REVIEW 5 major objections 6 minor 18 references
GPT as ghostwriter at the White House
T0 review · 5 major / 6 minor · reviewed 2026-08-12 · deepseek-v4-flash
Pith's one-line read GPT-written State of the Union speeches still read as GPT
desk verdict A credible descriptive result about GPT-3.5's default political prose, but the prompt under-specification confound and an unsupported training-data claim keep it from being a stable 'GPT style' finding. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
The central object is the intertextual distance measure proposed by Labbé (2007), which computes a value between 0 and 1 by comparing whole-vocabulary frequencies after normalizing text lengths. This distance is used to build a tree-based visualization of the entire corpus, and the resulting figure is the paper's global proof that GPT's style is distinct. Supporting the distance evidence are several standard stylometric tools: mean word length and percentage of big words, moving-average type-token ratio (MATTR), mean sentence length, part-of-speech distributions, characteristic-vocabulary z-scores (Muller's method), and Hart's wordlists for rhetorical categories such as Symbolism, Tenacity, and Blame.
What would settle it
Check ChatGPT-3.5's training data for verbatim or near-verbatim passages from any SOTU address used in this study; if one appears, re-run the distance analysis after prompting with a speech known to be absent from training. A second approach is to repeat the experiment with a model whose training set is fully documented to include SOTUs and see whether the intertextual-distance gap shrinks or disappears.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
The paper's central claim is that GPT-3.5 has a distinct written style that survives the instruction to imitate a specific president. In State of the Union addresses generated for Reagan, Clinton, Bush, and Obama, GPT overuses the lemma "we" (about 6% of tokens versus 3.8% for real presidents), uses more nouns and adjectives, more commas, fewer verbs and adverbs, longer words (mean 4.9 letters versus 4.39) and longer sentences (mean 22.62 versus 19.71 words). Its vocabulary, measured by moving-average type-token ratio, is poorer, and its characteristic words are general, neutral, and abstract rather than tied to a specific administration's issues. The intertextual-distance tree shows all GPT-generated speeches forming a cluster separate from every president, with the distance between a target president and his GPT imitation larger than the distance between that president and other real presidents.
Load-bearing premise
The whole comparison rests on the claim that the model's training data never included any State of the Union address, only other presidential speeches; if one of the real speeches used for comparison was in the training data, apparent stylistic differences could be retrieval artifacts rather than a stable machine style.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- A machine-authored political speech can be flagged with standard stylometric tools, without needing a trained classifier.
- GPT's overuse of "we" and noun-heavy style mean generated speeches read as descriptive reports rather than calls to action.
- Asking an LLM to imitate a president narrows some features but not enough; the model's own voice dominates the requested persona.
- The same measurements could be extended to other LLMs and to other genres of political text, such as congressional remarks or campaign stump speeches.
Reading between the lines
- The finding that GPT's voice is stable across four presidential masks suggests the model's style is a property of its training distribution and prompt constraints, not of the requested persona; this could be tested by fine-tuning a model on presidential corpora and seeing whether the cluster disperses.
- The neutral, positive, no-blame tone may reflect reinforcement learning from human feedback rather than a constraint of next-token prediction; a comparison between models with and without RLHF would isolate that factor.
- Because the study uses only GPT-3.5, newer models with different alignment and length controls could shrink the gap; measuring the distance between human and machine speeches over successive model versions is a testable prediction.
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The manuscript compares State of the Union (SOTU) addresses written by Reagan, Clinton, G.W. Bush, and Obama with SOTU addresses generated by GPT-3.5-turbo under prompts that ask the model to imitate each president. Using word-frequency rankings, part-of-speech distributions, lexical statistics (word length, MATTR, mean sentence length), characteristic vocabulary, Diction/LIWC-style categories, and Labbé intertextual distance, the paper reports that GPT texts overuse the lemma "we", nouns, and commas, use fewer verbs and personal pronouns, contain longer words and sentences, exhibit a positive and abstract tone, and cluster separately from all real presidential speeches in a tree representation. The author concludes that GPT has a distinct, didactic, neutral style that remains distinguishable even when the model is asked to write in a target president's style.
Significance. If the conclusions hold, the paper provides a useful empirical demonstration that current LLM-generated political speech can be distinguished from human-authored SOTU addresses using relatively simple surface stylometric features. Strengths include the use of a genre-matched corpus (SOTU addresses), the use of established external wordlists (Diction, LIWC) rather than ad-hoc categories, transparent reporting of model sampling parameters, and a global distance visualization that makes the main separation easy to inspect. However, the central claim is currently underdetermined because the comparison does not isolate style from prompt/content richness, and the statistical significance tests ignore document-level clustering and multiple comparisons. These issues are addressable, but they are load-bearing for the paper's main conclusion.
major comments (5)
- [§3, Table 1; §4-7] The central comparison does not separate style from prompt/content richness. The GPT outputs are roughly 9,000 tokens while real SOTU addresses are 37,000-67,000 tokens, and the prompt explicitly contains no year-specific policy brief (Section 3). The features identified as GPT's 'style' — fewer names, fewer negative terms, no time/space anchoring, noun-heavy and abstract vocabulary (Tables 5-7) — are exactly what one would expect from any writer asked to produce a generic SOTU without substantive material. To support the claim that these are stable properties of GPT's style, the paper needs a control condition: e.g., the same prompt given to human writers, or GPT prompted with the policy content of a real SOTU, or a topic-matched comparison. Without such a control, the conclusion that 'GPT's style exposes distinct features' is confounded with input richness.
- [§4, Tables 2-5, 7] The significance tests treat tokens as independent observations drawn from pooled author corpora. The proportion tests and t-tests compare aggregate percentages over all words/sentences of each group, ignoring document-level clustering; with 7-8 generated speeches and 7-8 human speeches per president, the effective sample size is much smaller than the number of tokens. In addition, dozens of categories are tested at alpha=0.01 without any multiple-comparison correction, so several asterisks are expected by chance. Please report per-document means with a mixed-effects model, paired/permutation test, or cluster-robust standard errors, and apply a multiple-testing correction or restrict confirmatory claims to pre-specified hypotheses. This affects the load-bearing statements such as 'GPT overuses the lemma we' and 'GPT employs fewer verbs'.
- [§4, Table 4] The row 'Mean president' cannot be reproduced from the displayed data. The text says the last two rows give the average over the 'six groups of presidential addresses', but Table 4 shows only Reagan, Clinton, Bush, and Obama; for MATTR the mean of the four displayed values is 0.325, not 0.359, and similar discrepancies occur for word length (4.425 vs 4.39), BW (28.0 vs 27.7), and MSL (20.55 vs 19.71). Either include the Trump and Biden rows in the table (or in the annexe) and state that the mean covers all six presidents, or correct the text and recompute the averages. As it stands, the headline comparison 'Mean GPT 4.90 vs Mean president 4.39' is not verifiable.
- [§7, 'Intertextual Distance'] The sentence 'the training set never includes a SOTU address but contains another presidential speech' is a strong empirical claim about OpenAI's proprietary training data, made without citation or evidence. It is also not needed for the main demonstration: Figure 1 would still show a separation between GPT and human texts even if some SOTU addresses were in the training data, but the interpretation would change from 'style generalization' to possible memorization/retrieval. Please either remove the assertion, label it as an unverifiable assumption, or support it with documentation, and discuss the consequences for the Figure 1 interpretation if it is wrong.
- [§3, footnote 3; §7 prompts] The generation procedure is not described precisely enough for replication. The paper gives temperature (0.5), top_p (0.4), and penalties (0), but does not report the full prompt text, which Miller Center speech was used as the example for each president, the date of API access, or the exact model identifier beyond 'GPT-3.5-turbo'. Because the style-imitation manipulation depends entirely on the prompt, this information should be included in an appendix. Without it, a reader cannot regenerate the corpus or assess whether the provided example biased the results.
minor comments (6)
- [§2] There is a typo: 'GTP' should be 'GPT'.
- [§1 vs §5-§7] The introduction's preview of the section order (Section 5 'global similarity', Section 6 'characteristic vocabulary', Section 7 'rhetorical and topical analysis') does not match the actual body, where characteristic vocabulary is Section 5, rhetorical/topical analysis is Section 6, and intertextual distance is Section 7.
- [References] Some reference names appear misspelled: 'Vaswami et al. 2017' should be 'Vaswani et al.'; 'Zhoa et al. 2023' should be 'Zhao et al.'; 'Bartélémy' should be 'Barthélemy' if referring to the standard author.
- [§7, Eq. (3)] Equation (3) uses a superscript notation (tf$_0$) that is not defined; rewrite with standard notation and state which text is the reference for length normalization.
- [§4, Table 4 footnote] The footnote says the t-test is used 'with the same significance level', but it is not stated whether the unit of analysis is individual speeches or pooled tokens; this matters for interpreting the asterisks.
- [§7, Figure 1] Figure 1 would benefit from a statement of how the tree was fit (e.g., Neighbor-Joining or another algorithm) and a note that branch lengths are approximate; this would help readers interpret the visual separation.
Circularity Check
No circular derivation: this is a direct empirical stylometric comparison using external measures, with no fitted-input or self-citation chain forcing the result.
full rationale
The paper's derivation chain is an empirical corpus comparison: GPT-3.5 outputs are generated under fixed prompt conditions and then compared to real State of the Union addresses using external, literature-established metrics (Labbé intertextual distance, Muller's Z-score, LIWC/Diction wordlists, Hart's word-length and MATTR measures). None of these measures is fitted to the data or defined in terms of the target conclusion; the wordlists and distance formula are prior, independent instruments. The author's self-citation (Savoy 2020) appears only as a general stylometry reference in Section 2 and is not load-bearing. The strongest validity threat is factual, not circular: Section 7 asserts 'the training set never includes a SOTU address but contains another presidential speech,' which is contradicted by the paper's own footnote that 'we don't know precisely the training sample employed by GPT and one might assume that many presidential speeches have been included.' If SOTU texts were in training, the observed GPT/human distance could reflect memorization and prompt constraints rather than a stable style. However, that is an unsupported empirical assumption about model provenance, not a reduction of the conclusion to the inputs by construction. Figure 1's separation is computed directly from the texts, and no equation or fitted parameter embodies the claimed 'distinct GPT style' beforehand. Therefore no circularity is present; the training-data contradiction should be weighed as an evidence-quality limitation, not as circularity.
Assumptions & free parameters
free parameters (3)
- GPT generation parameters (temperature, top_p, frequency and presence penalties) =
temperature 0.5, top_p 0.4, penalties 0
- MATTR window size =
2,000 tokens
- Z-score threshold for characteristic vocabulary =
3
assumptions (4)
- domain assumption GPT-3.5 training data does not contain State of the Union addresses used for comparison.
- standard math Term frequencies in an author subset follow a binomial distribution, and the resulting Z score is standard normal.
- domain assumption The Diction and LIWC wordlists validly measure emotional tone, symbolism, tenacity, blame, and achievement in political speeches.
- standard math Labbé's intertextual distance with length normalization is a valid similarity measure for comparing texts of different lengths.
Cite this review
Pith. "Pith review of GPT as ghostwriter at the White House." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/DFIUWUWQ
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read the original abstract
Recently several large language models (LLMs) have demonstrated their capability to generate a message in response to a user request. Such scientific breakthroughs promote new perspectives but also some fears. The main focus of this study is to analyze the written style of one LLM called ChatGPT 3.5 by comparing its generated messages with those of the recent US presidents. To achieve this objective, we compare the State of the Union addresses written by Reagan to Obama with those automatically produced by ChatGPT. We found that ChatGPT tends to overuse the lemma "we" as well as nouns and commas. On the other hand, the generated speeches employ less verbs and include, in mean, longer sentences. Even when imposing a given style to ChatGPT, the resulting speech remains distinct from messages written by the target author. Moreover, ChatGPT opts for a neutral tone with mainly positive emotional expressions and symbolic terms (e.g., freedom, nation). Finally, we show that the GPT's style exposes distinct features compared to real presidential addresses.
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As depicted in Table 3, those proportions obtained by GPT are usually shown in italics
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Terms overused by GPT and the US presidents Reagan Clinton Bush Obama Rank GPT real GPT real GPT real GPT real 1 principle soviet shared welfare adversity terrorist healthcare that 2 pursuit freedom fostering child we Iraq investing business 3 commitment govern. economic work unwavering Iraqi rural why 4 dedication program collaboration ought remains enem...
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Percentage of some selected wordlists Category GPT Reagan Clinton Bush Obama Trump Biden Posemo 4.67% 3.47%* 3.11%* 3.78%* 2.78%* 3.38%* 2.79%* Negemo 0.95% 1.14% 0.97% 1.50%* 1.07%* 1.53%* 1.14% Symbolism 4.40% 3.84%* 3.52%* 4.10% 3.16%* 4.43% 3.50%* Tenacity 4.76% 6.26%* 5.94%* 6.21%* 6.49%* 6.46%* 6.86%* Blame 0.20% 0.44%* 0.42%* 0.40%* 0.46%* 0.60%* 0...
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