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Standard scientific images can diagnose atmospheric outer scale and dome seeing from how image quality changes with wavelength.

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2026-07-31 18:01 UTC pith:LFPZRAHP

load-bearing objection Solid feasibility extension of their IFS turbulence method to long-slit and multi-band data; useful, honestly framed, still needs external L0/dome truth. the 3 major comments →

arxiv 2607.28092 v1 pith:LFPZRAHP submitted 2026-07-30 astro-ph.IM

Focal-Plane Diagnostics of Atmospheric and Dome-Induced Turbulence: Exploring techniques and applications

Bego\~na Garc\'ia-Lorenzo , Seifeldin Abouelella , Kabir Baig , Zenaida Garc\'ia Rodr\'iguez , Kshitij Ghimire , Mois\'es Pulido Torres , Alejandro Trujillo Ramos , Jose A. Acosta-Pulido
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Julio A. Castro-Almaz\'an Donaji Esparza-Arredondo Antonio Eff-Darwich
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keywords Atmospheric effectsDome-induced turbulenceOuter scaleSeeing-limited observationsPSF modellingSite characterizationImage quality
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Ground-based telescopes lose sharpness to atmospheric turbulence and to extra blurring generated inside the dome. Seeing is routinely monitored, but the outer scale of turbulence and the strength and wavelength slope of dome seeing are still sparsely measured, which weakens image-quality forecasts and point-spread-function models. This paper shows that the same wavelength trend of image quality already present in ordinary seeing-limited data can be fitted to a von Kármán atmosphere plus a non-Kolmogorov dome term, recovering those missing parameters. The method, first developed for integral-field spectrographs, is shown to work on long-slit spectra and on a handful of simultaneous broad-band images. The recovered parameters then supply physically motivated three-dimensional PSF models for tasks such as separating an active galactic nucleus from its host galaxy. If the approach holds under wider validation, routine science observations become a free, continuous complement to dedicated site monitors and a practical aid for future extremely large telescopes.

Core claim

Widely available seeing-limited scientific observations—not only integral-field cubes but also long-slit spectra and simultaneous multi-band images—encode enough wavelength-dependent spatial information to constrain atmospheric seeing, the outer scale L0, and the amplitude and spectral index of dome seeing by fitting the observed image-quality curve to the analytic von Kármán long-exposure model plus a quadratic non-Kolmogorov dome term.

What carries the argument

The wavelength dependence of long-exposure image quality under homogeneous conditions, compared with the von Kármán prediction IQ_LE(λ)≈ε0(λ)√(1-2.183(r0/L0)^0.356) and the total IQ_T²(λ)≈IQ_LE²+ε_dome² with ε_dome∝λ^(γ-4)/(γ-2). Fitting this curve (LSQ then MCMC) is what extracts the turbulence parameters.

Load-bearing premise

After fitting spatial profiles, leftover instrumental and slit effects are small enough that the simple quadratic atmosphere-plus-dome model still recovers the true turbulence parameters without simultaneous independent truth data.

What would settle it

Obtain simultaneous independent measurements of L0 and dome seeing (for example from AO telemetry or a dedicated site monitor) on the same nights as the long-slit or multi-band science data; if the focal-plane MCMC values systematically disagree outside the quoted uncertainties, the claim fails.

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If this is right

  • Archival long-slit standard-star spectra and routine multi-band imaging sequences can be re-analyzed for site statistics without new hardware.
  • Five simultaneous broad-band channels already recover parameters consistent with full narrow-band spectral sampling, enabling turbulence monitoring at sub-second cadence on time-domain instruments.
  • Recovered ε0, L0 and dome terms supply wavelength-dependent 3-D PSF models usable for AGN–host deblending and other PSF-sensitive reductions even when no bright reference star sits in the field.
  • Observatory pipelines could emit turbulence diagnostics as a free by-product of standard science reductions, complementing DIMM and MASS monitors.
  • The same diagnostics feed image-quality prediction and observing-strategy tools needed for extremely large telescope operations.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

These are editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • Because the method needs only homogeneous multi-wavelength spatial profiles, any future multi-channel imager or multi-object spectrograph with a wide enough slit becomes a de-facto turbulence sensor.
  • Parameter degeneracies between L0 and dome γ will shrink once a physically calibrated enclosure model replaces the present free power-law, turning the phenomenological fit into a true site-characterization tool.
  • If short-cadence multi-band sequences can track temporal changes in dome seeing, operators gain a real-time flag for when to open vents or adjust thermal control.

Editorial analysis

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Referee Report

3 major / 5 minor

Summary. The manuscript extends a previously published IFS-based method for estimating atmospheric seeing, outer scale L0, and dome-induced turbulence from the wavelength dependence of long-exposure image quality. Using the von Kármán long-exposure IQ formula (Eq. 1) plus a quadratic dome term with free spectral index γ (Eqs. 2–3), the authors present exploratory analyses of archival OSIRIS@GTC long-slit spectrophotometric data and of synthetic five-band broadband images reconstructed from MUSE cubes. They also outline how the recovered parameters can constrain wavelength-dependent 3-D PSF models for AGN–host deblending. The central claim is that routine seeing-limited observations (not only IFS) can supply operationally useful turbulence diagnostics that complement dedicated site monitors.

Significance. If the approach can be externally validated, it would turn large volumes of archival and routine science data into a practical source of L0 and dome-seeing constraints—parameters that remain sparsely measured yet matter for PSF reconstruction, IQ prediction, and ELT operations. The work is a natural and useful extension of the authors’ earlier IFS demonstration. Strengths include an explicit internal consistency check (five synthetic broadband channels versus 30 narrow-band filters on the same MUSE cubes; Fig. 7, Table 3), transparent MCMC posterior exploration of parameter degeneracies (Fig. 4), and a clear statement that the present analyses are preliminary and still require simultaneous independent validation. These elements make the paper a solid exploratory contribution to astronomical instrumentation and site characterization.

major comments (3)
  1. [§3.1, Abstract, Conclusions] §3.1 and Conclusions: The OSIRIS long-slit analysis is presented without any simultaneous independent L0 or dome-seeing measurement. The authors correctly label it a “preliminary demonstration,” yet the abstract and final paragraph still claim “meaningful and operationally useful constraints.” Given the four-parameter model (ε0, L0, ε_dome, γ), the acknowledged degeneracies (Fig. 4), and the secondary-instrumental-effects assumption, the language of operational utility should be tempered to match the body until external validation is shown or clearly scoped as future work.
  2. [§3.1–3.2, Eqs. 2–3, Fig. 4] §3.1 (Eqs. 2–3) and §3.2: The quadratic decomposition IQ_T² ≈ IQ_LE² + ε_dome² with a free power-law index γ is treated as phenomenological. For the GTC data there is no enclosure-specific prior, and the VLT dome model is simply reused. Because the same IQ(λ) curve is used both to fit and to “constrain” the four parameters, the physical uniqueness of the recovered L0 and γ remains untested. A short quantitative discussion of residual degeneracies (or a simulated recovery test with known input L0/dome) is needed before the multi-band and long-slit extensions can be regarded as robust.
  3. [§3.1, Table 1, Fig. 2] §3.1: The assumption that slit truncation and instrumental aberrations are secondary (so that Moffat FWHM traces pure turbulence IQ) is stated but not quantified. The slit is 2.52 arcsec while the derived seeing is ~1.3 arcsec; a brief assessment of truncation bias or comparison with a wider-slit or imaging control would strengthen the claim that the observed chromatic trend is turbulence-dominated.
minor comments (5)
  1. [Abstract, §5] Abstract and §5: The phrase “operationally useful” is stronger than the exploratory framing used in §3.1 and the Conclusions; aligning the abstract with the more cautious body text would improve consistency.
  2. [Table 2] Table 2 header still refers to “MUSE-measured IQ” while the table reports OSIRIS results; this is a copy-paste residual that should be corrected.
  3. [Fig. 3] Figure 3 caption and text: the LSQ curve is described once as purple and once as red dashed; please make color references consistent.
  4. [§4] §4 on 3-D PSF models and AGN–host deblending is largely prospective and cites prior work; a sentence clarifying what is newly demonstrated here versus what remains planned would help the reader.
  5. Minor typographical inconsistencies appear in author names and in the rendering of L0 / ε0 throughout; a careful proof-read is recommended.

Circularity Check

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No significant circularity: ordinary inverse fits of an external turbulence model to IQ(λ); self-citations are methodological lineage, not load-bearing uniqueness.

full rationale

The central procedure measures focal-plane IQ(λ) and fits free parameters (ε0, L0, ε_dome, γ) to the external von Kármán long-exposure formula (Tokovinin 2002, Eq. 1) plus a phenomenological quadratic dome term (Eqs. 2–3, in the lineage of Racine et al.). Reporting those best-fit values as turbulence diagnostics is standard parameter estimation, not a by-construction identity between input and claimed output. DIMM seeing supplies an external initialization/comparison for the OSIRIS test. The five- versus thirty-band MUSE exercise is an internal information-content check on the same cubes, framed as feasibility of reduced spectral sampling rather than an independent prediction of new observables. Self-citations to the authors’ prior IFS method [2], the companion multi-wavelength analysis [7], and the AGN–PSF application [8] establish lineage and reuse of the same framework; they do not import an unverified uniqueness theorem or force the numerical results. The body explicitly calls the long-slit work a preliminary demonstration, treats the dome model as phenomenological, and states that rigorous validation against simultaneous independent L0 and dome-seeing measurements is still required. No load-bearing step reduces the claimed constraints to their inputs by definition. Residual concerns are about external validation and possible instrumental systematics, not circularity.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

6 free parameters · 6 axioms · 0 invented entities

The central feasibility claim rests on standard atmospheric-optics formulae plus a phenomenological dome term and several fitting choices. Almost all numerical ‘turbulence diagnostics’ are free parameters fit to IQ(λ); physical content imported from Tokovinin and prior author papers; no new entities are postulated beyond that dome power-law parameterization already used in [2]/[6].

free parameters (6)
  • ε0 (atmospheric seeing at reference wavelength) = OSIRIS MCMC ~1.27″; MUSE fields ~0.84–1.00″
    Fit per observation/field by LSQ and MCMC to IQ(λ); initialized from DIMM or prior LSQ.
  • L0 (atmospheric outer scale) = OSIRIS MCMC ~24 m; MUSE ~12–17 m
    Free fit in Eq. 1; large posterior uncertainties; initialized ~15 m for ORM.
  • ε_dome (dome-seeing amplitude) = ~0.20–0.24″ (MUSE); ~0.23″ (OSIRIS)
    Free amplitude in quadratic IQ sum; prior/init ~0.25″ from VLT experience; bounded 0–0.5″.
  • γ (dome turbulence spectral index) = ~3.4–3.5 across fits
    Free exponent in ε_dome(λ)∝λ^{(γ−4)/(γ−2)}; Kolmogorov is γ=11/3; fit allows non-Kolmogorov dome.
  • Moffat profile parameters per wavelength slice
    FWHM (IQ) extracted from Moffat fits to spatial profiles; intermediate fitted quantities that define the data vector.
  • Synthetic broad-band filter set (5×920 Å) = first center 5210 Å; width 920 Å
    Hand-chosen equal-width bands to emulate HiPERCAM-like sampling; not instrument-native passbands.
axioms (6)
  • domain assumption Long-exposure IQ follows Tokovinin’s von Kármán approximation IQ_LE(λ)≈ε0(λ)√(1−2.183(r0/L0)^0.356) (Eq. 1).
    Imported from [3] and used as the atmospheric forward model throughout §§2–3.
  • domain assumption Total focal-plane IQ is the quadratic sum of atmospheric and dome contributions (Eq. 2), with dome wavelength dependence a power law in γ (Eq. 3).
    Taken from CFHT/VLT practice [6] and prior IFS paper [2]; treated as phenomenological, not enclosure-calibrated.
  • ad hoc to paper Instrumental aberrations and slit truncation are secondary so that measured FWHM traces turbulence-dominated IQ.
    Explicit first-order assumption in §3.1 despite noted Moffat wing residuals and untested ≥3× seeing slit rule.
  • domain assumption Spatial profiles are adequately summarized by Moffat FWHM for turbulence fitting.
    Standard astronomy PSF practice; used for OSIRIS slices and MUSE stars.
  • domain assumption TNG DIMM seeing, after airmass projection, is a reasonable external reference for GTC/OSIRIS line-of-sight conditions despite ~390 m separation and height difference.
    §3.1 cites ORM homogeneity studies [4] while noting local effects may still differ.
  • ad hoc to paper Five simultaneous broad-band IQ points suffice to constrain the same four-parameter turbulence model as dense IFS sampling.
    Tested only via synthetic bands on existing MUSE cubes (§3.2), not on a real multi-channel imager.

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Atmospheric turbulence remains the dominant source of image degradation in ground-based astronomy. Its impact depends not only on the integrated turbulence strength but also on the wavefront spatial-coherence outer scale (\LO) and on turbulence generated within the telescope enclosure (dome seeing). While seeing, coherence time, and related parameters are routinely monitored at major observatories, measurements of \LO\ and dome-induced turbulence remain sparse, limiting our ability to predict image quality and to construct accurate point-spread function (PSF) models. Building on methodology recently developed for seeing-limited integral-field spectroscopic (IFS) data, we present a series of complementary studies showing how spatial information encoded in standard observations can be used to diagnose both atmospheric and dome turbulence. We investigate the feasibility of extending these techniques beyond IFS observations to other seeing-limited instruments through the analysis of wavelength-dependent spatial profiles. We also present the development of data-driven three-dimensional PSF models based on atmospheric statistics for the reconstruction of seeing-limited IFS observations. These results show that widely available seeing-limited scientific observations, both from archival data and routine observatory operations, can provide meaningful and operationally useful constraints on key turbulence parameters and on the spectral behavior of dome seeing, complementing dedicated site-testing instrumentation. The resulting turbulence diagnostics have direct applications to PSF modelling, image reconstruction, image-quality prediction, and the optimization of future ELT operations.

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Figures reproduced from arXiv: 2607.28092 by Alejandro Trujillo Ramos, Antonio Eff-Darwich, Bego\~na Garc\'ia-Lorenzo, Donaji Esparza-Arredondo, Jose A. Acosta-Pulido, Julio A. Castro-Almaz\'an, Kabir Baig, Kshitij Ghimire, Mois\'es Pulido Torres, Seifeldin Abouelella, Zenaida Garc\'ia Rodr\'iguez.

Figure 1
Figure 1. Figure 1: Wavelength dependence of the long-exposure IQ computed using the analytical approximation derived in [ [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p003_1.png] view at source ↗
Figure 2
Figure 2. Figure 2: (Left) Example of a two-dimensional OSIRIS spectrum after sky subtraction. The vertical bright feature [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p005_2.png] view at source ↗
Figure 3
Figure 3. Figure 3: Wavelength dependence of the IQ (open black squares) at the OSIRIS focal plane, derived from the long [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p006_3.png] view at source ↗
Figure 4
Figure 4. Figure 4: The posterior probability distributions of the free parameters obtained from the MCMC analysis. The diagonal [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p007_4.png] view at source ↗
Figure 5
Figure 5. Figure 5: (a) Combined field of view reconstructed from the four MUSE data cubes analyzed in this work. The brightest [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p009_5.png] view at source ↗
Figure 6
Figure 6. Figure 6: Wavelength dependence of the IQ at the MUSE focal plane for the four MUSE data cubes analyzed in this work, [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p011_6.png] view at source ↗
Figure 7
Figure 7. Figure 7: Comparison of turbulence parameters derived from fitting the IQ wavelength dependence over the MUSE [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p012_7.png] view at source ↗

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