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A detector superposed on a static point and a circular orbit shows a sharply lower, more gap-dependent effective Unruh temperature, while stacked identical circles barely change the usual nearly thermal response.

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arxiv 2607.03468 v1 pith:KLE47K3R submitted 2026-07-03 quant-ph math-phmath.MP

Superposed circular motion Unruh effect in (3+1) dimensions

Taylor Cey , Cisco Gooding , Robert Mann This is my paper
classification quant-ph math-phmath.MP
keywords Unruh effectcircular motionUnruh-DeWitt detectortrajectory superpositioneffective temperatureanalogue gravityquantum controlWightman function
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This paper asks what happens to the circular-motion Unruh effect when an Unruh-DeWitt detector is placed in a quantum superposition of two classical paths instead of one. Using a control degree of freedom that routes the detector along different worldlines, the authors compute excitation probabilities and an effective temperature for four geometries of circular trajectories. When the interaction lasts much longer than the acceleration timescale, vertically stacked identical circles produce only minor corrections to the familiar nearly thermal response. By contrast, superposing a motionless central point with a surrounding circular orbit substantially lowers the effective temperature and makes that temperature vary more strongly with the detector’s energy gap. The calculations are offered as concrete guidance for analogue experiments already being planned in ultracold atoms.

Core claim

For Gaussian switching functions much broader than the acceleration timescale, a coherent superposition of concentric vertically-stacked circular trajectories yields only minor deviations from the effectively thermal response of a single circular trajectory, whereas a superposition of a static central point and a surrounding circular trajectory produces a significant reduction in effective temperature and greater variation of that temperature with energy gap.

What carries the argument

The quantum-controlled Unruh-DeWitt interaction Hamiltonian that couples the detector monopole to the field only along the trajectory selected by a control qubit; the leading-order excitation probability becomes a sum of local (diagonal) and interference (off-diagonal) Wightman integrals, from which an effective temperature is extracted via the ratio of de-excitation to excitation probabilities.

Load-bearing premise

The entire calculation rests on a quantum-control model that lets one detector follow a coherent superposition of classical trajectories, an idealization imported from earlier theory and not re-derived or experimentally validated inside this paper.

What would settle it

In an analogue ultracold-atom setup, superpose a laser probe between a fixed central spot and a circular orbit of known acceleration, extract the effective temperature from the ratio of de-excitation to excitation rates under long interaction times, and check whether that temperature lies significantly below the ordinary circular-Unruh curve and varies more strongly with energy gap; agreement with the ordinary curve would falsify the central claim for case (c).

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If this is right

  • Analogue circular-Unruh experiments can test trajectory superpositions with only a modest extension: superpose a static laser probe with a circling one.
  • Interference signatures are strongest for moderate-to-narrow switching and selected displacements, giving a clear experimental window.
  • When the two trajectories differ strongly (static versus orbiting), the effective temperature is no longer a near-linear function of acceleration alone.
  • Conditional measurement of the control continuously interpolates the detector response between the fully coherent and fully mixed limits.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

These are editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • The same control model applied to superpositions of linear Unruh trajectories would test whether the classic linear temperature-acceleration relation softens under delocalization.
  • If the static-plus-orbit cooling is seen in analogue systems, it would give an operational signature that the detector registers its delocalization between inertial and accelerated motion.
  • A controllable relative phase on the control qubit could actively suppress or enhance the Unruh response for unequal-radius concentric circles.

Editorial analysis

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Desk editor's note, referee report, simulated authors' rebuttal, and a circularity audit.

Referee Report

2 major / 4 minor

Summary. The paper applies a recently introduced quantum-control model for Unruh–DeWitt detectors to coherent superpositions of two classical circular trajectories in (3+1)-dimensional Minkowski spacetime coupled to a massless scalar field. It computes the second-order excitation probability (via pull-backs of the Wightman function) and an effective temperature defined from the ratio of finite-time transition probabilities for four geometries: vertically stacked concentric circles, horizontally displaced circles, a static point superposed with a surrounding circular orbit, and planar concentric circles (plus a vertically offset concentric variant). For Gaussian switching much broader than the acceleration timescale the authors report only minor deviations from the single-trajectory effectively thermal response in the vertically stacked case, while the static-plus-orbit case yields a clear reduction in effective temperature together with stronger energy-gap dependence; they close with a discussion of possible analogue realization in ultracold-atom systems.

Significance. If the numerical contrasts hold, the work supplies concrete, experimentally relevant predictions for how trajectory superpositions modify the circular-motion Unruh response, extending both the theoretical literature on quantum-controlled detectors and the ongoing analogue-Unruh proposals in Bose–Einstein condensates and superfluid helium. The asymptotic analytic checks (ultra-relativistic and non-relativistic limits of the off-diagonal Wightman functions) that match the numerics, the systematic comparison with incoherent mixtures, and the explicit parameter regimes (broad versus narrow switching) constitute falsifiable guidance for future analogue experiments. These features make the manuscript a useful bridge between formal relativistic quantum information and near-term laboratory tests.

major comments (2)
  1. [Appendix B] Appendix B describes the contour-integration prescription used for the multi-dimensional integrals that appear in non-stationary geometries, yet supplies neither convergence tests with respect to the imaginary offset ε, the integration cut-off set by the Gaussian width, nor any estimate of numerical uncertainty. Because the central claims of “minor” versus “significant” deviations rest on the relative size of the off-diagonal contributions extracted from these integrals (especially Figs. 15–16), the absence of such validation leaves the quantitative reliability of the reported contrasts under-documented.
  2. [§IV A, Fig. 16(a)] In §IV A and Fig. 16(a) the characterization of vertically stacked trajectories as producing “only minor deviations” is parameter-dependent: intermediate values of Ha produce visibly larger excursions (both hotter and colder) than the Ha=0 reference curve. The abstract and concluding discussion therefore over-state the robustness of the “minor” claim across the explored range of vertical separations.
minor comments (4)
  1. [Figures 2–9] Several figures (e.g., Figs. 2–4, 6–9) lack error bars or any indication of numerical precision; even a brief statement that the plotted curves are stable under variation of the contour offset would improve readability.
  2. [§III D, Fig. 9 caption] Typographical slips appear in the text (“slighlty”, “oribiting”, “oribiting circle”) and should be corrected for clarity.
  3. [Appendix A] The general Wightman function (A1) is given but never used; a short remark on why the specialized expressions are preferred for numerics would help the reader.
  4. [§V] The discussion of analogue implementation correctly notes the dimensional mismatch (2+1 versus 3+1) but could cite the existing quantitative comparison of circular Unruh temperatures in the two dimensions more prominently.

Circularity Check

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No significant circularity: numerical transition probabilities and effective temperatures are direct evaluations of the standard second-order UDW formula with imported control model; self-citations are present but non-load-bearing.

full rationale

The paper's central claims are numerical evaluations of the excitation probability PE (Eqs. 2.8–2.9) obtained by pulling back the standard Minkowski Wightman function (2.11) along the four families of circular trajectories (3.6–3.7, 3.11–3.12, 3.14–3.15, 3.22–3.23) and integrating against Gaussian switching. The effective temperature is then defined by the ordinary ratio PE(−Ω)/PE(Ω) (4.2–4.3). No free parameters are fitted to data, no uniqueness theorem is invoked to force the geometry, and no known empirical pattern is merely renamed. The quantum-control Hamiltonian (2.5) and control state (2.2) are taken from the external literature (Foo et al. [8,9]); the authors’ own related works ([3–5,18]) appear only in the discussion of possible analogue implementations and do not enter the numerical results. The minor-versus-significant contrast reported for cases (a) and (c) under broad switching is therefore an output of the integrals, not an input. Score 1 reflects only the presence of non-load-bearing self-citations; the derivation chain itself is free of circular reduction.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

2 free parameters · 4 axioms · 0 invented entities

The paper rests on the standard Unruh-DeWitt interaction, the Minkowski massless Wightman function, and a recently introduced quantum-control model for trajectory superpositions. No free parameters are fitted; the only ad-hoc elements are the choice of Gaussian switching width and the four geometric configurations. The control model itself is imported without re-derivation.

free parameters (2)
  • Gaussian switching width σ relative to acceleration scale
    Chosen by hand (σa ≫ 1 for thermalization studies, σa ∼ 1 for finite-time scans); results depend quantitatively on this ratio.
  • Vertical/horizontal displacements H, L and radius ratios
    Selected for numerical convenience (H/σ = 1, R2 = R1/2, etc.); not derived from a uniqueness principle.
axioms (4)
  • domain assumption Leading-order perturbation theory in the coupling λ yields the excitation probability (2.8)–(2.9)
    Standard UDW assumption; higher-order corrections are neglected throughout.
  • domain assumption The quantum-control Hamiltonian (2.5) correctly describes a detector in a coherent superposition of classical trajectories
    Imported from Foo et al. (2020); no independent derivation or experimental check is supplied.
  • standard math The Minkowski vacuum two-point function is the standard massless Wightman function (2.11)
    Textbook QFT result used without modification.
  • ad hoc to paper Effective temperature defined by the ratio of finite-time transition probabilities (4.2) is a meaningful thermal estimator
    Used when KMS temperature is unavailable; justified only by continuity with the infinite-time limit.

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Using a recently-introduced quantum control model for Unruh-DeWitt detectors in superpositions of classical trajectories, we investigate the response of a detector interacting with a massless scalar quantum field in (3+1) dimensions along a superposition of circular trajectories. We present numerical results for the transition probability and effective temperature of such a detector in four distinct geometric scenarios: (a) concentric, vertically-stacked trajectories, (b) planar, horizontally-displaced trajectories, (c) static central point and surrounding circular trajectory, and (d) concentric, planar circular trajectories. For Gaussian switching functions that are much broader than the acceleration timescale, in case (a) we find only minor deviations from the well-known, effectively thermal response of a single circular trajectory, whereas in case (c) we find a significant reduction in the effective temperature and greater variation with energy gap. We conclude with a discussion of a potential analogue implementation in ultracold atom systems.

Figures

Figures reproduced from arXiv: 2607.03468 by Cisco Gooding, Robert Mann, Taylor Cey.

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Figure 1. Figure 1: FIG. 1. The superposed trajectories of the detector for a variety of configurations. (a) Vertically [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p003_1.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 2. Figure 2: FIG. 2. The transition probability of a detector [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p004_2.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 3. Figure 3: FIG. 3. The transition probability for an ordi [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p004_3.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 4. Figure 4: FIG. 4. (a) The transition probability of a single detector as a function of the tangential velocity of [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p005_4.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 5. Figure 5: FIG. 5. The off-diagonal response function of a [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p006_5.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 8. Figure 8: FIG. 8. (Blue) The transition probability of a [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p007_8.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 7. Figure 7: FIG. 7. The transition probability of a detector [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p007_7.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 9. Figure 9: FIG. 9. (a) (Blue) The transition probability of a detector in a superposition of a static point and an [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p009_9.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 10. Figure 10: FIG. 10. The off-diagonal response function of [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p009_10.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 12. Figure 12: FIG. 12. The transition probability of a detec [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p010_12.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 14. Figure 14: FIG. 14. The transition probability of a detec [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p010_14.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 15. Figure 15: FIG. 15. The effective temperature of a detector in superposition (blue) and in a corresponding mixed [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p012_15.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 16. Figure 16: FIG. 16. (a) The effective temperature of a detector in a superposition of vertically stacked circular [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p013_16.png] view at source ↗

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