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Fluctuations of the luminosity distance

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Camille Bonvin, Ruth Durrer, M. Alice Gasparini

Astrophysics · Submitted 7 Nov 2005 · 16 references

Pith's verdict: A careful, useful paper whose genuinely new content is the dL angular power spectrum, not the dL formula; the backreaction aside is the one place the logic runs thinner than the prose.

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CitationCamille Bonvin, M. Alice Gasparini, Ruth Durrer. "Fluctuations of the luminosity distance." arXiv:astro-ph/0511183 (2005). https://pith.science/paper/AMVHJJGH
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The paper

The paper claims

The luminosity distance in a lumpy universe is not one number but a whole angular spectrum, and the authors derive it.

The reading

The paper asks what a standard candle's distance actually measures in a universe that is not perfectly smooth. The authors derive the luminosity distance $d_L(n,z)$ as a function of observing direction and source redshift to first order in scalar perturbations, expand it in spherical harmonics, and express the angular power spectrum $C_ell(z,z')$ as line-of-sight integrals over the primordial power spectrum of the Bardeen potential. The payoff they propose is a new observable: rather than fitting a single $d_L(z)$ curve, one would fit the whole covariance of distances across directions and redshifts, which carries information about the expansion history, the growth of structure, and the geometry of the light path. They also use the result to argue against the suggestion that small-scale inhomogeneity can fake cosmic acceleration, since the fluctuations they compute stay at the $10^{-5}$ level. The claim to a general reader is that supernova distances contain a measurable pattern, not merely scatter around a mean.

What carries the argument

The load-bearing object is the Jacobi map: the two-by-two linear map that takes a small bundle of initial photon directions at the source into the transverse separation of rays at the observer, whose determinant gives the angular diameter distance and hence $d_L$ through $d_L = (1+z)^2 d_A$. The authors derive a first-order differential equation for the beam's deviation vector and its angular direction, solve it perturbatively in the Bardeen potential, and then project onto the plane normal to the observer's four-velocity. The key structural fact is that at first order the two eigenvalues of the map are equal, so the shear vanishes and the distance is a pure magnification, with all the angular structure entering through line-of-sight integrals of the potential and its derivatives.

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Core claim

The central claim is that the luminosity distance in a perturbed Friedmann universe has a well-defined angular correlation function and power spectrum, $C_ell(z,z')$, computable from the initial spectrum of the Bardeen potential and the transfer function. The authors build this in three steps: a general geometric derivation of $d_L$ from the Jacobi map of a light beam, its conformal rescaling to an expanding background, and a first-order solution of the geodesic deviation equations in Newtonian gauge. The resulting formula (their Eq. 59) splits into a background distance plus a Doppler term from observer and emitter peculiar velocities, a gravitational-redshift term, integrated Sachs-Wolfe-like line-of-sight terms, and a lensing term proportional to the transverse Laplacian of the potential. For a pure CDM universe with a scale-invariant spectrum, they find that the lensing term dominates for $z > 0.2$ and $ell > 10$, that $ell(ell+1)C_ell$ reaches roughly $10^{-5}$ for sources at $z about 2$ — nearly five orders of magnitude above the CMB anisotropy spectrum — and that the total fractional variance of $d_L$ is about $10^{-5}$, far below unity. They also compute the dipole, which comes from the observer's own motion and is about $10^5$ times the CMB dipole at $z = 0.1$.

Load-bearing premise

The conclusion that distance fluctuations stay far below unity rests on linear perturbation theory with a crude transfer function, and the authors state explicitly that they have not included the change in the transfer function due to nonlinearities.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • The luminosity distance power spectrum $C_ell(z,z')$ becomes a new cosmological observable, potentially constraining expansion history and growth through the redshift and scale dependence of the lensing term.
  • For $z > 0.5$ and a target accuracy of about 1 percent, only the lensing contribution needs to be computed, which keeps the numerical problem modest.
  • The dipole of the distance field is dominated by the observer's peculiar velocity and is far larger than the CMB dipole at low redshift, so its amplitude alone constrains the expansion rate.
  • Because the fluctuations remain around $10^{-5}$ in variance, second-order small-scale inhomogeneity is unlikely to reproduce an apparent acceleration of the expansion.
  • The correlation shows no peak at $z = z'$, so relatively wide redshift bins can be used when analysing $C_ell(z,z')$ without losing signal.

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Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • If the distance spectrum is measurable, it gives an independent handle on the growth of structure that is not degenerate with the background expansion in the same way as a single $d_L(z)$ curve, because the lensing term integrates the potential along the line of sight rather than sampling it at the source.
  • The same Jacobi-map machinery applies directly to gravitational-wave standard sirens, where the source redshift can be obtained from the host galaxy; the lensing-dominated part of the spectrum should transfer essentially unchanged, with the Doppler term modified by the different velocity field of the source.
  • A measurement of the distance power spectrum at several redshifts would let one separate the lensing term, which grows with path length, from the Doppler term, which does not, giving a consistency test on the assumed transfer function.
  • The paper's argument against backreaction-driven acceleration is a variance argument at linear order; it does not by itself rule out a scenario in which the mean distance is shifted by nonlinear structures even while the variance stays small, which is a different and still open question.
Original abstract

We derive an expression for the luminosity distance in a perturbed Friedmann universe. We define the correlation function and the power spectrum of the luminosity distance fluctuations and express them in terms of the initial spectrum of the Bardeen potential. We present semi-analytical results for the case of a pure CDM universe. We argue that the luminosity distance power spectrum represents a new observational tool which can be used to determine cosmological parameters. In addition, our results shed some light into the debate whether second order small scale fluctuations can mimic an accelerating universe.

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We derive an expression for the luminosity distance in a perturbed Friedmann universe. We define the correlation function and the power spectrum of the luminosity distance fluctuations and express them in terms of the initial spectrum of the Bardeen potential. We present semi-analytical results for the case of a pure CDM universe. We argue that the luminosity distance power spectrum represents a new observational tool which can be used to determine cosmological parameters. In addition, our results shed some light into the debate whether second order small scale fluctuations can mimic an accelerating universe.

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s1 We define the correlation function and the power spectrum of the luminosity distance fluctuations and express them in terms of the initial spectrum of the Bardeen potential. contribution 0.53 0.94 0.08 asserted 1.00
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s3 We argue that the luminosity distance power spectrum represents a new observational tool which can be used to determine cosmological parameters. interpretation 0.98 0.58 0.70 hedged possibility 0.75
s4 In addition, our results shed some light into the debate whether second order small scale fluctuations can mimic an accelerating universe. interpretation 1.00 0.63 0.14 hedged possibility 0.75

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Figure 1. FIG. 1: A light beam emitted at the source event S ending
Figure 2. FIG. 2: We show the dipole amplitude in a pure CDM uni
Figure 3. FIG. 3: We show the dipole amplitude in units of the CMB
Figure 4. FIG. 4: The contribution of the redshift term
Figure 5. FIG. 5: The contribution
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Figure 9. FIG. 9: The lensing contribution
Figure 10. FIG. 10: The total
Figure 11. FIG. 11: The different contributions to
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102 later papers cite it

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Uses its method or tool 4 of 12 papers with this label · 3 by the same authors

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  • Followed this paper's approach to compute the distance at the true observed redshift.

    Vector and Tensor Contributions to the Luminosity Distance (2012) (same authors) · 0.98 · paraphrased: the licence does not allow quoting

  • Used the same calculation as this paper to obtain the correction term for the observed redshift.

    Back Reaction from Walls (2011) (same authors) · 0.87 · paraphrased: the licence does not allow quoting

  • Followed this paper's approach to compute the luminosity distance in terms of the true observable redshift.

    Curvature constraints from Large Scale Structure (2016) (same authors) · 0.99 · paraphrased: the licence does not allow quoting

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92 arXiv papers cite this in 160 sentences

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  • And for each of combinations of the model, the mission configuration and the observation time, we generate $40$ sets of simulations including both the instrumental noise [ref] and lensing noise [ref] .

    Hubble parameter estimation via dark sirens with the LISA-Taiji network · MODELS · 0.90

  • We follow here the notation of Bonvin, Durrer and Gasparini [ref] , who find the luminosity distance $d_L(, n̂ )$ of a source at conformal time $$ in a universe described by the metric ([ref]) as given by [ref] d_L(, n̂ )/1+z-Δη = (v_o ·n̂ - ψ_o)Δη-2Δηv ·n̂ + 2 ∫_^η_odλ ψ+ 2 Δη∫_^η_odλ n̂ ·∇ψ + 2 ∫_^η_odλ∫^λ_η_s dλ̅ n̂ ·∇ψ- ∫_^η_odλ∫^λ_ dλ̅ (λ̅-) (∇^2ψ- n̂·∇(n̂·∇ψ) ) , where $n=-ê_r$ refers to the spatial direction of light propagating towards the observer, $$ is the conformal time at emission, and $Δη≡η_o-$.

    Supernovae data and perturbative deviation from homogeneity · A spherical perturbation · 0.95

  • Following the approach presented in [ref] we compute [equation] with [equation] In other words, we evaluate the distance at the true (observed) redshift $D̃_L( z̃, n)$ by using Eqs. ([ref], [ref]) in order to relate $D̃_L ( z̃, )$ to $D̃_L(η_S,)$.

    Vector and Tensor Contributions to the Luminosity Distance · The distance–redshift relation · 0.98

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  • In General Relativity, the expression for the linear luminosity distance perturbations is well known [ref] , and it reads [equation] where $<..>$ denotes the angular average[See Appendix [ref] for possible extra contributions to the perturbed luminosity distance arising from a different definition of the mean $D_L$.] at fixed observed redshift, $v_∥= 𝐯·𝐧$ is the projection of the peculiar velocity $𝐯$ along the line of sight, where $𝐧$ is the unit vector pointing from the source to the observer, $V$ denotes the velocity potential and $Φ$ and $Ψ$ are the Bardeen potentials[The luminosity distance as a function of redshift is an observable and, therefore, gauge invariant.

    The power spectrum of luminosity distance fluctuations in General Relativity · The luminosity distance in General Relativity · 0.84

  • Fluctuations in the EM luminosity distance constitute an important probe for cosmology and have been well studied [ref] , while the case of GWs has been addressed in General Relativity (GR) in [ref] .

    Detecting Dark Energy Fluctuations with Gravitational Waves · Introduction · 0.81

  • The 1st and 2nd order perturbations to this expressions have been calculated in several papers: [ref] (1st order), [ref] (2nd order).

    Note on the Kaiser-Peacock paper regarding gravitational lensing effects · Conclusion · 0.92

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