REVIEW 3 major objections 7 minor 5 references
The Systems Engineering Approach in Times of Large Language Models
T0 review · 3 major / 7 minor · reviewed 2026-08-12 · deepseek-v4-flash
Pith's one-line read This paper argues that adopting Large Language Models into critical socio-technical systems should be treated as a systems engineering problem — prioritise the problem and its context before the technology — and supports this by showing…
desk verdict Useful mapping of SE principles to LLM-era challenges, but the 'better equipped' claim in the abstract outruns what the survey can actually support. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The organising mechanism is Haberfellner et al.'s classification of six systems engineering principles into two categories: Systems Thinking, which groups Systems Views, Agility Systems, and System Dynamics, and the Systems Engineering Process Model, which groups Top-Down, Variant Creation, and Problem-Solving Cycle. The survey uses this classification as a coding scheme to map each of the 24 selected papers onto the principles it applies, and then relates those principles to the four LLM challenge areas. The classification carries the argument by showing that the most-used principles are static and knowledge-intensive, while the principles needed for LLMs' emergent and rapidly changing behaviour are the least used.
What would settle it
A documented real-world case where an LLM-based system, engineered with full top-down requirements decomposition, verification checkpoints, and lifecycle governance, still fails because of an emergent LLM-specific behaviour such as a jailbreak or hallucination that no system-level requirement could have captured would refute the transferability claim.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
The central discovery is that the systems engineering principles developed for earlier AI/ML systems already speak to the challenges LLMs pose, so LLM adoption can be guided by an existing toolkit rather than starting from scratch. The authors classify principles into Systems Thinking (Systems Views, Agility Systems, System Dynamics) and the Systems Engineering Process Model (Top-Down, Variant Creation, Problem-Solving Cycle), then show that 21 of the 24 surveyed papers address alignment and reliability, with Systems Views, Top-Down, and Problem-Solving Cycle dominating. The underuse of Agility Systems, System Dynamics, and Variant Creation is identified as a gap, because those dynamic and flexible principles are the ones best suited to the fast-changing LLM landscape. The paper's conclusion is that the systems engineering approach offers a good starting point for addressing LLM challenges, provided the community shifts toward a problem-first, context-first culture.
Load-bearing premise
The argument assumes that the difficulties LLMs introduce, such as hallucination, black-box opacity, intellectual debt, and carbon cost, are close enough to earlier AI/ML system difficulties that systems engineering principles shown on ML-based systems will transfer to LLM-based socio-technical systems.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- Adopting LLMs in critical domains should start with problem and context analysis, not model selection, and stakeholders need to be mapped before components are chosen.
- The systems engineering principles already used for AI systems — Systems Views, Top-Down, and Problem-Solving Cycle — can be applied directly to LLM-based systems to mitigate alignment and reliability failures.
- The underused dynamic principles (Agility Systems, System Dynamics, Variant Creation) are the ones most needed to keep pace with LLMs' rapid change and emergent behaviour.
- Public engagement and inclusive requirements definition become core engineering tasks, not optional extras, because LLM systems affect populations that do not speak the developers' language.
Reading between the lines
- Beyond the paper's claims: if the problem-first thesis is right, LLM procurement and deployment in government and healthcare should be led by systems engineers rather than data scientists — a staffing implication the authors do not state.
- A testable extension: compare projects that follow problem-first systems engineering against model-first AI projects on outcomes such as time-to-deployment, incident rate, and stakeholder satisfaction; the paper's argument predicts the SE-led projects will show fewer alignment failures.
- The paper implies that 'prompt engineering' and model fine-tuning are solution-level activities that should come after an explicit systems context; this reorders the current LLM adoption playbook.
- A neighbouring problem the paper opens: how to make the dynamic principles operational — for instance, integrating System Dynamics with the regulatory approval and safety assurance frameworks that currently assume static requirements.
Signed reviews
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper argues that adopting Large Language Models (LLMs) into socio-technical systems is better served by a Systems Engineering (SE) approach than by model-centric AI research alone. It identifies four categories of LLM-induced challenges in socio-technical systems (alignment and reliability, interpretability and accountability, maintainability and sustainability, security and privacy) and reports a semi-automated survey that narrows 3,504 candidate papers down to 24 papers describing SE-style work on AI-based systems. The survey maps the SE principles used in those papers (Systems Views, Agility Systems, System Dynamics, Top-Down, Variant Creation, Problem-Solving Cycle) onto the four challenge categories, concluding that SE principles are a good starting point for addressing LLM challenges and identifying open research directions.
Significance. If the central claim were fully supported, the paper would be valuable for reframing LLM adoption as a socio-technical systems engineering problem, complementing the dominant model-centric view. The paper has notable strengths: a transparent survey pipeline with publicly archived code and data, a clear four-part taxonomy of LLM challenges, and a systematic mapping of SE principles to those challenges. These artifacts make the descriptive survey reproducible and useful for researchers planning SE-informed LLM work. The provisional findings, such as the heavy reliance on static principles and the relative neglect of Agility Systems and Variant Creation, are suggestive and merit further investigation. However, the comparative and transferability claims are not established by the reported evidence, so the significance is conditional on a substantive revision of the paper's conclusions.
major comments (3)
- [§4 and Abstract/§7] The comparative claim that the Systems Engineering approach is "better equipped" to facilitate LLM adoption is not supported by the survey design. The search query in §4 requires at least one of "systems engineering", "systems thinking", "dependable systems", or "engineering AI", so every one of the 24 selected papers is an SE-style contribution by construction. There is no comparison arm of non-SE approaches and no outcome measure against which SE and non-SE methods are evaluated. The evidence can support the weaker concluding statement in §7 that SE "offers a good starting point," but not the abstract's comparative "better equipped." This wording should either be removed/weakened or the study should be redesigned with a baseline and an evaluation criterion.
- [§5 and §7] The transferability of the surveyed principles to LLM-based systems is assumed rather than argued. Many of the surveyed works address pre-LLM machine learning systems, including RL alignment (Meyer and Gruhn 2019), ML technology readiness (Lavin et al. 2022), and healthcare ML (Salwei and Carayon 2022). The abstract frames these as "similar issues to the ones LLMs pose," but the paper does not analyze whether LLM-specific behaviors such as hallucination, prompt-level interaction, black-box API components, and emergent capabilities change the engineering problem qualitatively. Without such an analysis, the recommendation to apply these SE principles to LLM systems is an hypothesis rather than a finding. The authors should either provide a per-challenge transferability argument grounded in §3 or explicitly frame their conclusion as a research direction.
- [§6.4] Section 6.4 concedes that the most applied principles (Systems Views, Top-Down, Problem-Solving Cycle) are "static and rely on prior knowledge," which is a poor match for the rapidly changing LLM landscape. This concession is in tension with the concluding recommendation in §7 that these very principles offer a good starting point for addressing LLM challenges. The paper does not resolve this tension or explain how static, prior-knowledge-reliant principles can be a starting point for a technology whose capabilities and failure modes change quickly. A concrete proposal, such as pairing static principles with the dynamic ones (Agility Systems, System Dynamics, Variant Creation) in a specific workflow, would strengthen the argument.
minor comments (7)
- [§3.4] The phrase "sensible data" appears twice; it should read "sensitive data."
- [§5.4] The text refers to the "MLTR framework" when describing Lavin et al. (2022); elsewhere the paper and reference list use "MLTRL." Please make the acronym consistent.
- [§5.2] The phrase "above 30% of works" is vague; please report the exact count of papers addressing interpretability and accountability (e.g., "8 of 24 papers") and the corresponding counts for each principle in the radar chart.
- [§4] The manual filtering and snowballing steps are described numerically, but the inclusion and exclusion criteria are not stated. Since the authors provide code and data, adding a short list of criteria would substantially improve reproducibility.
- [Figure 1] The y-axis of Figure 1 is unlabeled; please label it (e.g., "Number of papers") and clarify whether the counts refer to the number of papers applying a given principle or the number of challenge-principle pairs.
- [§5.1] The sentence "Yu et al., 2024 proposes five viewpoints" is grammatically inconsistent; "proposes" should be "propose" because the reference is plural.
- [References] Several author names contain rendering artifacts, such as "M ¨okander" and "V oirin"; please check the encoding before final submission.
Circularity Check
Survey framing and selection criteria make the SE conclusion partly definitional, but the paper contains no formal circular derivation.
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self definitional
[Section 4 (Survey Methodology) and Section 3.1]
"We use the following query as an input to search for the relevant papers: (”systems engineering” OR ”systems thinking” OR ”dependable systems” OR ”engineering AI”) AND (”generative ai” OR ”large language model” OR ”llm” OR ”artificial intelligence” OR ”ai” OR ”ml” OR ”deep learning”). ... Alignment issues emerge when systems do not accomplish their requirements (Bastidas et al., 2022)."
The survey query guarantees that every retrieved paper uses systems-engineering vocabulary, so the observation that systems engineering principles have been applied to AI/LLM issues is largely true by construction of the corpus. At the same time, the LLM challenges are pre-framed in Section 3 as systems-engineering categories (Alignment, Interpretability, Maintainability, Security). The conclusion that 'the systems engineering approach offers a good starting point for addressing the LLMs’ challenges' therefore partly restates the inclusion criterion and the challenge taxonomy rather than emerging from a comparative evaluation. The stronger abstract claim that SE is 'better equipped' is not derivable from the survey because no non-SE baseline is included.
full rationale
This is a survey and position argument, not a quantitative derivation: no parameters are fitted, no predictions are made, and no mathematical result is claimed. The surveyed papers are external to the authors, and the self-citations present (e.g., Cabrera et al. 2023/2024, Bastidas et al. 2022) are not load-bearing for the central claim. The main circularity concern is structural rather than formal: the challenge taxonomy uses systems-engineering terms, and the literature search requires systems-engineering terms, so the finding that systems-engineering principles address these challenges is partly guaranteed by the paper's own framing and selection. That is a mild tautology/selection-bias issue that weakens the comparative force of the abstract claim ('better equipped'), but it does not make the survey's descriptive content circular. The paper's own Section 6.4 also concedes that the most-used principles are static and rely on prior knowledge, further limiting the strength of the conclusion. Overall, the central claim is an arguable interpretation of external evidence rather than a derivation equivalent to its inputs.
Assumptions & free parameters
free parameters (1)
- Semantic similarity threshold for paper selection =
not reported
assumptions (3)
- domain assumption Haberfellner et al.'s six principles are a complete and valid taxonomy for classifying systems engineering work on AI-based systems.
- domain assumption The 24 retained papers are representative of research applying systems engineering to AI-based systems.
- domain assumption LLM challenges are analogous to the challenges of earlier AI/ML systems.
Cite this review
Pith. "Pith review of The Systems Engineering Approach in Times of Large Language Models." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/25IIDOKP
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read the original abstract
Using Large Language Models (LLMs) to address critical societal problems requires adopting this novel technology into socio-technical systems. However, the complexity of such systems and the nature of LLMs challenge such a vision. It is unlikely that the solution to such challenges will come from the Artificial Intelligence (AI) community itself. Instead, the Systems Engineering approach is better equipped to facilitate the adoption of LLMs by prioritising the problems and their context before any other aspects. This paper introduces the challenges LLMs generate and surveys systems research efforts for engineering AI-based systems. We reveal how the systems engineering principles have supported addressing similar issues to the ones LLMs pose and discuss our findings to provide future directions for adopting LLMs.
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