REVIEW 4 major objections 6 minor 23 references
A model that reads a task prompt and an image can predict where people will look under that goal.
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load-bearing objection Clean modular task-conditioned saliency pipeline; ablations undercut the claim that the full fusion design is necessary. the 4 major comments →
TDSal: Task-Based Top-Down Saliency Prediction Model
The pith
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Core claim
Conditioning dense saliency prediction on natural-language task embeddings, fused with YOLO-derived spatial features through a shallow transformer, produces task-dependent fixation maps that better track goal-directed human attention than free-viewing assumptions allow.
What carries the argument
TDSal: YOLO spatial features projected to 128 channels, a Sentence-BERT task token of matching size, and a one-layer transformer that treats the task token as an extra sequence element so self-attention can reweight image regions by goal.
Load-bearing premise
The paper treats the full language-plus-transformer stack as the right way to model task-driven attention even though its own ablations show stripped-down variants scoring higher on most standard saliency numbers.
What would settle it
On a larger multi-task eye-tracking set with open-ended prompts, measure whether maps from the full TDSal shift more correctly with the stated goal than maps from the no-task or no-transformer ablations, under a metric that scores semantic consistency with the prompt rather than only aggregate map similarity.
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper proposes TDSal, a modular top-down saliency model that conditions dense fixation-density prediction on natural-language task prompts. Visual features are taken from the first 10 layers of a pretrained YOLOv5su backbone (single 12×12×512 map after SPPF), projected by a 1×1 FPM to 128 channels, fused with a Sentence-BERT (MiniLM-L6) task token via a one-layer transformer encoder, and decoded to a 96×96 saliency map. Training uses a KL+CC loss on Albayrak’s four-task eye-tracking set (1,968 image–map pairs; 70/15/15 split). Reported test scores include NSS 3.4583, AUC–Borji 0.9177, AUC-J 0.9515 and sAUC 0.8649; qualitative overlays show prompt-dependent map shifts. Contextual comparisons to TGSal and SalClassNet and a single-checkpoint ablation of task, transformer, SBERT and FPM are provided.
Significance. Task-conditioned dense saliency is a practically relevant and under-served problem relative to free-viewing benchmarks. The modular design (detection backbone + compact language token + shallow fusion only) is a clear, reproducible alternative to heavy multimodal transformers or diffusion saliency models, and the authors correctly avoid claiming direct MIT300/SALICON superiority. A public repository is linked. If the fusion pathway were shown to improve goal-aligned attention under controlled same-dataset baselines and task-sensitive metrics, the work would be a useful contribution to top-down saliency and vision–language attention. As written, the quantitative case for the full architecture is not yet established, so significance remains conditional on stronger evidence for the central design claim.
major comments (4)
- Table 4 (and §4.5): the central claim that YOLO + Sentence-BERT + transformer fusion enables more faithful task-driven saliency is undercut by the paper’s own ablations. The w/o Transformer variant improves CC (0.6902 vs 0.6435), SIM (0.5575 vs 0.5160), NSS (3.9983 vs 3.6261), AUC–Borji, AUC-J and sAUC; w/o Task also edges the full model on CC/SIM/NSS. Reinterpreting this as a limitation of aggregate metrics is not supported by any new task-specific or semantic-consistency measure. Either introduce such a metric (e.g., prompt-swap consistency, per-task shift alignment) that favors the full model, or revise the claim so that necessity of TFM/task token is not asserted from these scores.
- §4.4 / Table 3: literature numbers for TGSal and SalClassNet are presented as contextual references, but they use different conditioning signals, datasets and protocols. Without same-dataset re-implementation or shared splits, absolute scores (NSS, AUC, etc.) cannot support that TDSal’s fusion design is competitive for natural-language task conditioning. At minimum, report a strong free-viewing or task-agnostic baseline trained on the same Albayrak split, and clarify that Table 3 is not a ranking.
- §4.5 and Limitations: each ablation is a single checkpoint with no error bars, seeds, or repeated runs. Metric differences of the size shown can arise from training noise on a 1,377-pair set. Load-bearing architectural conclusions require multi-seed means/stds (or at least several independent runs) before arguing that poorer full-model scores still vindicate the design.
- §3.3–3.4 / RQ1–RQ2: the dataset has only four fixed task categories. The paper claims conditioning on natural-language task descriptions and prompt-dependent shifts (Fig. 4), but does not test held-out phrasings, compositional prompts, or open vocabulary. Without that, the Sentence-BERT pathway’s benefit over a 4-way task ID embedding remains unproven; a controlled language-vs-ID ablation would directly address RQ1–RQ2.
minor comments (6)
- Abstract and §1 claim ‘more faithful modeling’ without stating the comparison condition; align wording with the limited, task-conditioned protocol used in §4.1.
- Table 2 vs Table 4: full-model numbers differ slightly (e.g., test CC 0.6423 vs ablation CC 0.6435); state whether ablations use val or a different checkpoint/protocol.
- §3.2: ‘spatially rich’ / multi-receptive-field language for a single stride-32 map after SPPF is easy to over-read; a short note that no FPN is used would help.
- Fig. 4: add the exact task prompt text per column so readers can judge semantic alignment without guessing.
- Loss (§3.4): α=β=1.0 is fine but unmotivated; a one-line sensitivity note would strengthen reproducibility claims.
- Minor typos/spacing: ‘humanattentionisoftenshaped’, ‘saliencymap’, ‘T able 1’, inconsistent ‘V alidation’ spacing in Table 2.
Circularity Check
No circular derivation: TDSal is ordinary supervised multimodal training; reported metrics are not forced by fitted constants or self-citation chains.
full rationale
Walking the claimed chain (YOLO spatial features + Sentence-BERT task token + shallow transformer fusion → task-conditioned saliency maps, evaluated by CC/KL/SIM/NSS/AUC on Albayrak’s four-task eye-tracking set) yields no step that reduces to its inputs by construction. The loss L = α KL + β(1−CC) with α=β=1.0 is a hand-set training objective, not a parameter fitted on a subset and then re-reported as a prediction. Architecture choices (first 10 YOLOv5su layers, 1×1 FPM, MiniLM-L6→128 task token, 1-layer fusion encoder) are a priori design decisions, not uniqueness theorems or ansatzes imported from the authors’ prior work. Citations to Albayrak supply the dataset, not a load-bearing theoretical premise that forbids alternatives; there is no self-citation uniqueness claim, no renaming of a known free-viewing law as a new task-driven identity, and no equation that is definitionally identical to a fitted input. Ablation Table 4 (full model underperforming w/o Transformer / w/o Task on several aggregate metrics) and the authors’ reinterpretation of that result are validity/interpretation issues, not circular forcing of the reported numbers. The paper is self-contained as standard empirical ML; circularity score is therefore 0.
Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger
free parameters (3)
- loss weights alpha, beta =
1.0, 1.0
- learning rate and epoch count =
1e-4, 50
- feature dimensions (512->128, task 384->128) =
128
axioms (3)
- domain assumption Early YOLO layers supply spatially rich, object-centered features that align with human gaze under tasks.
- domain assumption Sentence-BERT MiniLM embeddings of natural-language task prompts carry the semantic intent needed to modulate saliency.
- ad hoc to paper Aggregate saliency metrics (CC, NSS, SIM, AUC) can fail to capture task-semantic consistency, so poorer scores for the full model do not refute the architecture.
invented entities (1)
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TDSal modular fusion pathway (FPM + TFM + task token)
no independent evidence
read the original abstract
Visual saliency aims to predict the regions of an image most likely to attract human visual attention. While most saliency models assume free-viewing conditions, human attention is often shaped by explicit task goals. In this work, we address task-driven saliency prediction by proposing a model that conditions visual attention on natural-language task descriptions. The model produces task-dependent saliency maps that reflect how attention shifts under different viewing intents. Through quantitative and qualitative analysis, we show that incorporating explicit task semantics enables more faithful modeling of goal-directed visual attention.
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