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Femtolensing and Picolensing by Axion Miniclusters

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E. W. Kolb, I. I. Tkachev

Astrophysics · Submitted 6 Oct 1995 · 35 references

Pith's verdict: A short, correct idea paper that connects axion miniclusters to femtolensing and checks the three conditions honestly; the real gap is survival to the present, not the simulation resolution.

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CitationE. W. Kolb, I. I. Tkachev. "Femtolensing and Picolensing by Axion Miniclusters." arXiv:astro-ph/9510043 (1995). https://pith.science/paper/C5L3EFIB
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Axion miniclusters with masses near 10^-12 solar masses and radii near 10^10 cm satisfy all three conditions for femtolensing and picolensing, making them a natural dark-matter lens candidate.

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When light from a distant source passes a massive object, gravity bends the light and can create multiple images. If the lens is extremely light, the images sit so close together that they interfere like waves, producing a fringe pattern that depends on the light's frequency. This is femtolensing, and it needs lenses in a narrow mass window around a billionth of a solar mass, small enough to fit inside their own Einstein ring, and abundant enough to give a reasonable event rate. Until this paper, no plausible object met all three conditions at once. The authors argue that axion miniclusters do. Axions are a leading dark-matter candidate, and their field can develop large spatial fluctuations in the early Universe. Where the fluctuation is large, that region collapses early into a dense clump. The authors ran a three-dimensional simulation of the axion field through the epoch when the axion mass turns on, and read off the resulting clump masses, radii, and abundance. They find typical masses near 10^-12 solar masses, radii near 10^10 cm, and, in their most favorable runs, 15 to 20 percent of the axion dark matter in clumps dense enough to sit inside their Einstein ring. That is enough, they argue, to produce a detectable femtolensing rate. The claim is conditional: it holds if axion miniclusters exist with the simulated properties, and the simulation itself is under-resolved at exactly the highest densities that matter for the lensing condition.
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Core claim

The paper asserts that axion miniclusters satisfy all three requirements for femtolensing: mass in the range 10^-16 to 10^-11 solar masses, radius smaller than the Einstein ring radius, and a cosmological density fraction large enough for a detectable rate. The load-bearing sentence is: 'if axions are the dark matter with Omega_a close to unity, then the fraction of Omega in miniclusters capable of femtolensing is 15% - 20% ... large enough to result in a detectable rate.' If correct, a known dark-matter candidate becomes a viable target for gamma-ray burst lensing searches.

Load-bearing premise

The 15 to 20 percent figure is read directly off Figure 2, the mass fraction in density peaks above a threshold Phi_0, taken from a 256^3 simulation. The authors state in section 3.3 that 'by the time eta > 4 we are no longer able reliably to resolve the highest density peaks because density contrasts became too large for our 256^3 grid.' The lensing condition requires Phi of roughly 5 to 10 or larger, which is precisely the under-resolved high-density tail. The central claim therefore rests on the part of the simulated distribution the authors acknowledge they cannot resolve, and the quoted fraction is presented as a lower bound rather than a measured value.

Original abstract

Non-linear effects in the evolution of the axion field in the early Universe may lead to the formation of gravitationally bound clumps of axions, known as ``miniclusters.'' Minicluster masses and radii should be in the range $M_{\rm mc}\sim10^{-12} M_\odot$ and $R_{\rm mc} \sim 10^{10}$cm, and in plausible early-Universe scenarios a significant fraction of the mass density of the Universe may be in the form of axion miniclusters. If such axion miniclusters exist, they would have the physical properties required to be detected by ``femtolensing.''

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Non-linear effects in the evolution of the axion field in the early Universe may lead to the formation of gravitationally bound clumps of axions, known as ``miniclusters.'' Minicluster masses and radii should be in the range $M_{\rm mc}\sim10^{-12} M_\odot$ and $R_{\rm mc} \sim 10^{10}$cm, and in plausible early-Universe scenarios a significant fraction of the mass density of the Universe may be in the form of axion miniclusters. If such axion miniclusters exist, they would have the physical properties required to be detected by ``femtolensing.''

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s0 Non-linear effects in the evolution of the axion field in the early Universe may lead to the formation of gravitationally bound clumps of axions, known as ``miniclusters.'' Minicluster masses and radii should be in the range $M_{\rm mc}\sim10^{-12} M_\odot$ and $R_{\rm mc} \sim 10^{10}$cm, and in plausible early-Universe scenarios a significant fraction of the mass density of the Universe may be in the form of axion miniclusters. background 1.00 0.09 0.11 hedged possibility 0.96
s1 If such axion miniclusters exist, they would have the physical properties required to be detected by ``femtolensing.'' interpretation 0.72 0.07 0.32 hedged possibility 0.79

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Figure 1. — This is a two-dimensional slice through a three dimensional box
Figure 2. — The mass fraction of axions in miniclusters with Φ greater than

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Uses its data or values 1 of 4 papers with this label

  • Used a function similar to f_Φ(Φ) ∼ Φ^0.75 e^-Φ, which it will use as an approximation, to describe the distribution of Φ values found from this paper's simulations.

    Axion astronomy with microwave cavity experiments (2017) · 0.98 · paraphrased: the licence does not allow quoting

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57 arXiv papers cite this in 93 sentences

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  • A distribution of overdensities of these patches was presented in Fig. 2 of [ref] , which could be used to compute the radius and mass of a typical virialised minicluster assuming spherical collapse.

    Early seeds of axion miniclusters · Summary, discussion and conclusions · 0.81

  • The distribution of values of $Φ$ found from the simulations of Ref. [ref] appears to follow a function similar to $f_Φ(Φ) ∼Φ^0.75 e^-Φ$ which we will use as an approximation.

    Axion astronomy with microwave cavity experiments · Axion miniclusters · 0.98

Compares with it 3 papers
  • The analogous distribution for our simulations has been presented in Fig. [ref] and agrees qualitatively with [ref] , at least at small values of the contrast $δ$.

    Early seeds of axion miniclusters · Summary, discussion and conclusions · 1.00

  • This is two orders of magnitude lighter than the previous estimates of [ref] .

    Femtolensing by Dark Matter Revisited · Extended Lens · 0.85

  • Using a spherical geometry for the collapsing minicluster and writing the horizon size in terms of the comoving wavenumber $k_osc = aH(T_osc)$, one finds [equation] which is equivalent to other definitions of $ℳ_0$, e.g. in [ref] , up to a factor of $4π^4/3≃130$ [ref] .

    Distributions and Collision Rates of ALP Stars in the Milky Way · Characteristic Minicluster Mass · 0.92

Cites it as support 1 paper
  • Overall, we believe that our study, taken together with [s]Jung:2019fcs,Gawade:2023gmt and older work [ref] , strongly motivates further exploration of the technical feasibility of a picolensing mission to probe for PBH dark matter, either as a stand-alone mission, or via the incorporation of additional instruments on other missions.

    Picolensing as a Probe of Primordial Black Hole Dark Matter · Conclusion · 0.99

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