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Astro2020 APC White Paper: The MegaMapper: a z > 2 spectroscopic instrument for the study of Inflation and Dark Energy

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Pith's one-line read MegaMapper proposes coupling a 6.5-m Magellan telescope with DESI spectrographs to measure inflation parameters and dark energy from galaxy redshifts at 2<z<5.

desk verdict This is a clean instrument concept paper that extends DESI and LSST to z>2 but stops at the conceptual stage with no throughput or coupling calculations. read the letter →

arxiv 1907.11171 v1 pith:7QJIEJF4 submitted 2019-07-25 astro-ph.IM hep-ex

David J. Schlegel , Juna A. Kollmeier , Greg Aldering , Stephen Bailey , Charles Baltay , Christopher Bebek , Segev BenZvi , Robert Besuner
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Guillermo Blanc Adam S. Bolton Mohamed Bouri David Brooks Elizabeth Buckley-Geer Zheng Cai Jeffrey Crane Arjun Dey Peter Doel Xiaohui Fan Simone Ferraro Andreu Font-Ribera Gaston Gutierrez Julien Guy Henry Heetderks Dragan Huterer Leopoldo Infante Patrick Jelinsky Matthew Johns Dionysios Karagiannis Stephen M. Kent Alex G. Kim Jean-Paul Kneib Luzius Kronig Nick Konidaris Ofer Lahav Michael L. Lampton Dustin Lang Alexie Leauthaud Michele Liguori Eric V. Linder Christophe Magneville Paul Martini Mario Mateo Patrick McDonald Christopher J. Miller John Moustakas Adam D. Myers John Mulchaey Jeffrey A. Newman Peter E. Nugent Nathalie Palanque-Delabrouille Nikhil Padmanabhan Anthony L. Piro Claire Poppett Jason X. Prochaska Anthony R. Pullen David Rabinowitz Solange Ramirez Hans-Walter Rix Ashley J. Ross Lado Samushia Emmanuel Schaan Michael Schubnell Uros Seljak Hee-Jong Seo Stephen A. Shectman Joseph Silber Joshua D. Simon Zachary Slepian Marcelle Soares-Santos Greg Tarle Ian Thompson Monica Valluri Risa H. Wechsler Martin White Michael J. Wilson Christophe Yeche Dennis Zaritsky
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classification astro-ph.IMhep-ex
keywords MegaMapperspectroscopicsurveyinflationparametersdarkenergyhigh-redshiftgalaxiesLSSTtargetselectionDESIspectrographsbaryonacousticoscillations
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The reading

The paper advances a concept for a ground-based spectroscopic survey instrument called MegaMapper that targets galaxies at redshifts between 2 and 5. It relies on pairing an existing 6.5-meter telescope at Las Campanas Observatory with DESI spectrographs to reach a multiplexing level of 20,000. Target selection would draw from LSST imaging. The resulting redshift catalog is intended to constrain early-universe inflation models and the properties of dark energy through large-scale structure statistics at previously inaccessible epochs.

What carries the argument

Coupling of DESI spectrographs to the Magellan 6.5-m telescope to deliver 20,000-fiber multiplexing over the required field while maintaining throughput and resolution for the 2<z<5 redshift range.

What would settle it

An optical ray-trace or throughput calculation that shows the proposed coupling cannot simultaneously achieve the required field of view, resolution, and light-gathering efficiency for 20,000 fibers at z>2.

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Core claim

MegaMapper is a proposed instrument that would obtain spectra of galaxies at 2 < z < 5 using a 6.5-m Magellan telescope coupled to DESI spectrographs for a multiplexing factor of 20,000, sited at Las Campanas Observatory to exploit LSST imaging for target selection and thereby measure parameters of inflation and dark energy.

Load-bearing premise

The DESI spectrographs can be successfully coupled to the Magellan telescope while preserving the throughput, spectral resolution, and field of view needed for the stated multiplexing and redshift coverage.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • The survey would deliver redshifts for millions of galaxies at 2<z<5, enabling measurements of the baryon acoustic oscillation scale and redshift-space distortions at early times.
  • These data would tighten constraints on the primordial power spectrum and thereby discriminate among inflation models.
  • Combined with LSST photometry, the instrument would allow efficient selection of emission-line galaxies and Lyman-break galaxies across the full southern sky accessible from Las Campanas.
  • The high multiplexing would reduce the time required to complete a volume-limited sample compared with existing facilities.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • If the instrument meets its multiplexing goal, it could serve as a pathfinder for even larger multiplexed systems on future extremely large telescopes.
  • The same dataset would also yield measurements of the growth rate of structure at z>2, providing an independent test of general relativity on cosmological scales.
  • Synergies with CMB experiments could cross-calibrate the amplitude of fluctuations between the early and late universe.
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Editorial analysis

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Referee Report

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Summary. The manuscript is an Astro2020 APC White Paper proposing the MegaMapper instrument: a 6.5-m Magellan telescope at Las Campanas Observatory coupled to DESI spectrographs to deliver 20,000 multiplexing for galaxy redshift surveys at 2 < z < 5, using LSST imaging for target selection, with the goal of constraining Inflation parameters and Dark Energy.

Significance. If the instrument concept can be realized with the stated multiplexing, throughput, and resolution, the resulting high-redshift spectroscopic sample would provide distinctive constraints on early-universe physics and dark-energy evolution that complement existing and planned lower-redshift surveys.

major comments (1)
  1. [Abstract] Abstract: The central claim that DESI spectrographs can be coupled to the Magellan telescope while preserving the throughput, spectral resolution, and field-of-view needed for 20,000 multiplexing (and thus the forecasted Inflation and Dark Energy constraints) is stated at the conceptual level only; no throughput budget, fiber-injection efficiency calculation, or resolution-preservation estimate is supplied, which directly bears on whether the science reach is achievable.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

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We thank the referee for their constructive review of our Astro2020 APC White Paper. We address the single major comment below.

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  1. Referee: [Abstract] Abstract: The central claim that DESI spectrographs can be coupled to the Magellan telescope while preserving the throughput, spectral resolution, and field-of-view needed for 20,000 multiplexing (and thus the forecasted Inflation and Dark Energy constraints) is stated at the conceptual level only; no throughput budget, fiber-injection efficiency calculation, or resolution-preservation estimate is supplied, which directly bears on whether the science reach is achievable.

    Authors: We agree that the abstract and manuscript present the coupling of DESI spectrographs to the Magellan telescope at a conceptual level without supplying quantitative throughput budgets, fiber-injection efficiencies, or resolution-preservation estimates. This level of detail is typical for Astro2020 APC White Papers, whose primary purpose is to outline scientific motivation and high-level instrument concepts rather than full engineering analyses. We will revise the manuscript to add a short paragraph (or subsection) summarizing the expected performance based on DESI's demonstrated throughput and resolution, together with references to existing fiber-coupling studies for similar systems, to strengthen the justification for the claimed multiplexing and science reach. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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No circularity: white paper is conceptual instrument proposal with no derivations or equations

full rationale

The document is an Astro2020 APC white paper outlining a proposed instrument (MegaMapper) for future observations. It contains no equations, model derivations, fitted parameters, predictions from first principles, or self-citation chains that could reduce to inputs by construction. The content is forward-looking design description relying on coupling existing DESI hardware to a Magellan telescope, presented at the conceptual level without quantitative budgets or reductions that match any enumerated circularity pattern. This is self-contained as a proposal against external benchmarks like LSST imaging and DESI performance data.

Assumptions & free parameters 1 free parameters · 2 assumptions · 0 invented entities

The proposal rests on design parameters and external survey assumptions without independent verification in this document.

free parameters (1)
  • multiplexing factor = 20000
    The value of 20,000 is stated as the target capability without derivation from first principles or data in the abstract.
assumptions (2)
  • domain assumption LSST imaging will be available and sufficient for target selection at the required depth and area
    The abstract explicitly states that the instrument would fully access LSST imaging for target selection.
  • domain assumption DESI spectrographs can be coupled to the 6.5-m Magellan telescope while preserving required performance
    The central instrument concept in the abstract depends on this coupling being feasible.

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Pith. "Pith review of Astro2020 APC White Paper: The MegaMapper: a z > 2 spectroscopic instrument for the study of Inflation and Dark Energy." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/7QJIEJF4

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read the original abstract

MegaMapper is a proposed ground-based experiment to measure Inflation parameters and Dark Energy from galaxy redshifts at 2<z<5. A 6.5-m Magellan telescope will be coupled with DESI spectrographs to achieve multiplexing of 20,000. MegaMapper would be located at Las Campanas Observatory to fully access LSST imaging for target selection.

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Figure 1. Number of galaxy redshifts as a function of time for the largest cosmology surveys. [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p004_1.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 2. Rendering of the Magellan-style telescope with the secondary mirror and 7-element [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p008_2.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 3. The optical systems on the Magellan telescope. [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p009_3.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 4. Figure 4: Spot diagram for the telescope and corrector optics. [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p010_4.png]
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Figure 5. Figure 5: Optical model of the DESI and SDSS-V spectrographs, which are identical systems aside [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p011_5.png]

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