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Cosmological perturbations through a simple bounce

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Laura E. Allen, David Wands (Portsmouth)

Astrophysics · Submitted 22 Apr 2004 · 68 references

Pith's verdict: A careful, honest model study that settles the gauge question for bounces and quantifies the tensor fine-tuning, with a couple of loose ends in the perturbativity argument.

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CitationDavid Wands (Portsmouth), Laura E. Allen. "Cosmological perturbations through a simple bounce." arXiv:astro-ph/0404441 (2004). https://pith.science/paper/54CFKRPK
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A collapsing universe followed by a non-singular bounce can imprint a scale-invariant spectrum of adiabatic density perturbations, provided the collapse phase expands as a power law with scale factor proportional to $(-t)^{2/3}$.

The reading

The paper asks whether the observed primordial density perturbations could have been laid down during a contracting phase rather than during inflation. The authors build an explicit, non-singular four-dimensional bounce model: an ordinary scalar field with an exponential potential dominates at early and late times, while a massless field with negative kinetic energy (a ghost) grows in importance only near the bounce and violates the null energy condition just enough to reverse collapse into expansion. They then take vacuum fluctuations on small scales, let them stretch outside the Hubble radius during collapse, and follow them numerically through the bounce in a gauge chosen to stay well behaved there. The payoff is that a collapse phase with $a$ proportional to $(-t)^{2/3}$ produces a scale-invariant spectrum of adiabatic scalar perturbations in the expanding phase, so a contracting universe is a viable alternative source of large-scale structure. The catch is that the same mechanism produces tensor perturbations whose amplitude, relative to scalars, can exceed observational limits unless the bounce is sufficiently asymmetric.

What carries the argument

The load-bearing device is a change of both time variable and gauge. Because the ghost field obeys $χ' = K a^2$, it is monotonic through the bounce, so $q = κχ/√6$ serves as a global clock where conformal time and the expansion rate $h$ fail. In terms of $q$, the background is described by bounded variables $α = φ'/χ'$, $β = a√(2V)/χ'$, $γ = √6 h/(κχ')$ satisfying $α^2 + β^2 - γ^2 = 1$, with the bounce at the neck $γ = 0$, and trajectories are straight lines $α - (λ/√6)γ = C$ in the $(α,γ)$ plane. The constant $C$ labels the trajectory and controls how asymmetric the bounce is. Perturbations are then evolved as coupled first-order equations in the uniform-$χ$ gauge, with the two constraint equations held back as a numerical consistency check rather than used to eliminate variables whose coefficients vanish at the bounce.

Extended reading notes

Core claim

The central claim is that the tilt of the final adiabatic curvature perturbation after a bounce is inherited from the tilt of the comoving curvature perturbation $R$ during collapse, and that a power-law collapse with $p = 2/3$ (the same index as a matter-dominated universe, arising here from a scalar field with exponential slope $λ = 3^{1/2}$) gives a scale-invariant spectrum, $Δn_R = 0$. Two subsidiary results carry the argument. First, the Bardeen potential $Φ$ is a poor predictor of the final answer: it grows rapidly during collapse, dominated by the shear in the uniform-$χ$ gauge, and only settles to the usual relation $Φ = 3(1+w)R/(5+3w)$ after the shear decays in the expanding phase. Second, there exists a gauge, uniform $χ$, in which the metric perturbations $ψ$ and $φ$ stay small and the constraint equations remain satisfied to better than one part in ten thousand throughout the bounce, even though both the longitudinal and comoving gauges become ill-defined or singular there.

Load-bearing premise

The calculation assumes linear perturbation theory stays valid through the bounce because the metric perturbations in the uniform-$χ$ gauge remain small, even though the shear perturbation grows as $a^{-2}$ during collapse and is only argued to be small relative to the largest terms in each equation rather than bounded by a proof.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • A contracting pre-history is a viable alternative to inflation for generating scale-invariant adiabatic perturbations, so the observed scalar tilt alone does not single out an accelerated expansion.
  • Because $R$ at the end of collapse, not its value at Hubble crossing, sets the final amplitude, the usual inflationary bookkeeping for matching observables to the primordial spectrum must be redone for bounce models.
  • The tensor-to-scalar ratio after the bounce depends on the bounce asymmetry parameter $C$ and is largest for a symmetric bounce, so gravitational-wave limits translate directly into constraints on initial conditions.
  • The comoving and longitudinal gauges are unreliable through a bounce even when the underlying physics is smooth, so negative results obtained in those gauges should not be read as a breakdown of perturbation theory.

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  • The requirement $|C| > 0.67$ against the non-singularity bound $|C| < 0.71$ leaves a window of roughly five percent in the trajectory parameter, which reads as a sharp fine-tuning problem for this particular ghost-based bounce rather than for bouncing cosmologies in general.
  • Since the amplification of both scalars and tensors across the bounce is scale-independent but $C$-dependent, the tensor-to-scalar ratio is a cleaner probe of bounce dynamics than the scalar tilt, which the bounce leaves untouched.
  • The same gauge pathology should appear in any bounce where a spectator field has a monotonic derivative, suggesting a general recipe: pick the clock field first, then choose the gauge that comoves with it.
  • If the ghost field is only an effective description of higher-derivative or stringy corrections, the near-bounce interval where it dominates sets how much of the spectrum can be trusted, which is a question the present calculation brackets rather than answers.
Original abstract

We present a detailed study of a simple scalar field model that yields non-singular cosmological solutions. We study both the qualitative dynamics of the homogeneous and isotropic background and the evolution of inhomogeneous linear perturbations. We calculate the spectrum of perturbations generated on super-Hubble scales during the collapse phase from initial vacuum fluctuations on small scales and then evolve these numerically through the bounce. We show there is a gauge in which perturbations remain well-defined and small throughout the bounce, even though perturbations in other commonly used gauges become large or ill-defined. We show that the comoving curvature perturbation calculated during the collapse phase provides a good estimate of the resulting large scale adiabatic perturbation in the expanding phase while the Bardeen metric potential is dominated by what becomes a decaying mode after the bounce. We show that a power-law collapse phase with scale factor proportional to $(-t)^{2/3}$ can yield a scale-invariant spectrum of adiabatic scalar perturbations in the expanding phase, but the amplitude of tensor perturbations places important constraints on the allowed initial conditions.

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We present a detailed study of a simple scalar field model that yields non-singular cosmological solutions. We study both the qualitative dynamics of the homogeneous and isotropic background and the evolution of inhomogeneous linear perturbations. We calculate the spectrum of perturbations generated on super-Hubble scales during the collapse phase from initial vacuum fluctuations on small scales and then evolve these numerically through the bounce. We show there is a gauge in which perturbations remain well-defined and small throughout the bounce, even though perturbations in other commonly used gauges become large or ill-defined. We show that the comoving curvature perturbation calculated during the collapse phase provides a good estimate of the resulting large scale adiabatic perturbation in the expanding phase while the Bardeen metric potential is dominated by what becomes a decaying mode after the bounce. We show that a power-law collapse phase with scale factor proportional to $(-t)^{2/3}$ can yield a scale-invariant spectrum of adiabatic scalar perturbations in the expanding phase, but the amplitude of tensor perturbations places important constraints on the allowed initial conditions.

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s4 We show that the comoving curvature perturbation calculated during the collapse phase provides a good estimate of the resulting large scale adiabatic perturbation in the expanding phase while the Bardeen metric potential is dominated by what becomes a decaying mode after the bounce. result 0.97 0.95 0.27 asserted 1.00
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Figure 1. FIG. 1: The phase trajectories in the (x,y) and (x,z) phase-p
Figure 2. FIG. 2: Phase-space trajectories in the (
Figure 3. FIG. 3: Classification of phase-space trajectories in the (
Figure 4. FIG. 4: Phase-space trajectories in the (
Figure 5. FIG. 5: Classification of phase-space trajectories in the (
Figure 6. FIG. 6: Evolution of
Figure 7. FIG. 7: Comoving curvature perturbation
Figure 8. FIG. 8: Bardeen metric potential Φ calculated from numerica
Figure 9. FIG. 9: Evolution of
Figure 10. FIG. 10: Comoving curvature perturbation
Figure 11. FIG. 11: Bardeen metric potential Φ calculated from numeric
Figure 12. FIG. 12: Evolution of
Figure 13. FIG. 13: Tensor-scalar ratio
Figure 14. FIG. 14: The violation of constraint equations (60) and (61)
Figure 15. FIG. 15: The violation of constraint equations (60) and (61)

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  • However, in a contracting universe it is the $c_2$ mode which dominates and leads to a scale-invariant spectrum [ref] :

    Cosmology of the Very Early Universe · Fluctuations in a Matter Bounce · 0.96

  • Specifically, as will be discussed in the section of the matter bounce scenario, if the fluctuations originate as vacuum perturbations on sub-Hubble scales in the contracting phase, then the resulting spectrum at late times for scales exiting the Hubble radius in the matter-dominated phase of contraction is scale-invariant [ref] .

    Introduction to Early Universe Cosmology · Matter Bounce as a Solution · 0.97

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  • The aforementioned FLRW background geometry is expressed with the metric structure ds^2 = a^2(τ)(-dτ^2+dx^2), where now the scale factor $a(τ)$ can be chosen in the following two conditions to identify the pre-inflationary phases [ref] of our framework, 228 In the Contraction phase, the scale factor obeys the power law solution a(τ) = a_0(τ/τ_0)^1/ϵ-1, where for the choice of parameter in, $1 < ϵ< 3$, the value $ϵ=3/2$ results in a matter contraction phase.

    Negative non-Gaussianity as a salvager for PBHs with PTAs in bounce · Bounce from EFT framework · 0.93

  • We consider a matter bounce background evolution of a FRW universe in which the matter-dominated phase of contraction is realized by the oscillations of a massive scalar field $ϕ$ around it vacuum state (see Refs. [ref] for other realizations).

    The Matter Bounce Curvaton Scenario · Isocurvature Perturbations in the Contracting Phase · 0.90

  • * The spatially flat FLRW space-time metric represents the background geometry, which is described by the infinitesimal line element, ds^2=a^2(τ)(-dτ^2+dx^2),where the scale factor is represented by the symbol $a(τ)$, whose adequate solutions are given by the following expression: a(τ) = { [ a_0(τ/τ_0)^1/ϵ-1 Case-I; a_0[1+(τ/τ_0)^2]^1/2(ϵ-1) Case-II ] .The mathematical structure of the scale factors characterizes the following physical situations: * Here Case-I represents the power law solution of the scale factor [ref] During inflation the expansion is described by a quasi de Sitter phase where the parameter $ϵ<1$.

    Regularized-Renormalized-Resummed loop corrected power spectrum of non-singular bounce with Primordial Black Hole formation · The underlying bouncing EFT setup · 0.81

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