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Native Japanese raters penalize L2 emails on fluency, status, and solidarity; six LLMs reproduce the penalty without being told the writer is non-native.

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2026-08-04 23:50 UTC pith:O6X27N4Z

load-bearing objection A solid, novel human-LLM comparison of language attitudes in Japanese, with an addressable item-set mismatch that should be fixed before publication. the 3 major comments →

arxiv 2608.01629 v1 pith:O6X27N4Z submitted 2026-08-03 cs.CL

Human-LLM Alignment in Language Attitudes Toward Non-Native Japanese

Naho Orita , Hayato Ogawa , Daisuke Kawahara This is my paper
classification cs.CL
keywords language attitudesnon-native JapaneseLLM-as-a-judgefluency principlestatus and solidarityJapanese email evaluationbias in large language modelsI-JAS corpus
verification ladder T0 review T1 audit T2 compute T3 formal T4 reserved

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This paper asks whether large language models share native speakers' negative attitudes toward non-native writing, using Japanese as the test case. Across content-matched emails written by native speakers and learners, 1,536 Japanese raters scored learner emails lower on all three attitude dimensions—fluency, status, and solidarity—with the fluency gap roughly twice the status and solidarity gaps. Six LLM judges, given the same emails with no writer identity, reproduced the direction of that bias, and five reproduced the ordering across dimensions. The models differed from humans in a consistent way: every model understated the solidarity gap, and every model distinguished among learner L1 backgrounds where human raters did not. The paper concludes that human language attitudes are encoded, in attenuated form, in LLM evaluators, and that the language-attitudes framework can serve as a non-English yardstick for auditing them.

Core claim

In a content-controlled comparison of Japanese emails written by native speakers and learners, native raters scored L2 emails lower on all three attitude dimensions, with the fluency gap (−1.11) roughly twice the status gap (−0.57) and solidarity gap (−0.49). Six LLMs, given no writer identity, reproduced the direction of this bias, and five of six reproduced the ordering across dimensions. The models diverged from humans in two ways: no model reached the human solidarity gap, and all six differentiated among learner L1 backgrounds on at least two dimensions, where human raters showed no such differentiation. The paper interprets this as language attitudes encoded in LLMs, with fluency being

What carries the argument

The fluency principle—borrowed from speech-accent research and extended here to writing—is the load-bearing mechanism: non-native form is harder to process, and processing difficulty lowers evaluations most on fluency, about half as much on status, and least on solidarity. The study's engine is the I-JAS FOLAS corpus, which provides learner-written Japanese emails and native rewrites of the same content, so that content is held constant and only nativeness of form varies. The LLM-as-judge protocol converts the same nine Likert items into a prompt battery administered to six models, making human and machine evaluations directly comparable.

Load-bearing premise

The entire L1/L2 comparison rests on the assumption that the native rewrites of the learner emails differ only in nativeness; the paper concedes they may retain subtle register differences, so part of the gap could be politeness or formality rather than non-native form.

What would settle it

Present the six LLMs and, separately, a new panel of Japanese raters with one native-written email under two conditions: identical text with no writer information, and identical text with a metadata line naming the writer's L1. If the metadata line alone shifts the solidarity or status gap, category-based attitudes are at work independent of form; if ratings are unchanged, the bias is carried entirely by surface non-native form.

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If this is right

  • In automated screening of Japanese writing for hiring or assessment, non-native surface form alone can trigger lower competence and warmth ratings even when writer identity is hidden.
  • The three-scale language-attitudes battery offers a ready-made, non-English audit tool for LLM evaluators.
  • Because all models understated the solidarity gap, LLM judges reproduce less of the interpersonal warmth penalty than humans do, while still approximating human-level fluency and status penalties.
  • Because models distinguished among learner L1 backgrounds where humans did not, LLM judges may introduce new, text-driven hierarchies among non-native groups.
  • Extending the fluency principle to writing means content-matched written corpora can test processing-based bias without acoustic confounds, opening a new empirical route for sociolinguistics.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

These are editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • If the solidarity gap is driven by outgroup categorization rather than text, a matched-guise variant of these emails—identical text but an implied or labeled writer origin—should reproduce a human solidarity gap; this would cleanly separate category-based from form-based bias.
  • The open-weight 8B models showed the weakest L1/L2 gaps, suggesting bias magnitude may scale with model capability; if so, larger future models will track human language attitudes more closely, for better and worse.
  • The authors' closing observation about AI-polished non-native writing implies a testable prediction: when learners revise with LLMs and surface errors vanish, the fluency penalty should shrink, leaving any residual bias to register or content cues.
  • The models' differentiation among learner L1 backgrounds suggests their training data carries frequency signals of particular learner varieties; auditing those distinctions could reveal new bias axes absent from human attitude surveys.

Editorial analysis

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Referee Report

3 major / 5 minor

Summary. This paper compares human and LLM evaluations of Japanese emails written by L1 speakers and L2 learners, using matched L1-L2 email pairs from the I-JAS FOLAS corpus. Human raters (1,536 native Japanese speakers, each rating one email) evaluated 347 emails on three Likert subscales—fluency, status, and solidarity—and penalized L2 emails on all three dimensions, with the fluency gap (β = −1.11) roughly twice the status (β = −0.57) and solidarity (β = −0.49) gaps; the status-over-solidarity ordering was not statistically significant. Six LLMs, prompted in Japanese with no writer identity, also penalized L2 emails on all three dimensions; five of six reproduced the human dimension ordering. All LLMs understated the human solidarity gap, and all LLMs showed significant learner-L1 differentiation that human raters did not. The paper argues that the language-attitudes framework provides a ready-made audit yardstick for LLM evaluators beyond English.

Significance. If the results hold, the paper makes a valuable contribution: it extends the fluency principle from speech to writing, provides the first quantitative human-LLM comparison of language attitudes in Japanese, and uses a content-controlled corpus with factor-validated Japanese subscales. The design has notable strengths: a fully between-subjects human rating procedure, an EFA-confirmed three-factor structure, deterministic LLM calls with verified reproducibility, and direct comparisons on identical scales. The main divergences reported—attenuated solidarity gaps and learner-L1 differentiation in LLMs—are provocative and practically important for LLM-as-judge deployment. However, two load-bearing points need additional work before the headline claims are fully supported: the human and LLM analyses are computed on different item sets, and the native-rewrite manipulation leaves an acknowledged register confound unbounded.

major comments (3)
  1. [§Email Stimuli; §Analysis; Results] The human baseline and the LLM results are computed on different stimulus sets. The human βs (−1.11 fluency, −0.57 status, −0.49 solidarity) and the human learner-L1 likelihood-ratio tests come from all 347 rated emails (174 L1, 173 L2), while the LLM gaps and LLM learner-L1 tests use only the 145 complete L1-L2 pairs (290 emails). The 57 unpaired emails are never described. If they differ from paired emails in speech-act mix, learner-L1 composition, or difficulty, the headline divergences ('all understated the solidarity gap'; 'humans did not differentiate' vs 'all models differentiated') are not comparisons on equal footing. This is checkable with the existing data and should be reported.
  2. [§Email Stimuli; §Discussion (Limitations)] The causal interpretation that the L1/L2 gaps reflect attitudes to non-native writing presupposes that the native rewrites differ from the L2 originals only in nativeness. The paper acknowledges that the rewrites 'may not eliminate subtle register differences,' but the acknowledgment does not bound the confound. Because status and solidarity ratings are sensitive to politeness and formality, a systematic register difference is an alternative explanation for the size and ordering of the gaps. Please add a manipulation check (e.g., native-speaker ratings of formality or appropriateness) or a robustness analysis restricted to pairs matched on register.
  3. [§Results (Human Raters; LLMs)] The learner-L1 divergence rests on 18 unadjusted tests (6 models × 3 dimensions). Human null results (p ≥ .055, three tests) are interpreted as 'did not differentiate,' yet no equivalence test is provided; failing to reject a null is not strong evidence of absence. For LLMs, 17/18 tests significant at p < .05 are reported without multiple-testing control, and the p-values are not given, so the reader cannot judge whether the claim survives. Please report adjusted p-values (FDR or Bonferroni) and effect sizes, and consider a rater-type × learner-L1 interaction test for the human-LLM contrast.
minor comments (5)
  1. [§Discussion, first paragraph] The statement 'the fidelity of reproduction scaled with model capability' is asserted without a formal statistical test. With only six models, this claim should be softened or supported by a quantitative association.
  2. [Figure 3] Human distributions are over individual ratings (n ≈ 770 per condition) while LLM distributions are over item-level scores (n = 145). Comparing the widths of these distributions is misleading; please show LLM distributions at a comparable aggregation level or clearly label the different units.
  3. [§Method, Human Raters] The screening step that removed 433 submissions 'belonging to emails that had received more than the five planned ratings' needs clarification: if each rater saw one randomly assigned email, how could an email exceed a planned quota? Please describe the assignment/quota mechanism.
  4. [§Method, Analysis; Figure 4] The automated free-text coding is non-validated and non-exclusive, as the authors note. The classification of 丁寧 'polite' as a solidarity keyword is debatable; please provide the full keyword list and a sensitivity analysis excluding ambiguous keywords.
  5. [Introduction, H2] H2 is stated as a three-way ordering (fluency > status > solidarity), but the status-over-solidarity comparison was not significant. Consider splitting H2 into two component predictions so that the partial support is not masked by the unsupported ordering.

Circularity Check

1 steps flagged

Minor definitional overlap between the fluency subscale and the L1/L2 manipulation; otherwise the comparison is empirically self-contained.

specific steps
  1. self definitional [Evaluative Scales / Results Human Raters]
    "fluency (流暢だ “fluent,” わかりやすい “clear,” 明確だ “precise”) ... L2-written emails received significantly lower scores than L1-written emails on all three dimensions (status: β = −0.57; solidarity: β = −0.49; fluency: β = −1.11; all ps < .001; Fig. 1)"

    The L2 condition is operationalized as emails written by learners of Japanese, and the fluency subscale directly asks whether the writer is 'fluent' (流暢だ). The finding that L2 emails are rated lower on fluency is therefore partly a restatement of the manipulation: non-native writing is, by construction, less fluent. The paper presents this fluency gap as the central support for extending the fluency principle, but the size of the gap relative to status and solidarity retains empirical content, so this is a mild construct-overlap issue rather than a fully circular derivation.

full rationale

Apart from the fluency construct overlap, the paper is an empirical comparison rather than a derivation. H1–H3 were stated before analysis; the human baseline (Experiment 1) and LLM judgments (Experiment 2) are independent measurements; no parameter is fitted on a subset and then 'predicted' on a closely related quantity; and the cited corpus (I-JAS) and prior matched-guise work (Hofmann et al.) are external to the authors' claims. The LLM attenuation on solidarity and the learner-L1 differentiation are not entailed by the stimulus construction. The acknowledged limitation that native rewrites 'may not eliminate subtle register differences' and the unaddressed item-set mismatch (347 human items vs. 145 LLM pairs) are methodological validity concerns, not circularity.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

0 free parameters · 4 axioms · 0 invented entities

No free parameters were fitted; all reported coefficients are empirical estimates from the data. The study is observational-comparative, so the load-bearing premises are domain assumptions about measurement validity, stimulus parallelism, and statistical inference over deterministic LLM outputs.

axioms (4)
  • domain assumption The three-factor structure of status, solidarity, and fluency is a valid decomposition of language attitudes, as measured by nine Likert items.
    Adopted from sociolinguistic literature (Dragojevic et al., 2021); EFA on the present human data supports it. Invoked in 'Evaluative Scales'.
  • domain assumption L1 rewrites of L2 emails differ from the originals only in nativeness and not in content or register.
    Needed for the content-control claim; acknowledged as imperfect in the Discussion. Invoked in 'Email Stimuli'.
  • domain assumption LLM output at temperature 0 with a fixed seed is a stable, meaningful judge response, and the 145-item sample is a random sample for statistical inference.
    Underlies the OLS p-values for LLM ratings. The determinism was verified, but the inferential interpretation of p-values over a deterministic function of a convenience sample is assumed, not justified. Invoked in 'Analysis' and footnote 2.
  • domain assumption The I-JAS FOLAS corpus emails are representative of L1/L2 Japanese email writing for the three speech acts.
    Stimuli are all drawn from one corpus; generalizability beyond three speech acts is limited and stated as a limitation. Invoked in 'Email Stimuli' and Discussion.

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Large language models (LLMs) increasingly evaluate human writing in high-stakes domains such as hiring and academic assessment, putting non-native speakers at particular risk. Drawing on the language attitudes framework, we compared human and LLM evaluations of parallel L1- and L2-written Japanese emails on three dimensions: fluency, status, and solidarity. Japanese raters rated L2 texts significantly lower on all three dimensions, with a fluency gap roughly twice the size of the status and solidarity gaps. Six LLM judges reproduced the direction of this bias, and five reproduced its ordering across dimensions. The models diverged from humans in two ways: all understated the solidarity gap, the most socially grounded dimension, and all differentiated among learner L1 backgrounds where humans did not. LLM judges thus reproduce native speakers' language attitudes in a structured yet attenuated form, and the language attitudes framework offers a ready-made yardstick for auditing them beyond English.

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    HUMAN-LLM ALIGNMENT IN LANGUAGE ATTITUDES 12 Several limitations qualify these conclusions

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    proposes that the harder a person's speech is to process, the more negatively the person is evaluated. Through either route, these attitudes contribute to discrimination in employment, education, and legal contexts (Craft et al., 2020). Comparable patterns appear in written communication, where readers form impressions from textual cues alone. Spelling an...

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    to Japanese and show that the models not only rate L2 writing lower but also largely rank the three dimensions as human raters do, penalizing fluency most and solidarity least. The clearest divergence concerned solidarity: every model understated the human solidarity gap, and the multilingual commercial models, unlike humans, penalized solidarity signific...

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    and current alignment techniques address only part of the problem, such biases are unlikely to disappear through technical fixes alone (Resnik, 2025). Clarifying the boundary conditions of these biases, that is, when they emerge and how far they extend, is therefore essential for anticipating and mitigating harms (Morehouse et al., 2025). Yet LLM bias res...

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    and educational assessment (Pack et al., 2024). A growing literature documents systematic biases in LLMs against speakers of non-standard or non-native varieties (Blodgett et al., 2020; Gallegos et al., 2024). Because training data are dominated by “standard” American English (Bender et al.,

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    Analysis The dependent variables were the status, solidarity, and fluency scores. For the human data, the unit of analysis was a rater's score for one email. Because each email was scored by multiple raters, all models included a by-item random intercept. We fitted a linear mixed-effects model (statsmodels 0.14.6, REML) per subscale (status, solidarity, a...

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This paper was first reviewed by deepseek-v4-flash on August 4, 2026.