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Galaxy star formation and colors correlate strongly with local density across all stellar masses around Abell 2029.

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load-bearing objection Standard density-quenching analysis on A2029 that adds a data point but supplies too little on errors and completeness to judge the mass trends. the 3 major comments →

arxiv 2606.04655 v1 pith:CGMYGCAV submitted 2026-06-03 astro-ph.GA

Environmental Dependence of Star Formation and Galaxy Colors around Abell 2029

Xiaolan Hou , Heng Yu This is my paper
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keywords galaxy evolutionenvironmental effectsstar formation quenchinggalaxy clusterslocal densityquenched fractionred fractionAbell 2029
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The pith

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The analysis uses dense spectroscopic coverage from DESI and SDSS across a ten-by-ten degree field to measure how the fraction of galaxies that have stopped forming stars and the fraction that appear red change with local surface density. These fractions rise with density in low-mass, medium-mass, and high-mass galaxies alike, although the rise is gentler at the lowest masses. The persistence of the trend even among low-mass systems indicates that environmental effects shape galaxy evolution over a broad mass range and that colors can mark large-scale structure.

Core claim

For galaxies of all masses, both the quenched fraction and the red fraction increase significantly with local surface density Σ5. The environmental dependence is somewhat weaker for galaxies with 9.5 ≤ log M*/M⊙ < 10.0 than for higher-mass systems, yet remains statistically significant in every bin examined.

What carries the argument

Local surface density Σ5 measured from the fifth nearest neighbor, used to track the quenched fraction f_Q and red fraction f_red across three fixed stellar-mass intervals.

Load-bearing premise

The surface-density estimator Σ5 and the mass bin edges capture true environmental influence without large biases from spectroscopic incompleteness or selection in the DESI/SDSS samples.

What would settle it

A flat relation between Σ5 and both f_Q and f_red in any mass bin, after accounting for possible incompleteness, would falsify the claimed density dependence.

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If this is right

  • Quenching processes operate on low-mass galaxies inside and near clusters.
  • Galaxy color remains a usable tracer of large-scale structure even when stellar mass is low.
  • The mass dependence of the environmental signal is gradual rather than abrupt.
  • Combined DESI and SDSS spectroscopy enables density measurements over wide areas around clusters.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

These are editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • The weaker trend at low mass may reflect a shift in the relative importance of different quenching channels.
  • Color-based environmental maps could extend to regions where full spectroscopy is unavailable.
  • Repeating the measurement in other clusters would test whether the pattern is generic or specific to A2029.

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Referee Report

3 major / 1 minor

Summary. The manuscript analyzes quenched fraction f_Q and red fraction f_red for galaxies around Abell 2029 using DESI and SDSS spectroscopy in a 10°×10° field. It reports strong correlations of both fractions with local surface density log10 Σ5 across three stellar-mass bins (low: 9.5 ≤ log M⋆ < 10.0; medium: 10.0 ≤ log M⋆ < 10.5; high: ≥10.5), with the environmental dependence somewhat weaker but still significant in the low-mass bin, suggesting galaxy colors trace large-scale structure even for low-mass systems.

Significance. If robust after bias corrections, the results would observationally support mass-dependent environmental effects on star formation and color, reinforcing the use of photometric tracers in dense environments. The high-density spectroscopic coverage is a positive feature, but the absence of completeness analysis or error quantification limits the strength of the conclusions.

major comments (3)
  1. [Abstract] Abstract: The claim that variations 'remain significant' in the low-mass bin is stated without error bars, bootstrap uncertainties, or statistical tests (e.g., Spearman rank or χ²), preventing evaluation of whether the weaker trend is distinguishable from noise.
  2. [Methods] Methods (inferred from data description): No quantitative assessment is given of spectroscopic completeness or fiber-collision corrections as a function of log Σ5 within each mass bin. Given that SDSS/DESI incompleteness is known to rise with local density, this omission directly affects the reliability of the reported f_Q and f_red trends.
  3. [Results] Results: The central interpretation that Σ5 faithfully traces environment without major selection bias is load-bearing, yet the text supplies no demonstration that completeness is flat across density or that weights fully mitigate density-dependent sampling, especially for the low-mass bin where the effect is claimed to be weaker.
minor comments (1)
  1. [Abstract] Abstract: Consider specifying the exact number of galaxies per mass bin and the redshift range to allow reproducibility assessment.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

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We thank the referee for their thorough review and valuable comments on our manuscript analyzing the environmental dependence of star formation and galaxy colors around Abell 2029. The feedback points to areas where additional statistical rigor and bias analysis can improve the robustness of our conclusions. We respond to each major comment below and commit to making the necessary revisions.

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  1. Referee: [Abstract] The claim that variations 'remain significant' in the low-mass bin is stated without error bars, bootstrap uncertainties, or statistical tests (e.g., Spearman rank or χ²), preventing evaluation of whether the weaker trend is distinguishable from noise.

    Authors: We agree with this observation. The current abstract does not provide these quantitative details. In the revised version, we will incorporate bootstrap-derived error bars and report the p-values from Spearman rank correlation tests for the trends in each mass bin, including the low-mass bin, to substantiate the claim of significance. revision: yes

  2. Referee: [Methods] No quantitative assessment is given of spectroscopic completeness or fiber-collision corrections as a function of log Σ5 within each mass bin. Given that SDSS/DESI incompleteness is known to rise with local density, this omission directly affects the reliability of the reported f_Q and f_red trends.

    Authors: This is a valid concern. Our manuscript currently lacks a detailed completeness analysis. We will add this assessment in the Methods section, calculating and presenting the spectroscopic completeness and fiber-collision corrections as functions of local density within each stellar mass bin, using the known survey selection functions. revision: yes

  3. Referee: [Results] The central interpretation that Σ5 faithfully traces environment without major selection bias is load-bearing, yet the text supplies no demonstration that completeness is flat across density or that weights fully mitigate density-dependent sampling, especially for the low-mass bin where the effect is claimed to be weaker.

    Authors: We acknowledge that the manuscript does not explicitly demonstrate the flatness of completeness or the effectiveness of weights. We will revise the Results section to include such a demonstration, with additional figures or tables showing completeness versus density and the impact of weights, with particular attention to the low-mass bin. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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No circularity: observational fractions vs. density reported directly from data

full rationale

The paper performs a straightforward observational analysis: it computes quenched fraction f_Q and red fraction f_red in bins of local surface density log10 Σ5 and stellar mass, then reports the trends. No model is fitted, no parameter is tuned to a subset of the data and then called a prediction, and no derivation chain reduces any claimed result to its own inputs by construction. The central claims are empirical correlations measured from DESI/SDSS spectroscopy; they stand or fall on the data and completeness corrections, not on any self-referential definition or self-citation loop. This is the normal, non-circular case for a purely observational study.

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Environmental processes drive galaxy evolution, with the impact varying significantly across different stellar masses. We present a comprehensive environmental analysis of the galaxies within a $10^\circ \times 10^\circ$ field around A2029, utilizing high-density spectroscopic data from the DESI and SDSS surveys. We investigate the quenched fraction ($f_Q$) and red fraction ($f_{red}$) as functions of local surface density ($\log_{10} \Sigma_5$) across three stellar mass intervals (low-mass: $9.5 \le \log M_\star/M_\odot < 10.0$; medium-mass: $10.0 \le \log M_\star/M_\odot < 10.5$; high-mass: $\log M_\star/M_\odot \geq 10.5$ ). Our results show that, for galaxies of all masses, both star formation activity and galaxy color are strongly correlated with the local density. Although the environmental dependence of both the quenched and red fractions is somewhat weaker in low-mass galaxies than in their high-mass counterparts, the variations remain significant. This suggests that galaxy colors, even for low-mass systems, can serve as effective tracers of large-scale structure.

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Figures reproduced from arXiv: 2606.04655 by Heng Yu, Xiaolan Hou.

Figure 1
Figure 1. Figure 1: Spectroscopic data completeness. Upper panel: Spectroscopic completeness as a function of r￾band magnitude. Bottom panel: Spatial distribution of the spectroscopic completeness. The colorbar represents the completeness ratio. (9.5 ≤ log M⋆/M⊙ < 10, 1569 galaxies), medium-mass (10 ≤ log M⋆/M⊙ < 10.5, 1493 galaxies), and high-mass (log M⋆/M⊙ ≥ 10.5, 1488 galaxies). 2.3 Local Surface Density (Σ5) To quantitat… view at source ↗
Figure 2
Figure 2. Figure 2: Distribution of galaxies in the (g − r) color versus stellar mass (log M⋆/M⊙) plane. Purple crosses represent the member galaxies of the A2029 cluster as identified by the BT algorithm (Yu & Diaferio 2025). The diagonal solid black line denotes the best-fit red sequence, defined by the relation g − r = 0.074 log M⋆/M⊙ + 0.095. The parallel red line indicates the 1σ deviation from this fit. Galaxies located… view at source ↗
Figure 4
Figure 4. Figure 4: In this 50×50 mosaic, the color of each pixel represents the median Σ5 value of all galax￾ies within that pixel, subsequently smoothed with a 2-pixels-wide Gaussian kernel. This map pro￾vides an approximate representation of the matter distribution within the field of view. The central massive region, including A2029, A2033 and A2029S(log10 Σ5 > 1.0), its surrounding groups and filaments(0.5< log10 Σ5 <1.0… view at source ↗
Figure 3
Figure 3. Figure 3: Distribution of galaxies in the log SFR versus log M⋆/M⊙ plane. Purple and orange points rep￾resent galaxies with spectroscopic redshifts from the SDSS and DESI surveys, respectively. The diag￾onal black line corresponds to a constant specific star formation rate of log sSFR = −11 yr−1 , which serves as the empirical threshold for separating the star-forming main sequence from the quenched pop￾ulation. The… view at source ↗
Figure 4
Figure 4. Figure 4: Spatial distribution of local surface density ( [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p007_4.png] view at source ↗
Figure 5
Figure 5. Figure 5: Specific star formation rate (sSFR) and quenched fraction ( [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p008_5.png] view at source ↗
Figure 6
Figure 6. Figure 6: Correlations between galaxy properties and local surface density ( [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p008_6.png] view at source ↗
Figure 7
Figure 7. Figure 7: Quenched Fraction Excess (QFE, left) and Red Fraction Excess (RFE, right) as a function of [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p009_7.png] view at source ↗
Figure 8
Figure 8. Figure 8: Median (g − r) color and red fraction (fred) as a function of local surface density (Σ5). Similar to [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p010_8.png] view at source ↗
Figure 9
Figure 9. Figure 9: Color density map of galaxies in the A2029 field. All symbols and contours are the same as in [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p011_9.png] view at source ↗
Figure 10
Figure 10. Figure 10: Relationship between median (g − r) color and local surface density log10 Σ5. Each grid pixel represents the median values within a spatial bin of approximately 12′ , color-coded by the number of galaxies (N) per bin. Red open circles denote the identified substructures from BT algorithm (Yu & Diaferio 2025). The red dashed line derived from the fit to the X-ray substructures [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/ful… view at source ↗
Figure 11
Figure 11. Figure 11: Color density map of low-mass (9.5 ≤ log M⋆/M⊙ < 10; left), medium-mass (10 ≤ log M⋆/M⊙ < 10.5; middle) and high-mass (log M⋆/M⊙ ≥ 10.5; right). All symbols and contours are the same as in [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p012_11.png] view at source ↗
Figure 12
Figure 12. Figure 12: Relationship between median (g − r) color and local surface density log10 Σ5 across different stellar mass regimes. The panels from left to right represent the low-mass (9.5 ≤ log M⋆/M⊙ < 10.0), medium-mass (10.0 ≤ log M⋆/M⊙ < 10.5), and high-mass (log M⋆/M⊙ ≥ 10.5).The blue solid lines show the best-fit relations for each mass regime. All other symbols and contours are the same as in [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:fi… view at source ↗

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