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Three tractatus-style texts form a New Tractatus Program that de-absolutizes reality by treating facts, the world, and consciousness as perspective-bound rather than as one closed total inventory.
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load-bearing objection Clear programmatic synthesis of three tractatus-style texts around perspective-dependence; useful framing, not a new result, with the main soft spot being self-inclusion and still-schematic consciousness diagnostics. the 2 major comments →
The New Tractatus Program: Quantum Mechanics, Anti-Totalitarian Ontology, and Consciousness
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
Core claim
The three texts constitute a post-classical program whose common target is the fantasy of an absolute standpoint. Facts are perspectival values of variables in physical interactions; perspectives themselves are physical rather than essentially mental; totality is not an object of knowledge; and consciousness is a special integrated, temporally thick, operationally accessible organization of physical perspective. The New Tractatus Program does not deny reality; it denies that reality must be available as a single, final, perspective-free totality.
What carries the argument
Perspective, first physicalized as interaction, correlation, and record (Pphys) in relational quantum mechanics, then restricted and enriched for conscious experience (Pconc) by integration, temporal thickness, access, memory, control, and report. This differentiated bridge concept, together with anti-totalitarian ontology (no final fact-of-all-facts), carries the argument from quantum facts through ontology to consciousness.
Load-bearing premise
The three source texts share one coherent pressure point and can be read as successive applications of a single grammar of perspective-dependence; if they are only loosely analogous the unified program does not hold.
What would settle it
A demonstration that the relational reading of quantum mechanics still requires or permits a perspective-independent inventory of all facts would undercut the ontological step; alternatively, an operational protocol that identifies what-it-is-like with no coupling, access channel, or record would break the consciousness extension.
If this is right
- Quantum facts become values of variables relative to physical interactions and records, not absolute intrinsic properties.
- Objectivity is reconstructed as stability, repeatability, and communicability across perspectives rather than a God's-eye view.
- Attributions of consciousness require explicit evidential protocols; silence applies where no specified protocol can distinguish the claim.
- Ontology remains realist but open, layered, and perspective-bound, with no privileged metaphysical observer and no single master-language.
- The limits of language become inseparable from the limits of physical and operational perspective.
Where Pith is reading between the lines
- The same operational constraints could limit over-attribution of consciousness or selfhood to artificial systems that lack stable access, memory, or report channels.
- The measurement problem may be usefully rephrased as a question of translation and compatibility among physical perspectives rather than collapse or many-worlds.
- Integration diagnostics that separate conscious from non-conscious control systems could be tested experimentally once timescales and partitions are fixed by protocol.
- Panpsychist inflation loses force once perspective is generalized physically while consciousness is restricted by temporal thickness and access.
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The manuscript proposes a 'New Tractatus Program' by reading Covoni–Rovelli's Tractatus Quanticus, Ismael–Price's Against Totalitarianism, and Sienicki–Sienicki's Tractatus de Conscientia as a single philosophical constellation. Its unifying pressure point is the demand for a perspective-free description of reality (final inventory of facts, view from nowhere, or self outside the physical order). On the relational interpretation of quantum mechanics, facts become values of variables in physical interactions rather than absolute constituents; anti-totalitarian ontology rejects a closed world-totality; and consciousness is treated as an integrated, temporally thick, operationally accessible subclass of physical perspective (Pconc), not a substance or mere behavior. The paper is explicitly programmatic rather than demonstrative: it develops philosophical consequences of the relational reading without claiming RQM is uniquely correct, and it organizes a grammar of partiality (coupling, records, access, silence) across physics, ontology, and consciousness.
Significance. If the constellation premise holds, the paper offers a useful post-classical framing that links relational quantum mechanics, anti-absolutist ontology, and operational consciousness theory under one disciplined grammar of perspective-dependence. Strengths include repeated, correct caveats that the aim is interpretive and non-demonstrative (abstract, §1.4, §3), the explicit four-type taxonomy of perspective (Pphys, Pepist, Pbio, Pconc) that blocks panpsychic inflation and subjectivism (§1.2, §8), and the careful distinction between necessary/diagnostic constraints and sufficiency for consciousness (§7.1, §7.4, §7.6–7.7). For history and philosophy of physics, this is a coherent programmatic synthesis rather than a new theorem; its value is conceptual organization and a shared vocabulary for limits of attribution, not a decisive empirical or formal result.
major comments (2)
- §1.3 and the sequence 'facts are perspectival → no final world-totality → consciousness is a special operationally constrained perspective' are load-bearing for the claim that the three texts form one program rather than three loosely analogous exercises. The manuscript asserts a 'single pressure point' and a 'natural sequence,' but does not show that Ismael–Price and Covoni–Rovelli independently motivate the operational consciousness constraints of Tractatus de Conscientia (or vice versa) beyond shared anti-absolutist rhetoric. Because one of the three pillars is the authors' own prior Tractatus de Conscientia, the unity claim risks partial circularity: the paper both defines the program and treats that prior work as evidence of the program's coherence. A short comparative subsection that isolates shared theses versus author-specific extensions (with explicit textual anchors) would make
- §6 (esp. the four senses of anti-totality and the appeal to Kochen–Specker [25]) and §4.3–4.4 treat 'no final perspective-independent inventory' as the strongest ontological claim while also stating that the quantum claim is internal to RQM and does not refute other realist interpretations. The manuscript needs a clearer separation between (i) interpretive consequence of RQM, (ii) contextuality results that constrain non-contextual value assignments, and (iii) the full ontological anti-totality slogan. As written, readers can still slide from 'RQM de-absolutizes facts' to 'physics rules out any absolute inventory,' which overreaches the paper's own caveats and is load-bearing for the anti-totalitarian ontology centerpiece.
minor comments (5)
- Abstract and References: arXiv identifiers for Against Totalitarianism and Tractatus de Conscientia appear swapped relative to the body text and the abstract's own parentheticals (cf. [9] vs [10] and the abstract's arXiv numbers). Align all three places.
- §3.4 and §7.4: the schematic formulas (conditional probability, I(A:B), C_Δ(t)) are helpfully flagged as non-derivational, but a single sentence stating that they are notational placeholders and not claimed measures would further reduce the risk of over-reading.
- §1.2 table: the four-type taxonomy is useful; consider numbering it as Table 1 and referring to it by number in §8–9 so the differentiation of 'perspective' is easier to track.
- §9.6: the list of formal-development tasks is appropriate for a programmatic paper; a brief pointer to which tasks are nearest-term (e.g., anti-overgeneration for Pconc) would help readers assess research agenda versus open wishlist.
- Minor consistency: 'Tractatus Quanticus' / 'Tractatus de Conscientia' italicization and hyphenation of 'perspective-free' / 'perspective free' vary slightly across sections; standardize.
Circularity Check
Partial circularity from load-bearing self-inclusion of the authors' own Tractatus de Conscientia as a defining pillar of the 'New Tractatus Program' they name and organize.
specific steps
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self citation load bearing
[Abstract; §1.3 'Three Recent Texts as One Philosophical Constellation'; §1.4 Main Thesis]
"This article reads two recent tractatus-style texts—Niccolò Covoni and Carlo Rovelli’s Tractatus Quanticus … and Mikołaj Sienicki and Krzysztof Sienicki’s Tractatus de Conscientia … together with … Against Totalitarianism, as parts of what may be called a New Tractatus Program. … The three texts therefore stand in a natural sequence: Tractatus Quanticus: facts are perspectival; Against Totalitarianism: there is no final world-totality behind perspectives; Tractatus de Conscientia: consciousness is a special, operationally constrained perspective."
The paper both invents the name 'New Tractatus Program' and supplies one of its three constitutive pillars (the authors' own prior Tractatus de Conscientia). The claimed unity and 'natural sequence' therefore rest in part on the authors' decision to include their own work as the consciousness extension; the program's existence as described is not fully independent of that self-citation.
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self definitional
[§1.4 Main Thesis; Conclusion §11.4]
"The main thesis of this article is that the three texts, taken together, constitute a post-classical and post-Wittgensteinian program of philosophical clarification. … The New Tractatus Program does not deny reality; it denies that reality must be available as a single, final, perspective-free totality."
The 'New Tractatus Program' is defined by the authors as the grouping that includes their own text; the subsequent claim that the texts 'constitute' such a program and share one pressure point is therefore true largely by the definitional act of grouping rather than by an independent derivation that the three texts form a single coherent object.
full rationale
This is a programmatic philosophical synthesis, not a derivation of new physics, theorems, or quantitative predictions. It does not fit parameters and re-label them as predictions, smuggle ansatze, import uniqueness theorems, or rename known empirical patterns. The sole circularity pattern is self-citation that is load-bearing for the central claim of a unified 'New Tractatus Program': the paper defines the program as the constellation of three texts and then treats the authors' own prior Tractatus de Conscientia as the third successive application of the shared grammar (facts perspectival o no final totality o consciousness as operational perspective). Without that self-inclusion the described sequence and 'single pressure point' are incomplete. The circularity remains partial because Covoni–Rovelli and Ismael–Price supply independent external anchors, the paper repeatedly marks its own consciousness diagnostics as schematic/non-sufficient, and the stated aim is only to organize arguments rather than prove a new ontology. Score 4 reflects one load-bearing self-citation whose central claim still retains independent content from the external texts.
Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger
axioms (5)
- domain assumption Relational quantum mechanics is a viable interpretation under which facts are values of variables relative to physical interactions/perspectives, with no required absolute inventory of intrinsic properties.
- domain assumption Wittgenstein's early diagnosis that the world as totality and the metaphysical subject cannot be treated as ordinary objects inside the world remains a valid therapeutic constraint.
- domain assumption Consciousness attribution requires some specified evidential protocol (report, control, memory, neural/causal trace); there is no protocol-free identifier of 'what-it-is-like'.
- ad hoc to paper The three source texts share a single pressure point (rejection of perspective-free description) sufficient to constitute one program rather than three loosely related exercises.
- domain assumption Objectivity can be reconstructed as stability, communicability, and invariance across perspectives without a God's-eye view.
invented entities (4)
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New Tractatus Program
no independent evidence
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Anti-totalitarian ontology
no independent evidence
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Four-type taxonomy of perspective (Pphys, Pepist, Pbio, Pconc)
no independent evidence
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Integration surplus C_Δ(t)
no independent evidence
read the original abstract
This article reads two recent tractatus-style texts - Niccolo Covoni and Carlo Rovelli's Tractatus Quanticus (arXiv:2512.06034) and Mikolaj Sienicki and Krzysztof Sienicki's Tractatus de Conscientia (arXiv:2607.05459) - together with Jenann Ismael and Huw Price's interpretive introduction Against Totalitarianism (arXiv:2601.01070), as parts of what may be called a New Tractatus Program. The program is unified by a single pressure point: the demand for a perspective-free description of reality, whether as a final inventory of facts, a world viewed from nowhere, or a self placed outside the physical order. On the relational interpretation of quantum mechanics, Tractatus Quanticus revises Wittgenstein's opening claim by replacing the world as the totality of facts with the world as what is the case from some perspective. Against Totalitarianism then makes the philosophical stakes of this move explicit by challenging the idea of the world as one closed totality. Tractatus de Conscientia carries the same discipline into the theory of consciousness, where conscious experience is treated neither as a mysterious substance nor as mere behavior, but as an integrated, temporally thick, operationally accessible perspective. Read together, these texts point toward a post-classical philosophy of partiality: reality is not abolished, but de-absolutized; consciousness is not mystified, but constrained by access, coupling, memory, and evidence; and the limits of language become inseparable from the limits of perspective. The article does not claim that relational quantum mechanics is the only viable interpretation of quantum theory. It instead develops the philosophical consequences of the relational reading. Its aim is programmatic rather than demonstrative: it does not prove a new ontology, but organizes a family of arguments around disciplined perspective-dependence.
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