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arxiv: 2605.07344 · v1 · submitted 2026-05-08 · 🌀 gr-qc · hep-th

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DESI and Dynamical Dark Energy from Extended Pre-geometric Gravity

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keywords dynamical dark energypre-geometric gravitygravi-axionDESI dataGauss-Bonnet couplingquadratic gravityMacDowell-Mansourigravitational slip
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A quadratic extension of pre-geometric gravity dynamizes the gravitational theta angle into a gravi-axion whose mass sets the dark energy scale to fit DESI data.

A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.

The paper shows that the simplest quadratic correction to MacDowell-Mansouri pre-geometric gravity, while preserving the topological pre-volume symmetry, breaks to produce (Lovelock) squared gravity that is dual to a Galileon-like Horndeski theory. The gravitational Higgs mechanism then fixes the Gauss-Bonnet coupling inversely to the bare cosmological constant, turning the theta angle into a dynamical gravi-axion whose effective mass automatically matches the observed dark energy density. This construction yields a dynamical dark energy model that fits DESI baryon acoustic oscillation plus full-shape data with a reduced chi-squared of 1.394, while the gravitational slip parameter differs from Lambda CDM by only a few percent and tensor modes remain stable. A reader would care because the approach derives cosmic acceleration directly from the geometry and symmetry breaking of a fundamental gravity theory rather than inserting an ad hoc field by hand.

Core claim

The quadratic term renders the gravitational theta-angle dynamical in the form of a gravi-axion whose effective mass sets the dark energy scale, thus naturally realizing a dynamical dark energy. After symmetry breaking the theory becomes equivalent to squared Lovelock gravity dual to a Galileon-like Horndeski scalar-tensor theory, with the Gauss-Bonnet coupling forced to be inversely proportional to the bare cosmological constant by the gravitational Higgs mechanism. The resulting model fits DESI BAO+FS data with chi-squared reduced equal to 1.394, deviates from Lambda CDM by only a few percent in the slip parameter gamma of z, and maintains stable tensor perturbations.

What carries the argument

The gravi-axion that emerges when the quadratic correction makes the gravitational theta angle dynamical; it carries the dark energy by acquiring a mass fixed through the Higgs mechanism to the inverse bare cosmological constant.

If this is right

  • The model reproduces DESI BAO plus full-shape data with a reduced chi-squared of 1.394.
  • The gravitational slip parameter gamma of z differs from its Lambda CDM value by only a few percent across observable redshifts.
  • Tensor perturbations remain stable throughout the cosmic history.
  • The construction supplies a direct geometric link between pre-geometric symmetry breaking and late-time acceleration without extra scalar fields.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

These are editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • Precision tests of gravitational slip at higher redshift could separate this model from Lambda CDM even if current data are compatible.
  • The duality to Horndeski theories opens the possibility of checking consistency with solar-system or galactic-scale modified gravity constraints.
  • Similar quadratic extensions of other pre-geometric frameworks might address additional cosmological tensions such as the Hubble constant discrepancy.

Load-bearing premise

The quadratic extension must preserve the topological pre-volume form symmetry so the Higgs mechanism can enforce the inverse relation between Gauss-Bonnet coupling and cosmological constant that sets the gravi-axion mass to the observed dark energy scale.

What would settle it

A future measurement of the gravitational slip parameter gamma of z that deviates by more than a few percent from the model's prediction at redshifts probed by DESI or Euclid, or a statistically significant worsening of the chi-squared fit below the reported 1.394 value.

Figures

Figures reproduced from arXiv: 2605.07344 by Andrea Addazi, Daulet Berkimbayev, Giuseppe Meluccio, Salvatore Capozziello, Yermek Aldabergenov, Yifu Cai.

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Figure 3. Figure 3: FIG. 3. Accepted-region map from the free-¯α [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p008_3.png] view at source ↗
read the original abstract

We consider the simplest quadratic extension of MacDowell-Mansouri pre-geometric gravity preserving the topological pre-volume form symmetry. After symmetry breaking, it becomes $(\mathrm{Lovelock})^2$ gravity, dual to a Galileon-like Horndeski scalar-tensor theory. The gravitational Higgs mechanism forces the Gauss-Bonnet coupling to be inversely proportional to the bare cosmological constant. The quadratic correction renders the gravitational $\theta$-angle dynamical in the form of a gravi-axion, whose effective mass sets the dark energy scale, thus naturally realizing a dynamical dark energy. The model fits DESI's BAO+FS data exceptionally well ($\chi^2_{\rm red} = 1.394$), deviating from $\Lambda\mathrm{CDM}$ by only a few percent in the gravitational slip parameter $\gamma(z)$ with stable tensor perturbations. This analysis establishes a concrete, testable bridge between pre-geometric gravity and cosmic acceleration.

Editorial analysis

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Referee Report

4 major / 2 minor

Summary. The manuscript proposes the simplest quadratic extension of MacDowell-Mansouri pre-geometric gravity preserving the topological pre-volume form symmetry. After symmetry breaking it reduces to (Lovelock)^2 gravity, dual to a Galileon-like Horndeski scalar-tensor theory. The gravitational Higgs mechanism is stated to force the Gauss-Bonnet coupling to be inversely proportional to the bare cosmological constant. The quadratic term renders the gravitational θ-angle dynamical as a gravi-axion whose effective mass sets the dark-energy scale, realizing dynamical dark energy. The model is reported to fit DESI BAO+FS data with χ²_red = 1.394, deviating from ΛCDM by only a few percent in the gravitational slip parameter γ(z) while maintaining stable tensor perturbations.

Significance. If the derivations of the inverse coupling relation and the gravi-axion mass are shown to be independent of observational input, the work would provide a concrete bridge from pre-geometric gravity to dynamical dark energy with a naturally generated scale and a competitive fit to recent DESI data. The approach uses only the bare cosmological constant as a free parameter and yields falsifiable predictions for modified-gravity observables.

major comments (4)
  1. [Abstract / Higgs-mechanism derivation] Abstract and the section deriving the gravitational Higgs mechanism: the statement that this mechanism 'forces' the Gauss-Bonnet coupling to be inversely proportional to the bare cosmological constant is presented without the explicit Lagrangian terms, symmetry-breaking ansatz, or algebraic steps that establish the relation. It is therefore impossible to determine whether the inverse proportionality is a derived consequence or an imposed condition.
  2. [Quadratic correction and gravi-axion] Section introducing the quadratic correction and gravi-axion: the claim that the effective mass of the gravi-axion 'sets the dark energy scale' is not accompanied by the explicit effective potential, the computation of the mass term, or a demonstration that the resulting scale matches the observed value without additional tuning. This leaves open the possibility that the mass is chosen to reproduce the observed dark-energy density rather than predicted independently.
  3. [Observational fit] Data-analysis section: the reported χ²_red = 1.394 for DESI BAO+FS is given without the corresponding χ² for ΛCDM on the same dataset, without tabulated best-fit parameters, covariance matrices, or error budgets. Consequently the assertion of an 'exceptionally well' fit and the quantitative statement of 'only a few percent' deviation in γ(z) cannot be assessed.
  4. [Stability analysis] Perturbation-stability subsection: the claim of stable tensor perturbations is made without the dispersion relation, the eigenvalues of the quadratic action, or the no-ghost/no-gradient-instability conditions. The absence of these quantities prevents verification that the model remains healthy across the relevant redshift range.
minor comments (2)
  1. [Theory mapping] The duality between (Lovelock)^2 gravity and the Galileon-like Horndeski theory is asserted but the explicit field redefinition or action mapping is not supplied; adding the relevant equations would improve traceability.
  2. [Figures] Figure captions and axis labels for any γ(z) or perturbation plots should explicitly state the redshift range and the precise definition of the slip parameter used.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

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We thank the referee for the careful and constructive report. We address each major comment below and will revise the manuscript to supply the requested explicit derivations, comparisons, and stability details. These additions will render the derivations fully transparent while preserving the original results and conclusions.

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  1. Referee: [Abstract / Higgs-mechanism derivation] Abstract and the section deriving the gravitational Higgs mechanism: the statement that this mechanism 'forces' the Gauss-Bonnet coupling to be inversely proportional to the bare cosmological constant is presented without the explicit Lagrangian terms, symmetry-breaking ansatz, or algebraic steps that establish the relation. It is therefore impossible to determine whether the inverse proportionality is a derived consequence or an imposed condition.

    Authors: We agree that the current presentation omits the intermediate algebraic steps. The inverse relation is a direct consequence of the symmetry-breaking equations of motion in the pre-geometric action and is independent of any observational input. In the revised manuscript we will insert the explicit Lagrangian before and after breaking, the precise symmetry-breaking ansatz, and the step-by-step derivation from the field equations that yields the Gauss-Bonnet coupling inversely proportional to the bare cosmological constant. revision: yes

  2. Referee: [Quadratic correction and gravi-axion] Section introducing the quadratic correction and gravi-axion: the claim that the effective mass of the gravi-axion 'sets the dark energy scale' is not accompanied by the explicit effective potential, the computation of the mass term, or a demonstration that the resulting scale matches the observed value without additional tuning. This leaves open the possibility that the mass is chosen to reproduce the observed dark-energy density rather than predicted independently.

    Authors: The mass is fixed by the quadratic correction coefficient and the bare cosmological constant alone. The revised section will display the explicit effective potential obtained from the quadratic term, the second-derivative evaluation that produces the mass, and the direct matching of this mass to the observed dark-energy scale using only the input bare cosmological constant, thereby confirming the absence of additional tuning. revision: yes

  3. Referee: [Observational fit] Data-analysis section: the reported χ²_red = 1.394 for DESI BAO+FS is given without the corresponding χ² for ΛCDM on the same dataset, without tabulated best-fit parameters, covariance matrices, or error budgets. Consequently the assertion of an 'exceptionally well' fit and the quantitative statement of 'only a few percent' deviation in γ(z) cannot be assessed.

    Authors: We will add the χ²_red value obtained for ΛCDM on the identical DESI BAO+FS dataset, a table of best-fit parameters with uncertainties, the relevant covariance information, and an explicit error budget. We will also tabulate the percentage deviations of γ(z) from unity at representative redshifts so that the quantitative statements can be directly verified. revision: yes

  4. Referee: [Stability analysis] Perturbation-stability subsection: the claim of stable tensor perturbations is made without the dispersion relation, the eigenvalues of the quadratic action, or the no-ghost/no-gradient-instability conditions. The absence of these quantities prevents verification that the model remains healthy across the relevant redshift range.

    Authors: The revised perturbation-stability subsection will contain the quadratic action for tensor modes, the resulting dispersion relation, the eigenvalues of the kinetic matrix, and the explicit no-ghost and no-gradient-instability conditions. We will then demonstrate that these conditions hold for the best-fit parameters over the full redshift range of interest. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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No significant circularity; derivation self-contained against external benchmarks

full rationale

The provided abstract and context describe a quadratic extension of MacDowell-Mansouri gravity that, after symmetry breaking, yields a dual Horndeski theory with a gravi-axion whose mass is stated to set the dark-energy scale. No explicit equations are quoted that reduce the effective mass or the Gauss-Bonnet–cosmological-constant relation to a fitted input or self-citation by construction. The DESI fit is presented as an empirical test rather than a derivation step, and the Higgs mechanism is invoked as an external forcing relation without evidence that it collapses to the target result. The central claims therefore remain independent of the outputs they are said to predict.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

1 free parameters · 2 axioms · 1 invented entities

The central claim rests on the preservation of topological pre-volume form symmetry under the quadratic extension, the occurrence of a gravitational Higgs mechanism after symmetry breaking, and the identification of the gravi-axion mass with the dark-energy scale. These steps are asserted but not derived in the abstract.

free parameters (1)
  • bare cosmological constant
    Appears as an input whose inverse sets the Gauss-Bonnet coupling; its value is presumably chosen to match observations.
axioms (2)
  • domain assumption The quadratic extension preserves the topological pre-volume form symmetry.
    Stated as the starting point for the simplest extension.
  • domain assumption Symmetry breaking yields (Lovelock)^2 gravity dual to a Galileon-like Horndeski theory.
    Invoked to connect the pre-geometric action to the scalar-tensor formulation.
invented entities (1)
  • gravi-axion no independent evidence
    purpose: Dynamical realization of the gravitational theta angle whose mass sets the dark-energy scale.
    Introduced as the field made dynamical by the quadratic correction.

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