26 challenge →
load-bearing objection The paper's contribution is a linearized bivariate GaBP estimator for joint TO/CFO and delay/Doppler in OFDM DISAC, with simulations claiming CRLB proximity, but the linearization step is the part that needs scrutiny. the 3 major comments →
Joint Synchronization and Radar Parameter Estimation for OFDM-based DISAC Systems
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
Core claim
The proposed bivariate Gaussian belief propagation algorithm jointly estimates the time offset (TO) and carrier frequency offset (CFO) of each base station, as well as the delay and Doppler parameters of the DD channel in conventional OFDM systems, with radar and synchronization parameter estimates approaching the CRLB even at moderate-to-high SNR regimes.
What carries the argument
Bivariate Gaussian belief propagation (GaBP) applied to the linearized system model, which carries out the joint estimation of synchronization offsets and radar channel parameters.
Load-bearing premise
The system model can be linearized so that the bivariate Gaussian belief propagation algorithm can be applied to jointly estimate the parameters.
What would settle it
If Monte Carlo simulations or over-the-air tests at moderate-to-high SNR show that the joint TO, CFO, delay or Doppler estimates remain materially above the CRLB, the claimed performance of the linearized GaBP method would be falsified.
If this is right
- Range and velocity estimates become available at the same time as synchronization without dedicated pilot overhead.
- The same algorithm works inside standard OFDM frames, so no new waveform is required.
- Performance holds across multiple base stations in a distributed deployment.
- The method remains effective in doubly dispersive channels where both time and frequency selectivity are present.
Where Pith is reading between the lines
- The linearization step may allow similar GaBP techniques to be reused for other joint estimation problems that mix discrete and continuous parameters.
- If the linear approximation holds for larger numbers of base stations, the approach could scale to cell-free or massive distributed ISAC networks.
- Hardware impairments not captured by the linear model would need separate compensation before the GaBP stage.
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper proposes a joint synchronization and radar parameter estimation framework for OFDM-based distributed ISAC (DISAC) systems operating in doubly-dispersive channels. It states that the received-signal model can be linearized to enable a bivariate Gaussian belief propagation (GaBP) algorithm that jointly estimates per-BS time offset (TO) and carrier frequency offset (CFO) together with the delay and Doppler parameters of the DD channel. Simulation results are reported to show that the resulting range, velocity, TO, and CFO estimates approach the Cramér-Rao lower bound (CRLB) even at moderate-to-high SNR.
Significance. If the linearization remains accurate in the operating regime and the GaBP estimator is shown to be near-CRLB without bias from neglected higher-order terms, the work would supply a practical, low-complexity joint estimator for synchronization and sensing parameters in distributed ISAC deployments—an area of growing importance for 6G integrated sensing and communication.
major comments (3)
- [§3] §3 (System Model) and the linearization step preceding the GaBP derivation: the claim that the nonlinear phase term exp(−j2π(f_c τ + ν t)) can be replaced by a first-order expansion without materially affecting CRLB proximity is load-bearing for the central result. No quantitative bound on the neglected quadratic and higher-order terms is supplied, nor is the product of offset magnitude and bandwidth/time duration shown to remain ≪0.1 rad across the simulated parameter ranges.
- [Simulation section] Simulation section (results claiming CRLB approach): the reported MSE curves approach the CRLB at moderate-to-high SNR, yet the manuscript provides neither the exact ranges of TO/CFO/delay/Doppler values used nor an accompanying error analysis of the linearization. Without this, it is impossible to confirm that the operating point lies inside the regime where the first-order approximation is valid.
- [Algorithm derivation] Algorithm derivation (bivariate GaBP update equations): the transition from the linearized model to the factor-graph messages assumes the resulting likelihood remains exactly bivariate Gaussian. Any residual phase nonlinearity would violate this assumption and could introduce bias that prevents true CRLB attainment; no verification of the Gaussianity or bias is presented.
minor comments (2)
- Notation for the DD channel parameters (delay, Doppler) is introduced without an explicit table relating them to the radar range/velocity quantities reported in the figures.
- The abstract states that estimates “approach the CRLB,” but the simulation figures lack error bars or multiple Monte-Carlo runs, making it difficult to judge statistical significance of the proximity.
Simulated Author's Rebuttal
We thank the referee for the thorough review and valuable comments, which highlight important aspects of the linearization and its impact on the estimator performance. We agree that additional justification and analysis of the first-order approximation are warranted to strengthen the manuscript. We address each major comment below and will incorporate the necessary revisions.
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Referee: [§3] §3 (System Model) and the linearization step preceding the GaBP derivation: the claim that the nonlinear phase term exp(−j2π(f_c τ + ν t)) can be replaced by a first-order expansion without materially affecting CRLB proximity is load-bearing for the central result. No quantitative bound on the neglected quadratic and higher-order terms is supplied, nor is the product of offset magnitude and bandwidth/time duration shown to remain ≪0.1 rad across the simulated parameter ranges.
Authors: We acknowledge that the original manuscript does not provide an explicit quantitative bound on the neglected higher-order terms. In the revision, we will derive a bound on the phase approximation error and explicitly compute the product of offset magnitudes with bandwidth and time duration for the simulated regimes, demonstrating that the error remains below 0.05 rad. This analysis will be added to Section 3 to confirm that the first-order expansion does not materially affect proximity to the CRLB. revision: yes
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Referee: [Simulation section] Simulation section (results claiming CRLB approach): the reported MSE curves approach the CRLB at moderate-to-high SNR, yet the manuscript provides neither the exact ranges of TO/CFO/delay/Doppler values used nor an accompanying error analysis of the linearization. Without this, it is impossible to confirm that the operating point lies inside the regime where the first-order approximation is valid.
Authors: We agree that the simulation section lacks explicit parameter ranges and linearization error analysis. The revised manuscript will tabulate the exact ranges of TO, CFO, delay, and Doppler used in all simulations. We will also add a dedicated error analysis subsection quantifying the maximum linearization error over these ranges and its effect on MSE relative to the CRLB, confirming validity of the operating regime. revision: yes
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Referee: [Algorithm derivation] Algorithm derivation (bivariate GaBP update equations): the transition from the linearized model to the factor-graph messages assumes the resulting likelihood remains exactly bivariate Gaussian. Any residual phase nonlinearity would violate this assumption and could introduce bias that prevents true CRLB attainment; no verification of the Gaussianity or bias is presented.
Authors: After applying the linearization to the system model, the observation equation becomes exactly linear in the parameters of interest, so the likelihood is precisely bivariate Gaussian under additive white Gaussian noise; the factor-graph messages therefore remain exactly Gaussian by construction. To address concerns about any unmodeled effects, the revision will include a brief verification (via Monte Carlo checks on message distributions and estimator bias) confirming that the GaBP updates attain the expected Gaussian form and remain unbiased in the simulated regimes. revision: partial
Circularity Check
No circularity: algorithmic derivation validated externally
full rationale
The paper derives a joint estimator by linearizing the DD-OFDM model and applying bivariate GaBP; performance is assessed via simulation against the independent CRLB benchmark rather than by construction or self-citation. No quoted step reduces a claimed prediction to a fitted input, renames a known result, or imports uniqueness via author-overlapping citations. The central claims rest on the explicit linearization assumption and Monte-Carlo validation, which are falsifiable outside the derivation itself.
Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger
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read the original abstract
We propose a novel approach to the synchronization paradigm in distributed ISAC (DISAC) systems in doubly-dispersive (DD) channel environments via a joint synchronization and radar parameter estimation framework. The proposed method exploits the structure of the system model, which can be linearized in order to apply a bivariate Gaussian belief propagation (GaBP) algorithm that jointly estimates the time offset (TO) and carrier frequency offset (CFO) of each base station (BS), as well as the delay and Doppler parameters of the DD channel in conventional orthogonal frequency division multiplexing (OFDM) systems. Simulation results demonstrate the effectiveness of the proposed algorithm, showing that the radar parameter estimates (i.e., range and velocity) and synchronization parameter estimates (i.e., TO and CFO) approach the Cram\'er Rao lower bound (CRLB) even at moderate-to-high signal-to-noise ratio (SNR) regimes.
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