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Effects of Poisson Isocurvature Perturbations on Induced Gravitational Waves

Cosmology and Nongalactic Astrophysics · Submitted 1 Oct 2026 · 44 references

Pith's verdict: Clean new structural result on which contractions survive TT projection, honestly reported numerical limits, but the abstract oversells a bispectrum discriminator that is percent-level.

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CitationCheng-Jun Fang, Zi-An Zhou, Zong-Kuan Guo. "Effects of Poisson Isocurvature Perturbations on Induced Gravitational Waves." arXiv:2610.00989 (2026). https://pith.science/paper/PU3WX2JF
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Evaporating primordial black holes leave a Poisson shot-noise source whose non-Gaussianity is invisible in the induced gravitational-wave power spectrum and first appears in the tensor bispectrum, where it is weak.

The reading

This paper studies gravitational waves (GWs) generated by density fluctuations of primordial black holes (PBHs) when the early matter-dominated era ends abruptly through PBH evaporation, and asks how the discreteness of the black-hole population imprints itself on the induced tensor spectrum. Because PBHs are discrete and unclustered, their number-density fluctuations form an ideal Poisson process with nonzero connected correlations at every order, so the source is intrinsically non-Gaussian. The paper shows that the transverse-traceless projection of the tensor modes filters out all source correlations beyond the two-point level: the induced GW power spectrum depends only on the source's white-noise two-point spectrum, while the intrinsic three-point cumulant can enter only through the tensor bispectrum, via the 'BB' contraction topology alongside the Wick-type contractions that any scalar source generates. Numerically this new channel is subleading, changing the normalized bispectrum amplitude by at most about $4\times10^{-3}$, so in practice a discrete Poisson source and a 'Gaussianized' source with the same two-point spectrum remain nearly indistinguishable.

What carries the argument

The load-bearing machinery is the connected-block decomposition of the Poisson source correlators together with a transverse-traceless (TT) selection rule. An ideal Poisson process fixes every connected $N$-point function as $(2\pi)^3\delta_D(\sum_a \mathbf{k}_a)\,A_P^{N-1} W_N$, so the cumulant hierarchy carries no free parameters once the mean separation $k_{\rm UV}$ is chosen. The selection rule says that any contraction forming a 'self-loop' — pairing the two source legs of one tensor vertex — factorizes into a single-leg integral $L^\lambda(\mathbf{k})=\int d^3p\,\Pi^\lambda(\mathbf{k},\mathbf{p})F(p,\hat{\mathbf{k}}\cdot\hat{\mathbf{p}})$ of the form $e^\lambda_{ij}(\hat{\mathbf{k}})(A\delta_{ij}+B\hat{k}_i\hat{k}_j)$, which vanishes by $e^\lambda_{ii}=0$ and $e^\lambda_{ij}\hat{k}_j=0$. This reduces the tensor power spectrum to the $P P$ term and the tensor bispectrum to $P P P + B B$. The quantitative evaluation then rests on the sudden-evaporation time kernel $I_{\rm lRD}$, whose acoustic resonance at $u+v=c_s^{-1}$ produces the logarithmic GW enhancement, and on the short-wavelength amplitude prescription $S_\Phi(y)$ imported from earlier studies to set the ultraviolet response.

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Core claim

The paper's central claim is that the full hierarchy of intrinsic Poisson statistics of the source enters the induced tensor correlators according to a sharp selection rule. Whenever a contraction pairs the two scalar legs attached to the same tensor vertex, the surviving integral is axisymmetric around the external tensor momentum and is annihilated by the transverse-traceless (TT) polarization tensor, so the term vanishes. Applied to the Poisson cumulant hierarchy, the rule leaves only the $P P$ (Wick) term in the tensor power spectrum, and in the tensor bispectrum it leaves only the $P P P$ topology (8 of 15 pairings) and the $B B$ topology (4 of 10 pairings); the connected four-point term $T$, the $P T$ mixtures, and the fully connected six-point term $C_6$ all vanish. The $B B$ channel is the sole survivor carrying the intrinsic Poisson three-point cumulant $B_S = A_P^2 W_3$, and it therefore formally lifts the degeneracy between a discrete Poisson source and a Gaussianized source with the same white-noise power spectrum. The numerical evaluation for the sudden-evaporation benchmark ($M_{\rm PBH,f}=10^4$ g, $R_{\rm eva}=2.3\times10^6$) shows that the lift is weak in practice: the symmetric normalized amplitude difference between the full bispectrum and the pure $P P P$ part is $D_{\rm amp}\sim4\times10^{-3}$, and the $B B$ term leaves the zeros and configuration features of the bispectrum essentially unchanged. The paper also reports a scale-dependent ordering of bispectrum configurations — equilateral dominance at long wavelengths and near the cutoff, squeezed dominance in between — that differs from other induced-GW and primordial-tensor scenarios.

Load-bearing premise

The load-bearing premise is that the Poisson density fluctuation evolves linearly all the way down to the discreteness cutoff $k_{\rm UV}$ — the authors acknowledge small-scale PBH fluctuations may enter the nonlinear regime before evaporation — together with the imported short-wavelength amplitude prescription $S_\Phi(y)$ of Eq. (34); if the small-scale three-point statistics deviate from the ideal Poisson values, or if that amplitude profile is not the right one, the $B B$ amplitude and the ultraviolet shape of the bispectrum would shift.

Editorial extensions

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  • The induced tensor power spectrum cannot distinguish a discrete Poisson isocurvature source from any other source with the same white-noise two-point spectrum, because higher-order source cumulants are filtered out at second order.
  • The tensor bispectrum decomposes into a Wick-type part ($P P P$) that any scalar source generates and a $B B$ part that uniquely carries the intrinsic Poisson three-point cumulant, so the bispectrum breaks the two-point degeneracy in principle.
  • Quantitatively the $B B$ channel is subleading: the normalized amplitude difference against the pure $P P P$ part is about $4\times10^{-3}$, so the practical discrimination efficiency between a discrete and a Gaussianized source in this setup is very low.
  • The relative amplitude of the equilateral and squeezed bispectrum configurations follows an equilateral–squeezed–equilateral sequence as the momentum perimeter grows, a scale dependence distinct from the poltergeist model, standard radiation-era scalar-induced GWs, and the primordial tensor bispectrum of single-field inflation.
  • The selection rule extends beyond monochromatic, unclustered PBHs to any statistically homogeneous source with magnitude-only correlators and no preferred direction in the time kernel, including rare discrete objects such as oscillons and Q-balls that decay after matter domination.

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  • Because the self-loop vanishing is purely a property of the transverse-traceless projector, the same filtering should recur at the tensor trispectrum and higher orders: the connected source trispectrum $T_S$ and six-point spectrum $C_{6,S}$ would enter only through surviving non-separable topologies, so the tensor order at which intrinsic source non-Gaussianity can first appear likely rises with e
  • The small size of the $B B$ channel is tied to the sudden-evaporation kernel and its resonance band; in a different background the phase-space cancellation that suppresses $B B$ could be less severe, so the same formal selection rule might yield a much larger discreteness signal in other induced-GW setups.
  • The equilateral–squeezed crossover happens near the perimeter $\bar{C}\sim k_{\rm UV}$, suggesting that the bispectrum shape carries information about the discreteness scale itself; if the linear model is trusted, a future measurement of the GW bispectrum shape could in principle extract $k_{\rm UV}$ and hence the evaporating PBH mass.
  • An independent handle on the PBH population — from merger rates, microlensing, or the stochastic-background amplitude — could be cross-correlated with the predicted bispectrum shape, sharpening a test that the raw amplitude difference of order $10^{-3}$ cannot deliver by itself.
Original abstract

A sudden transition from an early matter-dominated era to a radiation-dominated era provides a representative mechanism for enhancing induced gravitational waves (GWs). In the primordial black hole (PBH) evaporation scenario, discrete PBH number-density fluctuations naturally generate Poisson isocurvature perturbations. By evaluating the GWs induced by these perturbations through the sudden evaporation transition, we show how the full hierarchy of intrinsic non-Gaussian statistics of a Poisson isocurvature source enters the induced GW spectra. We find that the tensor power spectrum retains only the two-point correlations of the scalar source, while higher-order correlations first appear in the tensor bispectrum. We also find a nontrivial scale dependence in the relative amplitudes of different bispectrum configurations, which may provide additional information for distinguishing the discrete PBH scenario from other induced-GW mechanisms.

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A sudden transition from an early matter-dominated era to a radiation-dominated era provides a representative mechanism for enhancing induced gravitational waves (GWs). In the primordial black hole (PBH) evaporation scenario, discrete PBH number-density fluctuations naturally generate Poisson isocurvature perturbations. By evaluating the GWs induced by these perturbations through the sudden evaporation transition, we show how the full hierarchy of intrinsic non-Gaussian statistics of a Poisson isocurvature source enters the induced GW spectra. We find that the tensor power spectrum retains only the two-point correlations of the scalar source, while higher-order correlations first appear in the tensor bispectrum. We also find a nontrivial scale dependence in the relative amplitudes of different bispectrum configurations, which may provide additional information for distinguishing the discrete PBH scenario from other induced-GW mechanisms.

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Figure 1. FIG. 1: Representative contractions for the four
Figure 2. FIG. 2: Absolute value of the total bispectrum of GWs
Figure 3. FIG. 3: Absolute value of the total bispectrum scanned

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